TUM AISSE HI RAHNA

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EPISODE 48
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Scene 1 maheshwari bhavan hall int night
Ria , aghori , guru ji and aanchal
Aanchal and aghori are laughing , they are sure ki ab ria and guru ji ka kuchc
nahi ho sakta hai and dono ek dusre ki taraf aag ke gole ke saath badh rahe
hain , ria aankhien band kiye hue kishan ji ko yaad kar rahi hai and guru jo
mantrochaar kar rahe hain and iss se pahle ki voh ria se takraaye voh akahiri
koshish karte hue apne gale ki rudraaksh utaarte hain and hawa mien
phenkte hain and rudraaksh hawa mien lahaarti hui dono jalti hui mashaalon
se takaraati hai and takraate hi mashaal ki aag bujh jaati hai and guru ji and
ria dono ek dusre se takaarte hain and neeche girte hai and aanchal ye dekh
kar shocked rah jaati hai ki aghori ka vaar khaali gaya lekin aghori neeche
gire hue guru ji ko dekh kar hansne lagta hai and neeche giri hui guru ji ki
rudraaksh ki maala apne haathon mien utahata hai and gale mien pahanta
hai and we build dramatic development jahaan aghori haath ko hawa mien
karta hai and ek bada sa dragger usske haath mien aata hai and neeche gire
hue guru ji and ria ko dkeh kar kahta hai ski yahee mine chaahta tha ki tu
apne gale ki rudraaksh utaar, ab to tere saare power mere paas aa gaye ab to
tu ek shaktiheen insaan hai , bacha sake to tu bacha khud ko and voh raakh
uthaata hai and zoron se hawa mien uchaalta hai and guru ji and ria dono
hawa mien lahraa rahe hain and aghori apne haath mien pakda hua dragger
bhi hawa mien uchaalta hai jo guru ji ki taraf badhta hai and unke pet mien
jaakar lagta hai

Scene 2 restaurant int night

Abhi ,ria rukmani , revti , sheetal , kiran , kailash ji , dadi sa , crowd

kammo dev pinky
Restaurant mien music apne crescendo par hai and we see ki abhi guru ji ki
bheji hui ria ke saath dance kar raha hai , ussne ria ka haath apne hatathon
mien liya hai , and un dono ko ghere hue ghar le log clapping kar rahe hain,
and we charge on sheetal jo ria ke chehre par muskaan dekh kar khush hai
she mutters ki issi bahaane ria aaj kitne dino baad khush hai ki tabhi ria ko
achaanak dard ka ehsaas hota hai and voh abhi se apna haath chhuda kar
apna pet pakad leti hai , abhi chaunkta hai kyonki ria ke munh se ek aah
nikalti hai ria se abhi pocohta hai ki kya hua and ria pet pakad kar karaahte
hue kahti hai ki zoron ka dard ho raha hai

Intercut ..
Maheshwari bhavan hall int night
and we see ki guru ji ke pet mine dragger ghusa hua hai and bleeding ho rahi
hai , and ria chilla rahi hai ki guru ji ko chhod do , guru ji dard se karaahte
hue mantrochaar kar rahe hain lekin aghor hans raha hai ki teri maala mere
paas hai ab tu kuchc bhi kar le aaj apne pairon par apne ghar nahi jaa
paayega , mine tujhe tadpaaonga ..
intercut
restaurant int night
ria is feeling huge pain , as someone stabbed in her stomach, she winces, abhi
looks shocked and asks what happened? she replies in negative, touches the
side of her belly and look shocked to see that she is bleeding... there comes
blood on her hand. And she looks at hotel staff and asks for washroon , voh
usse ishaare se batata hai and ria excuses her self and rushes towards
washroom , kisis ko samajh mien nahi aaya hai ki achaanak kya hua , abhi ria
ke peeche jaata hai leki ria haath ke ishaare se usse rokti hai ki mien theek
hoon abhi aayi , rukmani ji par charge karte hain unhien kuchc theek nahi lag

raha hai lekin voh kahti kucch nahi hain, music baj raha hai lekin dance ruk
gaya hai murmering start ho gayi hai ki achaanak ria ko hua kya
Scene 3 washroom int night
Ria
Ria is shocked to see ki usski saadi mien dragger ghusa hua haiu and she is
shokced , huge bleeding is happening and we charge on her , she mutters ki
guru ji badi musibat mien hai , mine unka roop hoon agar meri body mine
chaaku laga hai matlab guru ji ki jaan khatre mien hai mujhe jaana hoga and
usski nazar waheen bathroom ki window par jaati hai jahaan

se aasani se

baahar jaaya ja sakta hai

Scene 4 maheshwari bhavan/hall int night
Ria aghori aanchal guru ji
guru ji apne pet mien lage hyue dragger ko nikaalne ki koshihs kar rahe hain
lekin unse voh dragger nahi nikal raha hai , unmien ab khade hone ki taakat
nahi hai , but is still trying his best to fight, trying to chant mantras, and
then aghori laughs and says, i should do one final solution for this man, riya
shocked and she shouts at aanchal and aghori, tells them to stop torturing
guru ji, aanchal laughs and says, teri toh har support kheenchni hai mujhey,
phir itni badi support ko kaisey chhod de hum..
intercut
Scene 5 restaurant

ext night

Abhi , rukmani , dadi sa, kailash ji , sheetal , revti , kiran pinky , kammo ,
dev , crowd
Abhi ke saath ghar waale ria ki raah dekh rahe hain ria abhi tak nahi aayi hai
and rukmani ji kiran se kahti hain ki jaao kiran dekh kar aao ki ria kahaan
hai and tabhi abhi ka phone ring hota hai , dusri taraf ria hai and abhi is
shocked to know ki ria ke pet mien itna dard utha ki voh ghar chali gayi and
abhi raises his voice ki ria ye kya bewakoofi hain , ham sab ghar waale yahana
hain aur tum bina bataye ghar chali gayi , and iss se pahle ki abhi kucc kah

paaye usska phone disconnect hota hai and ab ghar waale abhi ko gher lete
hain sabne sab kuch suna hai and rukmani ji gusse se kahti hain ki ham log
yahaan aisse hi baithe hain and voh ghar chali gayi bina bataaye ?? and we
charge on abbi and ab usske chehre par tesnion aata hai and he says ki ab koi
baat nahi hogi fauran ghar chalte hain , dekhte hain ki aaj aakhir maamla kya
hai and he runs , usske peeche ghar waale bbhi daudte hain

