TUM AISSE HI RAHNA

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EPISODE 46
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Scene 1 hall int day
Daadi sa sheetal rukmani
Scene opens with the close of ek chhota sa box , jisse daadi saa uthaati hain ,
unke saath rukmani and sheetal hai, iss box mine

jadi booti rakhi hui hain ,

daadi usse open karti hian ussmien se kucch jadi booti nikaalti hain and
saamne paani se bhare glass mine kuchc jadi booti daal deti hain , rukmani
says ki
Ruk:
Masa, yeh kiske liye bana rahi hain?
daadi :
ria beendni ke liye... desi dawayi hai... isey peeney se shareer aur dimag ki
thakaan durr ho jaave hai...sheetal beendni ! ja, jakar ria ko pilaa de...
says ki ria ke liye , deshi dawa hai , abhi jaakar sheetal usse pila degi , saari
thakaan tension door kar degi

Scene 2 abhis room , int day

Ria ,servant
Ria ab bed se uth chuki hai , jaisse ussne kuchc decide kar liya ho and tabhi
ek servant aata hai usske haath mien car keys hai voh ria ko car ki chaabi
deta hai and says ki

Servant :
Memsaab/ chhoti bahu, garage ki sfayi ho rahi hai, isliye aapki gaadi
bahar sadak par khadi kii hai...
and ria :
theek hai
and servant leaves , ria car ki keys ki taraf dekhti hai and we charge on
her face , she mutters ki ki ria
ria:
guruji se milney ka issey achcha mauka nahi milega...
guru ji se milne ka iss se achhaa mauka nahi milega and voh jaldi jaldi bed
ke upar chaadar and pillow iss style se

rakh rahi hai jaisse dekhne waala

yahee samjhe ki voh so rahi hai , and ria ye karte hue mutter kar rahi hai ki
ria:
sorry abhi !! aaj pehli baar bina kisi ko bataye, chhipkar is ghar se bahar
jaa rahi hun... jaanti hun sab mere liye pareshan hain, lekin kisi se kuch
kaha toh koi mujhe jane nahi dega... aur mera aaj guruji se milna bahut
zaroori hai...
sorry abhi , aaj pahli baar ghar ke main darwaaze se nahi peeche waali khidki
se jaa rahi hoon aur voh bhi bina bataaaye hue , mujhe pata hai ki ghar ke sab
log mere liye pareshaan hain and

mujhe aaj koi bhi kaheen nahi jaane

degaand ye kahte hue voh room ke darwaaze ko aisse hi bhidka deti hai and
jaldi se window ke paas aati hai and mutters ki aaj mera guru ji ke paas
pahunchna bahut zaroori hai

Intercut
Scene 2 A Corridor int day

Ek haath mien tray liye hue jissmiem jadi booti mix paani ka glass hai sheetal
ria ke room ki taraf aa rahi hai , we build up
Intercut
Ria s room int day
Ria window open karti hai , neeche dekhti hai , and she is about to jump ..
Intercut
Sheetal ria ke kamre ki taraf badh rahi hai , and usske darwaaze par aakar
usse push karne hi waali hai and we build up
Intercut
Ria window se jump marti kar neeche aati hai, apni saadi ko theek kar ke
mann hi mann kaanha ji se haath jod kar praathna karti hai ki
ria:
hey kanhaji, mera sath dijiye...yeh kadam main apne parivar ki bhalayi ke
liye utha rahi hun, meri laaj rakhiyega...
kaanha bas aaj meri izzat rakh lena , pakdi na jaaon
Intercut
Sheetal dheere se dhkka dekar darwaaza open karti hai and usse bed par koi
leta hua dikhta hai and voh ria kahte hue andar enter hone hi waali hai kii
uss se pahle hi abhi usse baahar se aawaaz deta hai ki
Abhi :
bhabhi !
sheetal turns , and abhi usse ishaare se apne paas bulaata hai
Scene 3 back side of maheshwari bhavan / any location ( lata phone cut)
Ria lata servant

Ria ghar ki boundary ke andar hai and achaanak usse wahee servant dikhta
hai

jissne abhi usse chaabi di thi , and jaldi se voh waheen paas mien

chhupti hai ,lekin servant ja paaye iss se pahle hi usska phone ring hota hai,
ria jaldi se phone cut karti hai lekin phone ki ring sun kar servant peeche mud
kar dekhta hai
Servant :
phone ki awaaz? Yahan??...
and camera shows ki ria ek pillar ( ya koi bhi hide karne waali cheez ) ke
peeche chhupi khadi hai and jaldi se ussne phone ko silent par kar diya hai
and servant kuchc der to usski taraf dekhta hai and phir wahaan se jaata hai ,
servant :
yahan toh koi nahih ai...
ria chain ki saans le paaye tabhi phone phir ring hota hai iss baar silent par
hai , iss liye ring ka tension nahi hai lekin jab rai display par dekhti hai to
phone cut nahi kar sakti hai kyonki phone ke display par
ria:
mummy !
mummy ka naam splash ho raha hai and usse phone receive karna padta hai
and
ria:
hello...
lata :
kaisi ho beta?
ria dheere se bolte hue kahti hai ki
ria:

theek hun mummy

ab ria idhar udhar dekh rahi hai ki koi dekh na le and mummy says ki
lata:
kya hua, itni dheerey kyon bol rahi ho?? Ek toh vaise bhi aajkal signal ki
dikkat rehti hai...pata hai kitni der se tumhara number laga rahi hun...
achcha batao, ghar par sab kaise hain?
ria:
sab theek hain...
zor se bolo , ek to iss phone par waisse bhi aawaz nahi sunayi deti hai and ria
ab thodi tez aawaaz mien bolte hue kahti hai ki mummy mine theek hoon and
mummy asks ki
lata:
ghar par hi ho na ?
and ria ghabraate hue kahti hai ki
ria:
han mummy, ghar par hi hun...
ji jii ghar pe hi hoon and lata bomb phodti hain ki
lata:
theek hai, toh main tumse milne aa rahi hoon...abhi...
and we charge on ria , usske chehre par tension hain
Scene 4 outside of rias room
Abhi sheetal
Abhi sheetal se kahta hai ki

Abhi :
bhabhi ! ria bahut mushkil se soyi hai, plz, usey sone dijiye...uska rest
karna bahut zaroori hai
sheetal: nods
main bus dekhne aayi thi, usey kuch chahiye toh nahi... phir thodi der
mein aa jaungi...
abhi :
thank you bhabhi...
bahut mushkil se ria abhi sone gayi hai , aap jaaogi to so nahi paayegi please
usse kuchc der ke liye so lene dein , sheetal nods and she leaves
Intercut
Ria mummy ki persue kar rahi hai ki
Ria:
Mummy, abhi mat aaiye plz...
lata:
kyon ?? kaheen baahar ja rahi hai kya??
ab agar ria ne mummy ko bata diya ki baahar jaa rahi haon to voh abhi se baat
kar ye baat bata sakti hain
ria: to herself
haan kaha toh kya pata mummy abhi se keh den... aur kuch kehne ko
mana kiya toh mummy poori baat puchengi..
ria:
uh...nahi mummy, voh...ghar par kuch mehman aane vaale the... toh,
better hai aap kal aa jaiye...araam se baat hogi...

