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A. Theme
Friendship, family, loyalty and struggle
B. Plot
C. Point of view
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I became what I am today at the age of twelve. (Chapter 1)
That was a long time ago, but its wrong what they say about the past, about how you
experience. (Chapter 5)
And if you were a boy living in kabul, the day of the tournament was undeniably the
drenches your body. You want to scream. You would if you could. But you have to
breathe to scream. (Chapter 10)
D. Setting
Setting Place
Setting Time
Setting Atmosphere
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CHAPTER ONE
December 2001
_december 2001_
I became what I am
today at the age of
In the kitchen
Last summer
twelve,
One day last summer, my
friend rahim khan called
from pakistan. He asked
me to come see him.
Standing in the kitchen
with the receiver to my
Spreckels lake
The
early-
afternoon
ear
After I hung up, I went
for a walk along
spreckels lake on the
northern edge
Of golden gate park. The
early-afternoon sun
sparkled on the water
where dozens of
miniature boats
Sailed, propelled by a
crisp breeze.
I sat on a park bench near
a willow tree.
Driveway of my
CHAPTER TWO
When we were
fathers
children
House
Cinema zainab
One day,
House
One day, we were
walking from my
Fathers house to cinema
zainab for a new iranian
Bazaar
movie,
I remember one day,
was eight,
Babas study,
One day,
Class,
The
following
week,
books.
The following week,
after class, I showed the
book to my teacher and
pointed to the chapter on
the hazaras.
Ghargha lake,
Class
CHAPTER THREE
The day before
the
Orphanage
opened,
When I was in
north of kabul.
When I was in fifth
fifth grade,
In babas study,
islam.
We were upstairs in
the
smoking
room,
Taught us in class.
I did. When baba was
house
six/the middle of
the night.
my grandfathers house
in the middle of the
night.
They hanged him from
oak tree
before afternoon
prayer.
In school,
play
game
called
_sherjangi_, or battle of
the poems.
In 1970, baba took a
In 1970,
_buzkashi_
tournament
day.
yearly _buzkashi_
tournament that took
place on the first day of
spring, new years day.
CHAPTER FOUR
Kabul
1933
Bookstore
from my favorite
Wazir akbar khan
bookstore.
. Or the new city,
district.
west
Of the wazir akbar khan
At amirs home
district.
During the school year,
year,
The bathroom,
After school, hassan and
I met up, grabbed a book,
and trotted up a bowlshaped hill just north of
my fathers property in
The tree
After school,
Babas
the grass,
One day, in july 1973, I
1973,
on hassan.
That same night, I wrote
Relax.
room,
Yard
An hour later,
As the evening
a party.
An hour later, as the
sky
dimmed,
when they
left
In bed
The living room
been my father.
Later that night, curled
up in bed
I read it to him in the
And dark,
marble fireplace. A
voice, cold and dark,
suddenly whispered in
my ear,
The living room
At night
CHAPTER FIVE
Confusing/scary
In the streets.
of the morning.
Dining room
Home
the streets.
Huddled together in the
sun to rise/early
morning
Just
before Worried
sunrise,
Outside
fathers study
my That
morning
next
The kitchen,
that
next
outside
my
fathers study
Then I went to the
kitchen,
stuffed
my
pine nuts ..
We burst through the
front gates and headed
In the yard
Early
that
following winter
of 1974,
The foyer,
Hassans birthday.
snow fort
When we stepped into
the
Foyer,.
hassan,
your
birthday
present.
Home
CHAPTER SIX
The first day of
snowfall, early in
the morning.
My
window
morning,
I think.
Ahmad
had
one
of
assefs
my bedroom window
When the winds of
of winter began to
blow
Fun
Paper.
The kite-fighting
tournament
outlasted
winter tradition in
daylight.
afghanistani
remember one
Year
Narrow streets
the
tournament
outlasted daylight.
I remember one overcast
Winter day
narrow streets.
I saw we had ended up
middle school
Babas study
One
night
that Relax
winter,
in the summer,
One night that winter,
with the big contest only
four days away, baba and
I sat in his study in
overstuffed leather chairs
by the glow of the
fireplace. We were
the tournament.
The
Home
CHAPTER SEVEN
next
morning,
Daylight
breakfast.
