workers demolish mausoleum ‘We had no idea anyone was buried there’
When you read a newspaper and see that there are a
lot of mistakes (in terms of grammar, use of proper punctuation marks, facts, etc.), what do you feel? President Benigno Aquino III encourged memberz of d 5 th
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Phillipine Army during her visit in Camp Melchor Dela Cruz, Sept. 17, 2016 EdEng313/Engl43 What is copyreading? --the editing or correcting error made by the reporter
--the editing the copy by the use
of appropriate symbols Copy editing Editing a copy is not just the simple task of looking for grammatical lapses or errors of facts. Seemingly harmless assertions, which often creep in copies submitted by neophyte or inexperienced reporters, if unnoticed, could make both the stories and ultimately the paper ridiculous. What do copy editors do? 1. Check facts • Check names, titles addresses, designations, identifications, etc. • Recheck figures and totals. • Challenge facts, claims or reports when they sound anomalous, illogical and incredible 2. Check spelling and grammar • Straighten out ungrammatical constructions • Check spelling and punctuation • Check sentence construction 3. Check organization • Rewrite the lead when necessary • Cut a story to size or to the required length • Shorten sentences and tighten paragraphs if needed Wasteful Words • Absence of • No • Accede to • Grant/allow • Accommodate • Hold/seat • Arrangements were in the • Arranged by hands of • Continue to remain • Stay • At the present time/at present • Now • Caused injuries to • Injured Redundancies Redundancies in italics commonly found in newspapers. The list is culled from Newman’s English by Harold Evans, former editor of the Sunday Times of London.
• Adequate enough • Smile on his face
• As compared with • Still persists/continues • Blue colored car • Sunny by day • Continue in existence • Temporary reprieve • Continue to remain • Ever since • During the course of • Attach together • Eliminate altogether • Whether or not • Patently obvious • Raze to the ground 4. Check for editorializing statements (for news articles) • Watch out for slanting or any attempt to present the story in a subtly biased way • Delete all opinions, speculations and statements which are without sources • Cross out adjectives in news items 5. Check libelous text • Watch out for libelous or derogatory statements • Check attributions and see that they are properly identified Qualities of a good copyreader • Good in English and Filipino language • Mastered copyreading symbols • Knows the newspaper’s style sheet, policy and laws • Observant of minute details (grammar, spelling, punctuation, correct usage) • Skilled in the different journalistic writing genres In short, copyreaders are super humans! PROCESS 1 Read the story quickly but thoroughly, sizing it up for content and relative news value. 2 Correct obvious errors of facts and spelling. 3 Break long paragraphs into shorter ones. The emphasis on the interaction between particles in modern physics, known as the microscopic approach, must often be supplemented by a macroscopic approach that deals with larger elements or systems of particles. This macroscopic approach is indispensable to the application of physics to much of modern technology. Thermodynamics, for example, a branch of physics developed during the 19th century, deals with the elucidation and measurement of properties of a system as a whole and remains useful in other fields of physics; it also forms the basis of much of chemical and mechanical engineering. Such properties as the temperature, pressure, and volume of a gas have no meaning for an individual atom or molecule; these thermodynamic concepts can only be applied directly to a very large system of such particles. A bridge exists, however, between the microscopic and macroscopic approach; another branch of physics, known as statistical mechanics, indicates how pressure and temperature can be related to the motion of atoms and molecules on a statistical basis.
Physics emerged as a separate science only in the early 19th
century; until that time a physicist was often also a mathematician, philosopher, chemist, biologist, engineer, or even primarily a political leader or artist. 4 Look for mistakes in punctuation, grammar, and facts. Recheck facts, especially names, addresses, numbers and titles. 5 Make sure the story is accurate and that it is fair to all sides in the issue. Copyreading SYMBOLS 1. Insert paragraph break 2. Run in/No paragraph break 3. Transpose 4. Change into numerals 5. Abbreviate 6. Don’t abbreviate 7. Spell out 8. Set in uppercase 9. Set in lowercase 10. Set in boldface 11. Set in italics 12. Close up space 13. Insert space 14. Insert letter/s or words 15. Make this a capital letter 16. Make this a small letter 17. Delete 18. Delete and close up 19. Insert comma 20. Insert apostrophe 21. Insert quotation marks 22. Insert period 23. Insert hyphen 24. Insert dash 25. End of story Exercises 1. Rains bought by Typhoon Ferdie has failed to raise the “critically low level” of water at Magat Dam in Ilagan, ISabela 2. The Phillipine Athmosperic, Geo-physical & Astronomical Services Administration (Pagasa), however, said that some parts of Luzon will still experience rains because of the southwest monsoon Exercises 3. Police said a men saw the dead body of the woman lying within the vicinity of the school 4. The driver of the bus sucumbed to injuries injuries after the terrible explosion, 5. The bag was taken by the b0y President Benigno Aquino III encourged memberz of d 5 th
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Phillipine Army during her visit in Camp Melchor Dela Cruz, Sept. 17, 2016 Reference: Malinao, A. L. (2010). Campus and community journalism handbook. Mandaluyong City: National Bookstore. Assignment Read any English broadsheet (international, national, local) and look for at least three (3) errors in grammar, facts, spelling, proper usage, etc. therein. Photocopy such part of the newspaper where the errors are found and edit said errors using the appropriate copyreading symbols. (10 points)