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INTRODUCTION:

Originally rooted in the tradition of metaphysical poetry, George

Herbert is the poet who creates an “artistic” peculiar relationship between

Man and God. Herbert’s religious verse transcends the traditional view

upon the relation Man-God and goes further to build a poetic world that

asserts him in an original style. Many critics unfold the relationship

between the speaker and his God as simply a kind of reconciliation at the

end of the tension. However, and from a different reading, Herbert’s verse

can be seen as a poetic text that resists closure then the release of

tension ( at the surface level) can be considered as a beginning of a “new”

type of conflict; actually a conflict between Language and meaning or

between the world of reality and the poetic world.

The artistic style of Herbert and his longing for creativity makes the

reader ignore the issue of sinfulness, which is purely human.

Correspondingly, there is an innate transmission from the worldly stage to

a higher stage of artistic pleasure thus everything is constructed within

the text. Throughout his poetry, George Herbert is not only a poet but also

a theoretician of a new verse, which is the harmony between the form and

the meaning and this reconciliation allows for a unity between the speaker

and his Creator; accordingly, the poet remains faithful to his art and to his

protestant values as well. At this level, the poet can be regarded as a

creator of this unique style so he reflects the power of God then he yearns

for constructing a powerful poetic world. So the poetic text can be said, to

be interplay of power between the protestant poet and his creator.

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Fully aware of his sinfulness, Herbert’s artistic work is the way to

transcend the unworthiness of human beings and to go further to a world

of forgiveness. This can lead to an important issue seriously raised in

Herbert’s verse; the question of human identity or the problem of human

existence, here we can say that the poet is dependent to God linguistically

(i.e. within the text) and “metaphysically”. On the same way, God is

delineated by the poet; He is therefore “recreated” and personified (he

talks and participated in the poetic text). The rhetorical construction of

God makes Him more sacred than He is in “reality”.

The image of God is definitely questionable in George Herbert’s

poetry since the relationship between the speaker and His God is in itself

problematic. This can be shown in the dramatic dialogue; this double voice

foreshadows a tormented, restless self that seeks determination in the

Other (God). Ceasing the dilemma and leading it to a resolution is the

power of the verse as well as the “greatness” of the poet’s philosophical

view towards religious issues.

Although it seems to be a childish end, the speaker’s resolution of

the tension that governs his relation with his Creator raises in the reader’s

mind plethoric questions. Throughout the wavering of the struggle then

submission, the poet imitates God in his creation in order to achieve

perfectness, but the raised questions in the poem remain unanswered,

hence the reader is involved to make a “supplement” or to construct

another text to fulfill the “unsaid” in the poetic text. Correspondingly,

Herbert’s divine verse resists closure; it is open to various readings. This

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text has moved from the orally stage to the written stage (the text), but,

since the poet is the victim of “the metaphysics of presence”, he

constructs an ideal image of God through a perfect verse.

In “Easter wings”, for instance, there is a crisis of presentation or an

inability to express reinforced through the loss of words but the “wings”

which are a pure creation of the poet hold the speaker and symbolically

raise him from his sins. Equally represented, the poem contains actually

two birds: the poet and Christ.

Accordingly, two identities lie in the self of the poet. Apart from

being a Christian preacher, the poet is also the artist philosopher who

speaks for his community (Easter day represents, symbolically, the

Christian community). The stylistic features of Hebert’s divine verse

(repetition, oxymora, similie…) show a tortured, self-accusing protestant.

He reflects in his verse, the Fall which affected all human beings. The poet

mirrors the sinful aspect of Man; he admits the situation ,in which he is not

responsible. In his poem entitled “Sighs and Groans”, the poet reinforces

Man’s sinfulness, he writes

“I have deserv’d my condition as an eternal Adam because my lust

Hath still sow’d fig-leaves to exclude thy light:

But I am frailtie, and already dust;

O do not grinde me!”

Throughout this research paper, I want to scrutinize George

Herbert’s poetry from a different prospective. His divine poetry can be

closely read from a modernist view, here the problematic relationship

between the speaker and His “Lord” can be perceived from another level;

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that of the Self as contrasted to the Other, this binary opposition is in itself

interchangeable because they are dependent upon each other

linguistically which may to other different forms of dependence.

At this level, we can evince the revolutionary aspects of Herbert’s

religious verse in the form as well as in the content. These aspects are

new at its age that’s why his Poetry of the seventeenth century was

“despised” at its age and then renewed at the twentieth century with T.S

Eliot for instance who focuses deeply in the criticism of Metaphysical

poetry in general and notably in George Herbert’s divine verse. He finds in

it real modern aspects; Herbert’s fragmented self and his extreme

obsession with tackling human universal issues make his poetry an open

text to “read”. It is similar in a way to the verse of T.S Eliot and E.E

Cummings. As it is known, Herbert is said to be “the father of Deism” and

here lies the striking paradox in his poetry: how to reconcile between

Reason and Metaphysics, which is originally unreasonable? An issue

continues simultaneously with human’s existence.

The second part of the research will be devoted to the exploration of

the interplay of rhetoric and philosophy. The relationship between form,

meaning and feeling governs the poetic world of Herbert’s verse. Notably,

Herbert relies on the shape of the poem to reinforce certain poetic images.

Consequently, a mimetic art is established in parallel with the delineation

of God’s power. Then,“the construction of God” (textually) in a poetic

world where the speaker and the “Lord” are dependent upon each other

especially at the level of Creation. To illustrate this idea we can refer to

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the poem “A True Hymn” in which Herbert deals with the nature of

Christian poetry, furthermore he foregrounds the honorable belief and

disregards the eloquence of insincere belief. To borrow Shakespeare

words: “Words without thoughts never to heaven go”. Then the human

being is adequate to prove a true belief with a true verse. Consequently,

the poetic language allows for the unfolding of Christian beliefs. Yet, what

makes it more creative is “the poetic metalanguage”. The divine verse

deals with the religious verse itself. The repetition of the first line of the

last line of a stanza in the first line of the second stanza echoes the

cyclical nature of human sins. Thus, we can say that Herbert’s verse is

self-reflexive. The raised tension in the Temple, for instance, makes the

poetic text the only form adequate for constructing patterns of paradoxical

images and peculiar conceits that would not be available in the non-poetic

writings.

The poetic language allows the speaker to highlight the position of

the individual or more precisely the eccentric individual. At the age of

Herbert, innovation was quietly absent and; it was a time of reason and

science. Then, it appears the power of the verse to delineate the

existential significance of Man and God. Individually, Herbert’s verse is

embodied with the mission of prayer and devotion. Moreover, when the

poet deals with his his relation towards God, he borrows from his own

experience that is to say that his verse testifies his life or it narrates his

biography.

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The concept of the ‘Sacred’ in ‘The temple’ is problematic since the poem , as a text,

is made up of a chain of signification. Furthermore, ‘The Lord’ is always highlighted and

constructed as ‘superior’ to the sinful speaker. Yet, reversely this sacredness owes to the

sinfulness of the speaker and to his existence as inferior

In the third part of the research, a focus will be made upon the aporetic spaces in

Herbert’s poetic tradition; Herbert’s poetic text has originally moved from the orally stage to

the written stage, so we can find aporetic moments in this poetic text. In the poems where

there is a monologue, the single voice that urges for the presence of God. The voice of the

speaker is always haunted by the presence of ‘The Lord’, the poet cannot depart from the

power of His God. Thus, he is admitted to be a victim of ‘the metaphysics of presence’. He is

obsessed with proving the existence of God; however, an ironical situation lies within the

secret of the existence of the protestant poet: he is free and enslaved at the same time.

Herbert’s divine poetry imitates what exists in the gospel to the extent that his poetry

becomes a parody of ‘The Sacred Book’. It builds a utopian world where the power of his

verse foreshadows reconciliation between paradoxical complex images: The sinful protestant

versus the Sacred God. Here lies Herbert’s wit to create a private world within his dependence

upon God. Therefore, the divine verse can be utopian; it proves the harmony between Man

and his universe.

To conclude, doing a research on George Herbert’s divine verse allows for knowing

the peculiarities of his writing as different from the other Metaphysical poets’ writings on the

one hand. On the other hand, Herbert’s verse is universal as well as questionable; Christianity

is not only a religious matter but a philosophical existential issue.

Herbert’s verse is well linked to the modern man who questions his existence and his

relation towards the world. Thus, Herbert’s verse immortalizes itself since human being’s

existence coexists with sins. In the utopian world there are no tensions, and Herbert

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constructs a unity between the different components of his poetic text; in most of his poems

he employs one rhetorical figure to ascribe a coherent structure to his poetry then to attribute a

harmony between the text and the world delineated. So we can consider his verse as utopian,

it is wittily constructed to reinforce a unity between Art and reason.

Part I: The revolutionary aspects of George

Herbert’s divine poetry:

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1/ The Modernist aspects:

Herbert was intellectually influenced John Donne, his mother’s

admired friend and encomiast. Yet, he is distinguished by adding a sense

of music to religious poetry, as he was an assured musician. His verse is

like a musical composition and the tackled themes are lyrical, they are

expanded on the stanzas spontaneously. A Herbertian stanza is like sonata

form, a way of developing a theme through various shapes or forms. This

amounts to the claim that Herbert is always interested in finding a way to

put his eloquence on. The form is as important as the content. At this

point, it is worthy to refer to “Easter Wings” (I) which is an imitative verse

of the shape of the bird’s wings. This poem can exclusively be read in a

continuous way.

Then shall the fall further the flight in me.”

“Lord, who createdst man in wealth and store,

Though foolishly he lost the same,

Decaying more and more,

Till he became

Most poor:

With thee

O let me rise

As larks , harmoniously,

And sing this day thy victories:

It is a unified poem interrelated with the theme of of the story of the

Fall and redemption of Man. The music is not directly shown; it is deduced

through the movement and the sound of the wings. Therefore, the impact

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of the poem is not only visual but also musical. However, “Easter wings”

does not stop, it is continued in “Easter wings” (II) since the bird has two

wings so one poem does not fit for the theme of redemption which is

expanded in the second poem.

“My tender age in sorrow did begin:

And still with sickness and shame

Thou didst so punish sin,

That I became

Most thin.

With thee

Let me combine,

And feel this day thy victory:

for, if imp my wing on thine,

Affliction shall advance the flight in me.”

One interpretation is that in The Temple as a whole, and for the aesthetic

purpose, Herbert composed two “Easter wings”. The first one begins with

“Lord” however the second one starts with “My tender” so a more

emphasis in the Self is emphasized then to create a kind of balance

between the two wings as well as to construct a kind of unity between the

speaker and Christ so that they become inseparable. It is notable to say

that the repetition of some phrases differently with the emphasis on the

Lord in the first poem (“Till he became”). And then in the second poem,

he is interested in Man ( “That I became”) ,this parallelism foreshadows

the poet’s aim to highlight the true protestant’s longing for redemption

and that to “ rise” is to “combine” and importantly to “sing” is to “feel”.

The last line in both poems is almost repeated in order to emphasize that

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the major aim for the flight is to escape the sins and to maintain

redemption.

The shaping of these two poems in bird’s wings is fundamental in

shaping the full sense of the poem as a whole. We cannot also separate

the two “Easter wings” for the meaning of each one depends on the other,

a feature that characterizes “The Temple” as a unity. The ornaments of

the church are echoed on the aesthetic characteristics of the poems thus,

there is interdependence between the form and the meaning, hence for

Herbert between the musicality of the poem and its impact in shaping the

central meaning of the verse.

Despite its simplicity, the poem is complicated at a certain level that

its simplicity evokes a deep analysis. Accordingly, Herbert is original in his

style as well as in the way of constructing his verse so that he does not

differentiate between art and religion. Herbert is aware of the impact of

music in the Christian’s individual because it allows for a sense of

communication, which is achieved at a time when orthodox Christianity is

at its lowest ebb. Herbert’s longing for highlighting Christian faith is

trained artistically since the Bible cannot be read for its prose; accordingly,

the power of Herbert’s eloquence is a reconciliation of faith and art at the

same time. The accommodation of musicality to meaning can be also seen

in “Prayer I”:

Prayer the church’s banquet, Angels’ age,

God’s breath in man returning to birth,

The soul in paraphrase, heart in pilgrimage,

The Christian plummet sounding heav’nd and earth;

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Engine against th’Almighty, sinners’ tower,

Reversed thunder, Christ-side-piercing spear,

The six-days-words transposing in an hour,

A kind of tune, which all things hear and fear;

Softness, and peace and joy, and love, and bliss,

Exalted Manna, gladness of the best,

Heaven in ordinary, man well drest,

The milky way, the bird of Paradise,

Church-bells beyond the stars heard, the soul’s blood,

The land of spices; something understood.

The elegance of the poem does not minimize its seriousness, since the

poetic fancies of Herbert illuminate more deep essentials of the Christian

belief. Notably, a strong relationship exists between truth and elegance of

the poem. A true poem should be embodied with a lyrical, musical form.

Here we can refer to Shakespeare’s “As you like it” when Touchstone’s

Credo was explaining poetry to Yokels: “the truest poetry is the most

feigning”.

Herbert’s verse is embodied by the singularity of the argument and its

bizarreness, and then the reader is convinced by the moral rightness of

this argument. Clearly influenced by John Donne, Herbert combines

paradoxical images in a religious context; he reflects the imagery of

Donne, notably in his poem “Obedience” where he employs legal terms.

The act of writing is an extended metaphor, and hence Herbert constructs

himself as a lord thanks to his verse:

My God, if writings may

Convey a Lordship any way

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Whither the buyer and the seller please; (stanza 1)

Let it not thee displease,

If this poor paper do as much as they.

How happy were my part,

If some kind man would thrust this heart

Into these lines; till in heav’n’s court of rolls (stanza 9)

They were by winged souls

Entered for both, far above their desert!

Scrutinizing deeply the poem, one can notice the speaker’s yearning

God for accepting his verse (at a time when art was not religious), There

is a wit in telling his Lord that he is writing for him and not just meditating

the “ sacred will”, thus writing is no more a speech only but it is rather an

action. Herbert’s verse is an action with speech; it is a real performance so

that his language becomes as sacred as the prayer, so throughout his

verse our poet is highlighting the “mission of writing poetry itself.

