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GRADEMARK REPORT
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Comment 1
Word count is 1601, do not include your ref erence list at the end of your assessment
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academic skills center or the English language center
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QM Weak Transition
Weak paragraph transition:
Although paragraphs are separate, individual steps of your paper, it is important to clearly
demonstrate a logical connection between them. Generally speaking, the way your paragraphs
relate to one another displays how sound your argument really is. A paragraph that begins with
"also" or "in addition" of f ers a weak transition f rom the previous point, even though it may
develop a highly interesting and related point.
QM Conf using
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Word choice error:
Sometimes choosing the correct word to express exactly what you have to say is very dif f icult
to do. Word choice errors can be the result of not paying attention to the word or trying too
hard to come up with a f ancier word when a simple one is appropriate. A thesaurus can be a
handy tool when you're trying to f ind a word that's similar to, but more accurate than, the one
you're looking up. However, it can of ten introduce more problems if you use a word thinking it
has exactly the same meaning.
QM Weak Transition
Weak paragraph transition:
Although paragraphs are separate, individual steps of your paper, it is important to clearly
demonstrate a logical connection between them. Generally speaking, the way your paragraphs
relate to one another displays how sound your argument really is. A paragraph that begins with
"also" or "in addition" of f ers a weak transition f rom the previous point, even though it may
develop a highly interesting and related point.
QM Correct
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Comment 13
Schedule 4 (Restricted Substances) Substances which in the public interest should be supplied
only by, or upon the written prescription of , an authorized practitioner. T his is a high risk drug
(as def ined, and so subject of a local protocol, but this does not generally
include a separate register
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Comment 14
T his does not relate to methotrexate
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QM Weak Transition
Weak paragraph transition:
Although paragraphs are separate, individual steps of your paper, it is important to clearly
demonstrate a logical connection between them. Generally speaking, the way your paragraphs
relate to one another displays how sound your argument really is. A paragraph that begins with
"also" or "in addition" of f ers a weak transition f rom the previous point, even though it may
develop a highly interesting and related point.
QM WC
Word choice error:
Sometimes choosing the correct word to express exactly what you have to say is very dif f icult
to do. Word choice errors can be the result of not paying attention to the word or trying too
hard to come up with a f ancier word when a simple one is appropriate. A thesaurus can be a
handy tool when you're trying to f ind a word that's similar to, but more accurate than, the one
you're looking up. However, it can of ten introduce more problems if you use a word thinking it
has exactly the same meaning.
QM Conf using
Conf using
QM WC
Word choice error:
Sometimes choosing the correct word to express exactly what you have to say is very dif f icult
to do. Word choice errors can be the result of not paying attention to the word or trying too
hard to come up with a f ancier word when a simple one is appropriate. A thesaurus can be a
handy tool when you're trying to f ind a word that's similar to, but more accurate than, the one
you're looking up. However, it can of ten introduce more problems if you use a word thinking it
has exactly the same meaning.
QM Correct
Correct
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RUBRIC: HSNS20 6 WRITTEN 2 T3 20 18 6 1 / 10 0
HD A comprehensive discussion have been undertaken of the dif f erences in roles and
(100) responsibilities of the RN and the student nurse in relation to responsibility and
accountability of medication administration
HD A comprehensive discussion have been undertaken of the dif f erences in roles and
(95) responsibilities of the RN and the student nurse in relation to responsibility and
accountability of medication administration
HD A comprehensive discussion have been undertaken of the dif f erences in roles and
(85) responsibilities of the RN and the student nurse in relation to responsibility and
accountability of medication administration
D A detailed discussion have been undertaken of the dif f erences in roles and
(80) responsibilities of the RN and the student nurse in relation to responsibility and
accountability of medication administration
D A detailed discussion have been undertaken of the dif f erences in roles and
(75) responsibilities of the RN and the student nurse in relation to responsibility and
accountability of medication administration
C An adequate discussion have been undertaken of the dif f erences in roles and
(70) responsibilities of the RN and the student nurse in relation to responsibility and