and ria ke chehre par dukh ke bhaav aate hain , ussne apni maa ko ghar aane
se roka hai and lata says ki
lata: mann maarkar
baat kya, bus tujhe dekhkar tasalli karni thi... pata nahi beta, do din
sebahut ajeeb se sapne aa rahe hain... tujeh lekar mann ghabraa raha tha,
toh socha ek baar mil lun...ria ! tu theek hai na ?
and ab wahee servant ria ko aate hue dikh raha hai and agar ussne baat ki to
voh pakad sakta hai and lata baar baar pooch rahi hai ki
lata:
kya hua beta, bol na ,... beta tu theek to hai na ? koi pareshani toh nahi
hai?
and ria dheere se whisper karte hue kahti hai ki
ria:
mummy, fikr mat kariye, main bilkul theek hun...hello..mummy aapki
awaaz theek se sunayi nahi de rahi...m..main baad mein call karti
hun...bye...
aapki aawaaz nahi sunaayi de rahi hai mien theek hoon shaayad mehmaan
aa gaye baad mien baat karti hoon and she hangs up and naukar ko lagta hai
ki koi
servant :
(mutters) yeh awaaz??... kisi ladki ki lag rahi thi...dekhta hun...
pillar ke peeche khada hai usse kissi lady ki aawaaz sunaayi di and voh dabe
kadmon se pillar ki taraf badh raha hai and pillar ke paas aakar jaisse hi voh
dekhta hai ( jahaan ria khadi hai) to wahaan ria nahi milti hai and voh phone
nikaal kar kissi ko phone karta hai and says ki
servant :

mujhe yahan peeche ki boundary ke paas/peeche vale khambhe ke paas se

kisi ladki ki awaaz sunayi di thi... dekha toh koi nazar nahi aya...aap, jaldi
se yahan aa jaiye...
aap jaldi se aayiye yahaan khambe ke peeche mujhe kissi aurat ki aawaaz aayi
lekin voh dikh nahi rahi hai and we cut to
Scene 5 corridor int day
Abhi
Abhi is shocked usse ria ki kahee hui baat yaad aati hai ki koi hai ji usse
pareshaan kar rahi hai and abhi servant se kahta hai ki
Abhi :
Tum vahin ruko, main aa raha hun... aur han, koi dikhe toh fauran photo
kheech lena...
tum waheen rahna , koi bhi dikhe to usski photo kheenchna ,
Cut to
Scene 5 A backside of maheshwari bhavan
Ria servant
And now we see ki ria car ke peeche khadi hai and ussne servant ki baat sun li
hai and servant apne mobile ke video mode ko on kiye hue khada hai
Servant :
Photo kya, video hi chalu kar leta hun...
and ab ria ke paas bhaagne ki jagah nahi hai and voh kya kare ,
Ria:
Hey kanhaji, ab yahan se kaise nilkun?
we build up

Intercut
Abhi bhaagta hua seedhiyon se utar raha hai
Intercut
Backside of maheshwari bhavan int day
Abhi ria servant
Ria ke chehre par tension hai , agar voh pakdi gayi to kya hoga
Ria:
Koi raasta sujhaiye kanhaji, bina guruji se mile main ghar mein vapas
nahi jana chahti...
and tabhi usske mind mien kucch strike karta hai and voh paas mien pada
hua ek pathathar door ussi khambe ki taraf maarti hai aisse andaaz se ki
servnat ko lage ki khambe ke peeche halchal machi hai and voh aawaz sun kar
khambe ki taraf bhaagta hai
servant :
vahan hai...
and ria usske dhyaan bantne ka faayeda utha kar car ke peeche se nikal kar
peeche waali boundary ki taraf bhaagti hai and jaise hi voh boundari par
chadhti hai ki abhi bhaaga hua aata hai and ussi boundary ke neeche aakar
servnat ki taraf dekh kar usse awaz deta hai ki
abhi :
kya hua? Kon tha?
Ab abhi ke paas mien hi boundari par ria baithi hai , agar voh baahar ko jump
karegi to abhi ko pata chal jaayega , abhi ki peeth ria ki taraf hai iss liye ria
bachi hai lekin kissi bhi moment agar abhi turn karta hai to ria pakdi jaa sakti
hai and camera goes to abhi jo servant ki taraf dekh raha hai and servant
pillar ke peeche se nikalta hai ki

Servant :
Saab, abhi abhi yahaan se koi aawaaz aayi hai ( servant ke pov se ria nahi
dikh rahi hai ) and abhi jaise hi servant ki taraf badhta hai , ria boundary se
neeche jump maarti hai and servant ko kissi ke neeche jump maarne ki
aawaaz aati hai , abhi

ka dhyaan chhunki anjaan lady mien hai and voh

bhaag raha hai to voh jump maarne ki aawaaz miss kar jaata hai , and voh
bhaagtta hua servnat ke paas pahunchta hai lekin servant ab uss boundary ki
taraf dekh raha hai jahaan se ria ne jump maara hai , abhi says ki
Abhi :
Vahan kya dekh rahe ho?
and servant says ki saaheb , abhi abhi mien ne boundary se kissi ke jump
maarne ki aawaz suni
servant :
aisa laga jaise boundary se kisi ne chhallang lagayi ho...
and abhi apna sarr pakad leta hai and says ki
abhi :
dimag toh theek hai tumhara?...kabhi kehtey ho pillar ke peeche se awaz
aayi toh kabhi jhaad ki ore se... aur ab boundary par se...
tum kuchc bhi bol rahe ho ,pahle yahaan iss pillar ke peeche kah rahe the ab
udhar boundary ke peeche kah rahe ho lekin servant says ki
servant:
sach keh raha hun saab, koodney ki saaf awaaz aayi thi ...
sach kah raha hoon saaheb and abhi jaldi se waheen rakhi hui kissi table ko
ya kissi aur cheez ko boundary ke paas karta hai and uss par chadhta hai ,
jiss se dekhe ki boundary ke dusri taraf kya sach mien koi kooda hai

Scene 6 road out side of maheshwari bhavan ext day

Abhi ria
Ye kiski car hai boundary ke bahar ? if it is Ria s then how come it is outside
on the road.
Car belongs to abhi and in

Sc, 2 servant has given keys to ria and

informed her that due to cleaning of garage car is parked outside of the
house .
Ria ne boundary paar kar li hai and voh jaldi se jaldi road ke dusri side khadi
hui car ke paas pahunchna chaahti hai lekin tabhi usski nazar boundary ki
taraf jaati hai and usse abbhi dikhaayi deta hai and ria turn hokar bhaagti hai
and abhi ko lagta hai ki
Abhi :
Yeh...toh... ria hai !...
he is shocked ki ria
abhi :
aisa kaise ho sakta hai? voh toh room mein so rahi hai?..phir yahan..
kaisse ho sakti hai voh to room mien so rahi hai and

voh usse aawaz dene hi

walaa hai ki ki koi aur car sadak par aati hai and ria uss car se chhup jaati hai
, ab abhi ko ria nahi dikhaayi de rahi hai and jaisse hi car pass hoti hai abhi
ke saamne koi nahi hai and we see ki ria waheen road kinaare khadi hui apni
car tak pahunch gayi hai and usske peeche hai , abhi confused hai ki
abhi :
ria agar kamre mien hai to ye kaun thi? Kahin mujhe bhi vahem hona toh
shuru nahi ho gaya?
mien ria ko check karta hai and jaldi se boundary se neeche utarta hai and
apne room kii taraf bhaagta hai and we come to ria jo jaldi se car ki keys se
car ka door open karke car ke andar baithti hai ,

Scene 7 abhis room int day

Abhi
Sceen abhi ke room ke open hone se hota hai and voh room mien enter karta
hai , bed ki taraf jaata hai and he sees the pillows covered with sheet, thinks
that its
Abhi :
Ria toh yahan so rahi hai...
mutters to himself,
abhi :
tum nahi janti tumhe aise dekhkar mujhe kitni taqleef hoti hai... i love
you Ria... bus, jaldi se sab theek ho jaye...aur mujhe kuch nahi chahiye
bas ab tumhein pahle jaisey dkehna hai,
Intercut
Road ext day
Riya is inside the car , and says i love you abhi,
Ria:
Sabkuch theek karney ke liye mujhe aisa karna pada abhi...i am
sorry...lekin humare pyar ki khatir main bade se bada risk bhi le sakti
hun...
i am sorry for cheating like this, but hamare rishte ko pahle jaise karne ke liye
main kuchh bhi karungi... i never believed in this Guru Ji but now i wont leave
any stones unturned. she sits in her car.
Scene 8 road ext day
Ria crowd

