Hamidou Ba

Professor Yvette Marie Watson

ENGL1001

January 28, 2019

Rhetorical Analysis Final Drafts

Each year, about ten people in Britain die from allergic reaction to food. The reason why

each year ten people die is because they were eating a nasty food at pret a manger, and was a

nasty reminder of how allergies can calimm young lives at any moment. The restaurant was

making people eat danger food and food allergies in people were going there eating food that

they don’t know what the food going to do to them. People was on danger for eating that food

and they think it’s was a health food to eat, but it was not health food. “Unskilled people working

under pressure cannot be expected to protect you and your rare allergy”. I feel like this quote

mean that people who can’t not cook should not be cooking your food at.

If you have ever walked into a fast food restaurant and see a sign that says all employees

must wash their hands before returning to work and seeing a sign in the bathroom that shows

how to properly wash your hands and how long you should do it for, those are ways on how you

can properly clean your hands and lower the risk of someone getting sick due to improper

cleaning. I agree with those sign that they put on the restaurant because it's important and safefull

to people to come to eat on the restaurant everyday. It’s important for employees to wash their

hand when it’s dirty like when they use brotheroom or touch something that they shouldn’t be

touching by working on the restaurant. I work at mcdonald and if you work in a fast food

restaurant you will see signs that show you how to clean each station that the restaurant may

have and what foods to avoid if someone is allergic or what could be considered cross
contamination in it’s have a lot of sign that tell you wish you hand before returned to work. It’s

important to wash your hand at work.

Pret a danger food allergies is when some people eats danger food without knowing what

they are eating. The people who work on that restaurant they were making people eat danger

food and food allergies in people were going there to eat food that they don’t know what the food

going to do to them. People was on danger for eating that food and they think it’s was a health

food to eat, but it was not health food.It was nasty reminder of how allergies can claim young

lives a any moment. “Unskilled people working under pressure cannot be expected to protect

you and your rare allergy”. I feel like this quote mean that people who can’t not cook should not

be cooking your food at restaurants or everywhere you get food. Each year about ten people died

because of the food they are eating and other people getting sick and possibly you in the process.

Work cited

https://www.questia.com/magazine/1P4-2117727355/food-allergies-are-a-minefield

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1a73ICSVDNwzk8xQh1DU_EPntHEdCW7Vi7a2a

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