Accordingly, poetry becomes a way of obedience and a right form of being

close to God.

It is worthy to question the difference between what the poet wants

to say and what he has to say since the religious values are stable.

However, the illumination of the divine issues is transmitted poetically.

Herbert constructs a way to address God directly and to make an

accessible dialogue between himself (as Christian) and God (as a

mysterious power), then his verse allows also for immortalizing his sacred

relationship with God. In Donne’s religious verse, the existence of God as a

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sacred Self is questionable then the speaker is unable to make an end to

his torments so there is a clear separation between the poet and his God,

the tension is thus evident. Yet, one can admit that Herbert’s construction

of his “self” unites him with God’s voice, accordingly; the speaker’s aim is

usually to construct an image of the true protestant as united to Christ and

likely to eradicate the existent tension between Man and God. However

the resolution of the tension is not so simple, it is only simplified to a

child-father relation that characterizes Herbert’s poetic style. The

seriousness of the religious issues is undertaken with plain easy language

in order to reflect the restfulness that should govern the relation between

the speaker and his God. “Redemption” illustrates this “inner paradox” of

simple language with serious, complex issues. However; there is a logic

relation between the form and the content since the aim of the speaker is

to lessen the tension so we cannot admit that there is really a paradox.

Herbert’s divine verse cannot depart from the form of the secular

verse of Donne for instance. The speaker’s direct speech to his God and

his longing for forgiveness is simultaneous to a lover’s speech. The

established reconciliation between Man and God is like the moments of

restfulness between two lovers

This influence of the precursor Donne cannot deny Herbert’s passion

for perfection. He seems to be original in his inventions of new metrical

forms that serve for emphasizing the poet’s views towards his relation

with God and this is evident in “Easter wings” and in “The Altar”. I am

trying to heed at this point a semiotic reading of the two “Easter wings”, it

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evinces that this poetic text is iconic since the poem looks like a picture of

a bird. Accordingly, there is a mixture of poetry (as a verbal art) and

painting. This mixture of arts can be considered as a modernist aspect.

Moreover, the major theme of the poem that is the decay of Man is

reinforced by the peak poverty of words, the decay of Man is attributed to

the Fall. The farther you are from God the more sinful you are. In addition,

the more the wings contracted the more the realization becomes.

Therefore, the loss of words reflects the loss of Man and the action of rise

and fall is paradoxical but at the same time, it foreshadows the

contradictory situation of Man: to be sinful then to long for forgiveness.

Herbert’s yearning for being close to God urges for employing an

image; the two birds may represent may represent both Christ and the

poet so words are not enough to be gifted to God ; they were marked by

an absence and Herbert “supplements” their lack with a pictorial form of

representation. Accordingly, we can assume that Herbert is a victim of

“the metaphysics of presence”, he tries to achieve the perfectness of

prayer in order to become closer to God. Evidently, Herbert is haunted by

the importance of the form to make sense to his poems. The alliteration

of the sound /f/ is evocative of the flapping of the birds’ wings;

furthermore, the two poems are also mimetic of the circularity of the

church’s structure. The poet’s focus on the aesthetic dimension points to

his passion by the ornaments of the church. The title of his poems “The

Temple” is a metaphor of the poems as a whole; the construction of the

poems is like the construction of a religious truth that lies in the church,

hence the poet makes a parallelism between himself and Christ. Herbert

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does not differentiate between form and meaning and believes that both

of them construct the whole poem, in “The Temple” he seeks to

foreshadow that Man’s soul is God’s Temple. This is illustrated in the

manuscript sent by Herbert to his friend Nicholas Ferrar (related by Isaac

Walton), he explains to his friend that his poems seek are similar to the

temple to the extent that he seeks to make a temple in his readers’ minds:

“…tell him he should find in it a picture of the many spiritual conflicts that
have passed betwixt God and my soul, before I could subject mine to the will of
Jesus my Master; in whose service I have now found perfect freedom; desire him to
read it; and then, if he can think it may turn to the advantage of any dejected pour
soul, let it be made public; if not, let him burnt…”

The use of art to catechize religious verity is in itself a modern

aspect. Herbert’s status as a parish priest does not prevent him from

constructing a poetry that deals with the ordinary human concerns, men’s

torments towards religious existential issues. It is also a worthy issue for

metaphysical style: his fancy conceits continue to be far-fetched through

his didactic performance. As an original critique of poetry, Coleridge

regards Herbert’s playfulness as “profound and not quaint”. Therefore, as

a modern reader, one can see Herbert’s religious verse as a

contemporary; it is in a sense a modernist verse. When we consider that

modernism, as a literary trend is a revolution against the ordinary styles of

writings, we can point to Herbert as a metaphysical poet who protests

against some poetic forms for instance the carpe diem and the love verse.

Moreover, Herbert tackles the issue of the position of Man in the universe

as well as the power of God over the human being. In his introduction to

T.S Eliot’s critique “George Herbert”, Peter Porter declares:

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“Herbert is one of us, if “us” betaken to represent the temperament of the
late twentieth century. Poets and readers of alike feel at home with
Herbert. I cannot think of another poet in the long march of English verse
who speaks to us so clearly and with such authority as Herbert does.”

In this way, one can notice a tormented self in Herbert’s verse.

A paradoxical image of the parish poet for he is supposed to be

completely sure about his relation with God; however, his verse

foreshadows an existential person who questions the position of Man

in the universe and how he can manage to gain a perfect

relationship with the sacred God despite his sinfulness. These

problematic issues are reinforced in the tormented self of the poet

yet, in the tormented verse, this torment urges for the dramatic. The

theatrical form of some poems, “The Collar” for instance, shows a

modernist poet in two ways: the poem points out the blurring line

between the genres: there is a tragic monologue, which is unfolded

in a poetic style, once again, the poet proves that the verse is the

adequate style to show the mysterious relation with God. Then Christ

is given a voice to make his presence real, he makes him speaks for

Himself even though we know that it is not Christ ‘speech. “The

Collar” is another poem that expresses its meaning through its form.

Most of the poems in The Temple draw the reader’s attention

to the process of their signification and then to their “referential

function”. The two “Jordan” poems question the complex patterning

of the poetic discourse. So, poetry is the adequate linguistic means

of evoking such experiences of faith and worship. “Jordan I” can be

read as in different ways, ostensibly it is an oblique criticism of

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secular lyric verse thus, it represents a defense as well as a

revolution against the ubiquitous sonnet.

The title contains two basic ideas: the first one is that Jordan is

a reference to a particular movement of introversion before making

a future step. It is a moment of contemplation that may lead to

inspiration then to an act of writing. This is reminding of Jacob when

he left his father and crossed the Jordan then after many years he

prospered. In another level, Jordan is the land where John the Baptist

baptized Christ and then his mission started. In the Book of Common

Prayer (cf.also 2 Kings 5:9-10), it was said: “Thou didist safely lead…

thy people though the Red Sea, figuring thereby the Holy Baptism

of…Christ did sanctify the flood Jordan, and all other waters to the

mystical washing away of sin”. Once again, the poet is obsessed by

the sacred act of writing and considers it as the right way to gain

redemption. “Jordan I” comes at a moment when Herbert seeks to

show his theory towards Writing, it is one of the first poems in “The

Temple” so that to show that his verse is different from the

Petrarchan love poetry, as the mission of Christ is unusual and

unique. Here the poet compares himself implicitly to Christ; “Jordan”

is the land where the poet can fulfill his sacred mission of praying

God. Accordingly, the title plays a great role of constructing a far-

fetched metaphor. Hebert’s religious verse is not divine because it

deals with religious issues; it is divine for its construction of a unique

distinct verse that brings its divinity from a projection of the sacred

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mission of Christ to the poet himself. Thus, the importance of

writing is to make the sacred even more sacred.

The poet’s major concern is to how to transform the religious

experience to a linguistic experience so that his mission seems to

be a re-creation of a divine reality. This is clearly shown in the

closing lines of the second stanza: Must all be veiled, while he that

reads divine/ Catching the sense at two remorses.

Eventually, this poem speaks for all the other poems in The

Temple and theorizes the poet’s view towards art. According to him,

poetry as an art is not an imitation of the religious truth; it is rather a

way of veiling the truth. For Herbert, truth must be beautiful that is

why it is veiled in the verse, he declares: “Is there no truth in

beauty” this rhetorical question points out the link between truth

and beauty.

The poem is full of rhetorical questions, which give the poem a

fitful quality there is a fluency of movement that rests in the final

stanza. At the end the poet reflects, calmly the outcome of the

questions previously raised. The outburst is easily appeased to the

poet’s subservience to God. The final stanza epitomizes the poet’s

clear view towards poetry; one feels that this poem is a declaration

of independence against the secular verse. It is a rebellious verse

against the other verse because it does not contains truth. Herbert

insists on the notion of “a true verse” he ironically, describes the

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secular verse as untrue since the poet praises a feminine beauty,

which is a mortal thing.

Furthermore, Herbert satirizes the carpe diem poetry: the

short- lived beauty is revolutionized to the “beautiful truth” of the

sacred Christ and his mission, the title suggests both the crossing

from the futility and the hollowness of the rest of the world into the

truth and holiness of the land of promise as the Jordan was crossed.

Then the purification is “truth” and renunciation of “fictions”. The

notion of “time is fleeting” is altered to the immortal presence of

God and Christ as well. Herbert’s verse is also immortal since it

describes an immortal truth so he asserts his identity as a distinct

poet. Conclusively, time is no more a destructive agent and the

action is fulfilled by the act of writing such a verse. The pastoral

verse is no longer “the only” one, Herbert challenges the style of this

verse: “Is all good structure in a winding stair?” He calls for another

type of verse; he valorised the shepherds and does not accuse them

for “riddle” writing nor for “pull for a prime” since they are “truthful

people” who live in “the real world”.

It is worthy to note that Herbert criticizes the convention of the

Petrarchan love poetry in “Jordan I”: “Is it no verse, except

enchanted groves/ And sudden arbours shadow coarse-spun lines? /

Must purling streams refresh a lover’s loves? At this point we don’t

only speak about the literary influence of his precursors such as John

Donne and Sir Philip Sydney but also about “Intertextuality”, which is

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a term coined by Julia Kristeva; she defines the literary texts as “The

text is therefore a productivity, and this means that it is a

permutation of texts, an “intertextuality” in the space of a given

text, several utterances, taken from other texts, intersect and

neutralize one another”. Then Herbert’s religious verse is the

transposition of several sign system of the secular verse; the lover in

the lover verse is replaced by God. Remarkably, the lover does not

often respond to the speaker, yet God is present as part of the divine

discourse of the poem with the sacred verse of Herbert. The poet

refers to the originality of the religious discourse; but he insists that

the human language is not so pure but the divine poetry is unique

because the subject is sacred.

“A Parodie” is considered by Anthony Martin as a parody of

Donne’s love verse; he writes:

“The poetic strategy of ‘A Parodie’ may thus be seen to establish a


viability for the critical term ‘sacred parody’: that is, religious poetry
which utilizes the resources of profane love-poetry while at the same
time acknowledging that all poetry is necessarily a trivial pursuit
unless and only insofar as it is accepted by God. Secular poetry is
not redirected, through parody and repetition, to its true originator
and rightful object”.

In this way, Herbert refers to the tradition to love poetry to highlight

the sacred tradition and then transcends his precursors, the true

protestant poet should write wittily only to praise God therefore this

is the true sense of sacrifice.

Herbert’s “meditative verse” as described by Louis Martz is

featured by a great immediacy. In addition to the startling conceits,

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this immediacy is the reflection of the whole culture that

characterised metaphysical poetry in general. However, the

farfetched metaphors foreshadow the deep agony of the protestant

poet. The melancholic tone reinforces the uneasiness of the

speaker’s experience; yet it makes the resolution equivocal and

critical. In this way the wittiness of the verse lies in the ability of the

speaker to delineate a peaceful image despite the sense of conflict

that spreads the poem.

In his poem “The Agony”, the speaker condemns the

“philosophers” or more precisely the Renaissance scientists and

their intellectual vanity; it is an oblique criticism of the ignorance

and also the rejection of God’s power. This poem extends the

suffering of Christ to refer to the strong passion shared between

Christ and Man. Its conceit is typological; the full sense is required

through the exegesis of the binary form of the images in the poem.

The speaker begins with the contrasting the philosophers to the

parsons who can see Man’s sin and then rectifies it with the calling

for Christ’s Love. The image of “the wine press” is typological of

passion since Christ describes Himself as “the true vine”; and then

grapes and wine reflect sacred images. In this way, “The Agony” is a

parody of Christ’s struggle with Himself in the Garden of

Gethsemane just before his arrest which led to his trial and

crucifixion. In the second stanza, there is a reference to the tale of

men from Canaan bearing a cluster of grape; it is very typological of

the crucifixion. “Vice” suggests that Christ suffers in the grip of

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men’s vices. Accordingly, the speaker reinforces the deep relation

with the Sacred in terms of love and acknowledgment of His strong

Sacrifice; in this way, the poem rewrites the divine experience as a

private moment of closure to God so that he makes the real

experience of Christ truthful for him since he witnesses its sweetness

when he says in the final lines: “Love is that liquor sweet and most

divine/ which my God feels as blood but I, as wine.”

This emblematic poem should be read according to its context

of the Renaissance and early Baroque conventions. As far as its form

is concerned, the poem is in three stanzas of six lines of iambic

tetrameters and pentameters, rhyming ‘ababcc’; thus, it is well

“measured” to reinforce the idea that scholars can fully ascertain

the height of mountains however his poem’s conceit is far-fetched.

The poet is able to make concise poems in terms of form but the

metaphors are so ambiguous, in the same way the mountains are

well created yet beyond this creation lies the power of God which is

too strong to realise.