Scene 6 maheshwari bhavan int night

Ria , aanchal , aghori , guru ji
And iss beeche ria maheshwari bhavan ke hall mien aati hai and she is
shocked to see ki guru ji neeche gire hain and ria aanchal and aghori ke
saamne haath jod kar plead kar rahi hai ki mere guru ji ko bacha lo and ria
( guri ji ki bheji hui , guri ji ke shreer mien pravesh karti hai and guru ji ko
jaisse himmat aati hai and voh uth khade hote hain and aghori ki taraf gusse
se badh kar unke gale mine latak rahi apni rudraaksh ki maal chheen ne ki
koshish karte hain and

aghori unhien

gusse se dekhta hai ki arre waah

khade hone ki himmat aa gayi tujhmien , and aghori raises his hand, some
ash forms on his hand, he smiles and starts throwing this ash on guru ji, as
soon as this ash touches guru ji he starts wincing, unka haath aghori ke gale
se choot ta hai and aghori rakh ko un par udaata hai and guru ji hawa mien
uchaalte hain and neeche girte hain ria unki taraf bhaagti hai unka haath
uthaati to haath neeche girta hai , dusra haath utrhaati hai to dusra haath bhi
neeche girta hai and aanchal chillaati hai ki ab mitti ke ho gaye ye lakwa maar
gaya hai inke badan ko , ab ye hil dul bhi nahi sakenge and we charge on ria ,
she is scaed , and aanchal looks at her and says ki ab tera eklauta bachaane
waala gaya ab tu kya karegi , and aanchal waheen rakhi hui ek chair ria ki
taraf kheench kar maarti hai and ria ghabra kar aankh band karti hai lekin
voh chair usse lagti nahi hai and aisse aakar usske peeche lag jaati hai and ria
ko jaisse hawa ka dhakka force se chair par baithaata hai and jaise hi ria chair
par baithti hai hawa mien rassi aati hai and usse chair par baandhne lagti
hai , ria khud ko chhuddane ki koshish karti hai lekin nahi chhuda paati hai

and door khadi hui aanchal usse ghoore jaa rahi hai and ria finally chair mien
bandh gayi hai and tabhi baahar tezi se car rukne ka sound aata hai and abhi
ki aawaaz aati hai ria and we build up ki ab kya hone waala hai
Swish pan
Scene 7 maheshwari bhavan gate int night
Abhi , kailash ji , rukmnai , dadi sa , sheetal
Maheshwari bhavan ka gate dhakke se khulta hai and abhi bhaagta hua andar
bhaagta hai , he is panicked ki ria ko aakhir hua kya hai , usske peeche
kailash ji , rukmnai ji , sheetal , daadi sa and kiran heetal ghar waale hain
and abhi bhaagta hua hall ki taraf jaa raha hai
Intercut
Scene 8 hall int night
Abhi , ria kailsh , rukmani , guru ji , shishya, sheetal daadi sa , aanchal
aghori
Ria jo chair mien bandhi hui hai abhi ke aane se usske chehre par hope aati
hai and voh aghori ki taraf dekh kar kahti hai ki aaj ghar waalon ke saamne
tumhaara saara raaz khol doongi , aaj voh log khud apni aankhon se dekhenge
ki mere saath aur iss ghar ke guruji ke saath kya ho raha hai and aanchal and
aghori ek dusri ki trarf dekhte hand and hanste hain and aghori and jaisse hi
usse kissi ke aane ki aahat hoti hai aanchal and aghori wahaan se

dhuaan

bann kar gaayab ho jaati hai and jaisse hi abhi hall mien pahucnhta hai he is
shokced to see , and from his pov we show how house has turned into a mess,
peeche peeche bhaagte hue ghar waale pahucnhte hain and sab log ria ko
kursi se bandhe hue and guru ji ko neeche gire hue dekh kar shocked rah
jaate hain ki kaisse guru ji injured pade hue hain and abhi ria ko chair par
bandhe hue dkeh kar haiaran hai ki ye sab kaisse hua , sheetal bhaag kar
paani laati hai and rukmani ji ko deti hai and rukmani ji guru ji ko paani
pilaane ke liye haathon ka sahaara dekar baithaane ki koshish karti hai to
guru ji gir padte hain and now daadi mutters ki inhien to lakwa maar gaya ,
and unki nazar guru ji ke pet se bahte hue khoon par padti hai and goh ghabra

jaati hain and kiran se kahti hain ki jaldi se daud kar rui laao , khoon bah
raha hai , , ambulance ko phone karo ,. And idhar abhi ria se baar baar pooch
raha hai ki tum to restaurant mien thi yahana kaisse aa gayi ?? ye sab kya
hua ,. , and ria

shouts, maaji abhi, papa , guru ji ka haall aghori baba aur

uss aanchal ne kiye hai , and we have huge build up . charge on everyones
face sab log shocked hain , rukmani ji guru ji se haath jod kar poochti hain ki
swaami ji ye kya hua aapke saath and guru ji kucch bolna chaah rahe hain
lekin lakve ki wajah se bol nahi paa rahe hain , and ria says ki mien bataati
hoon ki uss

aghori baaba aur aanchal

ne mere aur guru ji ke saath kya

kiya ,and aawaaz aati hai ki tum kya bataaogi , mien bataata hoon and ria
turns her face towards that voice and