Riya is driving the car ,) ( the idea is to get away from maheshwari bhavan
location ) guruji ke ghar pahunchne ki jaldi hai usse , ab road sunsaan hain ,
achaanak usski car ke saamne waali windscreen par khoon aakar girta hai ,
jaisse kissi ne blood phenka ho , blood wind screen se takra kar usske vision
ko rokta hai and ria ko car stop karni padti hai , usske saamne wind screen
par blood alag alag lines kheench raha hai ajeeb si daraavni image blood ki
form ho rahi hai , ria car ka darwaaza open karne jaati hai ki achaanak ek ke
baad ek darwaaze lock hone ki aawaaz aati hai , ria reacts , right then wind
starts blowing fast, ek toofan sa hada ho jata hai, dhool udane lagti hai. she
cant see anything on the road,

usske car ke windows ke glasses pe dhool

jamne lagti hai, zor zor se awaaz aane lagti hai as if someone is trying to break
the window, sun has not set yet but its evening.. she looks scared and says,
Ria:
Main jaanti hun tum mujhe rokna chahti ho... lekin main darney vaali
nahi.... main aage zaroor badhungi...
she tries to avoid the fear and tries to start the car again, but it does not, riya
looks more scared, and then we show one hand, outside the window, car ki
front scren par build up, the hand starts writing something on car ki screen
par gire hue khoon se ,
words:
main tumhe nahi jane dungi !!!
i won't let you go... riya looks shocked, before she could react, the hand starts
putting kerosene /petrol from a container like a boundary around the car and
a burning matchstick is thrown on it .. car ke chaaron taraf aag lag jaati hai
and ab ria ghabra jaati hai , usski car ka door nahi open ho raha hai and
bahaar ek circle mien car ke chaaron taraf aaag lagi hai , voh panicked hokar
door ko kholne ki koshihs kar rahi hai and usse kissi ke hansne ki aawaaz aa
rahi hai and ria is hugely scraed , aag badhti jaa rahi hai and ria door par
poori taakat se kick maar rahi hai and kucch koshish ke baad achaanak door
open hota hai and ria aag mien se nikal kar bhaagti hai , car waheen chhod
kar road par bhaagti hai , , riya is palpitating, and she decides to run,

ria:
main kisi haalat mein rukne vali nahi...
let ria run on the road looking wildly and let us create a death scare for her
she is running looking behind ..talking to aanchal ki tum mera kuchc nahi kar
paaogi , mujhe aaj koi rok nahi sakta , jaisse savitri ko yamraj nhai rok
paaye..main gurji ke paas pahoonchkar dikhaoongi.. ,
ria:
tum mera kuch bigaad nahi sakti... aajtak tumne mera darr dekha hai, ab
ek patni ki zid dekhogi...vohi zid jisne yamraj tak ko savitri ke saamne
jhuka diya tha...main guruji ke paas pahuchkar rahungi...laga lo jitni taqat
laga sakti ho...
and sadak ke log ek lady ko bhaagte hue dekh kar ajeeb se andaaz mien
peeche mud kar baat karte hue dekh kar surprised hain ki
man1:
isey kya hua? Kisse baat kartey hue bhagi jaa rahi hai?
woman 1:
dikhney mein toh bhale ghar ki lagti hai...
ye kar kya rahi hai , ria is running so wildly that usey kisi cheez ka hosh
nahi hai ..she just wants to reach to guruji..she is on the middle of the road
and a truck dusri side se aa raha hai , voh horn baja raha hai lekin ria peeche
dekh kar chilla rahi hai ki
ria:
main apne parivar, apne pati ko bachakar rahungi...unpe apna haq nahi
jama sakti tum...kabhi nahi...
and we build up , truck usski side mien aa raha hai and ria peeche dekh rahi
hai truck ki taraf dekhti bhi nahi hai and seedhe trukc ki range mien aati hai

and it runs over we create a death scare for a moment and truck usse
raundta hua nikal jaata hai , sannaata chaa jaata hai , and phir logon ki
cheekhne ki aawaaz , ek pal ko jaise sab kucch tham sa gaya ho , slow motion
mine log sadak ki taraf bhaag rahe hain and camera dheere dheere travel karte
hue uss jagah aata hai jahaan ria ka accident hua and we see ki ria sadak par
leti hui hai flash
Jaisse hi sadak par truck aata hai and ria realize karti hai voh jaldi se sadak
par let jaati hai and truck usske upar se nikal jaata hai
And ria uthti hai and log usse gher lete hain, koi elderly lady chillaati hai ki
Woman:
Baavli ho gayi hai kya? aise andhadhun sadak par bhaga jata hai kya?...
and logon ki murmering strat hoti hai
man:
baal baal bachi hai
girl:
han, poora truck upar se nikal gaya...aur isey kharoch bhi nahi
aayi...kismet achchi thi varna..
lekin ria kucch kahti nahi hai and phir se poori taakat laga kar bhaagna start
karti hai
ria:
m..ujhe vahan pahuchna hai...samay..nahi h..ai...
and sab usse dekh kar shocked hain ki ajeeb ladki hai,
man :
kamaal hai...lagta hai apni jaan ki parvah hi nahi hai isey...
woman:

bhai aajkal ke chhore chhoriyon ko samjhane se jyada tedhi kheer koi na

hai...
camera goes to same old lady and she says ki aaj kal to kissi ko samjhaana
bekaar hai

Scene 9 road ext day

Ria aanchal
Ria road par tezi se bhaag rahi hai , usske chehre par determination hai jaisse
usse aaj koi nahi rok sakta hai and tabhi a stone flies into the air and hits her
head, ria ke munh se cheekh niklati hai , voh apna sarr pakad leti hai and it
starts bleeding and uss se khade hote nahi banta hai and she falls on the
ground.. she can hear the sound of laughter m around her, we show aachal
usske charo taraf ghoom rahi hai, her face cant be seen, only shadow, scary
one... riya hears this and mutters,
Ria:
Mujhe jana hoga...m..ain ruk nahi sakti...
i will have to go... she tries to get up but once more aanchal does magic and
riya stumbles and falls on something..and tabhi hamien aghori ki aawaaz aati
hai

aghori :
bus, kuch der aur...suraj chhiptey hi iska shareer tera hoga...phir yeh us
guru ke paas nahi jaa payegi...
suraj ast hone wala hai, usske baad isska shareer tera, phir yeh uss guru ke
paas nahin ja payegi...

show aanchal's

scary smile here... she nods after

hearing aghori... riya looks pathetic with pain and she cries,

ria:
hey kanhaji...madad kijiye...mujhe apne abhi ko iss aurat se bachana
hai...kisi bhi keemat par...
gets up again and says i will save my abhi... this time aanchal smiles
menacingly ( we only see her smile) and tilts her head, riya hawa me udane
lagti hai and then falls on the ground, she is wincing in pain.. hears ghost's
laughter, riya closes her eyes and prays please show me some path God...
please.. build up, and tabhi ghanti ki aaawaaz aati hai and we ria turns her
face towards ghanti sound and she

shee right under that tree, there is this

small idol of kaali maa.. ek ghanti bhi tangi hai jo hawa se hil rahi hai ,and ria
kaali maa ke saamne hatah jodti hai and emotional hokar kahti hai ki
ria:
hey Maa, meri raksha karo
and we charge on doobte hue suraj par and aanchak ki hansti hui aawaaz aati
hai suraj ast hone wala hai, she starts counting seconds.. 5, 4, 3... build up..
anchal:
ab bus, kuch ghadiyan bachi hain... panch, chaar teen
riya manages to get up at the last moment and we have back shot , aanchal
ria ke paas pahunchne waali hai and is about to enter her body, riya manages
to hold the idol.. aanchal winces with pain.. riya hears her shriek, she goes
emotional, pays thanks to maa,
ria:
aapka bahut bahut dhanyvaad Maa...
folds her hand and about to go ahead when she stops and says,
ria:
sorry maa...aapko aapke sthaan se hata rahi hun...lekin meri raksha ke
liye aapko mere sath chalna hoga...jai Maa Kaali !!

but you will have to come with me.. she picks up the small idol and clings it to
her chest, now wounded riya is walking on the road, holding maa in her hand
and usskke peeche aanchla bhaag rahi hai backshot and chilla rahi hai shouts
her lungs out angrily, she glares at a big stone.. hawa me udati hai and tries to
throw this on riiya, but the stone cant even touch riya.. aanchal fumes and
shouts what do i do baba..
anchal :
yeh toh...mere har vaarse bach rahi hai baba... main kya karun??

