Study plan
My name is Alka Baghel. I have done Graduation (Bachelor of Commerce) from
Dr. Bhimrao Ambedkar University, Agra.
Since my childhood I wanted to learn languages. I have passion for learning
languages so I decided to make my career through languages. After completing
my high school studies I decided to learn language but due to some financial and
other reasons I was unable to do.
My dream is to learn Chinese language and also to get a job as a Chinese
translator in a foreign multinational company. If I get this scholarship I can learn
Chinese in a better way and fluently in the environment of Chinese people.
First of all, in Taiwan I will have the chance to study with international students;
meet different people which immediately means that I will expand my knowledge
of other cultures.
To achieve my goals I planned to do Chinese course. I am learning Chinese from
Ninhao India Language Institute, Agra.
I hereby must say that I feel very blessed and honoured to be one of those rare
students who get such a great opportunity like this. I will work hard and give my
best to achieve my goal.
So, if I will get this scholarship it will be like dream come true for me.
To achieve my goals I planned to do Chinese course. I am learning Chinese from
Ninhao India Language Institute, Agra.
First of all, in Taiwan I will have the chance to study with international students;
meet different people which immediately means that I will expand my knowledge
of other cultures.
Comment [w1]: What is your main objective of
winning this Chinese course scholarship of Taiwan
Government？ You did not mention anything at the
beginning of your study plan !!!
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Comment [w2]: Un-necessary. Just delete it !!
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Comment [w3]: Of course this scholarship is for
those who are potential in Chinese language and are
willing to learn deligently in Taiwan. Do not use “if” .
It sounds very suspicious.
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Comment [w4]: No need to mention this as
anyone who has diploma of high school are eligible
to apply for it. Applying for the scholarship does not
mean you will be able to win this scholarship !!!
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Comment [w5]: AGAIN !!! it is not relevent to
the main objective of your study plan. You have to
tell the embassy people what you have done so far
for learning and improving your Chinese level and
what will be the next steps for learning Chinese if
you win this scholarship ！！！
Comment [w6]: This is what you have done so
far. Give real examples of what you did in the past
so far for learning Chinese, ex: listening to Chinese
songs, going to Taj Mahal every weekend to
practice Chinese conversation with Chinese and
Taiwanese tourists. Give real examples of what you
have done so far. GIRL !!
Comment [w7]: So again. This is what you will
have to do in the future if you are given the
scholarship. Give real examples of what you are
going to do, like talking to internatinal students
coming to Taiwan in Chinese language, taking part
in the sports club in the University through which
you can learn how to say some sports terminology
in Chinese, something like this.
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