to her major shock achaanak guru ji

ka shishya pillar ke peeche se nikalta hai usske haath mien marham hai and
voh aakar guru ji ke ghaav par marham lagaata hai (he comes with a first aid
boxwith a lot of bandage and cotton) and ria usse gaur se dekhti hain to
usse ussmien aghori baba ki aankhie nazar aati hai and now ria is shocked ,
aghori has taken baba's shishya'sroop and voh sab logon ke saamne drama
karta hai ki guru ji to isi ghar ke liye mahasamaadhi mien the lekin issne
kuchc der pahle unhien phone kiya ki aap ghar aao , unki samasadhi bhang ki
, and guri jo se issne jhooth bola ki iss ghar mine na jaane kya hone waala hai
khatra hai aap aao , guru ji bhaage hue aaye and jaisse hi guru ji ko laga ki
ghar mine koi nhai hai to voh yahana se jaane lage to issne un par ilzaam
lagaaya ki tum ne kyon kaha ki iss ghar mine negative energy hai ,tumhaari
wajah se log samajhte hain

ki mujh par bhhoot hai and

guru ji ne isse

samjhaane ki koshish ki , to ussne guru ji ko seedhoyon se dhakka de diya ,

guru ji gir gaye to jaisse iss par jonnon sawaar ho gaya boli ki aaj tumhine jaan
se maar doongi and issne inhien chaaku maar diya and we charge on abhi he
is shocked ane aage badh kar voh shishya ka gala pakadta hai ki kya bake jaa
rahe ho meri ria kissi ko nahi maar sakti hai voh doctor hai zindagi deti hai
lekin shishya bana hua aghori drama karta hai says ki tum log isse kya
samajhte ho , ye kissi din iss ghar mine aag laga kar sabko maar degi , voh to
mien sahi samay par aa gaya aur isse rassi se baandh diya nahi to ye to jaan
se maar deti guru ji ko and we charge on rukmani jo gusse se ria ki taraf
badhti hain and chillaati hain ki tumne hamaare guru ji ko maarne ki koshih
ki and jab ria sahi baat bataana chaahti hai to rukmani ji gusse se ria par
haath uthaati hain lekin daadi beeche mien hi unhien rokti hai huge drama ,

rukmani ji gusse se chhoor hain aankhien laal hain kyonki aaj unki bahu ne
unke guru ji ko maarne ki koshish ki , abhi unhiens samjhaata hai to ,
rukmani ji rone lagti hain ki kya hall bana diya mere guru ji ka iss ria ne and
ria ab kaisse khud ko defend kare usse samajh mien nahi aa raha hai , gurji is
paralyzed, guru ji wants to speak but couldnt , ria sabke saamne haath jod
kar khadi hai usski aankho se aansoon gir rahe hain , plead kar rahi hai ki uss
par bharosa karo , trust karo , ye guru ji ka shishya nahi agghori hai jo guru ji
ke shishya ka roop dhar kar aaya hai lekin koi bhi ria ki baat maan ne ko raazi
nahi hai , and she turns to abhi and usse dekhte hue kahti hai ki abhi please
trust me, rukmani says ki ab kaise koi tum par trust kare , tum to party se
bhaag kar aayi , bina bataaye , aur ye sab kar diya , riya shocked and wants to
explain but shishya says, i am taking guru ji with me, but you please keep her
tied... she is dangerous for you all... family is shocked... and we charge on a
corner jahaan aanchal khadi hui hans rahi hai , kaialsh ji says ki sabse pahle
mien guru ji ko hospital le kar jaa raha hoon and shishya and kailash ji guru ji
ko utha kar wahan se le jate hain , tabhi sheetal aakar kahti hai ki ambulance
aa gayi hai , , guru ji ko aisse hall mien jaata hua dekh kar rukmani ji and
daadi sa

hatah jode hue khadi hain baar baar maafi maang rahi hain ki

maharaaj maaf kar do aissi bahu hamaare ghar aayi hain , and we charge on
sheetal and kiran sab

shocked khadi hai and abhi wants to loose riya from

the grip but rukmani ki kadakti hui aawaaz aati hai ki nahi , rahne do , she
has crossed all limits now what do we do? And rukmani ji ria ki taraf gusse
bhari nazar daalti hain and wahan se jaati hain and unke peeche revti ji daadi
sa and ghar ke dusre log bhi jaate hain , and ab ria ke saath abhi waheen hai ,
and ria jo ki chair se bandhi hui hai ghar waalon ko aisse jaate hue dekh kar
rone lagti hai and abhi usski taraf emotionally dekhe jaa raha hai
Dissolve
Scene 9 mandir area int night
Rukmani , revti sheetal daai saa
let the prelude to the scene be rukamni getting a call from kailash in the
hospital telling her about guruji condition and then rukmani praying to
kanha .. okk

scene mobile ki ring se open hota hai ,and we see ki rukmani ji phone
receive karti hai and dusri taraf kailash hi hain , and he says ki guru ji
hospital mine hain , test ho gaye hain , bandage to ho gayi hai , bleeding
bhi band ho gayi hai lekin body ka right upper side paralisis hua hai bas
praathna karo ki voh theek ho jaaye aur guru ji apne khud se jaldi uth
baith saken , and we charge on rukmani , usske chehre par tension aati
hai , she hangs up and voh mandir mien kaanha ki taraf dekhti hai and
unke saamne jaakar haatth jod kar khadi hoti hai and and rukmani ke
peeche daadi sa , and sheetal bhi kaanha ke saammne haath jode hue khade
hain and rukmani ji ki aankhon mein aansoon hain and voh pain ful aawaaz
mien kaanha se shikaayat karti hain ki kya din dikha rahe hain aap hamine
aaj tak maheshwari bhavan ki bahuein shaan hua karti thi aaj ek aissi bahu
aa gayi hai jissne hamaari aankhien sada ke liye neeeche jhuka di hain , ab
ham kare to kare kya?? Voh to guru ji hamaare ghar ko apna ghar maante hain
iss liye police mine report nahi hogi nahi to ria bhi jail jaati aur ham sab ko
apne saath jail le jaati and we charge on rukmani ji jo ki bahut tensed hain
Scene 10 hall int night
Abhi. Ria aanchal revti
In this scene did aanchal enter into Ria s body and if so at what point ?
is it at the beginning ? was it aanchal who was pleading abhimanyu to
take her inside or ria ..the clarity is missing in the description of the
scene. please clarify. Ok
Scene dhuein se start hota hai and ham dekhte hain ki voh dhuaan hall mien
chalta hua uss chair ke paas aata hai jahaan ria bandhi hui hai, and