Scene 10 baba aashram cottage ext evening

Ria shishya
Although the track we are playing is about spirit ,we should always show the
world to be contemporary ..so the choice of object,visuals ,sound all should be
done keeping that in mindlet guruji stay in a modern cottage kind of
place ..with garden and a couple of other cottages aroundlike an ashram .and
let his meditation seat be the seat inside a huge hall .where kali ki moorti
rakhi hui hai and he is in dhyaan

We see an aasharm gate, and

established gurujis aashram

ek bada sa

board laga hai sarvanaam aashram ..gate ke dono taraf lawn hai , cottages
hain jahaan shishya aa rahe hain jaa rahe hain, do shidhya waheen khade hue
baat kar rahe hai and tabhi almost bhaagte hue ria wahana pahunchti hai,
she is very tired and pained, she is hardly managing to talk
Ria:
m..ain ...ria .maheshwari...guru..ji..!!
and jo do shishya wahana khade hue baat kar rahe the voh usski haalat dekh
kar ,ball ast wayast hain and voh concern hokar ria se kahte hain

shishy:
kya hua aapko? (to another) pani lao... Chaliye, aashram mein chhota sa
aspataal hai... chalkar dawa lagva lijiye...
and ria tells guru ji's pupil that
ria:
nahi ! mujhe guruji...se milna haii...abhi
she is here to meet guru ji... she tries to make her way inside but they stop her
and tells her that
shishy:
nahi ! maaf kijiyega,... guruji is samay samadhi mein hain...kisi se nahi
mil saktey...
Guru Ji is busy in his samadhi and no woman is allowed to enter in his
aashrama, no one can break his samadhi,

ria ke haath mien kaali maa ki

murti hai and voh usski khasam khaate hue kahti hai ki
Ria:
Dekhiye, main badi mushkil se pni jaan bachatey hue yahan tak pahuchi
hun...Kaal Maa ki saugandh, mera guruji se milna bahut zaroori
hai...zindagi maut ka sawal hai...
mujhe bahut zaroori hai guru ji se milna , hatay jodti hai voh unke saamne ,
she pleads to them that she needs to see him, i am in big trouble, lekin koi
faayeda nahi , shishya says ki guru ji ka aadesh hai ki
shishy:
maaf kijiye, lekin hum chahkar bhi aapki sahaayta nahi kar saktey...guruji
ka aadhesh hai ki jabtak voh svayam samadhi na tyage, koi unke paas naa
jayee...

jab tak voh khud samaadhi ja tyaage koi unke paas nahi aaye and ab ria kya
kare , usski aankhon ke saamne niraasha aati hai and tabhi usski nazar
waheen kuchc doori par ek aur cottage par padti hai
ria:
achcha, yeh toh bata saktey hain ki gurui ke kehne par aap mein se kon
humare ghar aya tha...matlab maheshwari house...
shishy:
lagta hai aap mohan ki baat kar rahi hain... voh raha... (turns his head
towards some cottage)
NOTE pl confirm shishy name if used earlier
, jahaan chaar paayi par lete hue uss shishya par padti hai jo ghar aaya tha
and voh usske paas bhaagti hai and says ki
Ria:
Toh voh aap hi the jo mere ghar aaye the ... aap hi ne maji aur dadisa se
kaha tha ki sab theek hai ... jabki vahan kuch bhi theek nahi hai ,
shishya leta hua hai , usski aankhon mien pain hai , and ria uss par chillaati
hai ki
ria:
gharvale yeh maankar baithe hain ki dikkat ghar mein nahi, mere dimag
mein hai, sirf aapki baat par vishwas karke...
kyon aapne ham sab ka wishwaas toda ,she confronts him
ria:
jabki guruji ki tareh aapko bhi yeh ehsaas zaroor hua hoga...ki us ghar
mein ek aatma ka vaas hai... phir kyon bola itna bada jhooth? Aapki vajeh
se koi meri baat par vishwas nahi kar raha...sach kya hai koi sunne ko

taiyyar nahi...chaliye ! abhi mere sath chalkar guruji aur gharvalon ko

sach bataiye... chaliye !!
there is a ghost in our life, in our house and you said everything is normal,
she holds his hand and tells him, come with me and tells this to my family and
guru ji, and usse iss baat ka gussa bhi aa raha hai ki ye shishya itni baat hone
ke baad bhi aaram se chaadar taan ke pada hai and voh gusse mien chaadar
kheenchti hai ki
ria:
main aapse kuch keh rahi hun aur aap chupchaap letey hue hain?...maine
kaha chaliye mere sath
aise lete kya ho utho aur jaao guru ji se bataao ki ham kitni musibat mien hai
and jaisse hi voh chaadar kheenchti hai shocked rah jaati hai kyonki uss
shishya ki ek taang nahi hai , patti bandhi hui hai and she says ki ye
ria:
yeh...?? ka..ise?
kab hua , and voh shishya bahut h i painful voice mien kahta hai ki
shishy:
guruji ke aadesh par aapke ghar aane ke liye niklaa toh tha, lekin raastey
mein na jane ek truck kahan se aya aur takker maarkar gayab ho gaya...
NOTE in that scn it was clearly mentioned that aghori baba got inside
shishys body mid scene, so it ws the real shishy jiske shareer pe aghori
ne kabza kiya tha, after anchal shouted for his help. Hope that was
changed as well.
and dusra shishya ussk chaadar odhaate hue kahta hai ki
shishy2:
ghaav itna gehra tha ki inki jaan bachaney ke liye pair kaatna pada...

zakhm itna khatarnaak tha ki inka pair kaatna pada , bahut muhskil se bache
hain ye and we charge on ria , she is hugely shocked and says ki
ria:
ye kaise ho sakta hai ?... ye toh hamaare ghar aaye the.. maaji dadisa ne
khud kaha tha...
and now we charge on shishya , the men look shocked and then she says it
shishy:
phir toh yeh durghatna hui nahi, karvayi gayi thi, taki iski jageh aapke
ghar koi aur pahuch sake....lagta hai ismein bhi usi aatma ka hath hai...
means issme bhi uss bhoot ka haath hai. she looks scared and iss se pahle ki
shishya kucch soche kucch kahien ria andar bhaagti hai

Scene 11 aashram main hall night..

