CORRECTIONS EXERCISE ONE: INTRODUCE YOURSELF
ENGLISH CLASS ( http://www.palabea.net/class_rooms/3/show)
SPECIAL THANKS TO FRANKIE AND MARC!!
/They have checked our posts!!
ORIGINAL MESSAGE
Hi,
my name is Roland. I’m from Germany. I’m
here to improve my language skills and to meet
other people from everywhere on the world.
Hi I’m Pat I live in Italy. I like travelling,
reading and listening to music – almost all kind
of music. I would like to improve english and
learn german and spanish and learn more about
other cultures.
I think it’s a marvelous idea to have a forum
where to help each other. I’m new at Palabea so
I hope to learn quickly how to move.
Hi
My name is hadi.I am from Iran . I’m here to
improve my English.
Howdy folk! I’m Slava by name and came here
to get a good boost of my language skills. I like
mysticism, psychology, gaming, D&D, politics,
communication to people from all over the
world and many other things). Russia is my
Motherland =)
Hi. My name’s Valentina. I come from Italy. I
would like to improve my Emglish. I study
Languages at “università degli Studi di Lecce”. I
like listening to music , watching film in the
original language, in particular in english.
Bye
Hi people. My name is Sergi and i’m here
because i want to imporve my english, and i
think that this web is a good way to do it. I’m
26, and i have a lot of hobbies like football,
tenis, running etc. and i’m a football’s referee.
Now i’m finishing my studies in the Universidad
de Barcelona. the next year i’ll be a phyisical
education teacher.
ENGLISH CORRECTIONS
(none)
Hi I’m Pat I live in Italy. I like travelling,
reading and listening to music – almost all kinds
of music. I would like to improve my English
and learn German and Spanish and (also)learn
more about other cultures.
I think it’s a marvelous marvellous idea to have
a forum where (to) people can help each other.
I’m new at Palabea so I hope to learn quickly
how to move (?).
Hi
My name is Hadi. I am from Iran . I’m here to
improve my English.
Howdy folks! I’m Slava by name and came here
to (get a good) boost (of) my language skills. I
like mysticism, psychology, gaming, D&D,
politics, communication (to) with people from
all over the world and many other things).
Russia is my Motherland =)
Hi, my name is Valentina. I come from Italy and
I would like to improve my English. I study
languages at “università degli Studi di Lecce”. I
like listening to music and watching films in the
original language, English films in particular.
Other also: ...... watching films in their original
language, especially English films.
Hi people. My name is Sergi and I’m here
because I want to improve my English. I think
this web is a good way to do it. I’m 26, and I
have a lot of hobbies like football, tennis,
running etc. and I’m a football referee.
Now I’m finishing my studies in (at)the
Universidad de Barcelona. the next year I’ll be a
physical education teacher.( sports teacher)
Halo! Apa kabar? :D
my name is amira, i’m 14 going on 15 years old
and i’m indonesia. uh…apparently i’m the
youngest huh? lol. i’m here to uh.. 1st of all i
want to make friends with people across the
globe, 2nd is i want to get to know each
country’s culture and else, and the 3rd is to
improve my english. I love music, piano,
writing, jokes, chats, food, drink, and any other
crazy stuffs. glad to meet you all! :D
Hi! I’m Natalia, I’m 18 going on 19 years old
and I’m from Poland. I like first of all sport.
Volleyball, football(soccer), swimming,
handball, skijumping;) I like listening to music,
dancing, acting and singing. This year I have
secondary school certificate (in polish it names
“matura”) and I’m very nervous. Than I would
like to go to Sports Academy;)
I’m here, because I want to improve my english
and I would like to know people from all world:)
My name is Nico, I’m from Vigo North-West of
Spain, I think english is a very useful language
and I like it. I would like to listen englis’s songs
and to can understand what it means.
I work in the alternative energy field and I enjoy
read about that but many texts are in english.
I like more the technique than the literature but I
woul like to read books in englis and to can
watch movies in english without to have read the
subtitles and lose what it’s happening in the
scream.
Of course I like to know different people with
their own culture and talk with their.
Halo!Apa kabar? :D
My name is Amira, I’m 14 going on 15 years old
and I’m from Indonesia. uh…apparently I’m the
youngest huh? lol. I’m here to uh.. 1st of all I
want to make friends with people across the
globe, 2nd (is) I want to get to know each
country’s culture and (else ??), and the 3rd is to
improve my English. I love music, piano,
writing, jokes, chats, food, drink, and any other
crazy stuff(s). glad to meet you all! :D
Hi! I’m Natalia, I’m 18 going on 19 years old
and I’m from Poland. I like first of all sport.
Volleyball, football, swimming, handball,
skijumping;) I like listening to music, dancing,
acting and singing. This year I have secondary
school certificate (in Polish (it names) it is called
“matura”) and I’m very nervous. Than I would
like to go to Sports Academy;)
I’m here, because I want to improve my English
and I would like to know people from all over
the world:)
OPTION 1)
Hi,
My name is Nico, I’m from Vigo North-West of
Spain, I think English is a very useful language
and I like it. I would like to listen englis’s songs
in English and to can understand what it means.
(I would like to listen English songs and to be
able to understand them.
I work in the alternative energy field and I enjoy
read about that but many texts are in english. (I
work in alternative energy technologies field. I
enjoy reading about this, but many texts are
written in English))
I like more the technique than the literature but I
woul like to read books in englis and to can
watch movies in english without to have read the
subtitles and lose what it’s happening in the
scream. (I prefer technology to literature but I
would like to read books in English and be able
to watch movies in English without having to
read the subtitles and lose what is happening on
screen)
Of course I like to know different people with
their own culture and talk with (their) them.
 Optionb)My name is Nico, I'm from Vigo,
northwest of Spain. I think English is a very
useful language and I like it. I would like to
listen to English songs and understand what they
mean (or understand the lyrics).
I would like to ---> listen to English songs and
understand what they mean (which means
listening to the song and understanding the
lyrics at the same time, and not having two
separate actions happening one after the other,
which is implied if one writes... to listen to
English songs and to understand...)
I work in the field of alternative technologies. I
enjoy reading about this field but a lot of the
literature is in English . I like to learn more
about the techniques in the field more than the
literature, although I would really like to read
English books in general. I also like to watch
English movies without having to read the
subtitles since I lose sight of what is happening
on-screen when I do so.
Of course, I like to get to know people of
different cultures and talk with them