Pack it all in, go back
home. Baba was on
the roof, watching me. I
felt his glare on me like
the heat of a blistering
Streets,
on
sun.
I could hear the runners
the Summer
roof,
on the roof,
By three oclock that
afternoon
The street.
After
another Hardly
thirty minutes,
The
streets
of
move,
The streets
akbar
of
khan
wazir
were
neighborhood then,
For the next few minutes,
minutes,
In the backyard,
that
darkness
dhul-hijjah,
That night
Wednesday night,
on friday.
I wanted it--but by
Wednesday night, .
We filled three vans. I
to jalalabad
kaka
homayoun
two-hour
trek
through
Mountain roads winding
On a rock on the A few
side of the road
later,
minutes
van.
I sat on the edge of the
pool,..
the
balcony
in
playing hide-and-seek at
(house
jalalabad)
Kaka
and
kaka
balcony, smoking.
Later, well past midnight,
mattresses in the
same room
In my room,
women
went
Last
upstairs.
I remember the last
Time.
In the garden.
translation
of
ivanhoe,
Early that spring, a few
days
year started,
before
the
new
and I were
Planting tulips in the
The hill,
Hazy
afternoon
early
that
garden.
One
sluggish,
afternoon
early
hazy
that
summer,
House
Me.
I guess in most ways, or
My birthday
CHAPTER NINE
next
morning,
room
the
next
Presents.
Later that afternoon, I
Afternoon
The
Kitchen
morning,
next
backyard.
The next
morning,
Babas office
Kitchen.
A few moments later,
later
Baba knocked on my
door.
Come
office, he said.
to
my
and
settle
this
thin,
raspy
voice:
Yes.
CHAPTER TEN
Across from us.
March 1981
_March 1981_
A young
woman
sat
We
were
west of Mahipar
kilometers
Falls
Mahipar
few
west
Falls
of
when
Tomorrow
The road.
Tomorrow morning, Id
morning,
soldiers
The
The basement.
Later
that
basement.
It was later that first
first
night
The basement
Night
Panic
me.
The basement had been
dark. The fuel tank was
pitch-black.
looked
Friday afternoon
CHAPTER ELEVEN
Lake
Elizabeth 1980s
Park in Fremont
Fremont,
California.
of
us
walking
apartment,
One Sunday in the spring
the
spring
of
1983,
San Jose,
Paperbacks,
The same day he was
was hired,
High school
THAT SUMMER
Dobbins.
THAT SUMMER
OF 1983,
OF
senior.
After dinner, Baba took
street
from the
restaurant.
Was dim,
One
early
morning in July
1984
Sunday
from
concession
the
stand
and
One
CHAPTER TWELVE
sweltering
Sunday
summer
that
Then,
Sunday
one
that
sweltering
summer,
The booth
One day
The
School,
Then, two weeks later, I
hospital in San
Jose.
wad
of
blood-stained
San Jose.
Then, one cool Sunday
Years Day,
legs with.
They discharged
two days
radiation
oncologist
baba
later. They
brought in a specialist
called
radiation
getting
radiation
treatment.
I paced the living room
CHAPTER THIRTEEN
The next evening
evening--for
lafz,
the
ceremony of
Taheris home
The engagement
Party
thrown
engagement
the
party
the
shirini-khori---or eating
Home
One day,
Before midnight,
The door,
Just before
midnight,
next
few
months
hayward.
The next few months
were a blur of tests on
Soraya:
In
the
backyard,
Basal
body
temperatures,
Soraya broke the news to
her parents the weekend
after our last visit with
Dr. Rosen.
We were
sitting on
Picnic
chairs
in
the
Taheris backyard,
CHAPTER FOURTEEN
The room
June 2001
_June 2001_
I lowered the phone into
. Startled
Me with a bark that I
realized how quiet the
The park
Sunday afternoon
Home
In bed
When
came
afternoon
When I came
home,
home,
That night
aboard a Pakistani
International
pakistani
Airlines flight,
international
remove
the
wheel chocks.
CHAPTER FIFTEEN
Shredded
Three hours
upholstery in the
flight
landed
in
Backseat
A wispy mattress
We sat
on
wispy
the
noisy
street
CHAPTER SIXTEEN
Hazarajat
1986
in 1986.