Ria , shishya , guru ji
Meditation hall
Ria andheri aashram mien bhaag rahi hai , aashram mien diye jal rahe hain
jinse ujaala hai and ria guru ji guru ki kahte hue haathon mien kaali maa ki
murti pakde hue andar bhaagti hai , ek hall mien kucch shishya bhajan gaa
rahe hain and ria bhaagti hui unke paar karte hue ek base se hall min
pahunchti hai jahaan ohmmmm naam ki chanting ho rahi hai and ria hall
mien pahunch kar dekhti hai ki guruji samaadhi mien baithe hue dikhte hain ,
unke saamne ek diya jal raha hai , unke peeche badi si Maa Kaali ki pratima
lagi hai... ria is also holding the small idol of kali... voh guru ji ke saamne
khadi hokar unka naam le rahi hai ki
Ria:

Guruji, main Ria... ria maheshwari... main bahut badi musibat mein hun..
aapki madad chahiye... hamaari raksha kijiye guruji...plz aankhein kholiye
and tabhi peeche se shishya bhaagte hue aate hain and usska haath pakad
kar baahar le jaane lagte hain
shishy:
yeh kya kar rahi hain aap? Chaliye yahan se...
lekin ria restless hai and chilla rahi hai ki
ria:
mujhe guru ji se baat karni hai , guruji !!! plz mer ibaat suniye...mera
ghar, meri zindagi meri shadi daav par lage hain...
lekin guru ji ki aankhine band hai and shishya usse pakad kar gufa se baahar
le jaane lagte hain
shishy:
shaant ho jaiye... guruji ki samadhi toot jayegi...

kripa karke chaliye

yahan se
ki guru ji aankh kholte hain , unek chehre par gussa hai and he shouts ki
guruji :
anarth !!! ghor anarthh !!! meri samadhi bhang ho gayii... yeh kya ho raha
hai yahan????...mana kiya tha naa.. koi yahan nahi aayega, phir mere
aadesh ka ullanghan kyon?... kyon aane diya isey yahan???
he looks angrily towards his shishya ,.. he glares at her angrily, all his pupils
get scared and explains that
shishy:
guruji humne inhe rokne ki bahut koshish ki par yeh zabardasti yahan aa
gayin

riya folds her hand and tells guru ji that

ria:
guruji, maaf kijiyega lkein mera aapse milna bahut zaroori tha...mujhe
aapki madad chahiye...
he looks angry and says
guruji :
jaanta hun...tere liye hi toh samadi me baitha tha, aur tune hi todd dii...
she looks more shocked when he says,
guruji :
pata hai mujhe voh tere peeche padi hai... vaas karti hai tere shareer
mein...
she is pale with shock and says,
ria:
kya??... aap...jaantey the? Kabse?
we go into the flash back
Flash
Jiss din guru ji chandra grahan ke din ria ke ghar aaye, and when guru ji
tried to reach riya but abhi stopped him, the first time when aanchal entered
into her body...
Intercut
And guruji would come out of the flash and say
Guruji:
Aur aaj voh tere peeche peeche yahan tak chali aayi hai...main dekh sakta
hun... aashram ke dwaar par khadi hai voh...

Scene 12 gufa ext night

Aanchal
And we see ki aanchal aashram ke guru ji ke hall ke baahar khadi hai ,and
usske aage ek rekha khicnhi hai jiss par aag jal rayi hai and she is trying to
get in, but she cant get into this space, the purity of space is burning her..
Intercut
guru ji smiles and his vo ki
guruji:
lekin voh nahi jaanti ki anantkaal bhi khadi rahe toh bhi is gufa/ashram
mein pravesh nahi kar payegi..
aanchal is standing at the gate of this mediattaion hall..and they are able to
see her that she is not bale to enter ..so combined shot of guruji ,ria ,shishyas
and aanchal outside the gate
intercut
aanchal ke chaaron taraf aag ka gola banta hai and aanchal shouts and a
heavy storms starts with her anger.
intercut
riya looks shocked and says then
ria:
aapko sach pata tha, toh,...apne kuch kiya kyon nahi?
guru ji looks thoughtful and says,
guruji:
kyonki voh akeli nahi hai... usey ek kaali shakti ka sehyog praapt hai...

aur us shakti se ladne ke liye mujhe kuch siddhiyon ki avashyakta thi... jo

dhyan saadhna dvara hi praapt ki jaa skati hain...isliye maine samadhi lii
thi...
coz she has some big powers with her and to fight with those powers i have to
increase my powers, riya goes overwhelmed and says ,
ria:
mujhe maaf kar dijiye guruji...ab se pehle main inn baaton par vishwas
nahi karti thi... lekin apni aankhon se dekhne ke bad...guruji ! plz meri
help kijiye...gharvale samajhtey hain main bimar hun...lekin maine usey
khud dekha hai...apne aas paas mehsus kiya hai... usne mujhe dhamki bhi
dii hai...ki meri jageh lekar rahegi...main kya karun guruji...
i am sorry guru ji i never believed in you or anything like that but now please
help me, i need your help, my family thinks i am sick, but i am not.. he melts
and consoles her,
guruji :
chinta mat karo...tumhara yahan ana aur meri saadhna bhang karna
shayad ishwar ka sanket hai ki us dusht aatma ka saamna karney ka
samayy aa gaya hai...
tells her not to worry, i am with you..and voh darwaaze ki taraf ek thaal se
kuch laal mirch lal mirch ki bajay ganga jal ka chidkav karte hain..utha
kar phenkte hain and darwaaze par khadi hui aanchal jalti hai and dhuaan
ban kar wahaan se gaayab ho jaati hai , guru ji shsihyon ki taraf dekhte
hain and voh log bin akucch kahe hi wahaan se jaate hain and ab ria and
guru ji akele hain
let aanchal go away now before guruji starts telling aboiut two problems ..let
guruji ask her shashyas to leave and then he tells abiout two problems ..
guru ji says ab jo bhi hai mai usska saamna karunga..
problems..

but there are two

guruji :
ab meri baat dhyan se sunna beti...
she looks confused and he says, first, you
guruji :
keval tum ussey puch sakti ho ki voh yeh sab kyon kar rahi hai?... kyon
tumhara ghar sansaar, sirf tumhara pati chheen na chahti hai... yeh baat
jaan na aavashyak hai ki akhir kya shatruta hai uski tumse?...
can only ask her the reason why she is doing this? why she is doing this to
you only? what does she holds against you? riiya says but
ria:
lekin voh yeh baat mujhe kyon batayegi?
yeh baat how can i do that? guru ji says
guruji:
batayegi... apni marzi se na sahi, majbur hokar batayegi...
i will tell you.. she nods and then he says, and second,
guruji:
uski parchhayin tere jeevan se hataney ke liye mujhe puja karni hogi, tere
ghar par.....lekin us puja mein keval tujhe sammilit hona hai... ghar ka koi
bhi sadasya us samay ghar mein upasthit nahi hona chahiye...tabhi voh
puja safal ho sakegi...
we need to end her chapter, but for that, you should be alone in the house, koi
aur nahin hona chahiye.. only then we will be able to proceed the pooja..
she looks worried but decides that
ria:

ghar mein itney sare log hain, unhe kya kehkar....k..oi baat nahi guruji,
main kuch na kuch soch lungi...bus aap bataiye mujhe aur kya karna hai...
she will do it.. you tell me how.. he smiles and waheen paas mine rakhi hui
book uthaate hue kahte hain ki
guruji:
shabaash ! yeh lo...
ria book shardhdha se leti hai and guru ji ki taraf dekhti hai and guru ji says
guruji:
ismein likhe shlok kisi mandir emein jakar padhna... iske khatm hone se
pehle voh aatma tumhare saamne aane ko vivash ho jayegi... tab tum
ussey tumhare jeevan mein hone ka kaaran puch sakti ho...bus, uske baad
hi meri puja sambhav hai...
read this in the temple.. she will have to come..and then you can ask her why
she is after your life...and then once that is done I will join you for the Pooja
..riya looks determined... and jaldi se voh wahana se jaati hai and camera
charges on small idol of the kali maa jisse voh waheen chhod kar chali
gayi hai ,