Hello all! (none)

I’m Uthman, 27 years old. I come from Libya. I
joined this class to improve my English and
make new friends, so we can help each other.
My level is high intermediate. I spend most of
my time learning English, so I can say it has
become my hobby!
Helo, I am Xabier from Basque. I work in a Hello, I am Xabier from Basque. I work in a
sailing company and I often use english in my sailing company and I often use English in my
work. That is the reason why I want learn more work. That is the reason why I want learn more
english. English.
I am interested in sports like soccer (european I am interested in sports like soccer (european
football), surf, snowboarding and, of course, in football), surf, snowboarding and, of course, in
sailing. sailing.
I am pleased to meet you. I am pleased to meet you.

Hello! none
My name is Sveta, 32 years old. I live in
Germany. I’m here to improve my English.
English is very important nowadays, I think.

Hi everybody! I’m Cinzia, I’m from Naples, none

Italy. I like reading, surfing the web, listening to
the music and, of course, improving my
English :)
Hi,
My name is Tobias and I’m from Germany. I
like sports, travelling (especially Australia) and
reading. I joined the English class to improve
my English. I’m here at palabea to improve my
language skills, maybe learn something about
other cultures and maybe meet some people
from other countries.
cheers Tobias
Hi,
I am Isilda, I come from Portugal and I live in
England with my husband, my son, my daughter
and my brother. I am here since 2005. I am
studying English, this year is my last year free
study, today I did my English test level 2. I like
English but I really have difficulty with
pronunciation, and I work hard for change that.
Maybe we together can learn English, and
practice as well. Why we don’t create a group,
maybe we can meet on MSN or other way.
Maybe any teacher can give us a hand and create
an interesting learn group. All together can make
a difference.
Hello from Athens , i am 29 years old and i am
trying to improve my English ,
but with out success , i cant understand how all
these classrooms work ….
i am very happy when read Patricia msg.
Hi,
I am Dmitry (or Dima, doesn’t matter). I live in
Belarus and want to improve my English
because it’s important for me and my job. I’m
programmer and every day I need to read
different books, forums, articles and etc in
English. Additionally I need to write letters to
our customers and it’s so hard for me! I study
English for about 6 or 8 months and now my
English level is “elementary”. Yeah, not so
good, as I can and I need.
First them all I want to know how we can helps
to each other in our groups? I’m novice at
palabela.
p.s. I can consult anyone who wants to learn
Hi,
(I am) My name is Isilda, I come from Portugal
and I live in England with my husband, my son,
my daughter and my brother. I am here since
2005. I am studying English, this year is my last
year free study, today I did my English test level
2. I like English but I really have difficulty with
pronunciation, and I work hard (for) to change
that.
Maybe we together can learn English, and
practice as well. Why we don’t create a group,
maybe we can meet on MSN or some other way.
Maybe (any) a teacher can give us a hand and
create an interesting learning group. All together
can make a difference.
Hello from Athens , i I am 29 years old and i I
am trying to improve my English ,
but with out success , i I can’t (cant) understand
how all these classrooms work ….
i I am very happy when I read Patricia’s msg.
Hi,
I am Dmitry (or Dima, it doesn’t matter). I live
in Belarus and want to improve my English
because it’s important for me and my job. I’m a
computer programmer and every day I need to
read different books, forums, articles (and) etc in
English. Additionally I need to write letters to
our customers and it’s so hard for me! I (study)
have studied English for about 6 or 8 months
and now my English level is “elementary”.
Yeah, not so good, (as I can and I need) and I
need to improve.
First them all I want to know how we can
help(s) to each other in our groups? I’m a novice
at palabela.
Russian.
Hello.
I’m Evgenii. i’m programmer. Russia is my
Motherland too.
That’s all.
Hi,
My name is Adriana, I’m 28 years old, I was
born and I live in Brazil, I work and I’m doing
postgraduation at Labour Law. I decided to came
to palabea because I studied English just when I
was a child and I was forgetting the vocabulary
and grammar. When I have free time I like to go
to the beach, cinema, have fun with friends, rock
music, internet, tours…
hi, mi name in leyder, i am 21 years old, i live in
Cali (Colombia), i`m student, and i come here to
improve mi english and Pronunciation.
mi hoobies are the movies, the music, friends,
nature, write and read.
Hi guys, I’m Eugenia from Taiwan but now
having my MA program in Freiburg, Germany.
I love learning languages and reading (especially
those classic literatures). Nice to meet you all
here :)
Hi there! none
I’m Joanna – from Poland. I’d like to meet
people from all over the world, and the Palabea
is the best place to do it:)
And of course – I’d like to improve my English.
I hope it will be great fun!
Joanna
Hello, I am Bai Lu 7984 (I like my nickname), I Hello, I am Bai Lu 7984 (I like my nickname), I
am from Ecuador and study the last year of am from Ecuador and study the last (am
