Rhetorical Analysis Essay

by Kim Nguyen

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Rhetorical Analysis Essay
GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

93
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QM Awk.
Awkward:
T he expression or construction is cumbersome or dif f icult to read. Consider rewriting.

Comment 1
use quotation marks f or speech title

QM Cap. Error
Capitalization

P/V You have used the passive voice in this sentence. You may want to revise it using the active
voice.

Comment 2
...claim about...

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Possessive

Comment 3
all arguments use rhetorical strategies, unnecessary to say this here

Prep. You may be using the wrong preposition.

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 Article Error You may need to remove this article.

Verb T his verb may be incorrect. Proof read the sentence to make sure you have used the correct
f orm of the verb.

Missing "," Review the rules f or using punctuation marks.

Proof read T his part of the sentence contains an error or misspelling that makes your meaning
unclear.

Conf used You have used either an imprecise word or an incorrect word.

Prep. You may be using the wrong preposition.

Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word. Consider using the article the

Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word. Consider using the article the

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Comment 4
Nice work! Be caref ul of word choices. Just be aware: although I'm not concerned about the
24% originality score, because all similarities are correctly cited and documented in your essay,
please know prof essors down the line may question this.