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Kubiak- Persepolis
Kennedy Kubiak
Honors 9 English
Teacher Mr. Bradley
26 September 2017

Persepolis Reflective Essay

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How would you 1 feel if your 2 home, the place you 3 Personal pronoun in formal writing
2
were born and raised in changed almost all the time. And Personal pronoun in formal writing
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that 4 it put you 5 and your 6 family in danger and they had 4
[And that → Moreover, that]
to send you 7 away? Well 8 Marjane and her family live in 5
Personal pronoun in formal writing
Iran When she was about ten is when it all started for her. 6
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Her parents would protest about what they believed in but, Personal pronoun in formal writing
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that left Marjane to try and figure out what is going on and [Well,]

try to have her own mind set 9. So she would imagine god
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and talk to him, she wanted to become a profit 10 but she Possibly miswritten word: mind set
drifted away from that. But when 11 she thought she was
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right about all that went wrong her parents or someone else [profit,]
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would tell her differently and changed her whole mined. [But when → However, when]
She could only trust her grandma and her uncle 12 Anoosh.
Ever since Iran wanted to change its government to make it
better, it has not gone very well. A lot of 13 death, and
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misery that has 14 happen in this place. Iran is a very strict 15 [uncle,]
place as everyone around the world has said and is a
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horrible place. [A lot of → Much]
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Iran is a very strict 16 place, 17 because they have all these [has to]
15
rules where if you 18 don’t 19 follow you 20 might die or be Weak adjective: strict
badly 21 hurt. These rules are, if you 22 don’t 23 wear the
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veil 24 you 26’ll 25 be hurt by men because it will turn them Weak adjective: strict
17
on. Or they 27 will arrest you 28 for not going by the law. [place, ]
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Women must also have it go over their whole body 29 but it 19
[don't → do not]
doesn’t 30 have to go over their face. Men also have their 20
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own 31 attire that they have to wear, they 32 also have to 21
Overused word: badly
22
have a beard. If you 33 say something your 34 not supposed Personal pronoun in formal writing
23

to say you 35 will get arrested, 36 if you 37 are a man and [don't → do not]
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[veil,]
you 38 disrespect a women 39 you 41’ll 40 go to jail. If you 42 25
[you'll → you will]
do any real life 43 drawings will also get you 44 into trouble. 26
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In Iran 45 their country is a government and religious [Or they → Alternatively, they]
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controled 46 country. Where if you 47 sleep with one or more Personal pronoun in formal writing
29
[body,]
men you 48 are a prostitot. Marjane’s friends asked her if 30
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she 49 ever done 50 the dirty, and when she tells them how [doesn't
[own] → does not]
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many times and men she did it with they blew up on her. [wear, they → wear; they]
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On page 116 persepolis 51 2. That made Marjane go into 34
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depression 52 where she wouldn’t 53 do anything with her 35
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family. She would stay inside and watch tv and sleep and [arrested, ]
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stay in her room. When she got on her medicine 54 it made Personal pronoun in formal writing
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her happy, but it only lasted for so long then it would wear 39
[a women → women]
off. When her parents went on a trip she 55 tried to kill 40
[you'll → you will]
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herself, she tried to herself but all it was a little dot. Then Personal pronoun in formal writing
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she tired 56 to drink vodka 57 and took her pills then went to 43
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[real life → real-life]
sleep but she woke up and was tripping badly. When she 44
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went back to the doctors 59 they 58 told her that she should 45
[Iran,]
46
have died 60 but she 61 was lucky that she didn’t 62. After [controled → controlled]
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that 63 she decided to do something with her life now 64 so Personal pronoun in formal writing
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she started a new look and started working out. She started Personal pronoun in formal writing
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[she is or she was]
her own 65 class that she instructs, she really 66 started a new 50
[done → did]
change. 51
[persepolis → Persepolis]
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In america 67 if you 68 do any of this not everyone judges [a depression or the depression]
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you 69 like they do in Iran. Like if you 70 date other men and [wouldn't → would not]
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[medicine,]
“do it” you won’t 71 be judge 72 like you would if you lived 55
Unoriginal text: 8 words
in Iran. If you 73 do drugs not all people are disappointed in ktwheretonext.blogspot.com/
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you 75 , 74 but some people will be. America and other Possibly confused word
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[to drink vodka → of drinking vodka]
countries have their own rules 76 but they aren’t 77 having 58
Unoriginal text: 8 words
civil wars going on in their country. They can keep more strongerfasterhealthier.tumblr.com/po…
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peace and less destruction, they 78 can have more normal [doctors,]
60
[died,]
lives. 61
Repeated word
This 79 is why Iran is way more strict and ruling 62
[didn't → did not]
63
dictatorship than everyone else, and how their world is a [that,]
64

third world country with all their war and death and misery. [now,]
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[own]
Why most people their want to move because they want to 66
[really]
get away from all that. So I 81 can see why the author 67
[america → America]
68
wrote 82 80 about her life growing up because, 83 she wants Personal pronoun in formal writing
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people from all over the world to understand that if the 84 Personal pronoun in formal writing
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think their life was hard. That it wasn’t 86 85 they didn’t 87 71
[won't → will not]
look over their shoulder all the time to see what was 72
Possibly confused word
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gonna 88 happen that day. That you 90 didn’t 91 have to start Personal pronoun in formal writing
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wearing a veil everytime you 92 go outside of your 93 [you , → you,]
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house. 89 Or have 94 to pray every day and lie to people just 76
[rules,]
to look like you 95 are following your 96 government. In 77
[aren't → are not]
America 97 if you 98 don’t 99 want to stand for our flag or our 78
[destruction, they → destruction; they]
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pledge of allegiance then you 101're 100 not going to jail or Unclear antecedent
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get punished or even killed. This 102 is my 103 reasonings 81 Unoriginal text: 8 words
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en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Ossett
why Iran is a way more strict country compared to 82
[author wrote → author wrote]
others 104 and this book explains it in her way of how bad it 83
[because, ]
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is. Possibly confused word
85
[wasn't,]
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[wasn't → was not]
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[didn't → did not]
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Slang
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Sentence fragment
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[didn't → did not]
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93
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[Or have → Alternatively, have]
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[America,]
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[don't → do not]
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[you're → you are]
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102
Unclear antecedent
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104
[others,]