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Some common clunkers, and their simpler, more readable replacements. The replacements aren't
always perfect synonyms, but 90% of the time they're better than the original. Warning: Some of these
changes also require some grammatical twiddling of other parts of the sentence.
commence start
conceal hide
concerning the matter of about
consensus of opinion consensus
consequence result
contiguous to next to
demonstrate show
desire want
despite the fact that despite or though
does not operate to does not
donate give
due to the fact that because
during the course of during
during the time that while
echelon level
elucidate explain or perhaps clarify
endeavor (verb) try
evince show
excessive number of too many
exclusively only
exit (verb) leave
facilitate help
firstly, secondly, ... first, second, ...
for the duration of during or while
for the purpose of doing to do
for the reason that because
forthwith immediately
frequently often
fundamental basic
has a negative impact hurts or harms
I would argue that / it is arguable that / it could
don't say what you'll argue; just argue it
be argued that
in a case in which when or where
in accordance with by or under
in an X manner Xly, e.g., "hastily" instead of "in a hasty manner"
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Sources: Much e-mail from many people; Joseph Stevens, Legal Language, Plain and Simple,
Missouri Bar Bulletin, March 1993, at 4. See also Bruce Ross-Larson, Edit Yourself (1982).
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