From a deeper perspective, we can say that the divine verse is

so powerful for it unfolds philosophical meditations upon the

existence of Man in an ordered universe. “The Agony” represents a

critical moment in Herbert’s verse since it shows the omnipresence

of writing poetry and Man’s love. The poem’s three stanzas are

expanded in a reasonable way to come to a final conclusion at the

end; and then this form echoes the trinity shape so that it reinforces

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the existence of truth in art; his poetic wit does not deny the

transmission of religious facts. Hence, the coexistence of art and

religious: God is only praised artistically; what makes the

dependence relation between the divine subject and the poetic

delineation.

2/ An inquiry bounded by certainty:

Herbert’s poetic style is regarded as plain and simple but the

thematic nature of his poems belies this claim for dealing with the human

being’s relationship with God requires the presence of a voice in conflict

with the Divine and with the Self as well. There is a dramatic moments

behind the quiet image. Accordingly, the major paradox in The Temple is

that Herbert’s urge for making a clear relation with God entails a deep

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complex conflict between the human self and the sacred power.

Astonishingly, the poet contemplates God, the self-sufficient power.

Herbert’s religious meditations question the dilemma of Man’s

position towards God. The play of paradoxes and the juxtapositions of

metaphors reflect the compression of the metaphysical subject. The inner

conflicts are present from one poem to another in different ways, despite

the fact that they end in resolution the recurrence of the conflict makes

the uneasiness of the rest and the failure to find a definite fixed truth.

Therefore, the poetic space is convenient for reflecting the paradoxes of

the religious experience. In this way, The Temple becomes the story of a

Christian man searching for the sweetness of the divine love.

The poems are often overlapped with epigrammatic lines that

reflect the beauty of the sacred truth as in his poem “Easter” when he

calls for admiring the sacred spirit: “O let thy blessed Spirit bear a part, /

and make up our defects with his sweet art.” We can read “Sweet art” as a

“sweet heart” a pun that suggests the speaker’s tendency to construct a

perfect image of the divine soul; contrastingly, with the “real” image that

the sacred represents religious constraints, a point raised by his precursor

John Donne who constructs a tormented self unable to find a resolution to

the dramatic conflicts. Herbert seems to be a less startling poet than

Donne is yet, his searching for rest shows an intellectual power that makes

the reader himself an investigator for the validity of the truth. The way to

reach ease becomes more valuable than the truth itself. The truth is fixed

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and simple; Man is existed within God, but the way to fulfill this way is

complex and ambiguous at the same time.

Herbert finds his self in his expression of spiritual humility for God

this is clearly shown in his poem “Humility” in the last emblematic stanza:

“Humility , who held the plume, at this


Did weep so fast, that the tears trickling down

Spoil’d all the train: then saying, Here it is

For which ye wrangle, made them turn their frown

Against the beasts: so joyntly bandying,

They drive them soon away;

Therefore, as he writes about his divine experience he makes an

intersection between poetry and religion and so he finds his existence as a

creative priest. Hence, there is an imitation of the dramatic presence of

Man. Herbert does not make a passive voice; the speakers’ voices are

evocative of different ways to express themselves. Ironically, the

fragmentation of the self makes its unity and then the delineation of a

unique end of rest is an imitation of God wholeness.

Herbert’s source of inspiration as a metaphysical poet, is not only

his religious faith but also his reflection upon the divine subject and then

to make his position vis-à-vis the sacred. In “Judgement”, the speaker’s

voice is embodied by a sense of fear in the first stanza: “Almighty Judge,

how shall poore wretches brook/ Thy dreadfull look”. However, in the final

stanza, he adopts a colloquial way to address God, these lines are

attributed with sense of ease and familiarity though in the presence of the

Lord:

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“But I resolve, when thou shalt call for mine,

That to decline,

And thrust a testament into thy hand:

Let that be scann’d.

There thou shalt finde my faults are thine.”

The religious faith is analyzed in a way that the speaker is discussing

it with the Lord. He unfolds his protestant identity; he is fully haunted by

the doctrine that Christ has taken upon himself all the sins of the world.

“Judgement” is at the end of The Temple, a moment that reminds us of the

beginning of the book when the poet asserts himself as a protestant

Christian and that all his verse is the outcome of a strong religious faith.

This is clearly manifested in the introductory part of The Temple in the

ninth stanza of “The Church-porch”

“Yet , if thou sinne in wine or wantonnesse,


Boast thereof; nor make thy shame thy glorie.

Frailtie gets pardon by submissivenesse;

But he that boasts, shuts that out of his storie.

He makes flat warre with God, and doth defie

With his poore clod of earth the spacious sky.”

The circularity of the theme reflects the hollowness of the poet’s

search. Yet, the verse resists closure in terms of reaching the wholeness of

the divine subject therefore despite the stability of the religious discourse;

the poet is able to manipulate it. He is conscious about the vulnerability of

the religious issue so he employs aesthetic means to fulfill his inquires

about the divine power. Louis Martz describes Herbert’s artfulness as

following:

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“…this sense of ease and familiarity in the presence of the lord allows
Herbert to display in many of his finest poems, a playful tone arising from
confidence that his divine ‘friend’ will not condemn the wit and art with which this
poet has been endowed, will not object to what Herbert frequently calls ‘mirth’- in
the old sense of that word, ‘joy’ ‘happiness’, along with the modern sense of
joking, smiling, even laughter.

Herbert divine verse in not a religious search it is rather a

quest for an existential position of Man in the universe and so his

role to determine his position. The relationship between Man as a

subject and God the power is present before the poet would identify

it so the beginning of each poem announces its end despite the

rebellious tone of the speaker. At this level, a close examination of

the voices in The Temple and their stream of consciousness may

lead to the denial of the presence of one voice; it is rather a clash of

voices and so the poet urges for settling the rebellious Christian self.

Accordingly, Herbert plays upon the metamorphose of voices,

the sinner voice becomes the redeemed as he assumes in “Sinne I”:

“Yet all these fences and their whole aray/ one cunning bosome-

sinne quite away.” One may also consider the well-known “The

Collar” and its reversal movement from rebellion to rest this

movement reinforces the identity of the intellectual Christian who is

able to end his torments and accept the divine will. Thus, there is a

paradoxical image of paradoxical image of questioning God while

praising Him. We can here refer to T.S Eliot critical book George

Herbert; he depicts Herbert’s work as following:

“Herbert is not a poet whose work is significant only for Christian readers;
that The Temple is not to be taken as simply a devotional handbook of meditation

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for the faithful, but as the personal record of a man very conscious of weakness
and failure, a man of intellect and sensibility who hungered and thirsted after
righteousness. And that by its content, as well as because of its technical
accomplishment, it is a work of importance for every lover of poetry.”

T.S Eliot views Herbert as a poet who seeks to put limits to

his torments. He is weak because of his humanity yet this weakness

is transformed into a poetic power. Herbert’s search becomes poetic

rather than religious, and then he displays the complexity and the

absurdity of the futile quest. Here lies the beauty of the poetic

search it is not necessarily to find biblical truths because these

truths are already present then the sweetness of the search lies in

its quality of being a search. Thus, “The Search” is an evidence of a

tormented self, which it will never reach an end: “My searches are

my daily bread/ yet never prove.” In this poem, the speaker is

wavering between his spiritual convictions and his intellectual quest,

this dilemma leads to a search for settlement in a world of accepting

the religious reality perfectly yet paradoxically. The divine truth is

imposed yet it is chosen at the same time, what makes the

peculiarity of the religious experience.

In “The Search”, the speaker denies any sense of centrality;

the poem is constructed upon the notion of “absence». An analysis

of the sign system leads to the assumption that the search requires

the absence of knowledge, the neutrality of the researcher and the

sense of questioning without revealing any centered truth:

“My knees pierce th’earth, mine eies the skie;

And yet the sphere

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And centre both to me denie

That thou art there.”

The recurrence of the questions continues until the end of the poem.

Despite the stability of the divine subject, the speaker is searching for

being close to God despite His absence. The divine exists at the very

moment of admiring the nature and since man is part of the created world

he does not have to search for the Almighty existence, yet he has to make

himself present with God. After the long search, the speaker concludes

that he is close to God and so gives answers to the previous raised

questions: “Where is my God? What hidden place/ conceals thee still?” He

reinforces implicitly that God is present in him and then the search is not

outside, it is within his self.

When he assumes at the sixth stanza that “the search was dumbe

before:/ But all was one.” He makes the search now “speaking” in order to

unfold his closeness to God; for at the end he reinforces the result of his

quest:

“For as thy absence doth excel


All distance known :

So doth thy nearness bear the bell,

Making two one”.

The poem is wavering between hope and despair until the final stanza

when he employs the bell as an emblem of the church for the unity that

would make reconciliation. Implicitly he finds redemption to his sins since

he knows that he is near to God and that he dwells in the church. In this

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way, the poem is not a search for God as it is a way to praise Him and

then to find grace.

Eventually, the circularity of the poem does not reflect the futility of

the search; it is rather a reflection upon the unity between the speaker

and his God and the absence of the distance. Furthermore, the poem can

be considered a self-reflexive in the sense that the ambiguous questions

reflect the complexity of the theme despite its final simple resolution.

A modern reading of the Herbertian text acquires considering the

cultural and the historical background of the verse. The Temple is written

at a time when the Church of England is searching for annihilating the

existing tensions within the different branches. For instance, there are

references to Anglo-Catholicism:

“Yet I hear tell,

That some leaves therein

So void of sinne,

That they in merit shall excel. (“Judgement”


stanza 2)

Yet, some critics, like Joseph Summers, argue in favor of the poet’s

Protestantism and suggest the poet’s affinities with a contemporary

Calvinist theological position. Consequently, these tensions are presented

in “The Temple” to reinforce the existence of conflicts within the Christian

belief. However, at the very moment of this conflict comes an insistence

on the importance of reconciliation and the resort to God love.

As an individual Christian, a scholar of classical letters and divinity,

Herbert is haunted by this intricate mission; moreover, as a poet he tends

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to reconcile between knowledge, faith and aesthetics. “Divinity” is an

evidence of the poet’s attempt to make reconciliation between theological

conflicts: how to adjust faith with reason. The speaker presents from the

beginning an absurd image of astrology: “As men, fear the stares should

sleep and nod, / And trip at night, have suppli’d;” then he constructs a

relation of independence between faith and reason: “Divinities

transcendent skie:/ which with the edge of wit they cut and carve./ Reason

triumphs, and faith lies by.”Strikingly, the speaker does not end the quest

easily. He raised the implication of such relation:

?” “Could not that Wisdome, which first broach the wine,

Have thicken’d it with definitions?

And jagg’d his seamless, coat , had that been fine,

With curious questions and divisions

Accordingly, this poem can be divided into two parts. The first one

presents the question of the relationship between faith and reason. In the

second part, there is a recurrence of the word “But” which reinforces the

speaker’s torments. At the end, the speaker is in favor of the religious

faith as a resolution to his dilemma for he believes that faith does not

require any quest. The reciprocal love between the Creator and the

redeemed creature subverts all the raised questions. Faith is analyzed

with reason, since the true way to reach heaven is to believe in God:

“Faith needs no staff of flesh,/ To heav’n alone both go, and leade.”

The recurrence of the issue of love to God in three followed poems:

“The Method”, “Divinity” and “Ephes 4.30 Grieve not the Holy Spirit”. The

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internal movement of the poems is the delay of achieving certain truths

outside the divine realm. The religious verity is put into question in a

recurrent way; the truth is no sooner given than questioned from another

perspective. Furthermore, many poems’ titles are repeated with different

focuses. For instance, “Affliction” is recurrent for five times, “Praise”

occurs three times and there is two “Jordan” poems. At this point, one he

may heed Barbara Leah Harman’s criticism of the literary experience of

George Herbert; she points out to the recurrence of the theme as

following:

“…this notion seems especially important in the work of the poet George Herbert,
for the poems in “The Temple” are often self-conscious and critical to a fault about
the process of their own production. The moment when a poem’s speaker doubles
back upon his text provides the occasion for significant exploration.”

The internal movement of The Temple is characterized by a sense of

delay. Each poem offers a kind of tension. The continuation of the inquiry

dismisses any sense of closure to the divine experience and to the text

itself. Therefore, the quest becomes a search for new questions.

Artistically speaking, The Temple is an imitation of the church as a place of

ornamentation and so poetry as a form of art resists closure. The divine

verse is ambivalent not because of its subject but also for its poetic

originality.

Herbert’s search for a truthful relation with the Sacred roots him in

the concerns of the ordinary Christian concerns. Herbert, the priest, is also

an individual Christian so that he represents different religious

experiences. The church is not only a place of liturgical practices but it is

also a world of reflections upon the divine and then the verbal art

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becomes the true way to be close to God. The spiritual conversation

between God and Man does never end; it is a continuing process of search.

Thus, the poet strongly believes in the adequacy of Rhetoric to fill the gap

between the human and the sacred. In “Quidditie”, he defines poetry as:

“But it is that which while I use./ I am with thee, and Most take all.”

Accordingly, the search becomes a poetic quest for adequate way to

transmit the divine experience. This search is aimed to fill the gap

between the divine search and the ability of the verbal art to make this

search true.

“The Pearl” is an evidence of the power of the divine verse to unify

between Man and God. Notably, the recurrence of the line: “Yet I love

thee” reinforces the deep relation between the verse and the divine

subject, the speaker finds God’s love in his lines and so he constructs the

“Silk twist”. The pearl is thus present despite its absence. It owes its

worthiness to the long silk twist, which stands metaphorically for the

divine life journey of the poet. Therefore, it is significant to display the

equivocal relationship between “to love” and “to climb” for there is a

question that imposes itself: God’s love is already present or it is an aim

that the speaker wants to reach. Then, love lies in climbing the silk twist

because at the end, he transfigured “Yet I Love thee” by “to climb to

thee”. The precious pearl is unreachable since the end of climbing the silk

twist can never be known.