uss

dhuen mien se aanchal niklati hai and so rahi ria ko dekhti hai , voh ria ki
taraf dekhti hai jo kaafi thaki hui hai , rote hue usske aansoon sookh gaye
hain and voh chair par nidhaal hai , aankhen band hain jaisse rote hue
behosh ho gayi ho , she is looking very tired and weak,, aanchal usse iss
hall mien dekh kar khsuh hoti hai ,and usske chehre par muskaan aati hai
and she mutters ki ria tum mujhe abhi se door karne gayi tha , dekho
kya hall kar diya hai mien ne tumhaara and tabhi usse kissi ke chalne ki

aawaaz aati hai and we charge on aanchal , voh ria ki taraf dekhti hai and
muttres chhcchc , abhimanyu tumhaari iss haalat ko dekh kar saara pyaar
tum par udelega lekin uss bechaare ko to pata bhi nahi chalega ki jiss par
voy pyaar dikha raha hai voh tum nahi mine hoon and she enters into
rias body and tabhi abhi ek galss mien paani lekar aata hai , he looks at
ria , and usski aankhine moist hoti hai , apni ria ki haalat dekh kar voh
emotional hai , he is worried for riya, main kya karun riya, main nahin
dekh sakta tumhen iss tarah, tumhein kya ho gaya hai riya, he holds her
hand and cries, riya opens her eyes and abhi usse ek galss mien paani
deta hai ki pee lo ria and ab ria bani hui aanchal paani peeti hai , camera
wahee paas mien deewaar par tange hue mirror par jaata hai jahaan
hamien aanchal paani peeti hui dikhti hai , and paani peekar aanchal abhi
ki taraf turn karti hai to hamine ria ki shakal dikhti hai and she

pleads

mujhey khol do abhi, please take me to room, i am very hungry abhi, very
tired, please take me in room.. aissi saza mat do abhi , i know i did mistake,
but please take me to room..

he looks emotional, cant stand her emotional

plea, uth khada hota hai and usski rasssi kholne lagta hai , , and usska hath
pakad kar uthaata hai lekin ria se khada nahi hua jaata hai and voh
disbalance hokar abhi ki baanhon mien jaati hai and usski aankhon se
aansoon aate hain looks at abhi and painful aawaaz mien kahti hai ki mujhse
khada nahi hua jaa raha hai abhi , mine room tak nahi jaa paaongi , please
take me in your arms, abhi ria ki aankhon ka dard dekhta hai and usse apni
baanhon mine uthaata hai and tabhi revti ji aati hain , and voh ye dekh kar ki
abhi ne ria ko chair se aaazaad kar diya hai and usse uthaaye ue hai revti ji
shocked rah jaati hain and bahi ko rokti hai ki ye tumne kya kiya , guru ji ke
shishya kah kar gaya hai ki ye dangerous hai isse baandh kar rakho lekin abhi
unki taraf determination se dekhta hai and tells in an emotional tone ki chachi
she is my wife first, mine iss ghar mine isse agni ke saath phere lekar isss liye
nahi laaya hoon ki baandh kar rakhoon , mine apni ria ko takleef nahi de
sakta , mera wishwaas hai ki kaanha sab theek karenge , and he

walks

towards his room and we charge on revti jo hairat se abhi ko dekh rahi hain ,
and mutters ki abhi jaakar bhabhi saa se kahti hoon
Scenee 11 mandir int night

Rukmani , revti sheetal daadi sa

Mandir mien sab log hain ki tabhi revti wahaan agitated aati hai and she tells
ki abhi ne ria ko kho; diya hai and apne room mien le gaya hai , mien ne roka
to ussne kaha ki voh ria ki raksha karne ka vachan dekar usse laaya hai and
wahee karega jo usse sahi lagega , and we charge on rukmnai ji jinke chhere
par gussa hai , and revti ji says ki bhabhi ji dekha aapne kaise abhi ke sur e
badle hain zaroor ria ne isske saath bhi kucch kiya hai , and rukmani ji is
thoughtful and says ki ab to ria ke ghar waalon ko abhi ke abhi bulaana
padega isski history to pata chale ki ye shaadi ke baad aissi hui ya aissi hi
thi ,and she tells sheetal ki abhi ke abhi ria ke ghar waalon ko phone kar ke
bulaao , and sheetal nods

Scene 12 abhis room int night

Abhi , ria aanchal sheetal
Close of the door , Abhi door band karta hai and camera travels towards the
bed and we see ki wahaan ria nahi aanchal leti hui hai , (means ria ke shareer
mien ab aanchal hai) and voh abhi ko room ka darwaaza band karte hue
dekhti hain , usski aankhon mien romantic feeling hai and jaisse hi abhi turn
hota hai usse bed par ria leti hui dikhti hai ,waisse hi thaki hui , tensed , tooti
hui and abhi usske paas chalte heu aata hai and usske saamne ek chair par
baithta hai and usski taraf dekhta hai, and abhi ke face reaction change ho
rahe hain and voh kadak aawaaz mien poochta hai ki ria ye sab kya ho raha
hai ?? aaj mujhe tum sach sach bataao , kya sach mien guru ji ko tumne
dhakka diya ?? and ria usski taraf dekhe jaa rahi hai and abhi says ki agar
tumhaare pet mien dard utha aur tum restaurant se bhaag kar aayi to hospital
jaati , doctor bulaati lekin tumne guru ji ko kyon bulaaya ?? ria usski taraf
dekhe jaa rahi hai and abhi further says ki uss raat tum club chali gayi mujhe
bina bataye hue ussey pehle tum kabristan gayi thi.. aaj din bhar tum gayab
rahi aur fir mandir mein Pooja karti payi gayi aakhir ho kya gaya hai tumhen
chakar kya hai ? aur phir tum kehti ho ki ye sab koi aur karta hai..aanchal
karti hai ..what do I make of it ? and ria bani hui aanchal shouts ki jhooth hai
ye sab.. na koi bhoot na pret , na koi aatma mere shareer mien aati hai, guru

