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Concrete Poetry
Concrete Poetry is the use of words and their physical formation to convey meaning. This may be done with color, the shape of the letters, and/or the arrangement of words. Samples below show some of the many variations available. To view various forms of concrete poetrty on the Internet, click on the words in bold lettering in this sentence. ou may use the information you find at this link, but you may not publish it in anything other than a school report. Directions: !raphically create a scene using only words. "rom a distance this will look like a picture, but up close it will consist only of words and phrases. #o e$tra lines or shapes should be used. % light pencil line might be drawn first as a guide. &se colors, shapes, and si'es that will enhance the meaning of words.
%n alternative is to use a letter of the alphabet and create a phrase in which most of the words begin with that letter. The ma(or letter should be drawn so that it suggests the ob(ect you are describing.
0 city without *iolence !his classroo$ in silence 6asket all without a 'eno without a $all all
Ducks wearin& lipstick 1o ar ecue at a picnic ,ky without stars >ail with no ars !hrusdays without 1ew ;ork <nderco*er 6ein& orn without ha*in& a $other !he .akers after ,ha3 4arle$ without crack Pepsi without caffeine )*ery ni&ht ha*in& the sa$e drea$5 +++Tierra 3ones .!rade /01
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,tanFa 2 I I I I I I pretend (so$ethin& you really pretend to do# feel (a feelin& a out so$ethin& i$a&inary# touch (so$ethin& you i$a&ine you touch# worry (a worry that is real to you# cry (so$ethin& that $akes you *ery sad# a$ (the first line of the poe$ is repeated#
,tanFa 2 I I I I I I ,tudent )-a$ple: I 0" I a$ the wine and the future I wonder how $any ripples I will ha*e to swi$ I hear the trickle of ti$e in a itter ottle I see the translucent red drain fro$ the wine I want the sweet satin li3uid to stain $y ton&ue I a$ the wine and the future. understand (so$ethin& you know is true# say (so$ethin& you elie*e in# drea$ (a drea$ you actually ha*e# try (so$ethin& you $ake an effort to do# hope (so$ethin& you really hope for# a$ (the first line of the poe$ is repeated#
I pretend to entertain the &lowin& e$ ers I feel the dew that sours the &rapes I touch the *ine that &rows new life I worry the drunkard $ay speak the truth I cry the dewdrop tears on the winery walls I a$ the wine and the future. I understand the dust on the ottle I say it only $akes it sweeter with ti$e I drea$ the spon&e cork $ay ne*er e replaced y lips I try to &li$$er the crack in $y &lass container I hope the sun-faded la el ne*er creases for lost identity I a$ the wine and the future. --:atie 'eilly .!rade /01 )-ased on materials by Su'i :ee, Teachers ; 4riters Collaborative
Day J - Dia$onte
Dia$onte:
!he Krench word dia$ont $eans dia$ond. 0 DI0"+1!) is a se*en-line poe$ that &radually chan&es fro$ one idea to a direct opposite idea. When it is co$pleted( its total appearance is dia$ond shaped.
Pattern*
.ine 1 L 1oun .ine 2 L 0dBecti*e( 0dBecti*e .ine 2 - /er ( /er ( /er .ine 7 L 1oun( 1oun( 1oun( 1oun .ine ? L /er ( /er ( /er .ine @ L 0dBecti*e( 0dBecti*e .ine C L 1oun ,tudent )-a$ples:
Pattern*
.ine .ine .ine .ine 1 2 2 7 L L L L
+pposite of line C Descri e line 1 0ction a out line 1 2 nouns a out line 1 2 nouns a out line C .ine ? L 0ction a out line C .ine @ L Descri e line C .ine C L +pposite of line 1
.o*e 6ri&ht( Passionate Char$in&( Driftin&( 9rowin& Cherish( Infatuation( 0ntipathy( <ncarin& 0ni$osity( Kallin&( Dead Dark( Dis&ust 4ate +++,imiko -rantley .!rade /01
Day 10 - Cin3uain
0 CI1M<0I1 is a poe$ with fi*e lines. !here are a few thin&s to re$e$ er 1+! to do with a CI1M<0I1 or any short poe$: (1# don%t e te$pted to add e-tra words of sylla les to fill out the for$I (2# if e*ery line sounds Afinished(A there is a full stop at its end and it sounds orin&I and (2# a CI1M<0I1 should uild to a cli$a- and ha*e a surprise at the last line.
