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Your Resume Critique
Laura Morgan <laura@topresume.com> June 21, 2018 to me
Hi Mark,
This free resume evaluation is intended to give you an honest, straightforward assessment with
some suggestions to help in your job search. I personally review hundreds of resumes each
month so I'm able to provide insight into how you compare to other job seekers competing for
the same positions.
You should consider using a few more bullet points to increase the impact to the employer. If
employers see too many long sections of text, they might find it difficult to zero in on the most
crucial information. The size and type of bullets should also be taken into account. Although
seemingly minor, the visual impact of a resume is the key to ensuring that an employer will read
it thoroughly.
Resume Writing
You need a career summary section to define you as a professional and cover those areas most
relevant to your career level and job target. A career summary should provide hiring managers
with a brief, yet detailed synopsis of what you bring to the table.
From the way the resume is worded, you come across as a "doer," as opposed to an "achiever."
Too many of your job descriptions are task-based and not results-based. This means that they tell
what you did, instead of what you achieved. This is a common mistake for non-professional
resume writers. To be effective and create excitement, a great resume helps the hiring executive
picture you delivering similar achievements at his or her company. Here are some examples of
task-based sentences in your resume:
When I read your resume, I did not find the kind of compelling language that would bring your
work to life. Instead, I saw passive words and non-action verbs.
Phrases like “answer” and “coordinate” are overused, monotonous, and add little value to your
resume. Strong action verbs, used with compelling language to outline exemplary achievements,
are essential parts of a well-constructed resume.
Now, let’s put it all together. Here’s a real life example taken from a former client’s resume. By
changing the language, we helped to improve the perception of the candidate.
It may not seem obvious, but a regular review of every word and sentence in your resume is a
good idea. Hiring managers are looking for an excuse to eliminate you as a candidate. You may
not be able to see awkward phrases and grammatical errors if you've already spent a lot of time
with your own resume.
Digital Readiness
Your resume is 1012 KB in size. About 98% of resumes are smaller than yours, so you might
want to trim down pieces that make the file bigger. Sometimes, this is as simple as standardizing
fonts or formatting.
Your resume is saved in PDF format. 19% of resumes look like yours. While this may make
viewing consistent for recruiters, some older applicant tracking systems (ATS) have
problems reading them. If you have the ability, you might consider saving your document in
Microsoft Word format for some online submissions.
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The content of this section has been pulled directly from your resume by an applicant tracking
system that is used by many Fortune 500 companies. If this is not a proper representation of who
you are as a candidate, we're here to help.
Show the outcomes of your efforts. Your resume focuses too much on what you’ve done, not
what you’ve achieved.
Your resume does not make a strong visual impression. Your resume should appear clean,
uncluttered, and appealing to the eye.
Your resume needs to include more keywords and skills to help categorize you as a stronger
candidate.
TopResume writers are experts at fixing these kinds of problems. Consider working with a
professional writer to get a resume that sets you up for success.
Please feel free to email me with any questions. We’re here to help you put your best foot
forward.
Thank you,
Laura Morgan
laura@topresume.com
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To be effective and create excitement, a great resume helps the hiring executive picture you delivering
similar achievements at his or her company. Here are some examples of task-based sentences in your
resume:
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Employers want to know about your previous contributions and specifically how you’ve made a
difference. More importantly, they want to know how you are going to make a significant difference at
their company.
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Laura Morgan
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