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May8,2017
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DearReader,
Formyworldofwondersproject,mycontrollingpurposeittoexplainthepositiveand
negativeeffectstechnologyhasonourwillpower.Itisimportanttoshowthenegativeand
positiveeffectsbecausetechnologyisallaroundusanditiscontrollingourdailylives.Ichoose
thistopicbecausetechnologyisaverycontrollingpeiceofequipmentandiwantedtoknow
whywecannotrefrainfromtheuseofit.Asyoureadmyessaysihopeyouknowthat
technologyisaveryindecisivepieceofworkanditisnottakenasseriouslyasitshouldbe.I
hopeyouastheaudiencerealizesthemultitudeoftechnologyandwhyitshouldbetaken
moreseriouslyinsteadofbeingabused.
WhenIbeganmyresearchIwantedtowriteaboutwhywecannotrefrainfromtechnology
itself,butIthenlearned,thatitwouldnotreallygointodepth;soIthendecidedtogothe
routeofhowiteffectsourwillpower.ConsideringthatIalreadyknewalotaboutwhywecan
notrefrainfromourtechnologyIdecidedhowiteffectswillpowerbecauseIdidnotknow
anythingabouttechnologyandourwillpower.SinceIknewmyprojectwouldbeabouthuman
willpowerwithtechnologyIbegantoresearchpositiveandnegativeeffectsabouttechnology.
AfterthatIthennarrowedmyresearchtoacoupleofpositiveandnegativereasons.Igot
inspiredwhenIfoundoutthattechnologyhasaffectedourchildreninamostlynegativeway
thenpositive.Alsohowtechnologyhasalmostmoreofanegativethenpositiveeffectonour
willpower.
AfterIwrotemyfirstessay,Ifeelthatmyfollowingessaysimprovedexceedingly.Thefirst
essayIrevisedwasmyinformational.FormyinformationalIwroteacomicstrip,illustrating
howsocialmedia,TV,cellphonesaffectus.Ifeltthatmyparagraphsdidnotflowtogether
properly.SoIdecidedtogothroughandchangemyendingstotheparagraphstomakethem
flow.Thismademyessayflowandmakemoresensetomyaudience.
WhilewritingmyessayIlearned,thattechnologyisabusedanditisnottakenasseriouslyasit
shouldbe.Ifeelthatmystrongestpiecesinmyprojectismysecondinformativeandmy
argumentative.Ifeelthatmyendnotesstillneedworkinorderforthemtoflowproperly.Ifeel
proudofmypaperandIfeellikeIhaveaccomplishedalotsincethestartofit.Iwilldomy
narrativedifferentlyformynextresearchprojectbecauseIfeelitneedsmoredetailorIneed
togoanotherroute,insteadofashortstory.
Sincerely,
E.Llera
ElizabethLlera