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Assignment 9 Activity A
After categorizing the errors I marked, I noticed that I tended to mark grammatical
features throughout. I mostly focused on issues with articles and incorrect usage or the need for
the plural. The reason for this is because it is this student’s final draft and these errors sometimes
make the sentence a bit hard to follow. In addition, I did notice that there were times when there
were run-on sentences or sentences that just weren’t grammatical enough to be clear. I did mark
these a few times as well. I didn’t want to spend too much time on these simply because there
was no guarantee that the student will go back and correct these or even seriously consider/think
about them. However, if the student were to ask (I would have an open door policy) I would be
more than happy to work with them in order to help them understand their errors and ways to
In one place, I specifically mention the rhetorical feature they used to discuss “the
weakest” they had determined from the text and in another when the student used the word
“firstly” and there was never a sequence of numbers after. At the end I wrote an endnote to
address the overall rhetorical issues I found. One of these issues is that the purpose of the paper
was never made clear. One could imply that the student was to critique the way Mills discussed
the funding of our national parks and decide if his approach was believable, but it was never
overtly stated and caused some confusion at first. Overall, my goal was to point out the bigger
issues that could cause comprehension problems while also giving a bit more attention to the
grammatical and citation features that I would tend to ignore in a first draft (unless it made it
grammatical and citation errors and if this is the students last chance to really get used to writing,
Appendix
Appendix A
Appendix B