The internal logic of the poem shows that the precious worldly

temptations: “Learning”, “Honour” and “Pleasure” are certainly precious

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for the speaker and essential for being close to the sacred Who originally

offers them; so that he writes a whole stanza for each one. They are

precious to the point that the speaker neglects them for the sake of God’s

love but they are transformed into precious expressions of divine love. In

the last stanza, there is no worthy thing yet it represents the most

important stanza because the reader becomes acquainted with the true

way to reach the pearl of great price. Eventually, the speaker is fully

aware of the assertion of significant words of love in the last stanza yet it

owes its worthiness from the bulky stanzas to which it is attached.

In The Temple, there is another level of conflict between life and

death. His poems are regarded as semi-autobiographical; his work is

published in 1633 in Cambridge after his death. As a man of religion, he

displays a powerful satisfaction towards the divine so that he cannot

escape from his torments in the church, the space of reflections. In her

biographical account about George Herbert, Pamela M. King writes,

“None of George Herbert’s poems was published until after his death. Then, at the
poet’s request, his friend Nicholas Ferrar published them in a volume called The
Temple. They are all religious verses, but Herbert, like John Donne, whom he
knew, did not find his religious vocation until relatively late in life. The posthumous
publication of his poems, and subsequent biographies, turned Herbert into an
Anglican proto-saint, and until comparatively recently his poems were studied as
examples of perfect piety, compared with the Psalms of David in the Bible, rather
than in literary terms at all. The real story of Herbert’s life and probable religious
views is both more complicated than this suggests and ultimately more
unknowable.”

In this way, The Temple reflects some hidden conflicts in his life then after

his death, these tensions are exposed to the public.

The voice of the divine “friend” there is a down-to-earth voice that

uses colloquial, concrete image from the daily life as a way to reach higher

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reality. His feelings towards the divine are controlled by his thoughts, he is

self-questioning to the extent that his rebellion is appeased by itself;

furthermore his torments are alleviated by his certainty of death since he

was sick. One may refer here to Izaak Walton’s biographical writing about

George Herbert, he narrates: “About the year 1629, and the thirty-fourth

of his age, Mr. Herbert was seized with a sharp quotidian ague.” Then he

adds

“And it is to be noted that in the sharpest of his extreme fits he would often say,
‘Lord, abate my great affliction, or increase my patience; but, Lord, I repine not; I
am dumb, Lord before thee, because thou dost it.’ By which, and a sanctified
submission to the will of God, he showed he was inclinable to bear the sweet yoke
of Christian discipline, both then and in the latter part of his life, of which there will
be many true testimonies.”

The fact of illness is very significant in Herbert’s life because it was

his “family disease” and this fact foreshadows a sense of absurdity to

some of his poems. Thus, his verse becomes a shelter to improve his artful

power; it is a way to escape physical weakness. Moreover, he urges for the

immortality of his verse because he is aware of the mortality of the human

life. From the beginning of The Temple, in “The Sinner” for instance,

Herbert unfolds that ague, which is his illness, and its implicated meanings

will be part of the discourse between him and the Sacred. There are three

main puns in the poem; “When I seek” can be read as pun of “sick”, “the

week” as a pun of “weak” and then “since” is a pun of “sins”. Therefore,

the diction of the poem turns around the physical suffering and so one can

assume the deep relation between illness and the speaker’s urge for

redemption. Thus, he subverted his disease to a sense of ease. It is worthy

to note that “The Sinner” is preceded by “The Agonie”: “Sinne is that

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presse and vice, which forceth pain/ to hunt his cruell food through ev’ry

vein.” And also followed by “Good Friday” in which the speaker is certain

that:

“Sinne being gone, oh fill the place,

And keep possession with thy grace;

Lest sinne take courage and return,

And all the writings blot or burn.”

The reader is faced by the speaker’s proclamation that his suffering

can only engender sweetness. The poet makes from the religious facts his

own verity so that the poetic work guarantees his redemption then he

feels at ease when he addresses God. Moreover, one may deduce the

parallel construction between Christ and the poet; the fact of salvation is

fulfilled at the very act of suffering. Yet, this image is reminding of the

lover’s seek at the end of his suffering. Eventually, The Temple begins with

the fact of redemption and ends with God’s love so this circularity

reinforces the poetic success in fulfilling his aim.

It is very significant to take into consideration the peculiarity of the

poet’s experience not only as a priest but also as an ordinary individual

Christian who is fully certain about the validity of death due to his illness.

Thus, he is different from the other divine poets in terms of employing his

personal experience to deal with his reflection upon the religious

experience. The physical sufferings are transfigured into poetic writing

that reflects the deep yet complex relation with the divine. At this point, a

close examination of the three related poems about the personal

experience of the poet is consequential to highlight the importance of the

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physical weakness in shaping the relationship between Man and God; the

poems to be taken into consideration are “The Sinner”, “Affliction I” and

“The Cross”.

The three poems turn around the same idea that illness redeems the

sins this is a common Christian idea so that the speakers are certain about

the fact of redemption. “The Sinner” and “Affliction” are situated in the

opening of the Temple, and then the mentioning of his illness at an early

moment makes it a source of inspiration and a way of creation. The

speaker is at ease when confronting God so his physical weakness is

subverted to be a kind of power and most strikingly asserts him in a

position of greatness. The speaker plays upon “the ague” and makes its

dependent on his religious use of the term. In 1609, Herbert wrote to his

mother

“…But I fear the heat of my ague hath dried up those springs by which scholars
say the Muses use to take up their habitations. However, I need not their help to
reprove the vanity of those many love poems that are daily writ and consecrated
to Venus, nor to bewail that so few are writ that towards God and heaven”

According to Herbert ague is here an enemy that may prevent his

literary struggle to show the power of the divine verse and its opposition

to the triviality of the secular verse. In the same letter to his mother,

Herbert ends it with two devotional sonnets. He describes his literary

mission as praising God and then he draws upon the complexity of this

mission

“Sure, Lord, there is enough in thee to dry

Oceans of ink; for, as the Deluge did

Cover the earth, so doth thy majesty;

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Each cloud distils thy praise, and doth forbid

Poets to turn it to another use.

He comments on his verse at the end of the sonnet: “open the bones, and

you shall nothing find/ In the best face but filth; when Lord in thee/ the

beauty lies in the discovery.” Furthermore, he relies on the reader’s

sharing of his own spiritual experience; his feeling of bitterness is

transfigured into sweetness in order to make his peculiar experience

reciprocal among all men. In this way, the particular for Herbert becomes

general simply to insist on the existence of God as One for all humanity.

Moreover, ague is considered as the way of salvation for the sins.

Herbert makes the religious discourse pliable to his own experience and

goes further to make it evident for all Christians. Here, one may heed

Michael C. Schoenfeld viewing of Herbert as: “a writer whose spirituality is

frequently articulated in terms of unexpected but stunning corporeality.”

Obviously, the poet’s assurance of redemption is individually released and

cannot be easily felt by the reader that is why he insists upon it and makes

the dilemma in a movement of delay. When we move from one poem to

another, the quest for grace is deeply related with a feeling of hope

overwhelming the poet’s soul.

“Affliction I” is another instance of the poet’s experience of

suffering; after nine poems from “The Sinner”, Herbert insists again on the

fact of salvation thanks to his peculiar illness:

“My flesh began unto my soul in pain

Sicknesses cleave my bones.

Consuming agues dwell in every vein

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And tune my breath to groans.

Sorrow was all my soul: I scarce believed

Till grief did tell me roundly that I lived.

“Affliction I” is an essential narrative moment in The Temple for the poet

shows a serious spiritual crisis when the poet is questioning God. The title

foreshadows a sense of bitterness and so prepares the reader to discover

the tragic situation of the speaker. He is physically suffering but eloquently

turns each moment of pain into a moment of happiness:

“Yet lest perchance I should too happy be

In my happiness,

Turning my purge to food, thou throwest me

Into more sicknesses.

Thus doth thy power cross-bias me, not making

Thine own gift good, yet me from my ways taking.”

The speaker delineates himself as a victim and then intensifies his

tragic situation so that he reflects the classical image of the biblical

affliction; it is the suffering cry of Job: “My bones cleaveth to my skin and

to my flesh, and I am escaped by the skin of my teeth” (Job 19:20).

Paralleled to Herbert’s words: “My flesh began unto my soul in pain

sicknesses cleave my bones.” Therefore, he resists the physical suffering

because he is certain of redemption. We may refer here to Michael Marx

consideration of the relation of the poem to the book of Job and the

Psalms: “To intensify the imagery of physical suffering borrowed from Job,

the speaker recasts his own affliction as a dialogue between his suffering

flesh and his anguished soul.”

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Despite the plainness of the poem, there is an ambiguous level,

which affects its whole meaning. in the last two stanzas, there is a direct

confrontation with God that entails another resolution yet, it leads to

another dilemma:

“Well I will change the service, an go seek

Some other master out.

Ah my dear God! Though I am clean forgot,

Let me not love thee, if I love not.”

At the end, the speaker becomes conscious about his betrayal. The poem

proceeds towards disillusion instead of delight and then recreates the

speaker’s movement from despair to joy but the last line is too complex

that it reinforces the uneasiness to release the tension. Accordingly, the

poem subverts itself when it ends with an equivocal line. Barbara Leah

Harman insists on the incoherence of “Affliction I” when she writes:

“The first fifty-four lines of “Affliction I” recount the process of diminishment


suffered by a man who, convinced that he lives in a world of possibilities, must
learn that he lives in a world of none. But the speaker who tells the story is a man
who already knows that he is utterly without means, and knowledge of that end is
implicit from the beginning of his retrospective account. So that while in one sense
the progress of the poem is towards diminishment, in another sense there is no
progress. The retrospective speaker knows that there were either means or
possibilities- only the illusion of them.

The interconnection between salvation and illness recurs in his poem

“The Cross”, the speaker insists on his physical disabilities, which lead to

his spiritual despair as if he is continuing the tragic instance of “Affliction

I”

“One ague dwelleth in my bones,

Another in my soul (the memory

What I would do for thee, if once my groans

Could be allow’d for harmony)

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I am in all a weak disabled thing:

Save in the sight thereof, where strength doth sting.”

The personal divine experience guarantees redemption to the speaker

because he shows the weakness of the human being and then the power

of God lies in His forgetfulness. The overconfidence in God makes the

logic of justice in the poem therefore; when the speaker is certain about

God’s love, he assures the restfulness of the tension. He also proclaims

that he is not responsible for his illness so he is consciously convinced that

God would fulfill His promise.

In “The Cross”, the speaker is more appeased than in “Affliction I” he

is now more aware of the vanity of his challenge. He proves the Christian

doctrine of submissiveness and then he reaches the sense of humility that

“he seeks before” so that the human deficiency plays as a sign of the

inextricable position of God constructed by the poem. Along the three

poems “The Sinner”, “Affliction I” and “The Cross” there is the delineation

of the human physical and spiritual suffering in order to reflect a new

image of the Sacred. God causes illness but at the same time, he assures

forgiveness to the weak creation thus the complex relation between God

and Man.

The divine experience of Herbert is different from the other poets; he

proves the truthfulness of his relation to the Sacred when he makes the

religious discourse real. The complexity of the divine experience is

transfigured into sweet relation with The Sacred. Yet, an inner paradox lies

in the affiliation of language and religion. Herbert urges for resolution to

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his dilemma however, art resists closure and owes its existence to the

multiplicity of interpretation.

Part II: the interplay of desire and faith:


1/ The play of the “Self” with “the Other”:
It is deceitful to consider Herbert’s The Temple as simply a book of a

Christian priest who is praising God. However, there is a paradoxical

situation between the true praise to God and the pitiful struggle within the

Self. Evidently, Herbert describes his work as: “...a picture of the many

spiritual conflicts that have passed betwixt God and my soul, before I

could subject mine to the will of Jesus my Master: in whose service I have

found perfect freedom”.

Herbert’s poetic text is not as plain as it is described for his use of poetic

language, as a complex system of signification, makes the task even more

problematic. Therefore, it is fundamental to scrutinize the intricate image

of God since He is the subject of the verse. In this way, to examine

Herbert’s verse is to focus on the representation of God in His poetic

image and this what makes the religious verse peculiar from the other

metaphysical verses.

Herbert is haunted by the presence of God as an entity then he

seeks to make the concept of God unified with “God-the-word” for the idea

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of God is already present conceptually as the sacred power thus its

representation becomes strenuous to delineate. At some moments the

reader feels that the speaker is unable to fulfil this sense of wholeness; the

fact of achieving a whole image of the sacred God through language. In

the two “Jordans” the speaker unfolds that his verse is adequate to tell all

what desires: “Must all be veiled, while he that reads, divines/ catching the

sense at two removes?” then the poet is conscious that his verse is

ambiguous and so veiling all what he wants is equivocal. He even

describes the verbal art as easy as to “Copy out only that, and save

expense” yet, the representation of the Sacred is as complex as the

religious matters. Our poet raises more questions about God to the extent

that we do not have a single image and then the relationship with God

becomes complex though the speakers tend to simplify the existing

tension. Unfolding his spiritual conflicts with God, his verse becomes the

space of freedom where the lines narrate the different dimensions of an

equivocal relationship.

A deep scrutiny of the relationship between the poet, as an Anglican

priest, and God may lead to read this relation in the light of its cultural

context. God is the religious ideology that the poet “speaks”, he speaks

the language of his Divine and he cannot depart from from it. The

“Sacred” is projected in the poems as a human being who listens, speaks

and he is even engaged in serious issues. Accordingly, God becomes

subject to the poetic text where He is delineated, in this way, Herbert

procures a sense of freedom and more importantly asserts his Self within

the foundation of his presence. Herbert seeks existence in the realm of the

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divine for God is already an existing Self before His existence in language

God is “The Big Other” to employ Jacques Lacan concept. Herbert uses the

verbal art to re-make the divine and to represent his struggle with Him as

an “Other”. Lacan views language as the system by which Man can speak

the Other and then it is irretrievably Other; he defines “The Other” (or

“The Symbolic”) through language as “the pact which links… subjects

together in one action. The human action par excellence is originally

founded on the existence of the world of the symbol, namely on laws and

contracts”. In this way, Herbert’s language is to speak God who is the “Big

Other” eventually, he is unconsciously unable to get separated from the

divine power. Alienating from the presence of God; the poet searches for

his existence as a “whole” yet, the superego (the religious constraints)

overwhelms his voice and influences his id. Strikingly, Herbert is conscious

that he cannot fall in his unconsciousness; he wants to control his desire of

asserting his self by making his ego subject to his contests.

