WRITING

You MUST answer this question. Write your answer (140-190 words)
In your English class you have been talking about sport. Now, your English teacher has
asked you to write an essay for homework.

Is playing a team sport the best way to get fit?

NOTES
Write about:
1. Exercising with other people
2. How convenient it is
3. ………………. (your own idea)

It is said that the team sport is the best way to get fit because exercising with other people
makes the activity easier however your succeed not only depends on you but also depends from
your teammates.

One thing to consider is that practice an activity with other people is usually easier than
practicing alone because you have partners who will help you to reach your objective
nevertheless you should have a good relationship with your teammates although you do a good
job, without the help of your teammates you won´t get anything.

As far as I am concerned doing exercise is something vital for us, doing a sport with other
people sometimes is better than practicing alone because not only is a good way to keep fit but
also to make new and great friends, if you practice by our own you won´t need teammates.

To conclude, I believe that playing a team sport it is better when you want to have some fun
with your friends or when you want to be in a competition with other people on the contrary I
prefer to practice sport on my own if my purpose is improve my physical condition.

1 It is said that the team sport is the best way to get fit because exercising with other people
makes the activity easier however, your succeed does not depend on you but also on your
teammates.

One thing to consider is that practicing an activity such as football, basketball or even extreme
sports like rock climbing with other people is usually easier than practicing alone. If you have
partners, they will help you to reach your objective. It is also essential to have a good
relationship with your teammates because it does not matter how good you are at it, without
their help you 2 won´t get anything.

As far as I am concerned doing exercise is something vital for us.3 doing a sport with other
people sometimes is better than practicing alone because not only It is a good way to keep fit
and make new and great friends.4 if you practice by our own you won´t need teammates.

To conclude, 5 I believe that playing a team sport it is better when you want to have some fun
with your friends or when you want to be in a competition with other people. Personally on the
contrary I prefer to practice sport on my own as my purpose is to improve my physical
condition at my rhythm.

1. Has copiado del enunciado y eso no se puede hacer.

2. No se permiten contracciones.
 3. Esto es lo mismo que el primer párrafo.
4. Sigue siendo lo mismo y además tienes contradicción.
5. Esto no es necesario.

TE FALTA EL TERCERT PUNTO QUE TE LO TIENES QUE INVENTAR.

ADEMAS HAY 199 PALABRAS. DEMASIADO Y NO HAS DICHO NADA
INTERESANTE, TODO EL RATO LA MISMA IDEA.