accountability of medication administration
C An adequate discussion have been undertaken of the dif f erences in roles and
(65) responsibilities of the RN and the student nurse in relation to responsibility and
accountability of medication administration
P Minimal discussion have been undertaken of the dif f erences in roles and
(60) responsibilities of the RN and the student nurse in relation to responsibility and
accountability of medication administration
P Minimal discussion have been undertaken of the dif f erences in roles and
(55) responsibilities of the RN and the student nurse in relation to responsibility and
accountability of medication administration
P Minimal discussion have been undertaken of the dif f erences in roles and
(50) responsibilities of the RN and the student nurse in relation to responsibility and
accountability of medication administration
N T here is no clear discussion of the dif f erences in the roles and responsibilities of the
(45) RN and the student nurse OR in relation to responsibility and accountability of
medication administration
N T here is no clear discussion of the dif f erences in the roles and responsibilities of the
(40) RN and the student nurse OR in relation to responsibility and accountability of
medication administration
N T here is no clear discussion of the dif f erences in the roles and responsibilities of the
(35) RN and the student nurse OR in relation to responsibility and accountability of
medication administration
HD Identif ied the major contributing f actors f or medication errors and have discussed
(100) them extensively
HD Identif ied the major contributing f actors f or medication errors and have discussed
(95) them extensively
HD Identif ied the major contributing f actors f or medication errors and have discussed
(85) them extensively
P Minimal analysis of the medication policies, guidelines and competency standards has
(60) been undertaken and applied to the case study
P Minimal analysis of the medication policies, guidelines and competency standards has
(55) been undertaken and applied to the case study
P Minimal analysis of the medication policies, guidelines and competency standards has
(50) been undertaken and applied to the case study
HD Accurately and consistently adheres to APA (6th Edition) ref erencing style Explicitly
(100) acknowledges all sources used throughout the assignment as well as within the
ref erence list
HD Accurately and consistently adheres to APA (6th Edition) ref erencing style Explicitly
(95) acknowledges all sources used throughout the assignment as well as within the
ref erence list
HD Accurately and consistently adheres to APA (6th Edition) ref erencing style Explicitly
(85) acknowledges all sources used throughout the assignment as well as within the
ref erence list
D Mostly of f ers accurate and consistent APA (6th Edition) ref erencing conventions
(80) within essay Principally acknowledges sources used throughout the assignment as
well as within the ref erence list inf requent errors (suggested: f ewer than 1 error per
page
D Mostly of f ers accurate and consistent APA (6th Edition) ref erencing conventions
(75) within essay Principally acknowledges sources used throughout the assignment as
well as within the ref erence list inf requent errors (suggested: f ewer than 1 error per
page
C A number of inaccurate and inconsistent APA (6th Edition) ref erences within the
(70) essay Mostly acknowledges sources used throughout the assignment and the
ref erence list f requency of errors detracts f rom strength of paper (suggested: 1-2
errors per page
C A number of inaccurate and inconsistent APA (6th Edition) ref erences within the
(65) essay Mostly acknowledges sources used throughout the assignment and the
ref erence list f requency of errors detracts f rom strength of paper (suggested: 1-2
errors per page
P Multiple inaccurate and inconsistent APA (6th Edition) ref erences within the essay
(60) Minimal acknowledgment of sources used throughout the assignment and ref erence
list f requency of errors obstructs clarity f or reader (suggested: 3-4 errors per page)
P Multiple inaccurate and inconsistent APA (6th Edition) ref erences within the essay
(55) Minimal acknowledgment of sources used throughout the assignment and ref erence
list f requency of errors obstructs clarity f or reader (suggested: 3-4 errors per page)
P Multiple inaccurate and inconsistent APA (6th Edition) ref erences within the essay
(50) Minimal acknowledgment of sources used throughout the assignment and ref erence
list f requency of errors obstructs clarity f or reader (suggested: 3-4 errors per page)
N Did not adhere to the APA (6th Edition) ref erencing conventions or use APA
(45) ref erencing style Little or no acknowledgment of sources used throughout the
assignment No ref erence list f ive or more errors per page
N Did not adhere to the APA (6th Edition) ref erencing conventions or use APA
(40) ref erencing style Little or no acknowledgment of sources used throughout the
assignment No ref erence list f ive or more errors per page
N Did not adhere to the APA (6th Edition) ref erencing conventions or use APA
(35) ref erencing style Little or no acknowledgment of sources used throughout the
assignment No ref erence list f ive or more errors per page