Referring back to his literary background, Herbert wined the

university oratorship after being taught the mastery of scholarly debate.

His mother’s sophistication influenced his way of presenting the religious

matters then the Renaissance academy was based on learning how to

make oral presentation in which one should be well skilled in how to attack

or defence a religious existential matter. Consequently, the sense of

combat is already present in Herbert’s verbal contests, his academic skills

display an intellectual who seeks to gain a distinct identity; for him Man is

in conflict with with nature. However able to control his destiny and to

perform an essential role, a paradoxical image we can find in his

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autobiographical poem “Affliction I”: “I was entangled in a world of strife,/

Before I had the power to change my life.”(Emphasis added). Here the

speaker insists on his existence as a separate independent self.

The assertion of the Self requires an understanding of the world yet,

the poet lives in a cultural environment of religious constraints; he is

brought in the church to be Anglican; so he is the subject of his culture. At

this point, the question that imposes itself is: the religious experience is a

way to ease the understanding of the existence of Man or a constraint

towards his freedom. In Herbert’s verse, the speakers endeavour a

separate self, different from the Other (God), in this way the

representation of God becomes more complex for the speaker cannot

escape the Sacred presence within his self. Religiously speaking, because

of “the Fall” Man’s existence becomes a continuation of Christ’s presence

in the world. Therefore, the poet is spiritually tormented by the presence

of the Sacred hence he has a fragmented self and then unable to be

unified.

His “play” with the Other (the sacred) presents simultaneously a

search for the presence of the Self ; ending the contest with a sense of

rest shows the longing for freedom thus it is a search for an authentic self.

The essential dilemma of the poet is to transmit a true image of God and

to fill the gap between God as a concept and his presence within the

religious experience. Yet, Herbert’s search for his self is paradoxical since

he is united with the Other (God) so the psychological separation in

language is fundamental especially when we deal with the presence of

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God within the “poetic play”. Considerably, the relationship with the

Sacred is too complex to the extent that the poetic text becomes

equivocal and then summons for different views.

From “The Altar” to “Easter Wings” Herbert announces the

“dangerous” presence of God in his speech, but he also refers to his

fundamental role in delineating the “play” between the speaker and his

God. In the ending lines of “The Altar”, he says: “O let thy blessed sacrifice

be mine/ and sanctify this altar to be mine”. The speaker insists on the

separation between his self and God’s Self: the sacrifice is human but the

altar, which is purely divine, exists “wordily” in The Temple and then the

poet has his “own” altar. Accordingly, he projects Christ’s sacrifice to his

self, which is the subject of the next poem immediately after “the Altar”,

“The Sacrifice”.

The continuing structure and the recurrence of the same themes,

titles and tensions foreshadow the failure of the poet to satisfy his lost self.

We can notice the feeling of desire to fulfil this loss as if the poetic text (as

a complex system of signifiers) is able to catch what is lost or to borrow

Lacan’s concept “The real”. Herbert is conscious that achieving wholeness

is almost impossible. “The Temple” in this way represents the Christian

self aware that he cannot betray God with language. He wants to be loyal

to God as well as to the logic of his text. Furthermore, we find a

multiplicity of selves on the poetic text of Herbert so he longs for

constructing a separate identity, as he cannot depart from God.

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All the religious realities are re-created in language and then re-

discovered to satisfy a tormented Anglican Self. For example, in

“Thanksgiving” the speaker suddenly reaches moral satisfaction when he

says: “Thy art of love, which I will turn back to thee/ Oh my dear saviour

victory” but this victory is too early in the beginning of The Temple for;

later on, he will discover that his complete satisfaction cannot be fully

achieved. From one poem to another, the reader discovers with the

multiplicity of different speakers that there are many selves: a sinner self

in “Sin I”, a confessing self in “Repentence” and a rebellious self in “The

Collar”. These selves are either opposite to the God will or in harmony with

Him, accordingly, these divisions make paradoxically the wholeness of the

poet’s Christian self; he is self-contained and can only exist within God

“the other” hence we can find this idea in his confessing voice in

“Reprisal”:

“Yet by confession will I come

Into thy conquest: though I can do nought

Against thee, In thee will I overcome

The man, who once against thee fought.”

At this moment, we feel that the speaker is united with God and

even he points himself as part of God and then fights against his sinner

self in order to gain God’s repentance. “Easter Wings” is a witnessed

moment of the presence of the speaker as a sinful self within his

Christianity. It is a poem of a visual enactment of the bird’s flight, a

symbolic moment in The Temple which emphasizes the disappearance of

sins and then a sign of redemption. When he retells the Easter story, he

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recreates a new relationship between Man and God thus this typological

verse becomes a frame, which declares the unity between Man as a

creature and God as the creator so the speaker can be considered as a

contributor to the delineation of a truer relation with the Sacred.

Therefore, “The Temple” does not question the old religious story; it is

rather an inquiry of an authentic relation with God.

It is notable to point out the importance of the sin in the play

between God and the poet for the sinful self is that “enemy” who should

be fought by the redeemed self already existing within the sacred. So we

can confirm that God’s voice exists as an internal self within the speaker,

he speaks for God and with Him at the same time. In “The Pulley” for

instance, the speaker presents the image of God (the creator) as opposed

to the image of Man (the creature); here the poet tells the story of a

“business” relationship between Man and God as if there is a game

between the two. Remarkably, the poet makes God speaks and He even

uses the “I” pronoun: “for if I should (said he)” so he is fully aware and

even certain about the true voice of God. Actually, there is a game in the

internal logic of the poem: God’s aim is to draw Man towards Him in order

to reach “rest”, the central pun which points also to the end of the

dilemma. Here God “is planning” to make the end of the game as the

pleasure so that both will become “winners” he writes: “Yet let him keep

the rest/ But keep them with repining restlessness.” (Emphasis added).

Consequently, both Man and God have to gain each other in order to “pull

for a prime”. “The Pulley” is a game, which aims at gaining pleasure

through the journey of love shred between the two “players”. The image

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of a “poetic game” allows for guaranteeing Presence; as usually the poet

insists on his important role in framing an ideal spiritual relationship with

the sacred.

When we examine the deep relationship between the poet and God

we cannot separate between the two for this interdependence is not only

complex but also ambiguous. The speaker is always present as a Christian

man however, God is delineated conceptually then he seeks to illuminate

his presence and to make it clear so he asserts a “sweet” image. Yet,

when God is attributed with His religious constraints the dilemma becomes

an urgent fact, the question that imposes itself is how to present an

authentic and balanced image about God.

Accordingly, to make from the religious contests a poetic world is a

great challenge for Herbert. To constitute a harmony between his

alienated self and God seems to be the tension that governs his verse so if

we formulate the problematic situation we can say: the poet wants to gain

“wholeness” so that he becomes tormented between being a distinct self,

opposed to God or being part of God’s wholeness and loosing oneself. The

poet’s verse is the space of freedom but at the same time to make this

space enslaved by certain constraints.

The resolution of the tension at the end of the poems ends before it

even starts and Herbert is very conscious about this ironical situation.

However, what matters is to show the journey towards this end and then

to transform the dramatic experience of Man into a “true wordily world”.

The poetic experience allows for the discovering of oneself and also the

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“Other” so that the speaker makes his text even more worthy than the

spiritual experience as if his existence can be achieved only through his

writing. In the final poem, “Love III” the speaker asserts the fact of rest.

Yet, there is a sense of fragmentation of the self, reinforced in the

presence of a multiplicity of “Iies” the speaker seems to be “tired” from

the previous tensions and then yearns for a sense of rest. Nevertheless, he

remembers that his soul “drew back, guilty of dust and sin”; therefore, the

sinful self will be obliterated since it finds love. Also, tired from being

fragmented the poet finally chooses to terminate the contests within his

self and to be reunited as one “I” as if the resolution of the whole dilemma

is to be in love with God. He declares that he is not One:

“I the unkind, ungrateful? Ah my dear,

I cannot look on thee.

Love took my hand, and smiling did reply,

Who made the eyes but I?” (Emphasis


added)

Notably, “eyes” is a pun of the “Iies” which points to the presence of

a multiplicity if selves, and then a significant acknowledgment of reaching

a fragmented existence. Yet, the speaker rejects the complicated issue if

existence and refer to the love of God as a way to achieve a “true life”.

Love is an image of God Who calls Man to establish a “perfect

relationship” with Him and then the speaker seeks to prove that he finally

guarantees this sense of rest. However, this rest does not allows for

freedom for it is deeply connected with God’s power so that the speaker is

free but out of his love which is ironically constructed. The speaker is the

constructor of this love; he is the one who freed himself from the feeling of

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“shame”. Love fills the gaps within his self but it also grows within the

same self. We can refer to his words:

“But quick-eyed love, observing me grew slack

From my first entrance in,

Drew nearer to me, sweetly questioning

If I lack’d any thing.”

Accordingly, the feeling of alienation from God is easily dismantled

and transformed into a feeling of love and ease. The move comes from the

Lord Who intervenes in the exchange of love after the recognition of the

speaker’s sinfulness: “Love said, you shall be he./I the unkinde,

ungratefull? Ah my deare, /I cannot look on thee.”

Significantly, the resolution does not come from a religious agenda,

the speaker is responsible for asserting his human existence and then he

reaches a sense of rest. He manipulates the religious discourse to fit the

resolution of his dilemma. At this point, we can notice the sense of

individualism; the speaker is self-confident when he proves that certainly

he gains redemption out of love. The reconciliation can be seen to be

within the self; love urges for the existence of a new relationship between

the speaker and his tormented self so that now he gains a sense of unity

within himself as soon as he is settled. This poem in not only the end of

torments, it presents the end of the book and then puts an end to the

religious contests by the sense of communal existence as well as by the

figure of Christ. He even neglects his search for truth and then forgets

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about his shame of his sins so that he calls of an end to all these torments.

This is reinforced in the ending lines:

“Truth Lord, but I have marr’d them: let my shame

Go where it doth deserve.

And know you not, says Love, who bore the blame?

My deare, then I will serve.

You must sit down, says Love, and taste my meat:

So I did sit and eat.

The image of settlement announces the beginning of a new life. The

speaker is not obedient to an alienated self (“you must”) but he is

compliant to his internal voice for love exists within himself; this power of

love can control his relation with God and asserts his existence as a

distinct individual. In her study of The Temple Helen Vendler examines the

resolution of the poems and reads the speakers’ selves as “yielding, finally

a picture of the self wholly itself, individual, unique and original”. It is

worthy to note that when the poet finally reaches love within his self he

succeeds to acquire the whole image of God as His redeemer. He finally

finds a unity within his self and his community.

In this way, Herbert’s verse addresses the speaker’s self more than

the Other (God). We can notice the existing gap between asserting the self

and speaking the Other. The Temple becomes this desire to fill the gap

within the poet’s self in order to gain a sense of wholeness at the expense

of praising God. Ironically constructed, the more the poet asserts his

independence, the more he proves his dependence to God. Then the

enigmatic affiliation between God and the speaker becomes more

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ambiguous than it is, so as far as the poet succeeds to separate between

his secular life and his divine world he finds that this separation is in no

way an illusion. Tremendously, his powerful existence depends on the

presence of the sacred as “the centre” of the relation. However, this

centrality of God is only transmitted to show the distinctive identity of the

poet and then the powerful existence of God depends upon the poet

interconnection to Him. At this point, I am trying to take consideration of

the significant narrative poem “The Collar” which can be regarded as the

climax of The Temple. It is as a soliloquy for the speaker unfolds his story

of suffering as a Christian man and refers strongly to the religious

constraints that heighten his torments. This poem is an interior speech

with the self to prove the hard submission to the divine will.

“The Collar” as a dramatic monologue displays at first a self-denial

speaker who is struggling to gain a sense of self-fulfilment but we notice

that the decision is already taken “I struck the board, and cried, No more. /

I will abroad.” It is a very significant moment for the speaker is a rebellious

person this time. Actually this poem in equivocal because of its

dependence on raising questions, here we have philosopher poet and not

a religious one. He is paying the costs of raising fundamental questions

about an “unquestionable” entity. Thus, it is a moment of enquiring about

the freedom of the self when surrounded by the constraints of the Other

and then how to act when this self is unable to rebel against these

boundaries. It is notable to remark that this monologue reminds us of

Shakespeare’s Hamlet famous soliloquy “to be or no to be” for the

speaker’s dilemma lies in the raised question: to be with God or to be with

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Oneself. Furthermore, as far as the poem raises questions it dismantles

the answers and then the tension does not only lie in the speaker’s

relation with his Creator, but it is also a tension between him and verse.

The lines are full of contradictions from the beginning when he declares:

“My lines and life are free; free as the road,” however, this freedom is

cannot coexist with such religious constraints, his lines cannot resist the

presence of the sacred. Even in “The Collar”, the irregular pattern of both

its rhyme scheme and its metre (diameters, trimesters, tetrameters and

then pentameters) reinforces the angry, bitter tone of the poet.

The heightened crisis takes its way to the resolution for the speaker

is aware from the beginning that the only way to resolve the raised

tension is to resort to his Lord. He is certain about the validity of death:

“Call in thy death’s head there: tie up thy fears!” Again, this line reminds

us of Hamlet’s contemplating the skull, which raises in him the image of

the absurdity of death. Accordingly, the question that imposes itself is if

the speaker is aware of the end of his poem so what is the implication of

the remarkable question. Here we can note that the release of the tension

at the end seems to be artificial however, the questions remain valid

hence the existence of a two-layered consciousness. The speaker unfolds

his view through questions, and this calls up for Socrates way of reaching

truth by raising question and not giving full realities. Yet, the end of the

questions is here different when the dilemma reaches its end, the speaker

returns to his faith in Christ (“My Lord”). At this level, it is quite interesting

to note that “The Collar” is not to give new realities than to assert

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“Oneself”; the speaker is interested in maintaining his presence, he

attempts to show that he has a real voice.