ji ko mien ne nahi bulaaya unhone mujhe bulaaya , abhi reacts , he is shocked

to know this and ria says ki

voh iss ghar ko bewakoof bana kar daraaana

chaah rahe hain and abhi sawaal karta hai ki guru ji ko

dara kar kya

milega and aanchal says ki iss ghar ka control , ek baar voh sabko dara
denge to jo chahenge voh karenge , tum in guruon ko jaante nahi ho , ,let
abhimanyu question here ki batao unhen darakar kya milega ? let aanchal
answer that koi aatma nahi hai yahaan , koi negative energy nahi hai
yahaan , jaisse hi mien aayi mien ne unhien ajeeb se haalat mien dekha voh
apne shishya ke saath yahaan mauka dekh kar negative energy basaana chaah
rahe the, mien ne unki in sab baaton ko oppose kiya to unhone mujhe khud
chair se baandha and accidently khud voh seedhiyon se gire negative energy ne
unko overpower kar liya tha isliye , and abhi ki samajh mine nahi aa raha
hai ki abhi kucch der pahle ria guru ji ka favour kar rahi thi and ab guru ji ko
villain kyon bana rahi hai and yahee sawaal voh ria se karti hai and ria says
kim maa ji ki aur iss ghar waalon ki guru ji par shradhdha hai jab tak mere
paas unke khilaaf saboot nahi honge mine unka asli roop kaisse dikha doon ,
lekin abhi ko ria ki baat par yakeen nahi hai and ria bani hui aanchal bed se
uthti hai and abhi ke paas aati hai and usske sarr par apna haath rakhti hai
and says ki tumse zyaadah pyaar kissi se nahi karti , aanchal abhimanyu se
pyar karti hai..in that case she would not place her hand on him..wo apni
kasam kha sakti hai because she is a spirit ..but how can she do it if she loves
abhimanyu?( aanchal drama kar rahi hai , voh abhi ko yakeen dila rahi
hai , iss liye aissa kar rahi hai , ) What say? apne payar ki jhoothi kasam
nahi khaa sakti hoon lekin aaj khaaongi , tumhien wishwaas dilaane ke liye ki
mien jo kah rahi hoon voh sach hai , and we charge on abhi he is shocked ki
guru ji aissa kar sakte hain lekin ria ka haath usske sarr par hai and ria bani
hui aanchal uss se kahti hai ki aaj ke baad ek baat dhyaan rakhna ki agar ab
tumne kabhi mujhse ye baat poochne ki ya mujh par shak karne ki koshish
ki to mine apni jaan de doongi kyonki uss se bada koi kadam mere paas nahi
hoga and ria bani hui aanchal rone ka drama karti hai and abhi usske gale
laga leta hai , says sorry , mine ne tum par shak kiya , abhi

makes her

comfortable on bed and riya says, will you do one favor to me? he asks what
and she says, please send me to asylum .... heavy duty build up... abhi is
shocked and says what? she repeats, this is the only solution for me

abhi...ghar mien sab log mujhse nafrat karte hain , aaj mujhe chair par uss
shishya ne baandha aur kissi ne meri parwaah nahi ki , mujhe sach mien bhej
do assylum , and abhi usse daant ta hai ki bas , b ahut ho gaya bewkoofi ki
baatine , ab chup raho, and tabhi sheetal ki aawaaz aati hai ki abhi .. and
abhi reacts , darwaaza open karta hai and sheetal says ki maaji bula rahi
hain , and abhi turns and looks at ria banii hui aanchal lekin sheetal says
ki please ria ko aaram karne do , tumhien akele bula rahi hain maaji and
abhi ki samajh mien nahi aata hai ki aakhir aissi kya baat hui hai and
sheetal says ki please jaldi chalo and abhi nods and sheetal ke peeche
jaata hai

Scene 13 hall int night

Rukmani , revti sheetal daai sa lata vishesh , abhi
Scene empty frame mine lata ke enter hone se start hota hai , lata is quite
worried ki ria ke saath aissa ho raha hai aur hamien pata bhi nahi and we
reveal ki hall mine rukmani , daadi saa , revti , kailash ji ke satah lata and
vishes tensed baithe hain and tabhi sheetal ke saath abhi aata hai and voh bhi
lata and vishesh ko dekh kar chaunkta hai , abhi unhein wish karta hai lekin
lata uss se seedhe sawaal karti hai ki abhi tumne ya ria ne ek baar bhi hamine
nahi bataaya ki usske saath aisa ho raha hai and abhi rukmani ji ki taraf
dekhta hai usse nahi pata ki rukmnai ji ne in dono ko kitma kya bataaya hai
and rukmani ji says ki abhi ye dono ria ke maata pita hain inhien ham
andhere mien nahi rah sakte mine ne inhien bata diya hai ki aapki beti aaj kal
ajeeb si harkatine kar rahi hai kabhi kitchen se bhaagti hai ki meri saadi ka
pallu jal gaya aur kabhi hotel se bhaag aati hai ki usski tabiyat kharaab hai
and abhi realizes ki guru ji ki ghatna ke baare mien maaji ne in dono ko nahi
bataaya hai and abhi looks at lata and vishesh and says ki doctor ko dikhaaya
tha hamne aur unhone kaha ki shaadi ke baad kucch tension le liya hai
inhone , and vishesh uth khade hote hain says ki kiss baat ka tension , aissa
kya badal gaya shaadi ke baad abhi ?? and vishesh nazrein gadaaye hue abhi
ko dekh rahe hain and abhi says ki ek ladki ka accident hua tha jisse ria nahi
bacha paayi aur ussko na jaane kaise wahee ladki baar baar dikhaayi dene lagi

