DETERMINATION OF CAFFIENCCE CONTENT IN THE COFFEE USING FTIR SPECTROSCOPY IN THE

COMBINATION WITH THE ATTENUATED TOTAL REFLECTANCE TECHINIQUE : A BIOCHEMICAL

CHEMISTRY EXPERIMENT FOR BIOCHEMIST.

- Yung buong journal mismo kulang sa information.

- You cant figure out the journal is all about. (magulo sya besh)
- The authors of the journal should have use right words/ more applicable words for
better understanding.
- Dapat constant yung pag gamit nila ng word kung abbreviation dapat naka
abbreviation yung word na yun sa buong journal. For example the word figure at first
it was written as Fig. then on the other sentences/ paragraph it was written as Figure.
- Yung result and discussion nya mapapansin mo na masyadong malayo yung table dun
sa discussion nya.
- They should explain the result and the procedure so it will not make confusions.
- Mahirap intindihin yung journal kasi ang gulo nya.

(yung first paragraph sa

introduction.
it doesnt have any relevance
to the topic and should not be
part of the introduction.

(in short hindi sya talaga dapat

nilalagay sa intro)
 Wrong grammar
Right used of word could make
the journal more
understandable

Masyado ng irrelevant yung

paglalagay kung saan sila
nakagamit ng instrument dahil
pwede naman nilang ilagay
yung sa acknowledgement.
The title for the figure is too long.
 Hindi na dapat nilagay
kung magkano yung
instrument sa conclusion
kasi hindi naman sya
kasama sa objective.
Sabi may calculation daw
pero wala naman akong
makitang solution kung
paano nakuha yung mga
number kasi hindi
maintindihan kung paano
nila nakuha yung result.