CI1M<0I1s can e of either of two patterns: one is uilt on the nu$ er of words in a lineI the second is ased on the nu$ er of sylla les in a line. W+'D P0!!)'1: .ine 1 L +ne Word (noun# ,u Bect N title of poe$ .ine 2 L !wo Words (adBecti*es# .ine 2 L !hree Words (*er s# .ine 7 L Kour words that relate feelin&s .ine ? L +ne word that repeats or refers to line 1 (su Bect# ,;..06.) P0!!)'1: .ine 1 L 2 sylla les .ine 2 L 7 sylla les .ine 2 L @ sylla les .ine 7 L G sylla les .ine ? L 2 sylla les oth colu$ns.
Kor$ula poe$s help you use words effecti*ely. help to $ake your work li*ely and e-citin&.
"ormulas*
H1: H2: H2: H7: H?: Participle( participle( participle 1oun 0d*er (how# /er 0d*er (where or when#
Samples*
H1: H2: H2: H7: H?: .eapin&( soarin&( flyin& !he superhero 1onchalantly Crashed Into the wall
!itle: Pick a color H1: Descri e so$ethin& associated to it H2: ,i$ile or $etaphor H2: 0d*er or ad*er phrase (where#
!itle: 9reen H1: "akes $e think of ,prin& H2: .ike a tree co*ered with lea*es H2: In a wooded forest.
!itle: Keelin& H1: !hree *er s H2: 0d*er (where# H2: Who has the feelin&
!itle: ,illy H1: !ickle( wi&&le( &i&&le H2: .yin& on the floor H2: "y a y sister
,o$eti$es it is hard to put your e$otions and feelin&s on paper. !he followin& patterns for poe$s are desi&ned to allow you to &et used to puttin& your e$otions into writin&. .ine H1: What if OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO .ine H2: I $i&ht OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO (lea*e a space etween lines 2 N 2# .ine H2: What if OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO .ine H7: I could OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO (lea*e a space etween lines 7 N ?# .ine H?: What if OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO .ine H@: I wouldOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO (lea*e a space etween lines @ N C# .ine HC: 0sk a 3uestion.
When I OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO (descri e an action# OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO (descri e where action takes place# (Write 2 to 2 words that descri e how you feel# I wish I couldOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO (descri e an action# (!ell the reason why#
!itle: )"+!I+1 .ine H1: I OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO (descri e what you did to show how you were feelin&# .ine H2: (Write 2 words that descri e how you felt# .ine H2: ("ake a state$ent or ask a 3uestion with re&ard to what is written in the first two lines#
If I could e OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I%d OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO (descri e what you would do# OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO (descri e how you would do it# OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO (descri e where you would do it# ()-cla$ation that shows how you would feel#
what it does how it does it where it is how it lea*es (as the ani$al would lea*e#
!4<1D)' !hunder co$es in loud .ike the $aBestic roar of a lion. It answers the call +f li&htenin& 6y strikin& fear into people. 0way( so$ewhere in the sky( ,o$ewhere in the unknown( 0n unknown *oice( 0nd then lea*es without a trace +f its e-istence )-cept in peoples% stories. +++<lia :iller .!rade 21 !o see so$e other e-a$ples of writin& a out weather( you can &o to the AWindy .an&ua&eA pa&e.
