SAMPLE OF PUPILSWRITING

SAMPLE 1 :

Living two doors away from my house is my classmate, Azlan. He is twelve years old and he
studies at Sekolah Kebangsaan Kuala Perlis in the same class with me. We always walk to
school together as our school is just a stones throw away from our residences. All the teachers
and friends like him very much as he is clever , kind- hearted and helpful. His parents love him
very much as he is the apple of his parents eyes. Not to forget , he also has a golden heart.
Last school holidays , Azlan decided to go for a picnic with his friends at a waterfall. They went
there by bicycles. They were very excited because it was their first time to go there without their
parents.
Out of the blue , Azlan noticed a girl fell into the water and was about to drown. She shouted for
help loudly. Without further delay , Azlan who is good at swimming , jumped into the river and
quickly pulled the poor girl to the riverbank for safety.
It was a brave and quick thinking action. The girls parents were pleased and thanked Azlan for
his brave act. They praised him for saving their daughters life. He felt as proud as a peacock
because he had done a good deed. His friends came and praised him too. Azlan did not want to
blow his own trumpet as he is very good at swimming and had a medal for helping people. He
just kept quiet and smiled to his friends.
Azlan was as happy as a king as he had done a good deed. He always believes that one good
deed deserves another. It was an unforgettable day for Azlan.

SAMPLE 2 : ( UPSR 2012 )

Last school holidays , the pupils of Sekolah Rendah Kebangsaan Seri Pelangi went to the
National Museum located in the heart of town. They were eager to go there as this was their first
experience to go for a school trip. Before they boarded the bus , they waved to their parents.
As the students made themselves comfortable in the bus, the driver went to the other side of
the bus. He squatted down and arranged the bags meticulously in the luggage compartment.
After everything was settled , he hopped to the drivers seat and started the journey.
As the parents waved goodbye to their kids who were whisked away by the bus , something
caught their eyes. A vibrantcoloured bag was left lying on the ground. They shouted to the
driver who was driving the bus but no one heard them. Without any hesitation , one of the
parents who had a heart of gold took the bag and darted as fast as lightning towards the bus.
Fortunately , he got to the bus in the nick of time. The bus stopped immediately. The driver
went out of the bus to know what had happened. The parent who was breathless , told the
driver that a student had left his bag. Out of the blue, a student went out of the bus to claim his
bag. He thanked the parent profusely. After he claimed his bag , they continued their journey.
The parent was over the moon because he had done a good deed that day.

SAMPLE 3 : ( UPSR 2011 )

I have many friends all around the globe and one of them is Qistina. She grows up in a filthy
rich family. However , she is the only child in her family. Therefore , her life is filled with
loneliness. Her parents who are as busy as a bee gave her an adoring female cat named Mimi
on her twelfth birthday. Presently , Mimi is her only friend to keep her company.
The weather was fine and humid for everyone to fo their leisure activities on the fateful day.As
usual , Qistina took her beloved pet , Mimi for a stroll at the garden. There , she met her boon
companion Eliza who is famously known as an animal lover. She had a cat too. She took good
care of it. Qistina was very excited to meet Eliza there as she had a great story to tell her.
Therefore , they released their cats for a while.
Like the other cats , Mimi and its new friend were playing around the garden actively. Qistina
and Eliza were busy chatting without keeping a watchful eye on their cats.
Mimi which was energetic , quietly stalked on a bird until the top of the tree. Qistina was worried
about her cat. It was Mimis worst nightmare as it was truly frightened. In the twinkling of an
eye , Elizas brother broke into the scene with his bravery. He put his heart and soul to save
Mimi.
After a few minutes ,Qistinas cat was saved by a brave big brother , Aiman. She thanked him
as she was touched by his kind gesture. She gave him some money as a token of appreciation.
Having a noble heart , he refused it. Qistina hugged Mimi and she was happy indeed.
It was a memorable day for all of them. Indeed , one good turn deserves another.