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1015SouthParkCameron,Mo64429

05April1934

Mr.andMrs.Flanagan
615EastCandycorn
SantaMonica,Ca90402

DearMr.andMrs.Flanagan,
IamwritingtoyoubecauseIthinkyourdaughterhasAutismSpectrumDisorder.
Autismaffectsyourchild'scommunication,socialskills,andbehavior.

Inmyresearchtherearethreetypesofautism:Mildwhichmeansnotbad,moderatewhichissome
partsaregetting,orseverewhichisreallybad.Yourdaughter,unfortunately,issevere.Her
communicationisunstable,sheisn'tsocial,andherbehaviorwasbadfromthewayshereacts.In
myresearchsaysthatcommunicationmaygethardifyourchildissevere,alsoifsheisn'tsocial
thatwasprobablybecauseofhercommunicationorshedoesntgooutsideoften.Alllotofkidsout
intheworldwithAutismhasbehaviorissues.

ThereisaspecialistwhichisMrs.Kelly.ShespecializesinkidswhohasAutism.Youwillfindherat
AlcatrazIslandwiththeprisonandEstherP.Marinoff.TheEstherP.Marinoffisaschoolfor
childrentobehaveanddoassignments.

SincerelyDr.Lucky

Dr.Lucky
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