elow $ay help you( or you $ay use another word to show how
2. 0dd a few words to $ake the picture see$ $ore co$plete. !ell how +' where it arri*es. <se ad*er or prepositional phrases. If you wish( use a !4),0<'<, to find synony$s to replace o*erworked words. 2. !ell so$ethin& else the $onth or season does while it is here. 7. !ell how the $onth or season lea*es. 1+!): e sure you keep the sa$e co$parison ($etaphor# throu&hout the poe$. Don%t chan&e to a different picture. "+!I+1 W+'D, march stagger skip prance float tiptoe gallop hop limp hobble canter ,tudent )-a$ples: ><.; trud&es ri&ht in with a an&. It crawls around on the hot &round( leaps around spreadin& war$th( then &lides ri&ht out of the way. +++Tierra 3ones .!rade /01 ,)P!)"6)' creeps in 3uietly and unnoticed. It Bust sits there waitin&( wobble sneak 'oom tramp dance shuffle scurry spring glide flutter lurch creep stumble trot totter strut skate slide leap slink skulk crawl steal bound bounce dart lope trudge plod advance drag slip saunter
watchin& for so$ethin& to happen. !hen( Bust a 3uickly as efore( it creeps ack out. +++<lia :iller .!rade 21 1+/)"6)' slides in on clouds of snow and rain. It lows away the war$th( and sneaks in the cold( then dra&s away. +++6i' 4ebster .!rade 21
DI')C!I+1,: 1. Choose a picture that is not too A usy.A It should ha*e only one or two su Bects in it. <se the for$ula a o*e to write a out one o Bect in the picture. 2. Can you i$a&ine the o Bect doin& so$ethin& really silly -- or so$eone doin& so$ethin& silly with it5 <se the for$ula to write a out that. 2. I$a&ine so$ethin& stran&e happenin& to the o Bect or with it. Where is it happenin&5 <se the for$ula to write a out it. 7. I$a&ine the o Bect in a sad way. <se the for$ula to write once $ore. Where is this happenin&5
?. .ook at the four poe$s you ha*e written. 0re they four stanFas of one poe$5 If they are( co$ ine the$ into one poe$. 4ere are so$e other possi ilities for co$ inin& thou&hts a out the photo: I$a&ine A'eal and 6eautifulA I$a&ine A<nreal and 6eautifulA I$a&ine A<nreal and ,tran&eA I$a&ine A<nreal and ,illyA Instead of doin& this with an o Bect( do this with a real person or a character fro$ literature.
e. I tasteOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO f. I thinkOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
I taste the dew on the wind I think the new day is orn
0fter you ha*e written out the sentences( re$o*e the pronouns( *er s( and articles as you need to: sa&e-co*ered desert freshness of $ornin& screa$ of the hawk caress of a reeFe dew of the wind new day orn
theOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO theOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO theOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOO(OOOOOOOOOOOOOOO(OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO 6ut (so$ethin& you don%t indul&ent( o*er-ratedA# elie*e in( i.e. (A ut the no*els of ,usan ,onta& are self-
I elie*e inOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I elie*e inOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I elie*e inOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOO(OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO(OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO 0nd I elie*e inOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO(lon&est#
,tudent e-a$ple:C')D+ I elie*e in the widso$ of elders( the influence of peer pressure( the i$portance of success( the e*il that e-ists in $oney( the effecti*eness of hard work( dedication( coura&e( stren&th. 6ut the elief that you don%t ha*e to stri*e for your &oals is Bust outra&eous. I elie*e in the truth that will set you free( I elie*e in lo*e that will con3uer all( I elie*e in respect for others( Courtesy( politeness( &ratitude. 0nd I elie*e in the fact that to$orrow isn%t pro$ised to you.