Only for a didactic purpose, the speaker makes the end as easily

swept away as to be in Christ’s faith. The clash is now between the

speaker and his self, he is not addressing God neither Christ. Yet, he

speaks to his internal Christian self therefore the speaker is living an

exceptional existential experience; an experience very different from the

religious life he has ever lived, now his “lines and life are free”. His

previous life remains repetitive so that an urgent change is expected and

that is why he “will abroad”; this new experience of rebellion may satisfy

the speaker’s desire; an absent satisfaction in his religious experience

which, can lead to a life of freedom and lessens the feelings of sufferings.

Accordingly, in “The Collar”, we have two different phases: the

unsaid past of the speaker that we can deduce from his actual new

experience and then his present search for the “free will”. The significant

implication of his previous life shows that he had a silent voice unable to

rebel against the imposed restrictions; now his voice changes to be a

rebellious speaking one and this revolution is twofold by both declaring the

wishes and acting through speech. As a result, the speaker becomes able

to reach a sense of difference and originality; the end of silence is

extremely important in the religious experience for the Christian Man has

defiance towards himself in the assertion of his existence with the

presence of the religious restrictions.

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The poet proves that the Christian self is a thinker and that is a part

of the Christian identity; yet, he makes this self search for freedom and

privacy. Thereby he shows the costs of obedience to the divine will, the

Christian self obliterates its freedom and individuality in order to gain

religious release. Hence, the poem narrates the Christian story with his

self, and that what makes the truthfulness of the poem, it is invaded by

the sense of individuality. The speaker is aware of his important revolting

voice in the delineation of the religious discourse. Furthermore, he

changes his speech as he cries “No more!” then language becomes this

major aspect in the construction of the experience of revolution. The

speaker insists that the originality of his experience for in the second part

of the poem he intends to give answers to his previous questions; yet,

these answers heighten the rebellion within the self. The supplement of

the previous life of imprisonment becomes the new status of freedom. Yet

he recognizes that this freedom is only an illusion when he declares:

“Recover all thy sigh-blown age

On double pleasures: leave thy cold dispute

Of what is fit, and not; forsake thy cage,

Thy rope of sands,"

Along the first part of real “choler”, the speaker insists on the use of

“I”; however, this “I” is not stable, it is not a self-constrained neither. The

poetic text then displays the voice of an “I” seeking separation from the

imposed self of God and this is part of the existential dilemma. Referring

to Jacques Lacan view of the other, the “I” of the speaker can only be a

signifier of other many “Ies” then a deep desire of processing a self-

contained self. It is a stage when normally he proves his existence as a

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separated self from “the father” God. Yet, and at the end of the poem he

reminds himself before the reader that God is “He that forbears /To suit

and serve his need/Deserves his load”. He recognizes his separation from

God not as a self-disciplined entity but as a margin and then God is not an

imposed power; it is ‘the centre’ upon which his existence depends on.

Yet, even God’s power depends upon the weakness of Man therefore their

existence can be seen as interchangeable when it is analyzed from the

duality of “margin/centre”. Here we can refer to what Joan Starobinski

writes in his book “The Inside and the Outside”:

“A living organism exists only by virtue of the margin… through which it


determines, defines and opposes itself, becoming individual: limit, finiteness,
individuality, the struggle waged against the outside; all these are correlative. No
inside is conceivable, therefore, without the complicity of an outside on which it
relies… no outside would be conceivable without an inside fending it off…”

At the end of “The Collar”, we meet another image of the rebellious

speaker. The interior speech ends to make a different discourse

introduced by the word “but” and this movement proves that the previous

story is only a fiction and that the true revolution is untrue. The four

ending lines put a quick end to the torments and then make the previous

story a part from the past. From this unpredicted end, we can deduce that

the poem has not a single fixed meaning and so it should be read until the

end since this end deconstructs the first long part. Furthermore, this end

reflects the different aspects of the poem as an equivocal text. It urges for

a second reading and so we do not have a stable text. It does not resist

closure and stability only, but also determinacy since the end makes the

first story of revolution an illusion, a dream and not a truthful state.

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The speaker transforms his desire of changing his life of silence into

an uncatchable dream; he feels that he does not even have the right to

think of this dramatic change. the sense of freedom, difference and

change gained from the first part of the poem are the fruits of his own

speech, his experience is new and creative for it foregrounds the recovery

of the self and its existence far from the boundaries it surrounds.

Accordingly, the end of the poem does not reflect the futility of the

experience of liberation for the speech declares itself.

The centrality of God does not construct the speaker as a margin; his

speech becomes the centre of the relationship for it shows the thoughts of

a Christian man who reflects upon the religious discourse; the speaker’s

speech can never be obliterated from the mind, the idea remains in the

mind and that what makes the originality of the discourse. The tension is

not artificial for the rebellious voice remains there in the unconscious and

the unfolding of the torments shows their extremely real existence. The

experience of rebellion does not loose its validity so that we can claim that

the end of the poem is really the end of the experience. “The Collar” as an

equivocal text resists closure; its movement is circular so when we turn

back to the first line we find “No more” which sums up for the past life,

thus the end of the poem announces the return to the previous status. The

poem ends with “My Lord” and begins with “I struck the board, and cried

no more. I will abroad” (emphasis added); therefore the poem is

continuing rhythmically and in a circular way it may come a day when the

speaker “will struck the board of the lord”.

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Now the experience of speaking is true and valid, his rebellious

discourse reflects his existence as a thinking person and then destructs his

life of silence; then he becomes self-manifested. Compared to the other

poems, “The Collar” is a speech within the self and not with the sacred.

Therefore, he gives then a free space to speak with his self so he is aware

that the religious thought comes from within and not from outside. It is

fundamental to be in harmony with his self in order to make a “true”

relation with God; in this way, the poet makes a reflection upon the self as

previously he represents the image of God. He shows the difference

between himself and the divine in order to show the complexity of the

relation and then he feels that as long as he will depart from God he will

become more alienated.

Eventually he “heard one calling, child: And I replied, My Lord”. He

insists that he is not alone, he resorts to Christ as the redeemer, a safer

position yet, it is an ironical situation as far as his freedom is concerned.

His calling for the “Lord” means his returning to his religious life. His

returning to the “board” is a sign of anarchy of life: world is complex and

simple at the same time. His relation with the divine can be problematic

(the search for freedom) but at the same time plain (child/lord). The verse

delineates this journey of searching for truth and the play between the

complexity and the plainness of the human existence so what matters as a

discourse is the self-representation of the self even when it encounters

submission and lives in a chaotic world. Joseph Summers in his analysis of

“The Collar” makes this precious account:

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“Until the final four lines, the poem dramatizes expertly and convincingly the
revolt of the heart and its imitation of colloquial speech almost convinces us of the
justice of the cause. But the disorder of the poem provides a constant implicit
criticism, and with the final lines we recognize that “The Collar” is a narrative in
past tense: the message for the present concerns the necessity of order.”

Thus, considerably the submission to the divine is a way to make a

sense of order to his life; Hence to re-construct his true self. When the

rebellious self can be the settlement of the chaotic world, where he

“struck the board” and leaves it order to establish a world of his own. Yet,

he returns in search for safety and then the interior logic of the poem

proves that the end is only an illusion hence the “illusion” of rebellion is

the end of a false order. The experience of revolution is out of true

sufferings clearly delineated when he refers to the “thorn” which “let (him)

blood”.

The speaker finally succeeds to find a safe territory only when he

starts to “speak” about his experience so that he is able to fulfil his

language with true meanings and this is the logic of his true experience

adequate to delineate a true image of the self. At this point, we can

assume that the poet plays on the centrality of his discourse in the

delineation of a true relationship; the reader becomes involved in

constructing the relation between the poet and his God. In this way “The

collar” as a “writterly” text, to borrow Roland Barthes concept resists

closure; it is a text of a multiplicity of interpretations. From the beginning,

the title is in itself ambiguous: the collar is read as “the choler” a pun of

the French word “colère” which means the extreme dissatisfaction and

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anger. It refers also to the collar of the religious restrictions and then we

later understand from the poem that the speaker wants to break this collar

and reach freedom.

To conclude this part, and as far as The Temple is considered as an

entity, Herbert’s movement from the search of his Christian self to the

celebration of the Eucharist in the final poems shows the deep reflection of

the Christian poet. The journey of the poet is from and within the self; it is

a conflict with the other as well as with God. Then the reduction of

freedom is the cost of sacrifice so the poet attributes a sense of divinity to

himself (to be like Christ). In this way, Herbert’s verse becomes an

essential testimony in showing the real Christian and his fidelity to the

divine will.

2/ The Temple: the journey within the self towards the

divine will:

Herbert dramatizes in The Temple the interconnection between the

individual speaker and his omnipotent Protestant God to the extent that

this speaker becomes a feeble subject serving a potent king. Yet, this

struggle leads to a substantial profit so that The Temple becomes a

testimony of the power of the divine verse to allure Man and then shows

him the way to Heaven. In each poem, we are astonished by a new

struggle but the original procedure towards resolution also delights us.

When Herbert’s speaker experiences sickness and sorrow, he

becomes a rebellious self, he says in “Affliction I” for instance: “What

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pleasures could I want, whose king I served/ well I will change the service

and go seek some other master out” (Lines 13/63/64). Nevertheless, this

status of restlessness does not continue, it leads to happiness at the end

thus the reach of heaven is not an easy journey. Herbert makes use of his

poetic power to encounter the divine’s power; in this way, he is able to

free his interior self from the omnipotence of the king God so in “The

Cross” he declares: “A my deare Father ease my smart!/ these

contrarieties crush me: these crosse actions/ doe windie a rope about and

cut my heart”. Accordingly, we can assume that The Temple exemplifies

the Renaissance belief in eloquence and illustrates the Anglican desire to

gain intimacy with God through language. The speakers in Herbert’s verse

seem to control the tension from the beginning of the poem. However,

revealing the tension is more important than the resolution itself, what

makes the originality of the experience.

The poem, even diatactic, is a journey within the self to display the

path towards the divine will; the speaker is the teacher and the learner at

the same time. The interior story of the poem moves to a dramatic end,

which proves the death of a secular experience and the validity of the

sacred truth. In this way, the poems become that implicit conceit: they are

the sins, once they are unfolded then they become part of the past and

then the poet achieves redemption. At this point, it lies a problematic

dimension of the verse: the truthfulness of the text and its ability to

transmit a real story especially when the reader discovers that the speaker

is conscious about the end of his hard experience and that this experience

ends before it even starts.

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At this level, one should put into consideration the ontological

movement of the text from its oral to its written state. The speaker has a

great torment when he is telling his story then he makes the conclusion as

an end to his written text, yet the religious experience does continue. So

here there is something missed in his story of asserting his individuality;

for the speaker fails to fill the gap between the longing for free existence

and his achieved imprisonment. The question that imposes itself is what

the real is: his goal or the result he reaches at the end. Yet, the

seriousness of the experience urges for the necessity to unfold it whatever

the implications would be. Eventually, the existence of the dilemma is

more significant than the resolution itself. Yet, what is the aim of telling a

story whose end is already known, furthermore, does the poem contrasts

its logic or there is something hidden in Herbert’s discourse and that leads

to this troublesome end, then one should question the dubious reversal of

the existential experience.

At the beginning of the poems, the speaker seems to control his

discourse, but his exceptional experience leads to an end, which can be

described as an acceptance of the imposed divine. Therefore, the

individual speaker is not the master of the discourse and this is the great

paid cost in order to gain a harmonically relation with God. In this way, the

poems become moments of recognizing “the real self” and then returning

to existence under the divine will. We can refer here to some poems of

reversal such as “The Reprisal”, “Sinnie I”, “Misery” and “The pearl” which

are retrospective accounts and can be divided into two parts: the first one

accounts is a past experience narrated in the past tense and the final part

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is a conclusive end of the torments; the return to the Divine submission.

So in the start, the speaker offers the illusion of a multiplicity of ways to

escape his sorrows. Barely, he can choose his way, for he is not a free self,

then the dismantling of all means makes from the submission to the divine

will the only path for existence hence this is the internal logic of the divine

verse. This is reinforced in “Affliction I” when he declares: “I was

entangled in the world of strife/ Before I had the power to change my life”.

The individual speaker is delineated in poem as a person devoid

from his right of choice. Yet, he cannot escape to choose between the free

will or the divine will so, he cannot be in a status of “in between”. The very

moment of thinking about the change is in itself the moment of the

inability to change therefore the collapse is made to show the way to

assert the existence within God. In this way, he proves that he is not lost

and that the end of discovery of the true will is found in God’s faith. He

finally recognizes that: “Yet, lest perchance I should too happy be/ in my

unhappiness”. This significant paradox in “Affliction I” foreshadows the

irony of the divine existence, the speaker always proves that his existence

lies in his “inexistence”, he sure that he has no means to make his

existence true; yet, he can achieve the divine will when he expunges

himself.

Representing a real truthful relationship with the Sacred may lead to

a significant implication: the illusion in the divine verse becomes a truth;

there is a moment when the speaker recognizes that he should discard his

past and make his own history so his present situation is only an illusion.

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Yet, this illusion is later constructed to be more truthful than he seeks to

reach. God’s presence is a fact; he is the master and the true way to

happiness.

Furthermore, the speaker constructs his self as ignorant for at the

heart of ignorance lies the true knowledge. The futile search for coherence

makes his life cohesive so that it is better to construct an ignorant self

than to make an imaginary self. In this way, the poet prefers not to know

instead of knowing that he is a humiliated creature. In most poems, the

speaker makes God the absent-present voice; the sacred power, either

God or the Lord, is foregrounded in the very act of narrating one’s story.

This divine controls the speech even when the speaker makes an

autobiographical account. At this point, we can refer to Anna. K. Nardo

article “George Herbert’s pulling for a prime” when she maintains that

Herbert: “characterizes God as a disembodied voice that seems to enter

the poem from without actually comes from within.”

