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be accurate
have an appropriate tone
be concise
make its purpose clear
Brevity (being brief) is about saying what you want to say without
rambling. Students often use too many words for various reasons: a lack
of confidence, thinking they will impress markers, and believing wordy
prose is an appropriate academic style.This is not the case.
If you are unsure about what you are writing, do more reading or
ask your tutor for support
markers will not be impressed as they have to try hard to work out
what your point/s is/are
good academic style is about being clear, concise and to the
point
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Revert back
Unite together
Sink down
Join together
Follow after
Mutual
cooperation
phrase?
Advance planning
New innovation
Falsely fabricated
Ascend up
Collaborate (or cooperate) together
Penetrate into
Hoist up
phrase?
General public
35 acres of land
Divide up; filled
A number of examples
up; burn down;
Circular shape
eat up
True facts
Discuss about
A team of twelve workers
Important
Major breakthrough
essentials
Meet together
Reduce down
Small in size
More preferable
Sufficient
enough
Long-winded sentences. Keep sentences short and eliminate the waffle.
Example:Literally, sustainable development makes reference to maintaining
development over a certain period of time, although by the early 1990s, more
than seventy definitions of sustainable development were in circulation
throughout various different field, definitions that are extremely important,
despite their large number, because they are the fundamental basis on which
the means for achieving sustainable development in the future can be built
upon. (63 words and 1 sentence)
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Words
Accept
Except
Affect
Effect
Altar
Alter
Your
Youre
Cited
Sited
Complement
Compliment
Precedents
Precedence
Principal
Principle
Their
There
Theyre
Affect
Effect
Advise
Advice
Than
Then
To
Too
Two
Meanings
To take from
To leave out
Influence
Result; consequence
To change
Raised area for worship
Contraction
Possessive pronoun
Positioned
Referenced
Full amount
Expression of admiration
Takes priority
Priorities (noun)
Doctrine
Predominant
Contraction
Possessive pronoun
That place
Result; consequence
Influence
Suggest (verb)
Opinion; recommendation (noun)
Relates to time
Comparison; preference; more or less of a
quantity
Number
Directional preposition, first part of infinitive
verb
Very; also
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Although putting a comma in the wrong place or omitting one will not cost
you money, it could cost you marks, so be careful.
First, lets read the following sentence and decide
TALKING
POINT
who is speaking and who is to blame.
The team leader said Joe Brown was entirely to blame for the teams
dismal performance.
Now, insert two commas to change who is speaking and who is to blame.
A comma does one job separate but it does it in different ways. Refer
to the table below guidance on where to place commas.
Rule
1 To separate the clauses in a
sentence
2 To separate the introductory
element of a sentence from the
main part (or subject) of it
3 To separate an additional and
final part of a sentence from the
opening and main part (or subject)
of it
4 To separate out nonessential
words from the remainder of the
sentence. The word however is
used as a signal to suggest a
Example
Society depends on its traditions,
and the authority of the written
text is one of those.
After the death of his wife, Hardy
went in to a deep depression.
The sea is calm tonight, yet it
raged fiercely all day.
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Whose is a possession word whilst whos (or who is) describes someone
doing something. For example:
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But not
Peoples wishes: wishes of the peoples
Should be
Peoples wishes: wishes of the people
restaurants may seem safer but just as much fraud goes on there as it
does on the
web. These days, customers need reassurance that their transactions are
safe and
banks need to raise their game with regard to financial security. For all its
advantages, the online world can certainly have its downside.
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Answers
Tautologies: deleting word/s
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POINT
Planning:
Innovation: Fabricated: Ascend: Collaborate: Penetrate: Hoist
Redundancies: deleting word/s
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Meanings
To take from
To leave out
Influence
Result; consequence
To change
Raised area for worship
Contraction
Possessive pronoun
Positioned
Referenced
Full amount
Expression of admiration
Takes priority
Priorities (noun)
Doctrine
Predominant
Contraction
Possessive pronoun
That place
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Affect
Effect
Advise
Advice
Than
Then
Result; consequence
Influence
Suggest (verb)
Opinion; recommendation (noun)
Relates to time
Comparison; preference; more or less of a
quantity
Number
Directional preposition, first part of infinitive
verb
Very; also
To
Too
Two
Commas
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POINT
The team leader, said Joe Brown, was entirely to blame for the teams
dismal performance.
Now Joe is speaking and the team leader is to blame.
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