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SPM MODULE SET 2 2014
PAPER 1
DIRECTED WRITING
This question is assessed as follows:

1) Allocation of Marks:

FORMAT : 3 marks
CONTENT : 12 marks
LANGUAGE : 20 marks
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TOTAL 35 marks
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2) FORMAT AND CONTENT MARKS:


FORMAT

MARKS


i) F1 = Title
ii) F2 = Byline (reported by)
iii) F3 = Write in paragraphs

1
1
1

Sub-total 3

CONTENT
(All keywords must be mentioned or paraphrased before any content point can be awarded.
If any idea is incomplete, content point cannot be awarded)

C1 Learn new skills 1
E1 Elaboration on C1 1
C2 Meeting new friends 1
E2 Elaboration on C2 1
C3 Build self-esteem and self-confidence 1
E3 Elaboration on C3 1
C4 Gain new experience 1
E4 Elaboration on C4 1
C5 Teach your skills to others 1
E5 Elaboration on C5 1
C6 Develop a sense of achievement 1
E6 Elaboration on C6 1
Sub-total 12
Grand Total 15


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DIRECTED WRITING - LANGUAGE (20 Marks)
Mark Range Description of Criteria

A
19 20
Language is accurate. Occasional first draft slips.
Effective use of varied sentence structures.
Vocabulary is sophisticated and precise.
Punctuation is accurate and helpful to reader.
Spelling is accurate.
Paragraphs have unity and are appropriately linked.
Style and tone are appropriate for an article.


B
16 18
Language is almost always accurate. Minor errors or first draft slips.
Sentences show some variation in length and type.
A few mistakes in grammar, especially in complex structures.
Wide vocabulary and can convey shades of meaning.
Punctuation is almost always accurate.
Spelling is nearly always accurate.
Paragraphs show some unity and are appropriately linked.
Style and tone are generally appropriate for an article.



C
13 15
Language is largely accurate to communicate meaning clearly.
Simple structures have no errors. Errors may occur in complex
structures.
Vocabulary is wide but may lack precision.
Sentences show some variety of structure and length but there is mainly
one type of structure.
Punctuation in simple structures is accurate. Errors in complex
structures.
Spelling of simple words correct. Errors may occur in sophisticated
words.
Paragraphs may show some unity. Links may be absent or
inappropriate.
Style shows some understanding and there may be occasional lapses in
the tone.


D
10 12
Language is sufficiently accurate.
Patches of clarity, especially when simple structures are used.
Some variety in sentence length and type. May not arouse interest or
enhance meaning.
Vocabulary is usually adequate and lacks precision.
Simple words are spelt correctly. Errors in unfamiliar words.
Sentence separation errors may occur.
Punctuation is generally correct but does not enhance/clarify meaning.
Style and tone may not always be appropriate for an article.


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Mark Range Description of Criteria

E
7 9
Meaning is never in doubt. Single word errors frequent and serious to
hamper reading.
Simple structures may be accurate but not sustained for long.
Vocabulary is limited and too simple or imperfectly understood.
Simple words are spelt accurately. Mistakes in difficult words.
Paragraphs lack unity and links are incorrect.
Errors in sentence separation and punctuation.
Style and tone may fail to achieve the requirements of an article.


U (i)
4 6
Meaning is usually fairly clear.
High incidence of errors impedes the reading.
A few simple structures are used correctly.
Vocabulary is simple and inadequate.
Frequent spelling errors.
Paragraphs show a lack of planning.
Errors in sentence separation.
Style and tone are inappropriate for an article.

U (ii)
2 3
Some sense can be made out of the script. Reader has to re-read and
re-organise before meaning becomes clear.
High density of errors causes blurring.
Unlikely to be more than one or two accurate sentences.


U (iii)
0 1
Almost unrecognisable as English.
Whole sections of the article may make no sense at all or are copied
from the task.
Award 1 mark if the article makes some sense.
Award 0 if the script makes no sense at all from the beginning to the
end.








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SECTION B : CONTINUOUS WRITING ( 50 Marks )
MARKING SCHEME

Mark Range

Description of Criteria
A
44 50

Language is entirely accurate. Very occasional first draft slips.
Sentence structures are varied.
Vocabulary is wide and used with precision.
Punctuation is accurate and helpful.
Spelling is entirely accurate.
Paragraphs are well-planned, have unity and are linked.
Topic is addressed with consistent relevance.
Interest of the reader is aroused and sustained throughout the
writing.