The people in Bamiyan
had
walled
garden.
Hasans home
In the morning,
garden.
In the morning, Hassan
told me he and Farzana
had decided to move to
Mazar-i-Sharif
banned
kite
in
1998,
they
massacred
The Hazaras in Mazar-iSharif.
CHAPTER SEVENTEEN
In the hospital
1974
room
Narrow street
The
CHAPTER EIGHTEEN
sun had
the sky
Little villages
Greener,
Late afternoon,
woman
me
apprehensively
little
as
short
while
later
small house.
A short while
later,
two
steaming
bowls
of
vegetable
shorwa
Early
the
morning.
next
Land
Cruiser,
hospitality.
CHAPTER TWENTY
The mahipar dam. The old days,
Jadeh maywand
1992
of karteh-seh,
The
Kabul river.
What passed
directors
office
for
the
Khyber
Restaurant
To Khyber
Wazirakbar Khan
district.
Restaurant
Khan district.
We find the little turtle
behind
tangles
of
of
of my fathers house,
my
fathers
house,
A small hotel near
Pashtunistan
small
Square.
Hotels room
Pashtunistan Square.
That night, I took the bed
That night,
hotel
near
Ghazi Stadium
filling
ghazi
stadium
Wazir
Akbar
Khan.
The
sulaiman
mountains
mountains of baluchistan
and baba is wrestling the
black bear.
There were three other
Room
That night,
picked
up
sohrab,
the
next
letter.
They removed the chest
morning,
tube
early
morning,
the
and
next
armand
Shah
of trees.
We passed
Faisal
Mosque
on
the
way
there,
The hotel room was a
managers
office
in
the
lobby,
A bench
The sun
A warm day,
support.
We sat on a bench in one
Perched high in a
CHAPTER TWENTY-FIVE
In
Green
is
two
men
wearing
surgical
caps
and
over a gurney.
THE
INTENSIVE
INTENSIVE
CARE UNIT
The hospital
IN
THE
DAYTIME,
Machines.
IN THE DAYTIME, the
hospital was a maze of
teeming,
hallways,
angled
a
blur
blazing-white
The Westerns
ONE
Section
maybe
DAY,
around
1983 or 1984,
of
overhead
fluorescence.
ONE
DAY,
maybe
Home
A warm day in
to me,
WE ARRIVED HOME
August
morning
2001/
up at the airport.
She led him in and he sat
bed
The living room
living
room
and
One
Tuesday
last
morning
September,
Tuesday
morning
September,
the
last
Twin
Towers
Came crumbling down
and, overnight, the world
Lake
Elizabeth THEN,
Park in Fremont.
FOUR
changed.
THEN, FOUR
DAYS
DAYS AGO, on a
March 2002,
previous
Fremont.
The previous Thursday,
day of spring,
The
New
Years
Day--the
had
celebrations
planned
throughout
peninsula.
It had been sunny for
days,
but
Sunday
morning, as I swung my
legs out of bed,
CHARACTERIZATION
Good children, never give up, good
husband, good friends and not arogant
Good person, always give spirit to the
other
Good friend but he has a command
over, he is a good father and husband
Ill tempered, good father never give up
Good father and friend, he has high self
esteem
Good teacher
Good mother, welling sacrifice to her
son
Smart but sly
Friendly, longhaired men
Naughty, self shoot mouth off
Naughty
Smart
Assefs regular victims, coward
A pretty good guy
She was a fair, blue-eyed hazara woman
from bamiyan
Cousin Shafiqa
Cousin Nader
Homayoun
Faruq
Fazilal/Karimas Face Twisted.
Karim
Jalaluddin
The Russian Soldiers
The Afghan Soldier
Russian Officer
The Young Womans
The Young Womans Husband
Kamal And His Father.
Aziz
Kind
Kind
Kind
Good father, kind person, smart
Pretty, kind, smart, good daughter and
wife and faithful
Kind person, good mother
Smart
Friendly and kind
Kind person
F. Message
So Baba proved them all wrong by
Not only running his own business but becoming one of the richest merchants in Kabul. Baba
and
Rahim Khan built a wildly successful carpet-exporting business, two pharmacies, and a
restaurant.