and voh ab uss ladki ki image apne saamne dekhti hai and darti hai and lata
says ki baat itni simple nahi ho skati hai abhi , mine apni ria ko jaanti hoon
bahut bahadur hai voh , hospital mine ussne bahut si mautien dekhi hain
lekin yahaan aane ke baad aissa kya hua?? and kailash ji uss se poochte hain
ki aapse ek baat vinamrata se poochna chaahenge ki kya shaadi ke pahle bhi
ria ke saath aissa kucch hua tha and lata and vishesh dono ek saath kahte
hain ki nahi , jo hua hai voh yahaan aane ke baad hua hai and iss baat par
rukmnai ji bhadak jaati hain ki aapke kahne ka matlab kya hai ki hamaare
ghar mien kucch hai , hamne kuchc kiya , arre aapko pata bhi hai ki aapki beti
ke liye ham log kitne pareshaan hain and lata ke chehre par bhi ghussa aata
hai and daadi saa dono logon ko chup karaati hain and says ki please ek dusre
ko dosh dene se kuchc nahi hoga , and she looks at lata and vishehs and says
ki aap logon ko bulaane ka maksad yahee tha ki aap log apni beti ke baare
mien jaane and hamien usske shaadi ke pahle ke baare ,mien pata chale ki
kaheen aissi ghatna pahle to nahi hui , aap ki beti hamaare ghar ki bahu hai
iss liye chinta ham dono ko hai , lata says ki ria kahaan hain hamine uss se
milna hai abhi,we pull back and see ria standing far away with out being
noticed but has been listening to the conversationbut when abhi ,vishesh
and lata turn to go towards her room ..she is not there . and abhi says ki abhi
to voh bahut thaki hui hai , sona chaah rahi hai kal; mil lijiyega and vishesh to
maan jaate hain lekin lata says ki nahi hamine abhi milna hai apni ria se , and
rukmani says ki mil lijiye and lata and vishehs ria ke room ki taraf badhte hain
and daadi abhi ko ishaara karti hain ki tum bhi jaao and abhi bhi unke peeche
peeche jaata hai
Scene 14 abhis room int night
Abhi

ria

aanchal

lata

vishesh

Idhar we see aanchal mirror ke saamne baith kar baalon mien kangha karne
lagti hai and tabhi darwaaza open hota hai and abhi ke saath lata and vishesh
darwaaze se enter karte hain and voh dekhte hain ki ria mirror ke saamne
apne ball bana rahi hai and abhi aawaaz deta hai ki ria dekho kaun aaya hai
and now ria turns( ab aanchal nahi ria hai , yaani anachal ria ke roopp mine
hai ) and maa baap ko dekh kar usske chehre par khushi nhai aati hai and

usske chehre par surprised recation aate hain ki aap log itni raat ko ?? and
lata jo kaafi emotionla hai sad hai aage badh kar ria ko gale laga leti hai and
ria uss se thoda tez aawaaz mien kahti hai ki mummy aap log bina phone kiye
hue kyon chale aaye , and vishesh and lata ko jhatka lagta hai and abhi also
reacts, lata says ki matlab ?? and ria says ki aap

ko mien ne uss din bhi

phone kar ke aane ke liye mana kiya tha lekin aap nahi maani ,and vishehs
and lata par ham charge karte hain and vishesh says ki beta hamien sheetal
ka phoen aaya tha ki tum and lata usski taraf aankh dikhatai hai and vishesh
chup ho jaata hai and ria tez aawaaz mien kahti hai ki mien kya ?? mien
beemaar hoon , mujh par bhoot pret chadha hai , jisse aap log utaarne aaye
hain , and now abhi is completely shocked , he says ki ria kya kah rahi ho tum
and ria drama karte hue rone lagti hai says ki na mien beemar hoon na hi
mere upar koi bhoot hai , ye sab maaji ka kiya dhara hai , unhien mien kabhi
bahu ke roop mien accept nahi thi , unka bass chale to mujhe paagalkhaane
mien bhijwa dein and ab sab iss allegation se sakte mien hain and ria apne
maan baap ki taraf dekh kar kahti hai ki aur aap log , aap log bhi unke haan
mien haan milaane aa gaye , aree aap logon ko to apni beti par bharosa hona
chaahiye , usse doctory padhaayi hai aapne , aur bhoot pret par yakeen karne
aa gaye , sab mere saat saazish ho rahi hai per main akela mukabla karne
mein saksham hoon.. and voh lata ka haath apne sarr par rakhti hai says ki
khaayiye meri kasam ki aaj ke baad aap kabhi iss ghar mien nahi aayengi ,
kabhi ye nahi samjhengi ki mine beemaar hoon and lata and vishesh ria ke iss
bartaav se hairaan hain and abhi l;ata ka haath hataata hai and vishesh and
lata se request karta hai ki please aaj aap log jaayiye , na jaane ria ko kya hua
hai jo aapse aisse behave kar rahi hai ham subah baat karenge and we charge
on lata and vishesh jinki aankhon mien ria ko dekh kar aanssoon hain and
dono

ria se kahte hain ki theek hai sorry hamne aakar ghalti ki ab nahi

aayenge and ria says ki jab aana hona mine aaongi aap se milne , apni beti par
wishwaa rakhiye voh theek hai and vishesh usske sarr par haath rakhte hain
and dono log wahana se jaate hain and unke peeche abhi bhi chhodne jaata
hai and we charge on aanchal , jo abhi and lata and vishesh ke jaane ke baad
aanchal ke roop mien aa gayi hai and khoob hans rahi hai
Sun rise shot
Scene 15 lata house int morning