architecture. I want improve my english, a lot. studying the final) year of architecture. I want
improve my English, a lot.
Hello,
My name is Nathalieé and I am 23 years old. I
live on the east coast in Sweden, not to far away
from Stockholm. And I guess that I want to learn
p.s. I can (consult with anyone) be consulted by
anyone who wants to learn Russian.
Hello.
I’m Evgenii. I’m a programmer. Russia is my
Motherland too.That’s all.
Hi,
My name is Adriana, I’m 28 years old, I was
born and I live in Brazil (I was born in Brazil
where I live), I work and I’m doing
postgraduation at (postgraduate studies in)
Labour Law. I decided to came (come) to
palabea because I studied English just when I
was a child and I was forgetting the vocabulary
and grammar. When I have free time I like to go
to the beach, cinema, have fun with friends, rock
music, internet, tours…
hi, mi (my) name in leyder, I am 21 years old, I
live in Cali (Colombia), (i`m) I’m a student, and
I come here to improve mi my English and
Pronunciation.
(mi hoobies) My hobbies are the movies, the
music, friends, nature, (write and read) writing
and reading.
Hi guys, I’m Eugenia from Taiwan but now
having (doing) my MA program in Freiburg,
Germany.
I love learning languages and reading
(especially literary classics) Nice to meet you all
here :)
Hello,
My name is Nathalieé and I am 23 years old. I
live on the east coast in (of) Sweden, not too far
away from Stockholm. And I guess that I want
more about the English language, you are never to learn more about the English language, you
fully learned after all. are never fully learned after all. (you have never
learned everything after all)
Hi, there. ^^
My name is Vanessa and I am 18 years old. I
live in the middle of Germany and I like the
English language, but my skill in languages is
not good, so I want to improve it. My biggest
problems are the formulation and the
vocabularies. I am sure, that I can talk with
someone in English and that we will understand
each other, but I want to talk a pretty good
English. Well, English is important nowadays,
and it is a beautiful language, so why shall we
not learn and use it correctly?
Yours, Makochou
BS”D
Hello everybody,
My name is Nadja. I am a 23-year-old woman
dwelling in Sweden. I am LilyBerg’s sister. I am
here to improve my English too. I am interested
in religion, history, society, cultures and
languages with more. I am a kind girl so feel
free to message me if you want!
Peace!
Nadja
Hi everybody,
I’m Elaheh, from Iran.It’s been a long time I
haven’t checked my account here,but now I have
enough time ( but only for 2 weeks) to do
something with my English learning and also
find some good friends. well,I’m tired of
learning English by reading about grammer and
I want to improve it by speaking.
I really like to travel all over the world.I don’t
like to stay in a place for a long time.books and
music are my two eternal friends.I use to watch
movies a lot but since I’m busy with my
university activities,I’ve no more time for it.I’m
a member of a student society at the university
and most of my time is spent with its activities.
God bless you and sorry if I have talked too
much!
wow apparently i’m still holding the record of
Hi, there. ^^
My name is Vanessa and I am 18 years old. I
live in the middle of Germany and I like the
English language, but my skill in languages is
not good, so I want to improve it. My biggest
problems are the formulation (grammar?) and
the vocabularies. I am sure, that I can talk with
someone in English and that we will understand
each other, but I want to talk (a) pretty good
English. Well, English is important nowadays,
and it is a beautiful language, so why shall we
not learn it and use it correctly?
Yours, Makochou
BS”D
Hello everybody,
My name is Nadja. I am a 23-year-old woman
dwelling (living) in Sweden. I am LilyBerg’s
sister. I am here to improve my English too. I am
interested in religion, history, society, cultures
and languages with (and) more. I am a kind girl
so feel free to message me (send me a message)
if you want!
Peace!
Nadja
Hi everybody,
I’m Elaheh, from Iran.It’s been a long time I
haven’t checked my account here, (It’s been a
long time since I checked my account here) but
now I have enough time ( but only for 2 weeks)
to do something with my English learning and
also find some good friends. well,I’m tired of
learning English by reading about grammer and
I want to improve it by speaking.
I really like to travel all over the world.I don’t
like to stay in a place for a long time.books and
music are my two eternal friends.I use to watch
movies a lot but since I’m busy with my
university activities,I’ve no more time for it.I’m
a member of a student society at the university
and most of my time is spent with its activities.
(spent on activities there)
God bless you and sorry if I have talked too
much!
wow apparently I’m still holding the record of
the youngest member to introduce herself in this
forum. haha anyway, nice meeting all you guys
here. if you need some help with english you can
contact me or what, i will surely help as much as
i could. :) also if you’re interested in learning
indonesia, please contact me. thanks :D
the youngest member to introduce herself in this
forum. haha anyway, nice meeting all you guys
here. if you need some help with English you
can contact me or what, i will surely help as
much as i could (can). :) also if you’re interested
in learning indonesian, please contact me. thanks
:D

