LESSON 7 - CREATE YOUR REVIEW LANDMARK ASSESSMENT FEEDBACK FORM

Title of assessment: GCSE WRITING

Level/Grade

Task 1: Read the criteria

Limited information.
Single words and phrases.
One time frame
1
2
in groups and identify
Simple opinions.
Some information.
Short sentences.
Two time frames.
3
which ones need to be Range of opinions.
Relevant information with occasional development.
4
Short sentences.
5
met to achieve your 6
Three time frames.
Variety of opinions.
Relevant information with some development.
7
target
Longer sentences.
Use of connectives.
8
Occasional complex structures.
Relevant information with expansion of key points. 9
Extended, well-linked sentences.
Some complex language and structures.
Frequent errors which hinder clarity.
Relevant information with good development.

Task 2: Use the previous Some repetitive instances of complex language and structures.
Fairly accurate.
Detailed response.

review as a model
Generally accurate.
Fair variety of complex language and structures.
Occasional ambiguity which impedes communication.
Very detailed response

(Lesson 4) and the Good variety of grammatical structures and language.

Mostly accurate.
Fully developed and fluent response.

writing frame to guide

Wide variety of grammatical structures and complex language
Hardly any error.

Positive features of your learning are:

you.
(T) To improve/extend your work:

Student response:
USE THE WRITING FRAME TO GUIDE YOU TO CREATE YOUR REVIEW
ANNOTATE THE WRITING FRAME
with the headings for each section (green section)
& COMPLETE YOUR SONG REVIEW
UPLOAD THE
IL TITOLO DELLA CANZONE ., UNA CANZONE CANTATA DA
.., CHE E. FIRST 3/4
LA CANZONE FORMATA DA SENTENCES
LA TONALITA MAGGIORE/MINORE RENDE .. ONTO
GLI STRUMENTI .
EDMODO
PENSO CHE SIA UNA CANZONE . , PERCH
& READ THE
IL TESTO DELLA CANZONE . E .., MA

NONOSTANTE CHE SIA , LA CANZONE ..

FEEDBACK

IN FUTURO, VORREI ..
ONLINE
TITLE PLANS NEGATIVE + POSITIVE SENTENCE
ABOUT THE LYRICS
ABOUT THE INSTRUMENTS ABOUT THE MOOD OF THE SONG
THE STRUCTURE ASK FOR HELP IF
ABOUT THE BAND ABOUT MY OPINION
YOU ARE STUCK!
DONT FORGET TO USE ALL THE MATS AND RESOURCES AT YOUR DISPOSAL

ADD, BUILD & CHALLENGE

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