Scene 13 maheshwari bhavan int night

Abhi
Abhi corridor se hota hua apne room ki taraf ja raha hai , usske haath mien
trya hai jissmien ria ke liye diner hai , abhi khud se baat kar raha hai ki
Abhi :
Ria ne din se kuch nahi khaya... abtak uski neend poori ho gayi
hogi...usey kuch khila deta hun...

ab ria ki neend poori h gayi hogi, khaana bhi khaa le to relaxed ho jaayegi and
abhi apne room ki yraaf badh raha hai

Scene 14 backside of maheshwari bhavan ext night

Ria
riya ghar ki boundary par hai , jump karne hi waali hai , idhar udhar dekh
rahi hai ki koi dekh to nahi taha hai , andhera hai iss liye thoda tension kam
hai

, she is bit wounded, she has washed her wounds by now, she is still

holding the idol,

intercut
abhi ab room ke saamne pahunch gaya hai
treatment
ria jumps and bhaag kar window ke paas pahunchti hai
intercut
abhi darwaaza kholta hai , darwaaza khulta hai lekin iss se pahle ki abhi
andar jaaye usska phone ring hota hai , we build up ,. Abhi ek haeth mine tray
pakad kar dusre se phone dekhta hai
intercut
abhis room int night
ria wondow par climb karne hi waali hai ki riya's saree gets stuck into
something and she is not able to climb the window,
ria:
ahh...meri saree...
build up
intercut

abhi phone par kahta hai ki

abhi :
jii, mr santosh main thodi der mein call karta hun...
baad mein baat karta hoon and he hangs up , hee walks inside and reaches to
bed, and ria ko aawaaz deta hai , koi jawaab nahi , and abhi apna haath aage
badhaata hai sheet remove karne ke liye and we build the intrigue ki ria hai ki
nahi and abhi bed sheet hataata hai and ria nahi hai , abhi is shocked ki rai
kahaan gayi
abhi :
ria kahan gayi?
and tabhi washroom ka darwaaza open hota hai and ria towel se apna chehra
pochte hue baahar aati hai and abhi usse dekh kar raahat ki saans leta hai
and we charge on ria jisske chehre par ab raahat ki saans hai ria aakar bed
par baithti hai and he smiles, caresses her head and says,
abhi :
ab kaisa feel kar rahi ho?
. riya smiles and says
Ria:
Bahut achcha...
Abhi :
very good...ab kuch khaa lo...
she holds his hand and says
ria:
apne hathon se khila do ..

he looks emotional and feeds her, she eats bit, keeps looking at him with love,
she goes emotional, holds his hand and says,
ria:
abhi, mujhse pyar kartey ho na?
he looks at her emotional, hugs her and says of
abhi :
yeh koi puchne vali baat thi...ofcourse...karta hun...bahut pyar karta
hun... itna ki tumhare bina jee nahi sakta...
course i do, she hugs him, he sits beside her, she keeps her head on his chest,
both sitting holding each other,
dramatic treatment
camera pans to window
and we are shocked to see ki riiya is still struggling to get her saree out of that
hook, somehow she manages and climbs on the window.. jaise hi voh window
par aakar andar dekhti hai she goes frozen., she sees some other riya sitting
close to abhi, dono ki aaankhein band hai, he is caressing her hair, riya looks
shocked and she wants to shout, abhi.. its me.. here... but she realizes that
she is not able to speak, her voice is not coming out, she looks shocked
when she sees inside the room, the other riya is talking to abhi in real
riya's voice, so this other riya has stolen her voice,
shocked and other riya says loud and clear,
ria:
i love you abhi...
abhi also responds positively,
abhi :
i love you too...

real riya looks

now this other riya looks at real riiya and smiles... real riya realizes ki
voh
ria v/o:
Kali maa ki moorti jaldi mein mujhse ashram mein hi reh gayi...isiliye iski
shaktiyon ka asar ho rah ahia mujhpe... Hey kanhaji ! kuch ashubh mat
hone dijiye...
kaali maa ki murti guru ji ke aashram mien chhod aayi hai issi liye usske
paas shakti nahi hai , she sees two devilish eyes shining on that face, she
does not recognize those eyes but it scares the hell out of her, we show
its aghori's eyes...

riya tries to bang on the window,

but

nothing

happens, she keeps banging helplessly and then abhi gets up, he walks to
the window, riya beams with hope that abhi has seen her, but to her major
shock, he cant see ria kyonki usske aur ria ke beeche mien achaanak ek
kaala kapda aa gaya hai jisse abhi dekh nahi paa raha hai na ria dekh paa
rahi hai and we charge on aghoi aankh jissmien jeet ka bhaav hai ,.and we
charge on ria , usse abhi dihaayi de raha hai voh usska naam lekar chillaa
rahi hai lekin usski aawaaz nahi nikal rahi hai and
curtain cover karta haiu and ria

abhi window par

looks shocked and wants to shout, but

usski aawaaz nahi aa rahi hai

need to be resolved logically ria is still carrying kali maa ki murti ..that
simply means the spirit can not touch her or do any harm ..uspey humne
poora play kiya haiso why she is not able to speak also she could have
decided that let me go into the room immediatelywo kisis tarah khidki pe
pathar mar kar tod deti or abhimanyu ka dhyan khicti? What is it that she is
not able to do.. something big is at stake her husband is getting close to the
spirit.. please suggest ..

now she has left kaali maa murti at guru jis place , jaldi jaldi mien bhool
aayi

inside the room

other riya smiles with aghori's smile and says,
ria:
abhi ! aao, so jaatey hain....tum bhi thak gaye hoge...
come to bed abhi, lets sleep.... abhi goes to bed and real riya flops down on
the floor, after a while usse guru ji ki baat goonjti hai , she recalls what guru
ji said to her, ki aanchal ke paas koi badi takat hai, and she recalls those two
tasks that guru ji askes her to do, she wipes off her tears and

looks

determined for something,

we cut back inside
Scene 15 abhis room int night
Abhi , aanchal aghori
we see ki abhi has slept and aghori is caressing his head, now its clearly
aghori .. we show aanchal standing on the floor and says,
anchal :
mujhe apne abhi ko chhuna hai...usey galey se lagana hai...baba, yeh taqat
aap mujhe nahi de saktey?....
cant you give these powers to me? aghori smiles and says
aghori :
de sakta hun, lekin kal...sirf kal tu koi bhi/ria ka bhes bana payegi...aur
ek nahi, jitney chahe utney...
yeh takat tere paas hogi.... lekin sirf kal... she looks amused and says how?
Anchal :
Main samjhi nahi baba

aghori smiles and he closes his eyes, when he opens we see

\aghori :
Yeh dekh !
four five riya forms up in the room... build up.. aghori smiles and says,
aghori :
main jitney chahun utney roop dhar sakta hun... ek asli, baki...sab
...chhallava !! hahahah !!...
anchal : smiles
abhi ko pane ke liye toh ria ka sirf ek hi roop kafi hai...
aghori:
voh tujhe jaan gayi hai... tera raasta asaan nahi hoga...taiyyar rehna, kal
tujhe meri is shakti ki bahut zaroorat padegi...
anchal :
lekin baba, ,mujhe karna kya hoga?
Aghori:
Uska saamna !!!!
i can take as many roop as i want... build up. aanchal smiles devilishly and
asks, toh mujhey kal kya karna hoga..

aghori smiles and says, usska

saamna... beat.
Need to understand what this scene stands for ? is it just to explain that aghori
baba can take any form and he can be in multiple forms? Is it that ?
Yes aghori baba can take any form like wise guru ji also can take any
form , in next episode guru ji is coming as doctor.

