UNIDAD EDUCATIVA SANTA MARIANA DE JESS

VICE REC TORADO

2016 - 2017

ENGLISH AS FOREIGN LANGUAGE ASSIGNMENT

SECOND MID - TERM
UNIT 6
Name: Yulisa Lisbeth Bravo Brito
Date: 12 / Junio / 2017
Class: 3 BGU C

Task 2

Rubric

Your essay will be graded based on this rubric. Consequently, use this rubric as a guide
when writing your essay and check it again before you submit your essay.

Traits 2 points 1,5 points 1 point 0,5 points

Organization The introduction is The introduction The introduction There is no clear
(introduction and inviting, states the states the main states the main introduction,
conclusion) main topic, and topic and provides topic. A conclusion structure,
provides an overview an overview of the is included. or conclusion.
of the paper. A conclusion Less than 160 Less than 130
paper. Information is is included. words. words.
relevant and Less than 190
presented in a logical words.
order. The conclusion
is strong.
190 200 words
Focus & details There is one clear, There is one clear, There is one topic. The topic and main
(body) well focused topic. well focused topic. Main ideas are ideas are not clear.
Main ideas are clear Main ideas are clear somewhat clear.
and are well but are not well
supported by detailed supported by
and accurate detailed
information. information.
Word choice The author uses vivid The author uses The author uses The writer uses a
words and phrases. vivid words and words that limited vocabulary.
The choice and phrases. The choice communicate Jargon or clichs
placement of words and placement of clearly, but the may be present and
seems words is inaccurate writing lacks variety. detract from the
accurate, natural, at times and/or meaning.
and not forced. seems overdone.
Sentence All sentences are well Most sentences are Most sentences are Sentences sound
Structure, constructed and have well constructed well constructed, awkward, are
Grammar, varied structure and and but they have a distractingly
Mechanics, & length. The author have varied similar structure repetitive, or are
Spelling makes no errors in structure and and/or length. The difficult to
grammar, length. The author author makes understand. The
mechanics, and/or makes a few errors several errors in author makes
spelling. in grammar, grammar, numerous errors in
mechanics, and/or mechanics, and/or grammar,
spelling, but they do spelling that mechanics, and/or
not interfere with interfere with spelling that
understanding. understanding. interfere with
understanding.
Punctuality & The writer presents The writer presents
esthetic the essay in the the essay later that
indicated date. The the indicated time.
esthetic has been The esthetic is
well-cared. acceptable.
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VICE REC TORADO
2016 - 2017

Life of Simone Biles

Simone Arianne Biles was born on March 14, 1997, in Columbus, Ohio, the third of
four siblings. She is an American artistic gymnast. Biles is the 2016 Olympic individual
all-around, vault and floor gold medalist. She was part of the gold medal-winning team
dubbed the "Final Five" at the 2016 Summer Olympics in Rio de Janeiro. She also won
the bronze medal for the balance beam during the Olympics.

Over the funniest things that Simone has done in her life was being paparazzi. Zendaya
is a person who is following Simone, she also dominate another sport the javaline.
Actually she is going to compete as a snowboarder for the Olympic Winter Games.
Simones Icon in Gymtastics is Alicia Sacramone and she consider Ashton Ian the best
athlete in the world. Building a routine is tire based on practice, Simone said. The
bars are one of most difficult events for Simone.

On the other hand Simones favorite fame moment is seeing girls crying and shouting
whenever they see her. She prefers ice cream of cookies and cream and pizza
because its a meal that she could eat the rest of her life, Ariel and Erick are her favorite
couple of Disney. Simones movie makes her lough is Vacation and the one that
makes her cry is Marley and me. Besides she would like to meet Jennifer Lawrence
because both have fallen from the stairs. She would like to visit Bora Bora, Simone
hates washing dishes. If Simone wasnt gymnast she would be studying sports
business at college.

Finally Simone is a woman who has achieved many accomplishments during her life
these become her in one of the best USA gymnast. She is motivated to keep on
working and being a referent of life for the rest of people. Simone doesnt compete to
win medals but also she competes for the life overcoming the obstacles of the life.