Lata vishesh
Lata yahaan se wahaan , wahan se yahaan pace kar rahi hai and we see ki
usske saamne vishesh hai and lata says ki mine maan hi nahi sakti ki voh
meri ria thi jo mujhse aise baat kar rahi thi and vishesh says ki lekin thi to
apni ria hi na , mujhe to lagta hai ki usske saath uss ghar mien bahut torture
jo raha hai jo voh hamse kah nahi paa rahi hai iss liye irritate hai and lata
says ki mien

apni beti ko jaanti hoon voh kitni bhi irritate ho , kitni bhi

mushkil mine ho hamse badtameezi nahi kar sakti hai

Scene 16 abhis room/lata house int day
Abhi ,ria lata vishesh
Abhi so kar uth chuka hai and ria bed par so rahi hai and abhi bhi ek tak
usski taraf dekh raha hai and usske kaano mien kal raat lata and vishesh par
chilla rahi ria ki aawaaaz sunaayi de rahi hai and he picks up mobile and calls
up
Intercut
Lata ka phone ring hota hai and voh phone uthaati hai , abhi sabse pahle usse
wish karta hai and says ki I am really sorry mummy ji , kal raat ria ne aap
logon ke saath jo kiya mujhe usska bahut dukh hai lekin kaheen na kaheen
voh kissi tension mien hai and lata says ki abhi kabhi aissa hua hai ki ussne
tumse kucch bataane ki koshish ki hi aur tumne na suna ho and abhi soch
mien padta hai and usse flash aata hai
Flash
Ria abhi se baar baar kah rahi hai ki raat mien mine ne aissa nahi kiya jaissa
tum kah rahe ho and abhi usski baat usska halluciantion samajh kar ansuna
kar deta hai
Flahs back ends
And abhi lata se kahta hai ki yes aisssa hua hai and lata says ki usske dil ki
baat suno abhi , ho skata hai ki voh tumse kuchc kahna chaah rahi ho aur
tum hallucination ke naam par nahi sun rahe ho , we charge on abhi , he nods

and politely says ki aap sahi kah rahi hain , mien try karta hoon and he hangs
up and abhi ko aawaaz aati hai ki mien ne kal raat kya kiya abhi and abhi
reacts , usske peeche ria uth kar baithi hai and ussne usski phone par
mummy se ho rahi baat sun li hai and ria bed se uth kar khadi hoti hai
agitated hai and saysn ki kal raat kya hua ?? mummy papa kab aaye the and
abhi par ham charge karte hain and he is shocked and says ki tumhien yaad
nahi hai and ria says ki mujhe kucch nahi yaad hai , mien apne maa baap se
kabhi badtameezi nahi kar sakti , and abhi usske paas aata hai and usska
chehra apne samne karta hai and ria ke chehre par aansoon aate hain and
she says ki mujhe kucch yaad nahi hai and abhi politely uss se poochta hai ki
usse kya kya yaad hai and ria says ki usse bas itna yaad hai ki uss aghori and
aanchal ne mil kar guru ji ko maara and mujhe chair se baandh diya bas ,
usske baad mujhe kuchc yaad nhai hai ki mine kab room mien aayi , kab mere
mummy papa aaye , kab mine ne unki beizzati ki and abhi usse gale laga leta
hai and ab usse ehsaas ho raha hai ki jo kuchc bhi ria ne kaha voh ria nahi thi
and ria se kahta hai ki ria tumhaare saath kya kya hua mujhe ab bataao
And ria sab kuchc bata rahi hai and ham shot play karte hain
Kabristaan ka incident
Morgue ka incident
Club ka incident
Restuarnt ka incident
Guru ji ka incident
And we charge on abhi jisske chehre par ria ko sun kar gussa aa raha hai ,
usski anakhien laal hain , voh baar baar gusse se muththi bheench raha hai
and ria finally ro rahi hai says ki raat mien voh mere andar aa jaati hai and
abhi uss din window se jab mien ne usse tumhaare saath dekha to mujh par
kya beeti tum samajh nhai sakte ho and abhi ki aankhon mien aansoon aate
hain and voh ria ke aage haath jodta hai and says ki I am sorry , itne dino tak
tumhien akela chhod diya tha lekin ab nahi chhodoonga and ria says ki sabse
pahle guru ji ke paas jaana hoga , ab aage kya karna hai wahee hamien
bataaynege lekin ghar waale mujhe kaheen nahi jaane denge and abhi says ki

ab tum jahaan kahogi wahan mien chaloonga , jahaan chaahogi waheen

chalogi and ria abhi ko tight hug karti hai and we have round trolly treatment
jahaaan abhi and ria ek dusre ko hug kiye hue hain
Scene 17 hall int day
Kailash ji raman saarthak rukmani , daadi sheetal revti
Kailash ji ke saath raman ji and saarthka baithe hain , unke saamne daadi sa
and rukmani baithi hain , sheetal and revti ji dining table par naashta laga
rahi hain , raman ji and saarthak dono tensed hain and raman ji says ki
bhabhi ham logon ke na rahne par ye to bahut badi ghatna hui hai , saarthak
asks ki guru ji kaisse hain , mien abhi hospital jaakar unse milta hoon and
kailash ji says ki guru ji ke shishya unhien raat mien hi hospital se aashram
le gaye , kyonki unhien paralysis hua hai to ab usse theek hone mien to kuchc
time lagega , , and raman ji says ki abhi se baat karni padegi , bahut serious
maamla hai ye , tabhi ria ko lekar abhi aata hai and ria sabko wish karti hai
and sab log ria ko dekh rahe hain, all of them are feeling hesitant and angry to
talk to her, she apologizes to them for last night, i called guru ji and i know all
that happened with him happened because of me,