Accordingly, Herbert narrates not only his experience with the divine

but also reflects upon the relation of the divine to his creature. The voice

of God is implicitly projected when the end of the poem proceeds towards

the collapse. Yet, the relinquishment of the speaker makes a sense of

coherence absent in his “real life”; so the collapse is only a recovery and a

way to rise again within the divine. In order to survive, the poet

“obliterates” his narrative story, to exist means for him to deny his

autobiographical account and look for a way to re-write a “new”

autobiography that fits the divine discourse. We can clarify this point

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through a close examination of Herbert’s startling poem “Artillerie”; we

encounter a very rebellious individual, who declares clearly:

“When suddenly I heard one say,

Do as thou usest, disobey,

Expell good motions from thy breast,

Which have the face of fire, but end in rest.”

The speaker claims clearly that he would surely find rest out of

disobedience so the ending seems to be over-controlled; yet, the journey

to this end is not that easy path for in the coming couple of stanzas, he

will analyse his dilemma in terms of lost- gain. Further meditation upon his

serious decision implies that the individual speaker is not very satisfied

with his present situation. The narrative story begins with a revolution, a

decision taken at a moment of reflection. Nevertheless, the story does not

cease at this point, again, when he reflects upon his “new” situation he

finds himself in a more tragic situation: “then I refuse not ev’n with

bloud/To wash away my stubborn thought/ For I will do or suffer what I

ought.”

Strikingly, the self-directed person we discover is reversed to a

“pitiful” person yet, this individual is a “thinker”, his thought makes his

tragedy and his longing for freedom constructs his torments. He is

conscious of the presence of an “other”. Notably, he employs the

construction of “if...” and the future tense therefore he analyses his

situation according to the logic of his religious belief. In search for a

coherent existence within “the self”, the speaker is longing for a balanced

situation between his “disobedient self” and his “faithful self”. Hence, with

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both selves this individual thinks and then he does not want to take

“unreasonable” decision; significantly, he employs always the diction of

thought, “me thoughts”, “I muse”, “stubborn thought”, but he also

establishes a world of fight: “the Artillerie”, “combate”, “shooters” and

“contest” thus, this battle is taking place within his mind. The seriousness

of the conflict lies in the challenge within the poet himself to “win” a

constant position and to have a true way towards a real rest. Once he

claims that he “refuse” to be a disobedient person, he moves from the

invalid revolution and then reinforces another different position. Thus, the

speaker does not show himself as an incapable person of decision

especially when he declares, “I refuse”, he projects a self-contained

person, so his choice is free.

Yet, and before he ends the poem, he views the matter from another

perspective, he is a defiant to God, “But I have also starres and shooters

too/ Born where thy servants both artilleries use.” God is not the pivot of

the battle for the speaker is also a significant power; his power does not lie

in his ironical “victory” but in his deep belief in his overcoming of a

suffering will:

Not but I am (I must say still)

Much more oblig’d to do thy will,

Then thou to grant mine: but because

Thy promise now hath ev’n set thee thy laws

He feels responsible to explain to his “opponent” why he relinquishes, the

word “hath ev’n” is notably a pun of ‘heaven’, which is the real goal of the

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poet. After the long contest with the divine power, the individual speaker

comes to conclude:

“Yet if thou shunnest, I am thine:

I must be so, if I am mine.

There is no articling with thee:

I am but finite, yet thine infinitely.”

This collapse is dismantled from the beginning; the speaker cannot

disobey in order to gain his immortal rest.

The retrospective is an urgent element in this narrative moment for

it proves the futility of searching for a world of freedom. The speaker does

not seem to be totally appeased about his past experience so the

revolution is urgent, he manifests a responsible individual able to

overcome the conflicts within himself in order to gain to reach the right

status. Therefore, the narrative is led to an end, which shapes the true

existence of the Christian self. This self is able to contest but

simultaneously conscious that its contest would make him suffer and more

importantly, it would impede his way to heaven. Nevertheless, the

experience of rebellion is very important in order to make the religious

faith complete. Disobedience is in a way the true path towards the divine

satisfaction.

Eventually, we cannot call the relinquishment of the revolution as a

collapse or a failure, the speaker proves the validity of being under the

divine will. The interior logic of the religious discourse makes from slavery

the true way to rest, from sacrifice the free way to happiness and then out

of the collapse comes the real recovery. Reversely, when the speaker

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gains his true will, the experience of revolution becomes the futile one

thus the obligation becomes logically the only choice for gaining freedom

and instead of being a slave to his thought of disobedience, he becomes

free under the divine will.

As far as the truthfulness of the autobiography is concerned, the text

seems to deny itself at the expense of proving the validity of the narrative.

Instead of continuing his true story of disobey, which may, as he claims,

“end in rest” the poet retains and then supplements this story with a

“reversed story”. He shows what he learns, what he “has to do” in place of

what he really lived; indeed this is an implicit image of sacrifice.

Consequently, the story seems to be incomplete for taking a decision is

“the must” and not the real fact. The text survives not because the story

exists but for the protagonist proves that he survives. He wins the battle

“logically” since, he refuses from the beginning to lose it, and hence it is

the logic of the text, which proves the victory of the speaker.

The text in this way should be read until the “real end” for the story

has no sense without referring to the denouement so that the meaning

within the poem is always “deferred”. There is no revolution without

peace, no collapse without end, and no disobedience without obedience.

The speaker provides an end in the start, yet; the end of the poem does

not sign the end of the narrative. The returning to God’s faith ends the

dilemma, which exists already in the interior story of the narrative

however, the speaker returns at the end to be part of the divine, “yet

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thine”. At this point, a question imposes itself: to what extent does the

poet succeed to ease his interior rebellious voice?

When we consider that, the divine verse is a form of confessing the

Christian sins so we can assume this verse becomes a word of

performance; when the poet unfolds his disobedience he shows a true

experience, yet within his discourse lies this conflict between the self-

representation and the self-relinquishment. If the Christian poet provides

the reader with his experience of revolution and does not end it in the

harmony with the divine, he may lose the sense of truthfulness; so, what

he gains is the delineation of the very moment of existence between

action and inaction. In this way, his writing becomes a way to cure his

sufferings but at the same time, it annihilates his experience as a self-

contained individual.

The ontological movement of the text from the oral stage to the

written one foreshadows the movement of the experience from an idea to

a narrative. This movement contaminates the truthfulness of the

experience so that the idea of “to re-write” the story becomes an illusion:

what is true is the text itself because the end reconstructs the whole story.

In order to make the coherence of the verse, the narrative is constructed

to be religiously logic.

Remarkably, the individual Man is present in Herbert’s verse; the

religious experience is narrated using the impressive “I”. This is the

impact of the humanist belief in the noble existence of Man besides,

regarding him as the crown of creation. Herbert also believes in the

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individual self to create his own life so that his verse reflects Man’s ability

to constitute an original way to reach the divine will and to make self-

satisfaction. Yet, this final rest foreshadows a sense of perfectness in order

to construct a sort of parallel between the creative Christian individual and

God’s perfect creative. At this point, we can heed Joseph.H.Summers’ view

of The Temple:

“If poetry was an imitation of God’s creation and possessed the divine power of
moving the affections, the use of it for secular ends might come near to blasphemy
(....).The ultimate method of reflecting God’s glory was the creation of a work of decency
and order, a work of beauty, whether a church, an ordered poem, or an ordered life. This
was not confined to the artist, but was the privilege and duty of every Christian.”

In order to construct a united world out of the chaos, the poet finds

in the collapse towards God the true way to reach a sense to reach

coherence. Accordingly, to make a unified-self, the individual comes

across that when he belongs to God is the best and it is even the unique

way to attain a real satisfaction. As he says in the last line of “Artillerie”: “I

am but finite, yet thine infinitely”. Indeed, this poem presents a

metaphorical image of the existing fight not only with God but also it is a

battle within the self. Eventually, the collapse towards God comes to

remake the unity within a tormented self. In this way, truth does not come

from outside, it emerges from the text itself hence the logic erects the

whole unity and that what constructs the true sense of the divine verse.

When we consider The Temple as an imitation of God’s creation of

the church as a place of prayer, one should deeply analyse “the temple” in

terms of the major conceit in order to clarify the complex relation between

the divine and man. Notably, there is a hidden relationship between the

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individual Christian and the religious space so that the church becomes

the connective line between God and this individual Christian.

Furthermore, “the temple”, being a metaphor, may also lead to an

inherent metaphor implicitly existing in Herbert’s divine verse: “Religion is

a journey” and not an imposed faith.

Entitling the collected poems “The Temple” does not only reflect the

religious aspect of the text but it also foreshadows the complex journey of

the individual Christian towards heaven. Normally, the temple is the place

where the Christian can make his prayer, yet he is also able to confess his

sins in order to gain God’s redemption. For example, he seriously unfolds

this in “The Reprisal”:

“Yet by confession will I come

Into the conquest. Though I can do nought

Against thee, in thee I will overcome

The man, who once against thee fought.”

A projection to Herbert’s The Temple” may lead to assume that the

poems are mapped to be an autobiographical representation of the

Christian man. Most of the poems delineate the journey of a Christian from

his revolutionary moment to his final settlement; examples of these poems

of resurrected ending are “Miserie”, “The Temper”, “The Collar” and “The

Pearl”. Yet, The Temple is not only a simple reflection of the Christian

religious experience; it is rather a reflection upon this experience.

Therefore, the temple, which is a stable place, is transfigured into an

equivocal text, a critical text that points to the uneasy journey of the

Christian self.

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The Temple shows the Christian mind when it thinks, it tells the

interior story, the “unsaid” in terms of the “unconscious. What matters is

the aesthetic of the text, which lies not only in the figurative language but

also in the logical way of the poem’s end. The speaker presents the way to

reach the reversal and proves, at the same time that this relinquishment

naturally exists. This verse survives for its end constructs the wholeness of

the story; confessing his thoughts is away to prove his faithfulness to God

as the church is the place where the Christian proves his loyalty to God. In

this way, Herbert’s poems exist by the virtue of its artfulness; hence, it is

an art, which lives by performance. Eventually, the religious verse

becomes the way to cure oneself and to be close to God.

As far as the issue of creation is concerned, the temple is Christ’s

creation, in parallel; The Temple is the poet’s creation so there is an

implication of an imitation of the religious world. The poet constructs his

“own temple” where he projects the temple differently; he remakes it to

be the space of the true Christian life. In this way, the Christian self,

delineated in The Temple has in itself an interior temple; so that the

church is not that separated setting, it exists within the self; therefore, the

space is given a quality of life and then an immortal union between Man

and his creator.

The end of the poems towards reversal is natural for the settlement

exists already. The speaker is there in the temple so it is contrasting to

search for a way out of the church. How can he escape from a place, which

exists, within his self? Therefore, the church becomes a place of sacrifice,

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yet it is a delightful sacrifice. At this point, we can refer to “Church Porch”

when Herbert writes, “Averse may finde him/And turn delight into a

sacrifice”. As Christ is sacrificed for all humanity, (the images of his

sacrifice can be found in the church) the poet asserts his sacrifice in his

own temple. This journey becomes exceptional for it witnesses a “truthful

sacrifice”, incarnate in the very act of writing.

Actually, in most of his poems, Herbert synthesizes a story of the

journey within the individual Christian; yet, the end of this spiritual journey

is the return to God’s faith. Then the starting point (the revolution) is

changed to be moderated and not, as to be expected, to be heightened so

the goal of the journey does not lie in proving the validity of the revolution

rather, the speaker confirms that the reversal is more valid than this

revolution for the aim is the rest.

The poet traveler searches for a true relationship with God while he

is in the temple so he is already sure that the goal is going to be achieved.

The space makes the construction of a unified world easier; furthermore,

he finds a sense of freedom in his writing; his verse frees him from the

temple as a limited space. He also imitates Christ’s sacrifice (who writes

the Bible), when he subverts his freedom in favour of God’s faith therefore,

he projects this sacrifice of Christ metaphorically to his self in order to

reinforce that he is faithful to his religious faith par-excellence; the true

Christian cannot exist without sacrifice. Accordingly, the representation of

the self is made through the projection of religious elements instrumental

for the construction of the Christian journey. The metaphorical depiction

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allows for an easiness to make his “perfect self” and then to be close to

the divine.

On the same way, Herbert imitates the temple of God for it has a

real existence. His temple transcends the idea of the church as a building

to make it a space full of life and reflection. This trait attributes a sense of

revolution to Herbert’s verse for it contrasted Plato’s view of Art as an

imitation of a false copy; the poet imitates a creation of God, which is very

truthful. The Temple foreshadows a sense of individualism; the poet

constructs his own temple, which can be viewed as a continuation of God’s

temple and reflection upon the religious enigma. Notably, he does not only

reach harmony with God, he also succeeds to make a congruity between

himself and his verse; in his self-reflexive poem “Denial”, he assumes at

the end that:

“O cheer tune my heartless breast,

Defer no time;

That so thy favours granting my request,

They and mind may chime

And mend my rhyme.

Conflict is necessary in Herbert’s divine verse, for it shows that the

human being’s life is characterized by a chaotic existence and then the

Christian faith is essential in order to establish an ordered, harmonious

life. The contradictions of human existence, seriously tackled in this verse,

urge for a search towards a coherent stable life so that the church

eliminates the torments; it is no more an institution of tyranny and power,

Herbert (who is also an Anglican priest) views the church as the space of

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reconciliation between the chaotic human world and the heavenly world.

In this way, the text projects a delineation of a whole kingdom existed only

within the self and in which, it lies a deep journey so that we do not find a

single way, yet a multiplicity of ways to reach the divine will.

