Marking key for sample assessment task 1 Part A – Name Withdrawn
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Design folio – statement, investigate and devise
Provides a statement defining a need or purpose for the product
• includes clear statements about function, aesthetics, safety, cost
considerations and limitations
• includes general statements about the likes and dislikes
• covers broad areas of the design problem in limited general terms only
Provides information on materials (recycled and new) using internet, print
media and other sources
• detailed comparisons, using design considerations, between a selected
number of different materials, supported by images
• a number of different examples with notes describing the differences
• a selection of ideas of a single material with some notation about
likes/dislikes
• collection of materials, dissimilar images and few notes
Provides information about existing products
• number of carefully selected different examples and images, with source
referencing, using the design considerations to make detailed
comparisons
• comparisons between a number of carefully selected different examples
and images against the design considerations
• a number of different examples with notes describing the differences
• a selection of ideas of a single example with limited annotation about
likes and dislikes
• collection of dissimilar images and few notes
Complete sketches of possible shapes, joins, specific features, likely
dimensions and notes on likely finishes
• detailed, well-proportioned sketches showing progression from concept
ideas to specific ideas; parts, showing relevant joining methods with
appropriate specific dimensions; other materials and finishes
• well-shaped sketches that show concept ideas, including other materials,
joining and appropriate overall dimensions
• sketches that show development of mainly a single concept idea, some
materials and joining, some dimensioning
• collection of dissimilar sketches, limited design progression with few
notes
Includes final three dimensional rendered sketch of proposed solution
showing any relevant likely finish
• well-drawn, correctly proportioned three dimensional colour rendered
representation of the proposed product, showing clear development from
the concept stage
• well-drawn representation of solution
• representation of solution, but with minor errors or missing detail
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2 Commented [SB1]: Missing details around cost
1 2/3 considerations. i.e. do we use a thicker metal for the BBQ’s
as it will hold the heat better and reduce warping or do we
risk warping to save costs by using a thinner metal. Follow
the marking key as it is your guide to attaining better grades.
4
3 Commented [SB2]: You have not used the design
2 principals e.g. colour, shape, line etc. use these next time to
increase your grade.
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3/4
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3 Commented [SB3]: Use more ‘carefully’ selected pictures
2 and copy and paste the source link for better marks.
1 3/5
10–12
Commented [SB4]: Be more detailed regarding your
7–9
dimensions. Show the tiniest details by explosion views
which will allow you to be more detailed with dimensions.
4–6 Expand on your concepts and consider different joining
methods include some compare and contrast with each
method.
1–3
5/12 Commented [SB5]: Work on the 3D drawing skills,
remember that all horizontal lines are horizontal, all vertical
line must be vertical, and all angled lines must be the same
angle. Make sure your drawings follow a clear development
path, use a step by step guide to help with the flow of your
drawings. Ready the marking key as it clearly states to use
‘Colour’ if you want to get the highest mark in this section.
5–6
3–4 Commented [SB6]: A solid effort, however, I feel if you
carefully read the marking key it will improve your marks by
1–2 3/6 using it as a guide. Remember this is a design brief and try
and think of this as though you were the person who was
Total 16/30 requesting this project be made. Use a family member if this
is a hard concept to understand. If you try this you should be
able to break the design brief down into simple steps that
show the entire progression from beginning to end. You
have to remember that we cannot see your vision and it
needs to be broken down into small details involving the
design principals.