rukmani looks at her

angrily , and daadi saa ria ko baithne ko kahti hain lekin abhi says kio ham
log nashta nahi karenge ria ko lekar doctor ke paas jaana hai and rukmani
says ki aaj kaheen mat le jaao , ghar mine aaram karne do , lekin abhi with full
detremination se kahta hai ki nahi maa , aaj jaana bahut zaroori hai and voh
kailash ji ki taraf dekhta hai and he says ki theek hai agar doctor ke paas le
jaaana zaroori hai to le jaao and pahli baar ria apne ghar waalon ke saamne
front gate se abhi ke saath jaa rahi hai and abhi ka saath hone par usske
chehre par ek alag confidence hain
Cut to
Scene 18 aahsram int day
Guru ji shishya , ria., abhi
We cut

to guru ji s aashram , ek hard bed par voh lete hue hain , unke

chaaron taraf shishya hain ,. Ek shishya unke hatah pair ko mor ke pankhe se
sahla raha hai , koi shishya unhien glass mine jadi booti de raha hai , tabhi ek

shishya gusse se bhara hua enter karta hai and chillaata hai ki voh ria aayi
hai , jissne guru ji ka ye hall kiya hai andar aane ko kah rahi hai , usske sath
abhimanyu bhi hai , and saare shishya gusse se bhar jaate hain and says ki
usse aaj kissi bhi haalat mien andar nahi aane denge , ussi ki wajah se
guru ji ka ye hall hua hai they should not sound like gunday in dialogue
..they are just emotionally charged.., guru ji is listening to all of this and he is
wanting to say something, he does gestures with his hands but no one is
looking at him , and shishya gusse se decide karte hain ki voh jaakar ria ko
khaded denge , and we charge on guru ji jo helpless feel kar rahe hain , and iss
se pahle ji shishya baahar ki taraf jaayein guru ji kissi taraf apme pairon ke
paas rakha hua peetal ka lota pairon se giraaana chahte hain lekin unke pair
move nahi hote hain and ab voh kya karein , voh bhagwaaan ka naam lete hain
and kissi taraf lote ko hilaate hain , and lota neeche girta hai aawaaz aati hai
and shishya unki taraf turn karte hain , and guru ji sign language se kate hain
ki ria ko lekar aao ,pahle to guru ji ki baat koi samajh nahi paata hai lekin jab
voh dobaarah samjhaate hain and ek shishya samajh jaata hai , and voh sabse
kahta hai ki guru ji ria ko andar bula rahe hain and shishya reacts ki aissa
kyon lekin ek shishsya ria ko lene bhaagta hai and we charge on guru ji , he is
thoughtful , voh ishaara karte hain ki mujhe utha kar baithaao and kuchc
shishya unhien saahaara dekar utha kar baithaate hain and tabhi ek shishya
ria ko lekar aata hai, usske saath abhi hai and dono unke saamne hatah jod
kar khade hote hai , ria and abhi dono guru ji ki haalat dekh kar dukhi hain
and unse baar baar maafi maang rahe hain , and ria ki aankhon se aansoon
bahte hain and voh baar baar guru ji se maafi maang rahi hai ki mujhe maaf
kar dijiye meri wajah se aapka ye hall hua ,ria doctor hai jo mareezon ki madad
karti aayi hai..infact yahan pe uske karan guruji has suffered..being a doctor
ria gives medical assurance to guru ji , she says ki paralysis ke treatment ke
liye india ke best doctor ko mien ne apne dean sir se baat kar ke yahaan
bulaaya hai kal voh aa jaayenge , aap ekdam theek ho jaayenge guru ji ..
she holds his feet and cries, asks for apology that she caused this pain to him..
guru ji tries to shake his head in negation... he is also emotional , and voh
ria ko ishaare se kuchc bataate hain lekin ria usse samajh nahi paa rahi
hai , voh abhi ki taraf dekhti hai lekin voh bhi kuchc samajh nahi paa
raha hai and guru jo ko ishaara karne m,ine kasht ho raha hai and unka

shishya unhien mana karta hai ki guru ji kuchc mat kahiye , and guru ji
ko to ab communicate karna hai voh kya karen , and voh ussi shishya ki
taraf dekhte hain and voh uss se kuchc gesture karte hain and shishya
unka gesture samajh kar waheen paas rakhi hui gulaal jo ek packet mien
rakhi hai uthaata hai and guru ji shishya ko gesture karte hain ki gulaal
muththi mine uthaao and voh shishya gulaal muththi mien leta hai and
we charge on ria and abhi dono gulaal ki taraf dekh rahe hain and guru ji
uss shishiya ko ishaara karte hain ki gulaal waali muththi mere paas laao
and shishya muththi unki taraf karta hai and guru ji uss gulaal ko apne
maathe ke paas karne ka ishaara karte hain , shishya gulaal waali muththi
umnke maathe ke paas karta hai and ria and abhi intrigue ke saath dekh
rahe hain and guru ji honth hila kar kuchc mantrochaar kar rahe hain
unke munh se shabd nahi nikal rahe hain lekin ye clearly pata chal raha
hai ki voh manytrochaar kar rahe hain and mantrochaar ke baad voh
muththi par phhnkte hain and shishya ki taraf ishaara karte hain ki iss
gulaal ko hawa mien uda do and shishya uss muththi ko khol kar hawa
mien gulaal udaata hai and gulaal hawa mien uss kar zameen mien girti
hai

and .we charge on abhi and ria and

both abhi and

riya looks

shocked, and guru ji ki taraf dekhte hain ,

guru ji nods positively.. we

charhe on rias face , usski nazar zameen par

padti hai jahaan gulaal iss

tareeke se zameen par girti hai ki uss se likh jaata hai ki hue guru jike
khoon se sane hue words par padti hai ki usski laash ko jaata ki uss
aanchal ke mrat shareer ko jala do aur mukt ho jaao , full on build up ,
zameen par giri hui gullal se guru ji ne sandesha de diya hai and we
charge on abhi and ria , a hope comes on rias face and she decides, kissi bhi
keemat pe i will have to burn her dead body. Chargee build up and abhi ria ka
haath pakadta hai jaisse voh uss mission mien usske saath ho and ab ria and
abhi dfono ke chehre par detremination hai and ham dono ke chehron ke
determkination par freeze karte hain

FREEZE.