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10/25/16
Avoiding Justice
There are many types of literary genre everywhere. If you are writing about food, you would
want to look into menus at certain restaurants, If you are researching a specific athlete you
might want to look at their accomplishments. Most genres has its own exigency such as
Domestic Violence Cases. If you are not familiar with domestic violence you should take a look
at a victim's written statement writing is a word-by-word, sentence-by-sentence process(Bunn
72) that can help you better understand exactly what you are reading.
Domestic disturbances can be heard about a lot in the media, online, on TV shows like TMZ,
and even in the newspaper.
If you are a celebrity the media outlets such as TMZ should have reports and the celebrity
statements posted on their website. Domestic disturbances also occur in the sports world. For
example, according to Ryan Phillips's article, the NFL does not handle domestic violence cases
properly. New York Giants kicker Josh Brown has been in multiple incidences of domestic
violence. Joshs domestic violence cases has occurred since 2001 up to 2016 resulting in only
one in game suspension. According to police documents, Brown's wife Molly accused him of
being physical with her more than 20 times in the year 2015. She claims that during several
occasions Brown Pushed her against a door, yelled at her or slammed on the floor in April
2015. The Giants then gave Brown a 2 year, $4 million deal in April, before his suspension.
When The Giant's coach Roger Goodell was asked about the behavior of Brown he claims that
he was not given enough facts from the law enforcement and this prevented him from taking
further actions, besides the one suspension.
Choosing how to express your meaning is every bit as important as the message itself(Boyd
87).In a way Goodall used rhetoric during his interview with BBC. Goodall argues,Well you
have to go and get the facts. We have asked repeatedly for those facts and the information
thats been gathered by law enforcement both orally and in writing. And we werent able to get
access to it. So you have to make decisions on whatever information you have. This is his
excuse and reasoning for not giving Josh Brown a longer suspension or a different penalty. But
what does Josh Brown have to say about this? Josh admitted that he objectified women and
never really worried about the pain and hurt he caused them.
In this example we are able to determine who the victim is, who the defendant is, we can also
determine their tones. Molly obviously is scared that her husband has raised his voice and
have gotten physical with her. Josh doesn't really seem to address the situation with any
remorse.
Celebrity domestic disputes have a lot of textual literacy. Police reports such as- what the
problem is, where did the crime happen, what time did this occur, and who is involved. Some
more literacy can also be documents that the police found or statements.
If you wish to see the domestic violence statistics visit the Bureau of Justice Statistics
website. The website site shows studies that compares the domestic and non-domestic
offenses of sexual and aggravated assault on 11 prosecution, conviction, and sentencing
outcome measures. This data states that domestic sexual assault dependants have a 98% rate
of overall conviction. It also states Domestic aggravated assault defendants (54%) were less
likely to be granted pretrial release than non-domestic aggravated assault defendants (62%).
Here is another Domestic Violence written in Huffington Post, this article is titled This Is How A
Domestic Violence Victim Falls Through The Cracks. This story is about a woman named
Laura Aceves who lived in Berryville, Arkansas. Laura was abused by her now ex-boyfriend
Victor Acuna-Sanchez. Laura moved to Arkansas to avoid her ex that she claims had allegedly
beat her with a baseball bat, dragged her behind a car, strangled her until she blacked out on
the floor and told her over and over how he would kill her if she ever left him. One day after
Laura had finished her shift at work she realized that someone had poured bleach in her gas
tank, terrified she called 911. Laura told the police officer that she had suspected that Victor was
behind all this, she even told the police officer where Victor might be located, but he was not
found. At the time Victor was charged with two prior attack of aggravated assaulted towards
Laura. Victor was out on bail with the court order to have no contact with Laura and to check in
with probation by phone each week.. 48 hours later Laura was found dead in her apartment
with a gunshot wound to the head and her 4 month old baby still in her arms. Laura's plead for
protection was completely ignored in Arkansas, Laura's mother Ms. Ponce is devastated.
Ms.Ponce told the Sheriff of Berryville what Victor is capable of she even gave him the history of
his past aggression towards her daughter, but Victor didn't serve much jail time.
According to the Violence Policy Center Arkansas has frequently been ranked as one of the 10
worst states in the nation when it comes to men killing women in the last decade. Center for
American Progress also states that in 2010 Arkansas had the third-worst gun murder rate for
women in the nation. Arkansas has a big crime rate, a lot of theft, DUI, substance abuse and
Domestic Violence.
Jacquelyn Campbell( the country's leading expert on domestic homicide) testifies that
Arkansas did not use the screening tool that she has created. This screen tool consists of a
series of questions that a victim of violence should be asked, based on their answer you can
then determine if they are in serious danger and how it can be prevented. If Laura were to have
taken the screening test it would have proved that she was in extreme danger. Now several
states have screening test for their victims.
This article in Huffington Post appeal to women, specially women in Arkansas. There are
affordances and constraints to Jacquelyns screening tests. A victim getting asked specific
questions like, Does your perpetrator own a gun?, can help categorize how much of a threat
your offender is. The sheriff uses incongruity when he blames Laura for her own death and also
stating his opinion domestic violence prevention should focus on why women return to their
abusers, and that it wasnt logical or responsible to think the criminal justice system could
solve the problem. This article also has pathos. Many women died in Arkansas due to the lack
of justice toward domestic violence cases. This article is to help shed some light on this situation
In hopes of change in Arkansass justice system.
Work Cited
Bunn, Mike. How To Read Like A Writer Writing Spaces: Reading on Writing, Vol.2.
http://thebiglead.com/2016/10/23/roger-goodell-says-public-doesnt-understand-nfl-handling-ofCommented [24]: Santiago: I want you to adhere to
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http://www.bjs.gov/index.cfm?ty=tp&tid=235
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