4aiku poe$s are characteriFed y content( lan&ua&e( and for$. +f the three ele$ents( for$ is the least i$portant. !he content of haiku poe$s is pri$arily nature. <sually there are no si$ilies or $etaphors( nor are there $any adBecti*es. !he $ost co$$on for$ is three lines( the first and third ein& the sa$e len&th and the $iddle one ein& a little lon&er. In )n&lishspeakin& countries this has een translated into a ?8C8? sylla le structure. 4owe*er( this is not set in stone. In >apanese( it is 1C sounds. In )n&lish this translates to so$ewhere etween 12 and 1? sylla les. !herefore( if you do not ha*e )Q0C!.; 1C sylla les it is accepta le. !he $ost fa$ous writer of haiku is "atsuo 6asho and his $ost fa$ous poe$ is: old pond... a fro& leaps in water%s sound !01:0 0 tanka is a $ood piece( usually a out lo*e( seasons( sadness( or how short life is. !ankas use stron& i$a&es and often ha*e literary de*ices such as si$ile and $etaphor. 0 tanka is short and usually has only fi*e lines. Instead of countin& sylla les( you count 0CC)1!)D sylla les. !he followin& pattern of 0CC)1!)D sylla les works well in )n&lish for a tanka: 282828282. ,o$e clai$ the tanka contains ?8C8?8C8C sylla les. 0ctually( you can use either $ethod for deter$inin& the sounds in this kind of poe$. DI')C!I+1,: 1ow that you are fa$iliar with the haiku and tanka for$s of poetry( you are to write at least two of each for$. 6y writin& $ore than one of each kind( you eco$e fa$iliar with the for$s and used to followin& set patterns for writin& different kinds of poetry.
,o$eday I will ha*e a Bo ,o$eday I will &et $arried ,o$eday I will ha*e kids ,o$eday I will e rich ,o$eday I will e noticed +++:elissa :anor .!rade /01 +ne Window Is 0ll I 1eed... Poe$s: 6e&in your poe$ with the line +ne window is all I need...(and continue to write a out this i$a&inary window in a personal way. ,tudent e-a$ples: +1) WI1D+W I, 0.. I 1))D +ne window is all I need !o see what lies ahead for $e !o lose $yself in lo*e Kor a connection to $y inner world !o see $yself for who I a$ 0nd e a le to $ake chan&es. +++Tierra 3ones .!rade /01 +1) WI1D+W I, 0.. I 1))D... to to to to see the world re*eal $yself i$a&ine ad*entures return to $yself
and li*e. +++%le$ -uffington .!rade /01 W'I!I19 06+<! +!4)',: When you write a out others( pick one i$portant thin& a out the$. :eep the focus positi*e. .ine H1: !he i$portant thin& a out (na$e# is ($ost strikin& attri ute# .ine H2: ,8he is also OOOOOOOO(use as $any lines as you need# .ast line: 6ut the $ost i$portant thin& a out (na$e# is (repeat .ine H1# ,tudent e-a$ple: 0s you eco$e co$forta le writin& poetry( you will find you will want to chan&e the for$at and work on your own. !his is &reat= !he followin& student e-a$ple ca$e fro$ such a &rowth:
!4) 1)W W+'.D +*er 200 years a&o( $y &randfather of $any &reats $o*ed fro$ one world to another( sailed across the 0tlantic and settled in /ir&inia. 4e $ust ha*e felt as Christopher Colu$ us( disco*erin& a new world. )n&land to A!he 1ew WorldA 1ot too terri ly far apart( ut different in all ways. 0ll his routines chan&ed( his work chan&ed( his life chan&ed( he chan&ed. +++3on :ayne .!rade /01
Day 20 - Pantou$
!he pantou$ co$es to us fro$ "alayan poetry. !he Western ()n&lish# *ersion of the pantou$ is a poe$ of indefinite len&th $ade up of stanFas that ha*e four lines. !he for$ula co$es in where lines 2 and 7 of each stanFa are repeated as lines 1 and 2 of athe followin& stanFa: Kirst ,tanFa .ine .ine .ine .ine H1 H2 H2 H7
,econd ,tanFa