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Part 1, Essay
Understanding the task acquisition of money and material goods is a prime signifier
of fulfilment? Both texts (1) discuss the nature of these
1 R ea d th e e x a m qu estion and a n sw er q u estion s a - c b elo w .
concepts, but from a different perspective (2).
Read the tw o texts below. The first passage (3) argues that people chase riches
W rite an essay summarizing and evaluating the key to feel superior to others and to attain a given target (4).
points from both texts. Use your ow n words throughout I personally feel (5) this will resonate with many people
as far as possible, and include your ow n ideas in because we are conditioned by society to believe that this is
the answer. what gives our lives meaning. Having possession (6) of more
W rite your answer in 2 4 0-280 words. and more items generates a temporary feeling of satisfaction,
and acquiring these in the pursuit of status leaves the ever
Chasing th e ya n k ee d olla r
present fear that other people will surpass our efforts.
Th e concept that m oney brings happiness is flaw ed and In contrast, the second text (7) proposes that the
naive fo r tw o fundamental reasons. Firstly, being rich interconnected nature of wealth and other services such as
is only relative to the spending pow er o f others w ithin education and health means that inevitably money does
our circle, so inevitably w e com pare ourselves to this result in happiness (8). Whilst (9) we might not exactly feel
cohort. In other words, the desire is not necessarily to euphoric in the midst of some medical procedure or when
be w ealthy but w ealthier than others. In addition to standing in line outside the classroom door, I would agree
this, w e set ourselves goals, such as the purchase o f
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Expressing results Restating or explaining
3 L o o k at th e essay b e lo w a n s w e rin g th e sam e q u estio n accordingly... in other w o rd s ...
as th e m o d e l answ er. R e a d th e essay an d t r y to im p ro v e as a consequence ... in particular...
areas you th in k a re w eak . h e n ce ... that is (to sa y)...
th u s ... specifically...
Happiness is a feelin g many people desire, and we for these reasons... Concluding
consequently strive to achieve this state. For some, consequently... All in a ft,...
Contrasting tw o statem ents In b rie f,...
it is a flawed and naive concept that m oney brings
Instead, ... In conclusion,...
happiness but for others, m oney enables people to On the contrary,... To summarize,...
acquire the products and services that they can derive Rather (than)...
satisfaction from.
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Th e boom-bust cycle o f w orld economies is hardly
bring happiness but it enables people to purchase the
a m odern phenom enon, spanning som e 400 years
products and services that they derive satisfaction in various guises. The pursuit o f w ealth through
from. N ot from typical material goods but through speculation on markets exem plifies the inextricable
link, to the human eye, betw een m oney and happiness.
other m ore basic and important needs. T h e richest H ow ever, were it simply a m atter o f acquiring enough
countries unsurprisingly are also the happiest valuable com m odities to maintain a certain standard
o f livin g then perhaps the constant m aelstrom o f
countries. W hilst m oney on its ow n m ight not bring
econom ic grow th follow ed by the despair o f recession
happiness, it does let people access health and could be avoided. Unfortunately, once one man
becom es rich, another seeks to attain the same or
education that provide much satisfaction. Its not the
a higher position until the value o f such goods and
m oney on its ow n that makes you happy but the things services reaches yet again an unsustainable level and
the inevitable decline ensues.
its linked to like health and education.
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