Ria ka raat mein so jana when her husband was trapped by a spirit in her
bedroom is a little casual..would suggest ria lits up a lamp ..lantern or diya
aur diye kis roshni mein she starts chanting the mantras or reading the
shlokas from the book given to her by guruji..
Ria apne room mien hai , abhi so gaya hai , ria usski taraf pain ful nazron
se dekhti hai , usse pata hai ki abhi ke upar aanchal ka asar hai , voh ek
diya jalaati hai , guru ji ki di hui book nikaalti hai and diye ki roshni mien
paath karne lagti hai ,, ria ke bahar hai right ? so she would immediately
get a flash or awaaj of guruji saying -tu aissi jagah jaa jahaan aanchal bhi
na aa sake aur na hi koi ghar waala
Guruji :
Is kitaab ko lkear aisi jageh jana jahan koi tere path mein vighn na daal
sake...gharvalon se, abhimanyu se durr...
NOTE it wasnt mentioned above. If needed, plz add these lines there
also. Then repeat here.
and we charge on ria and then she goes to the temple at night onlyand
starts chanting from the book..and keeps on chanting basically I am not
looking her at going off to sleep jab kitaab khatam hone ko aayega tab
aanchal prakat hogi..
Different dissolves
Poori raat diya paath kar rahi hai , ek point par voh uthti hai and abhi ko
chaadar udhaati hai and phir paath karne lagti hai and phir usse guru ji ki
aawaaz aati hai ki subah hote hi tujhe koi paath nahi karne dega , tu aissi
jagah jaa jahaan aanchal bhi na aa sake aur na hi koi ghar waala and we
charge on ria , she mutters ki aissii jagah to ekant mien bana hua mandir
hi ho sakta hai
Swish pan
Sun rise shot

Scene 16 kaali maa mandir int morning

Ria
Ghanti ki aawaaz aur shankh ki mili juli aawaaz se ria ki neend khulti hai and
she realzies ki that she is sitting inside the temple and she has dozed off on the
feet of the kali Idol, (its some other temple.. if we dont have kali mandir, can be
any other temple..) she opens her eyes, notices that she has slept hugging the
idol, realizes that its morning... and recalls of what she saw last night, she
looks shocked and decides to run to her home to check if the other riya is still
there but then something falls from her hands and its the book that guru ji
gave to her, she picks this up and recalls of what guru ji said

to her, she

decides to read this book, she sits and starts reading this.
intercut
Scene 17 Maheshwari bhavan int morning
Kammo , daai sa , sheetal revti , rukmnai abhi
Scene opens with phoolon ki bsket and we see ki kammo ek jagra nikaal kar
daadi saa ke baalon mien lagaati hai and tabhi abhi aata hai and kammo uss
se kahti hai ki
Kammo:
Bhaiyya, aapne toh bahut dino se mangvaye nahi, toh aaj main khud le
aayi... bhabhi ji ko safed gulaab pasand hain na, yeh dekhiye, safed gulab
ka gajraa...
and abhi smiles and tabhi rukmnai revti ji ke saath aati hai and abhi usse
wish karta hai
abhi :
good morning maa...
and rukmani ask ki
ruk:

abhi, kal se ria kisi ko nazar hi nahi aayi... mana ki doctor ne usey araam
karney ko kaha tha, par aisa bhi kya sona ki kal din se lekar abtak neend
poori nahi hui...aaj subeh ki aarti mein bhi nahi aayi thi...
and abhi says ki
abhi :
maa, ria room mien nahi hai...shayad kaheen gayi hai
and sab react karte hain , rukmani says ki
ruk:
kahan gayi hai?
room mien nahi hai to kahan hai , abhi says ki
abhi :
mien ne socha neeche hogi, aap logon ke paas ...
sab log darr jaate hain ki aaj phir ria kahaan chali gayi ,.
Dadi:
Thari bhali hove... beendni phir se kahin chali gayi??...
all look confused and he
abhi :
subeh meri aankh khuli toh ria kamrey mein nahi thi...
says subah jaga toh wo nahin thi, raat toh sab theek tha, all looks worried and
all of them
ruk:
hey Thakurji, yeh ria akhir karna kya chahti hai?
abhi:

maa, aap pareshanmat hoiye, main dekhta hun...

revti:
abhi, pehlel uske moble par call karo...
decide to look for her,, abhi calls her and ria ka phone room mien ring ho raha
hai
dadi :
je awaaz toh thare kamrey se aave hai...
abhi :
shayad mobile room mien chhod gayi hai...
ab kahaan gayi and we see tension on abhi and rukmanis face , iss beech
sheetal naashta lekar dining table par lagaane lagti hai
sheetal ;
maaji, nashta laga rahi hun...sab aa jaiye...
and rukmani says ki pahle
ruk :
sheetal bahu, ria phir kahin gayab hai... pehle sab usey dhoondtey hain...
phir nashta karengey...
ria ko dhoondhte hain phir naashta hoga and abhi sabko alag alag jagah
dhoondhne ko kahta hai
abhi :
maa, aap log ghar mein dhoondiye, main bahar dekhkar ataa hun...
and abhi , rukmani , sheetyal , kammo , sab log
dhoondhne jaate hain
Intercut

alag alag direction mien

Scene 18 Mandir int morning

riya is reading the book, she is looking tired, its 11 o clock now. her lips are
drying.. she is looking weak... her head is spinning... but she keeps reading
the book... her eyes are shutting and we show a flash back:
flash back
Scene 19 gufa int day
Guru ji , ria
guru ji said while giving the book to her,
guruji:
yaad rakhna beti, is kitaab mein likhe shlok uccharan karney vaalon ko
ant mein jitni shakti dete hain, padhtey samay uski utni kadi pariksha bhi
letey hain... inhe padhtey hue teri himmat kayi baar jawab degi, par tu
haar mat maan na...rukna mat...isey khatm karna...tabhi tujhe us aatma
ka saamna karne ki shakti mil sakegi...
this book needs energy, it will soak your energy, but you make sure that you
dont give up.... tumhare bheetar se jitni takat iss kitaab ke mantro me jayegi...
utni hi strong hokar tum uss aatma ka saamna kar paogi...
cut to present, riya opens her eyes and starts chanting again.. she is reading..
intercut
Scene 20 mahehswari bhavan / any location ( abhis phone cut)
Rukmani , abhi sheetal dadisa abhi
Hall mien ghar ke sab log baithe hue hain , rukmnai ji tesned hain ki
Ruk :
Kuch samajh nahi aa raha Ria akhir gayi kahan?...
ria aakhir kahaan gayi hai ki tabhu sheetal ka phone ring hota hai

sheetal :
maji, devarsa ka phone ! (speaker pe lagati hun...shayad ria ka pata lag
gaya ho)... hello, devarsa
abhi hai and he infors ki
abhi :
bhabhi, ria hospital bhi nahi aayi hai...dopahar hone vali hai, aur abtak
uska kahin kuch pata nahi chal raha...
hospital bhi ria nhai aayi hai , , dopahar hone ko hai , pata nahi kahana gayi
hai , usske ghar waalon se bhi baat ki wahan bhi voh nhai gayi hai and we
charge on poore ghar waale sab tension mine hain ki
dadi :
hey thakurji, kahan jaa sake hai ria beendni?...

We see different shots

abhimanyu looking for ria on the road,
dissolve
abhi is looking at ria in the hospitak
dissolve
abhi is talking on phone , showing rias photo to apsserby
dissolve
abhi is looking ria at bus station
dissolve
he is at railway station..

now frustration on abhis face , kaheen bhi ria nahi mil rahi hai

Sun set shot

Scne 21 shamshaan ghaat ext night
Aghori , aanchal
Raat ke andhre mien mradang bajne ki aawaaz aa

rahi hai and we see ki

aghori kissi jalti hui chita ke chaaron taraf mradang bajaata hua mantrochaar
karte hue ghoom raha hai , when aanchal forms up there and she says wincing
in pain,
Anchal :
Baba, yeh khichaav... lag raha hai jaise mujhe koi cheez kheech rahi hai..
something is pulling me somewhere, aghori smiles and says,
aghori :
tera muqabla karney ke liye voh apni poori taqat laga rahi hai... us
suhagan ki shakti ko tu naazarandaz nahi kar sakti... tujhe jana hoga...
she is putting all her strength to face you... you cant ignore her strength, you
will have to go to her, aanchal fumes and says, mera saamna karegi wo...
anchal :
mujhse ladegi voh?... barbad kar dungi usey... !!

