Alice Heinrich Unit One

Analysis of Website or
Publication in your
Profession or
Discipline

Concerns Grading Criteria Advanced Success

As a reader, Im Clear definition and The essays first

curious to know more description of the paragraph identifies
about professionalism discourse the members of the
in the field of finance. community or AFA as financial
How do the priorities communities that professionals with a
of financial would use the great knowledge of
professionals differ website finance, while noting
from those of other that university
business-minded students who need
professionals? references in finance
are also welcomed on
the website.
Clear and thorough
The second paragraph examination of the The second paragraph
describes the details text as an artifact, identifies the
of the site while including websites goal as
offering little The language improving the
commentary or used. general publics
analysis. Any understanding of
conventions finance.
such as
 citation, The essay uses the
graphical language of the
elements, etc. website to explain the
that suggest a sites features. See,
particular for instance, this
function for passage:
the text. The subscription
The design of to the AFA is
the text and free for
what it students, which
suggests corresponds to
about the their goal of
texts use encouraging
The access
the study of
points to the
finance in
text
The college and

navigation of universities.

the text
The Terrific analysis:
components of What we can
the text and learn about the
what they discourse
suggest about community
how a user or through those
different users articles is that it
will encounter exchanges
it. about financial
theories as well
as strategic
ways to
implement
 those theories.
For a
professional,
this exchange
can serve as a
tool for tactical
decisions
concerning
investments or
corporate
governance.
One of the essays Effective
most important claims organization and
appears buried in the presentation of
middle of page two. your own analysis
These excellent
insights belong earlier
in the essay, perhaps
even in the
introduction:
What we can
learn about the
discourse
community
through those
articles is that it
exchanges
about financial
theories as well
as strategic
ways to
 implement
those theories.
For a
professional,
this exchange
can serve as a
tool for tactical
decisions
concerning
investments or
corporate
governance.

Italicize the titles of Follows MLA

journals, such as formatting and
Journal of Finance. citation guidelines

Direct quotations,
such as the one that
appears in the
introduction, need in-
text citation.

You neednt center

quotations in the
middle of the page.
See the Purdue OWL
for the guidelines for
formatting direct
quotations.
The essay contains no
Works Cited page.
Meets length No concerns
requirement

Other notes

Unit One grade: B+

Though the essay lacks citations and a Works Cited page, it succeeds
in introducing readers to the Journal of Finance, where professional
knowledge in the field circulates.