Hi all ,
I’m Dave from Hong Kong. I would like to
improve my English skills in there.By the way, I
hope to meet other people from everywhere.
Hey all,
my name is Sebastian, I’m 17 years old and I’m
using this website to improve my English skills
as well. However I’d like to meet people from
other countrys and cultures. Futhermore I would
like to improve your German / English skills. I
thought about teaching German in England / GB
/ North-America / Austrila / New Zealand. So
I’ve you’d like to improve your spoken and
written skills in these languages just ask me :)
none
Hey all,
my name is Sebastian, I’m 17 years old and I’m
using this website to improve my English skills
as well. However I’d like to meet people from
other countrys (countries) and cultures.
Futhermore I would like to improve your
German / English skills. I thought about
teaching German in England / GB / North-
America / Australia / New Zealand. So I’ve (if)
you’d like to improve your spoken and written
skills in these languages just ask me :)

Hello none
I´m Paty and I live in Valencia (Spain). I´m very
happy to meet you all! I like reading,watch films
and fine arts.

Hi to everybody! My name is Marc and I’m a none

student of Patricia in her Spanish class. I’m from
Manila, Philippines and although I am Filipino, I
consider myself a native English speaker.
Actually, most Filipinos are bilingual and in our
house, we spoke both English and Filipino
(Tagalog) when we were growing up.
Anyway, if you need help with your English
skills, do let me know and I will see what I can
do.
I’m also practicing my Spanish so to the Spanish
speakers out there learning English, do write me
if you are willing to correspond with me and
correct my Spanish. I’m also looking for people
I can talk to in Spanish, maybe via Skype, to
practice my listening and speaking skills.
Actually, I love to learn about foreign cultures
and foreign languages, and I would love very
much to travel all over the world. It’s a very
expensive proposition though, so hearing about
your home and culture would be the next best
thing. I’ve studied a bit of Italian, Romanian,
and German but not enough to keep a
correspondence though.
I love food and drinks, be it Indian food
(chicken massala with chapati bread etc), Italian
food (spaghetti and pizza, of course!), Spanish
food (my wife cooks excellent paella, plus I love
her ropa vieja – old clothes, what a funny name
for a soup-goulash!... etc), German sausages and
beer (nurnberger sausages, die Brez’n und
Erdinger bier, naturlich!), Russian vodka
(although I can’t drink too much of it, too
strong!), Australian wine (or most new world
wines), Iranian kebab and dishes, Greek gyros
and mediterranean food (olive oil and stuff), etc.
The list is endless…
I also love rock music, and I play the electric
guitar, mostly rock instrumentals nowadays
(Steve Vai, Joe Satriani, etc)... If you want to
exchange notes with me, I’d love to hear from
you.
Ok, please feel free to write me and I hope I can
be of help to you as well :)
Regards!