B
38 43

Language is accurate. Occasional errors are minor or first draft
slips.
Vocabulary is wide enough with some precision.
Sentences show some variation of length and type with some
complex sentences.
Punctuation is almost always accurate.
Spelling is nearly always accurate.
Paragraphs show some planning, have unity and are usually
appropriately linked.
Writing is relevant to the topic.
Interest of the reader is aroused and sustained through most
of the time.

C
32 37

Language is largely accurate.
Simple structures have no errors. Errors may occur in complex
structures.
Vocabulary is wide enough to convey meaning but may lack
precision.
Punctuation in simple structures is accurate. Errors in complex
structures.
Spelling of simple words correct. Errors may occur in
sophisticated words.
Paragraphs may show some unity. Links may be absent or
inappropriate.
Some interest is aroused but not sustained.





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Mark Range

Description of Criteria
D
26-31
Language is sufficiently accurate.
Patches of clarity, especially when simple structures are used.
Some variety in sentence length and type but purpose not
clearly seen.
Vocabulary is usually adequate but lacks precision.
Simple words are spelt correctly. Errors in unfamiliar words.
Sentence separation errors may occur.
Punctuation is generally correct but does not enhance/clarify
meaning.
Writing has some relevance but lack in liveliness and interest
value.

E
20 25
Errors are sufficiently frequent and serious to hamper reading
but meaning is never in doubt.
Some simple structures may be accurate but unlikely to sustain
accuracy for long.
Vocabulary is limited and too simple to convey precise
meaning.
Frequent mistakes in the more complex vocabulary. Simple
words may be spelt correctly.
Frequent mistakes in punctuation make reading difficult.
Paragraphs are haphazardly arranged and lack unity.
The subject matter may show some relevance to the topic.
High incidence of linguistic errors may distract the reader.

U (i)
14 19
Meaning is fairly clear but high incidence of errors throughout
the writing impedes the reading.
Various kinds of serious errors but mainly single word type.
Sentences are simple and very often repetitive.
Punctuation is sometimes used correctly but sentence
separation errors may occur.
Paragraphs lack unity or there may not be any paragraphs at
all.
U (ii)
8 - 13
Single and multiple word errors make the reader read and re-
read to get some sense out of the script.
Only a few accurate simple sentences.
Content may be comprehensible but the high incidence of
linguistic errors may make meaning blur.
The script may be far short of the required number of words.

U (iii)
0 - 7
Almost entirely impossible to read.
Whole sections may make little or no sense at all.
Marks should be awarded where occasional clear patches
occur.
Award 0 if the script makes no sense from the beginning to the
end.
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PAPER 2
SECTION A
1 B 11 D
2 A 12 B
3 B 13 A
4 B 14 B
5 A 15 A
6 C
7 B
8 A
9 C
10 A

SECTION B
16 Water pollution
17 Air pollution
18 Large scale air and water pollution
19 Water source unsuitable for human consumption
20 Aquatic organisms and creatures die
21 Affects the livelihood of fishermen
22 Factories are monitored constantly
23 Errant factory owners can be charged in court and fined
24 Factories are also required to install pollution control mechanisms and treatment
mechanisms
25 Only licensed contractors are allowed to treat and dispose off hazardous wastes
SECTION C
26 A white male Akita dog
27 (a) Agricultural Department of the Tokyo University
(b) Commuted to the agricultural department in Komaba and the agricultural experimental
station in Nishihara
28 (a) Professor Uenos death
(b) followed his master in death
29 Loyal
i. A bronze statue was erected.
ii. Hachiko was mounted and stuffed.
30 Accept any logical answer.

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31. SUMMARY POINTS
C1 devotion of an Akita dog, Hachiko
C2 faithful pet of Dr. Eisaburo Ueno, a professor at Tokyo University.
C3 Dr. Ueno did not return
C4 had suffered a stroke and died
C5 for the next nine years, Hachiko waited for his beloved master.
C6 Nothing could discourage Hachiko from waiting
C7 In March l934, Hachiko died
C8 He was made famous by a news article
C9 A statue of Hachiko to be erected in the station
C10 Contributions from the United States and other countries were received
C11 pays silent tribute to the breed's faithfulness and loyalty
C12 mounted and stuffed
C13 on display at Tokyo Museum of Art.

SECTION D
Question 32
a Her village mate.
b Most of the villagers have migrated to the town.
c Idleness/negative trait of the village mate
d Yes/No. Accept any suitable justification.