Study plan
My name is Alka Baghel. I have done Graduation (Bachelor of Commerce) from
Dr. Bhimrao Ambedkar University, Agra.
Since my childhood I wanted to learn languages. I have passion for learning
languages so I decided to make my career through languages. After completing
my high school studies I decided to learn language but due to some financial and
other reasons I was unable to do.
My dream is to learn Chinese language and also to get a job as a Chinese
translator in a foreign multinational company. If I get this scholarship I can learn
Chinese in a better way and fluently in the environment of Chinese people.
First of all, in Taiwan I will have the chance to study with international students;
meet different people which immediately means that I will expand my knowledge
of other cultures.
To achieve my goals I planned to do Chinese course. I am learning Chinese from
Ninhao India Language Institute, Agra.
I hereby must say that I feel very blessed and honoured to be one of those rare
students who get such a great opportunity like this. I will work hard and give my
best to achieve my goal.
So, if I will get this scholarship it will be like dream come true for me.
To achieve my goals I planned to do Chinese course. I am learning Chinese from
Ninhao India Language Institute, Agra.
First of all, in Taiwan I will have the chance to study with international students;
meet different people which immediately means that I will expand my knowledge
of other cultures.
Commented [w1]: What is your main objective of winning this
Chinese course scholarship of Taiwan Government？ You did not
mention anything at the beginning of your study plan !!!
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Commented [w2]: Un-necessary. Just delete it !!
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Commented [w3]: Of course this scholarship is for those who
are potential in Chinese language and are willing to learn deligently
in Taiwan. Do not use “if” . It sounds very suspicious.
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Commented [w4]: No need to mention this as anyone who has
diploma of high school are eligible to apply for it. Applying for the
scholarship does not mean you will be able to win this
scholarship !!!
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Commented [w5]: AGAIN !!! it is not relevent to the main
objective of your study plan. You have to tell the embassy people
what you have done so far for learning and improving your Chinese
level and what will be the next steps for learning Chinese if you win
this scholarship ！！！
Commented [w6]: This is what you have done so far. Give real
examples of what you did in the past so far for learning Chinese, ex:
listening to Chinese songs, going to Taj Mahal every weekend to
practice Chinese conversation with Chinese and Taiwanese tourists.
Give real examples of what you have done so far. GIRL !!
Commented [w7]: So again. This is what you will have to do in
the future if you are given the scholarship. Give real examples of
what you are going to do, like talking to internatinal students
coming to Taiwan in Chinese language, taking part in the sports club
in the University through which you can learn how to say some
sports terminology in Chinese, something like this.
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