School for tired Teens

A private school has become the first in England to delay lessons until the
afternoon. This idea response to different research that found teenagers had Commented [cm1]: Use the verb respond

a biological disposition to going to bed late, now more and more scientific The idea responds
evidence to support what many parents and teachers have known for years. Commented [cm2]: Research which found that

which refers to the research and that works with the

Our reality is very different if compared with England, in Chile we have a verb find

complete schedule that is mean approximately 8-9 hours per day in a Commented [cm3]: Period

school. The main idea the complete schedule was to complement the Commented [cm4]: This is the main verb of your
sentence, so you have to conjugate it:
traditional subject with other types of the activities that will help in the
The evidence supports what
formation the teenagers but until now, the most important preoccupation for
school has been getting a great grade in the Test (Simce).
Commented [cm5]: Mean is the main verb so you need
to conjugate it. To be is not necessary
I would like in the future this type of the schedule change and our authorities
That means
understand a need e quality education and not a longer time in the school.
Commented [cm6]: The idea of
Commented [cm7]: Plural: subjects
Commented [cm8]: Use a period and start with capital
letter, otherwise the sentence becomes to long to read
Comments
Commented [cm9]: Schools
It was very good, just be careful the verbs and their conjugation. Also, try to Commented [cm10]: Score is more appropriate
use more punctuation Commented [cm11]: Rephrase this:

I would like this type of schedule to change in the future ( I

would like+ sth+to+verb)
Commented [cm12]: Our authorities should understand
the need for quality education instead of longer school
hours