Sceen 22 maheshwari bhavan int night

Sheetal , revti , rukmnai , daadi
Ab ghar mien saari aurtien tensed baithi hain , rukmnai ji maala ka japa kar
rahi hain , daadi saa paath padh rahi hain and sheetal se revti says ki

Revti :
baarah ghante beet gaye aur ria ka kuch pata nahi chala... bhaisa aur yeh
lauten toh police mein report karney ki sochi jaye...
ramna ji aur kailash ji aaye to police mine report karne ki baat sochi jaaye ,
and shetaal is worried for ria ki
sheetal ;
hey thakurji, ria ki raksha kijiyega...voh jahan ho sahi salamat ho...

Scene 23 mandir int night

Ria aanchal abhi aghori
riya has read the entire book, voh book ko band karte hue uthti hai and kaali
maa ke saamne sarr jhukaati hai and prays ki
ria:
hey maa...mujhe...shakti ..dijiye...taki main apne suhag ki raksha kar
sakun...
maa mujhe shakti de and her words are broken.. she is fumbling.. looking
weak... but does not give up, keeps saying ki maa mujhe aaj jeet chaahiye ,
and achaanka hawa chalti hai , door kaheen kutte ke rone ki aawaaz aati hai ,
and mradang bajna start hota hai and ria knows ki ye aanchal hai and voh
kaali maa ko pranaam karke turn karte hue chillati hai ki
ria:
saamne aao...aaj tumhe mere sawalon ke jawab dene hnogey... kon ho
tum? Kyon mere peeche padi ho?
saamne aa aacnhal Tell me your intention?.. ..riya's words are like order for
aanchal.. coz now riya has the strength of those mantras those she read form

the book... wind blows.... and we show aanchal's face to riya,

and aanchal

chillatai hai ki
anchal :
tumhe barbad karney ke liye... kyonki tum meri barbadi ki vajeh ho
and riya looks shocked and says.
Ria:
Main?? Maine tumhe nahi mara..ulta, tumhari jaan bachane ke liye jo ban
pada kiya... phir yeh nafrat, kisliye?
i dint kill you... you know that.. why you doing this, i did everything to save
you.. then why this.. aanchal laughs and says,
anchal :
galatfehmi hai tumhari... main yeh sab isliye nahi kar rahi kyonki tum
mujhe bacha nahi paayi...nahi !!
i am not doing this because you could not save me.. riya looks shocked and
aanchal says
anchal :
balki isliye kyonki tumhari vajeh se mera pyar mera abhi mre sath nahi
hai...college ka sath jabtak janam janam ke sath mein na badal jaye, main
shaant nahi baithungi... abhi ko har haal mein paakar rahungi... tera yeh
sindoor, yeh mangalsutra mujhe rok nahi payengey...mere pyar ke saamne
tere suhaag ki shakti ko haarna padega... abhi ke sath tera har rishta
tootega...uspar sirf mera haq hoga...mera !!!
riya looks shocked and ham dekhte hain ki kaali maa ke mandir ke praagna
mien yaani mandir ke baahar bane chabutre par ( iff possible location wise)
aaaj ria and aanchal aamne saamne hain , bakckgroudn mien kaali maa ki
murti hai ) ria shouts,ria would say

ria:
pehle ki baat main nahi jaanti, lekin aaj, abhi ka pyar bhi main hun, aur
janam janam ki sathi bhi, main !!! abhi mera pati hai... suhaag hai mera...
main humare rishtey par koi aanch nahi ane dungi...
I do not know any thing about your past relationship but now I am married to
him and

ABHI MERA HAI.. MERA SUHAAG HAI... AUR MAIN KISI BHI

KEEMAT PAR APNE SUHAAG PE AANCH TAK NAHIN AANE DUNGI.. it should
be a dramatic confrontation between riya and aanchal, one is girlfriend and one
is wife, Aanchal laughs and says,

Anchal :
Kaise rokogi mujhe?... suraj doobtey hi tumhare hath, pair, dimag,
tumhara poora shareer mera ho jata hai...tumhara pati mera pati ban jata
hai... voh din durr nahi, jab voh poori tareh se mera ho jayega...
Tumhara abhi raat bhar tera pati mera hota hai, jaldi hi, wo poori tarah se
mera ho jayega... suraj ast hote hi tera yeh shareer mera ho jata hai, and you
cant stop that.... ab main apne abhi ko poori tarah se pakar rahungi... tu
dkehti rah....
riya smiles and says
ria:
toh suraj doobne tak ka intezar kyon karna...abhi koshish karke dekh lo...
i dont have to wait till evening actually, she starts walking down, towards
aanchal, build up... aanchal is fuming.. riya is holding the book in her hand
and says,
ria:
aaj ke baad tu hamari zindagi me kabhi dakahl nahin de payegi...

she has reached neeche where aanchal is standing.. aanchal cant stand to her
aura and book this time.. she has to step back, riya smiles and says,
ria:
yeh ek suhagan ka vachan hai ..... ek patni ka vada hai ki main apne pati
ki khatir kisi bhi hadd tak jaa ungi...kisi bhi khatrey ka saamna
karungi...phir tum kya, duniya ki badi se badi shakti bhi mere hosley ko
hilaa nahi sakti...
its my promise to you, a wife's promise, a suhagan's promise that i will do
anything to save my husband from any danger, phir tum kya bhagwan bhi
mere irade ko hila nahin sakta...
build up... aanchal is fuming that suddenly this riya has become strong..
anchal ;
yeh..kya...iske paas itni shakti kahaan se aayi?...babaa!!
right then abhi's car stops there and he sees riya, mandir ke baahar chbutre
par akele , he runs to her hugs her and asks angrily yet concerned,
abhi :
riaa !!! thank God !!! kahan chali gayin thi tum?
riya smiles looking at aanchal and says,
ria:
abhi, main yahan, puja karney aayi thi...apne suhag ke liye...taki humare
rishtey ko kisi ki nazar na lage
abhi hugs her saying,
abhi :

tum bhi riya...bata kar ana tha na... pata hai ghar par sab kitna pareshan
hain... aur, tension mein meri toh jaan nikli jaa rahi thi... tum jaanti ho
tumhare ander meri jaan basti hai...
riya hugs him and says looking at aanchal,
ria:
aur tumhare ander, meri saansein...hume koi alagh nahi kar sakta
abhi...koi nahi...
dont worry, i wont leave you.. no one can separate us.. she hugs him.. she is
saying these dialogues with a second meaning for aanchal... she holds his hand
and says,
ria:
chalo, ghar chaltey hain
lets go home... riya sits with abhi and her vo goesria: vo
main na hi apne ghar se jaungi, na abhi ki zindagi se...jitni koshish karni
hai kar lo...

aanchal fumes and her vo goes- abhi tu meri takat se anjaan hai,. she shakes
her head in that scary way and says, iss ghar aur abhi ki life se bahar nikal
fenkugi main tujhey..
anchal :
abhi tune meri zid, meri taqat dekhi kahan hai...mujhe chunauti dii hai
na...ab dekhna, sirf abhi ki zindagi se bahar nahi fekungi, barbaad kar
dungi tujhe....!!! maut se badtar zindagi hogi teri... yeh mera vada hai..

bahut jald.. and mradang ki aawaaz tez hoti jaati hai , build up. dramatic
treatment.
FREEZE.

charge.