I have just looked through a selection of 7S
Journals in light of Year 7 tracking, and thought
it useful to give you some feedback whilst I was
looking.
Impressive Elements:
Impressive Elements:
Well done for your efforts with the
students. I can see that they are
grasping the IDEA structure effectively
in their written work.
Some nice reactions in Audience Impact
Mostly effectively completion of all
activities (albeit one or two gaps from a
couple of students)
Accurate marking, using the criteria
effectively
Areas for Development: Areas for Development:
In target setting, please ensure that you
give the students a Star and a Wish in
the Teacher Comment boxes. This need
only be snappy in the prep work.
Can you please ensure that students
respond to your target setting in the
Student Response boxes where
relevant
In marking the work, can you draw the
students attention to any spellings
where appropriate
I looked through a selection of 7A/B/C Journals
in light of Year 7 tracking, and thought it useful
to give you some feedback whilst I was looking.
Impressive understanding of
Performance Analysis from the
students. You have delivered the
content of the unit well. Thanks and
well done for this.
Good teacher feedback, incorporating a
WWW / EBI structure
Most activities completed thoroughly in
journal
Accurate marking, using the criteria
effectively well done!
Encourage students to write more
neatly in their journals, and care for it
as they would exercise books for other
subjects, as there are one or two that
were a little scruffy
Ensure that students are ticking the
Learning Objective boxes as they work
their way through the unit
Can you please ensure that students
respond to your target setting in the
Student Response boxes where
relevant
In marking the work, can you please
draw the students attention to any
spellings where appropriate
In the final feedback, please ensure
that the students complete the Student
Response/Star & Wishes Sections
modelled on the examples from the PP.
When you do get a response from a
Student in Student Response, aim to
read over these and respond if they
have any concerns.