At this point, we may consider Herbert’s “The Pilgrimage” which

delineates clearly the life journey of the individual Christian. Notably,

pilgrimage is the major conceit of the poem for the journey towards the

Divine is seen to be a pilgrimage travel. However, the pilgrimage journey

is attributed with a new sense more truthful than it is. Here, the journey is

more real because it comes within the self, and then the end is achieved

from within so that the pilgrimage is not that artificial journey; it is rather a

factual movement from “a wasted place” to “the gladsome hill”. The

narrative prospective foreshadows the truthfulness of the story; yet, what

matters is the movement of the traveller and not the story itself. Joseph

Summers says in his article Herbert’s form, “Within most of the individual

poems the emphasis is on construction rather than pilgrimage”. Herbert

focuses more on the way of achieving such end; the important experience

of pilgrimage lies in the metamorphoses; the poet traveller is not the same

person accordingly, we can assume that the poet admires his Self when it

is changing; he despises this self when it is stable even if it is a

revolutionary self. The travel is not a chaotic one; it is a purposed journey

so that even he thinks, he should be restrictive to God faith.

Eventually, in Herbert verse we notice the sense of travelling. The

spiritual journey is an argument proving that the true way of life is to

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follow God’s faith. In this way, the poet dismantles all the other ways of

searching; he insists on the validity of his religious experience. At the very

moment of reaching the divine will, he demonstrates that rest lies in his

strong desire to attain his faith. Being in the church allows for the

construction of a unified world. Herbert uses the church’s elements in a

metaphorical way; a clear reflection is on the titles of some poems such as

“The Window”, “The Altar”, and “The Church floore”. Although, he is

imprisoned in the church, he proves that his verse allows for discovering

the way to the divine will. Then we can call this verse the space of

freedom, he foreshadows a world of reconciliation between the human

desires and the religious restrictions.

In her fine analysis of Herbert’s verse from a post-structuralist

perspective, Barbara Lewaski states: “I suggest that Herbert’s art is in

large measure founded upon the elements of Protestant poetics we have

been considering- biblical genre theory, biblical tropes, Protestant ways

with emblem, metaphor, and typology, and protestant theory regarding

the uses of art in religious subjects.”

Accordingly, Herbert’s verbal power consists in his eager ability to

cope with the dilemma he faces and then to prove that the religious art

renders truth. This sense of truthfulness yields the way for an immortal

rest in God thus the multiple functions of the divine verse.

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PART III: The Utopian World and the limits of

representation:

1 /-The politics of writing “Utopia”:

The act of writing poetry raised theological problems since Herbert is

an Anglican poet, at his time poetry was forbidden as a form of art,

however; the state of interdisciplinary between his art and the religious

discourse he reinforces makes his verse not only legitimate but also

cogent. In his verse, Herbert urges for an imperative reconciliation

between Man and his existence in a world of religious restrictions.

Consequently, Herbert’s poems delineate a utopian world where these

restrictions are dismantled and then, transfigured metaphorically into “the

laws” which govern the precarious, critical relationship between God (the

King) and Man (the creature).

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Different from the other metaphysical divine poets, Herbert

transforms the intricate dilemma of the Christian Man to settle it in a world

of Utopia, very different from the real life of torments. The poet proves

that the kingdom of God is the world of happiness; he makes God the

perfect leader above all the Stuart kings in the decades leading up the civil

war. The ideals of the Renaissance Era strongly exist in Herbert’s poems;

they reflect the yearning of an Anglican priest to reconcile between the

tyrannical “worldliness” Church as an obligatory instrument and the

religious faith, which is extremely rooted in the Christian self. In this way,

there is an urgent need for making a utopian world that reflects the

Christian faith as well as to settle the tormented self.

Herbert’s The Temple is a visionary world for a perfect relationship

with the sacred God. In a political perspective, David Loewenstein

delineates this relationship as following:

“Herbert, moreover, will sometimes characterize the restless

relationship between the individual speaker and his omnipotent Protestant God in

language reminding us of the close interconnections of between politics and

religion in earlier seventeenth-century England. For example, Herbert will

dramatize that relationship in terms of an unworthy subject serving a powerful

king, so that the inner self now becomes the principal site of political power and

struggle.”

Surely, God is the governor of this world, yet He is not that tyrannical king.

There is a sharing of rules between Man and The sacred, the poet writes at

the end of his poems “Man”:“That, as the world serves us, we may serve

thee/ And, both,thy servants be.” Accordingly, the poet establishes a

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communicative system with The Sacred, and then it is the impact of the

secular love poetry, yet; the beloved is the sacred and there is a

relationship of reconciliation. It is an insistence upon Man’s ability to

communicate God and to construct a united world with Him. Thus, The

Temple becomes the response to the religious faith so that the poet

establishes a sort of theological covenant out of his spiritual experience. In

this way, the importance of the divine verse lies in its religious

dimensions; it is a significant way to preach God, to be near to his realm

and to confess the sins in order to reach sanctification.

The Utopian world maintained in Herbert’s verse embodies the

intersection of the political power of God (being the King) with religion and

this makes the theological covenant between Man and God. Out of his

daily experience and his plain style, Herbert delineates “the true

convictions” for a “sweet life”; he is haunted by the weakness and the

corruption of the humanity. He makes an art that purifies the human soul

and reminds the mortality of life; a point emphasized in “Vertue” when he

moves from the sweetness of a heavenly day to: “the dew shall weep thy

fall to-night”. This wavering movement between life and death reinforces

the poetic transition between life and death yet; the poem calls for its

immortality when he says at the end: “Then chiefly lives.” As far as the

“vertuous soul” is eternally, the verse is everlasting. Herbert points that

death is not that that tragic moment, it is rather a temporal moment

between mortality and immortality; a shift towards the spiritual eternal

existence with God. Consequently, the poet is certain that death is the end

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of a corrupted life, yet he urges for constructing reconciliation between

profligate human world and a virtuous world.

As a self-reflexive poem, “Vertue” exemplifies the sweetness of the

virtual world for the poem itself is a sweet instant; its romantic tone of a

carpe–diem poem reinforces the sweetness of the theological covenant.

The virtuous soul is compared to a “timber” which “though the whole

world turn to coal” it “chiefly lives”. Here the aspect of virtuality is

reflected in the poem that can never perish as it immortalises a virtuous

soul. Though he employs earthly elements in the poem such as: “sky, day,

earth, rose, timber”, the poet goes behind the limited earthly experience

to attribute a sense of glory and then to strengthen the deep relation with

God for when death is the real end of the human “for thou must die”, the

virtuous soul resists death. Furthermore, the day is no longer that short-

lived experience it is rather an influential experience, which has a strong

impact to the spiritual experience. However, it has also a poetic influence

on the reconciliation between the earthly world and the spiritual world.

Similarly, the poem despite its shortness it reflects the importance of the

virtuous soul in constructing a deep relation with God. On a different level,

there is a differed meaning in the internal logic of the poem. The day of

the poem shadows the experience of the speaker, the rose reflects the

beauty of the poem and the spring presents the sweetness of the spiritual

experience. As a result, the sweetness of the poem lies in its ability to

eternalize its spiritual expression.

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Eventually, the poet is in harmony with his world for he guarantees

happiness even after death. He also establishes a concordant relation with

God. “Vertue” is one of the many poems that support the urgent

reconciliation with the Sacred and then ease the dramatic internal anxiety.

Metaphorically speaking, The Temple is designed to be utopian where the

Christian self, even sinner, can feel delight.

As a Utopian world, the Christian in The Temple in harmony not only

with God but also with his self and with the world he lives in. The

troublesome tension is created only to prove the validity of the Christian

truth and to advocate that the divine will is the incentive for thriving a full

existence. Thus, the dramatic anxiety exists only to be subverted into a

self-fulfilling person who is able to overcome this apprehensive soul. When

all the poems end in triumph of the divine will, this reinforces the

truthfulness of the religious over the secular. Even the poems with carpe-

diem form point that Man should only admire the Lord. “Bitter-Sweet” for

instance reinforces the deep relation between the speaker and his Lord:

“Ah my dear angry Lord.

Since thou dost love, yet strike;

Cast down, yet help afford;

Sure I will do the like.

I will complain, yet praise;

I will bewail, approve:

And all my sour-sweet days

I will lament and love.”

At this point, we may scrutinize the political posturing of the utopian

world, as Herbert urges for coping with his Lord when he triumphs over his

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dilemmas. The poet’s relation with the Sacred is governed by a covenant

system so that the poetic text ends in a way to fulfil this theological

covenant. The speaker is eager to show how he is faithful to the

agreement with God how he is faithful to the absolute agreement with God

so that the tensions prove the deep struggle to fulfil this agreement. In

“Flower”, the speaker advocates a strong, as he says, “Lord of power” at

the expense of his powerlessness; so, when he minimizes himself as a

weak creature, he delineates the Sacred as the powerful king. Yet, at the

very moment of performing the covenant, he changes his “Lord of power”

into the “Lord of love”. Accordingly, the poet manipulates the relation in

order to realize his wish and then to make a harmony with his Lord.

Significantly, “Assurance” reveals the theological covenant in which the

speaker finds the signs of grace. After the “spiteful bitter thought”, he

recognizes that his devil thought would lead him to “cold despairs, and

grawing pensivenesse”. In this way, the speaker makes his obedience to

the Lord the true and the logic way to achieve rest. He depicts clearly the

covenant when he says:

“But thou art my desert:

And in this league, which now my foes invade,

Thou art not only to perform thy part,

But also mine; as when the league was made

Thou didst at once thy self indite,

And hold my hand, while i did write.

The speaker is sure that the covenant will be fulfilled because it

depends upon the eternal God. His feeling of pain: “so high a torture: Is

such poison bought...” as a true Christian, he should pay in order to

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guarantee the Lord’s grace. Notably, the fact of writing such verse is a

way to cure his poisoned devil thought and to confess his torment; as if he

will be cured when he unfolds it to God. It is precisely to such view that

Herbert alludes in his last stanza: “Now foolish thought go on/ Spin out thy

thread, and make thereof a coat.”

In fact most of the poems start with a tragic situation of anxiety then

with God’s support the speaker’s troublesome changes into a state of rest;

accordingly, the internal logic of the poems turn around dismantling the

religious constraints into the religious covenant. Hence, the poet

rediscovers that at the very moment of writing the poem it becomes a

meeting point of the religious faith with the realization of that faith; the

lines unfold the truthfulness of the religious experience, which starts in

pain but ends with happiness. Love that arises from God is transmitted to

Man; as the poem ends with precious resolution: “What for it self love once

began, Now love and truth will end in Man”. Thus, the poem reflects the

end of the experience of suffering and the beginning of another

experience of love. The speaker is assured by God’s love, what makes him

protected and insured about the validity of the covenant theology.

By referring to the secular verse, the covenant depends upon the

lover; in contrast, in this divine verse, the poet relies on the powerful God

so that the covenant is governed upon a divine process. Hence, Herbert’s

divine verse originates the English covenant theology not only as a system

of thoughts but also rather as a spiritual experience, in which love does

not emerge from the speaker, as in the secular verse, yet it stems from

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God and continues within Man’s soul thus there is already a strong

connection between Man and God. At this point, we can admit that God is

no longer the addressee since he has already fulfilled His part, now that

Man becomes the addressee; he is the one who should accomplish the

covenant and achieve the sacred faith. Certainly, it is God Who sets the

covenant and then it is Him Who fulfils its conditions; therefore, Man is the

one who should complete the conditions. Herbert addresses Man to be

bound to his faith; the changes are to come from the human being for God

is a stable power. So he states in “Obedience”, in the fourth stanza: “O let

thy sacred will/ All thy delight in me fulfil” then he continues in the

following stanza:

“yet since thou canst not choose but see my actions;

So great are thy perfections,

Thou mayst as well my actions guide as see.”

Actually, the poet attributes a sense of sublime to his verse when he

assumes that God demonizes him to write. He succeeds to defeat his

internal torments only when he transmits his pains into words. Commonly,

he makes a unity between his lines and his pains so that he says in the

opening lines of “Obedience”:

“My God if my writings may

Convey a Lordship any way

Whither the buyer and the seller please

Let it not thee displease

If this poore paper do as much as they.

On it my heart doth bleed

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As my lines, as there doth need

To passé itself and all it hath to thee.

To which I do agree,

And here present it as my special deed.

In this way, the religious constraints become the frontiers by which

the speaker would be able to achieve the divine will. The poet is not able

to disobey the “Lord of love” as he describes Him in “Flower”. The power

of the Sacred lies in sweetness and love so that the speaker establishes a

trinity relation manipulated with this power; God is the Father, nature is

the mother and Man is the son. The poet lives in harmony naturally for he

is part of the nature thus logically he cannot escape his harmonious

relation with the Sacred. Man’s existence is not futile since he is a servant

of God and to nature; this existence depends upon God’s love and support.

Consequently, the tension between the Divine and Man is ended to make

the return to the natural situation of love. The influence of God, “the

Father” is to re-make the speaker’s situation. This metamorphose consists

in blurring the lines between a faithful Christian and the powerful God. We

may here point to Helen Vendler view; she states that God’s power:

“assuaged his anxiety by deciding that power is not arbitrary but rather

solicitous and redemptive.”

Subtly, Herbert makes God an “active” part in the covenant. God

sanctifies the speaker’s sins as soon as Man promises his faithfulness to

the divine will; a kind of purchase is erected not only in “Obedience” but

also in other several poems such as “Vanitie” when the poet writes: “to

purchase heaven for repenting/ Is no hard rate.” Moreover, he describes

his Lord in “Faith” as:

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“I did beleeve that I did nothing awe,

and liv’d accordingly; my creditor

Beleeves so too, and lets me go.

The relationship with the Lord is frequently depicted as a purchase

transaction. Words such as “to sell”, “to buy” and “debt” shadow a

business imagery to the sacred verse. Yet it is an original way to

communicate with the Sacred and then it announces a more implicit deep

part of the relation. At this point, I am trying to heed Bernard Knieger’s

reading of Herbert’s verse; he asserts,

“Clearly, Herbert is so intimate and confident in his intercourse with


God that he can employ even the language of business when talking to Him
and about Him. And Hebert’s concept of the “bargain” between God and
Man, centering around his understanding of the implication of the blood-
sacrifice of Christ, communicated itself readily through business
terminology.”

Accordingly, the purchase sale terminology is part of the covenant; it

foreshadows Christ’s sacrifice for all humanity. Thus, it alludes that the

poet becomes a “parody” of Christ’s sacrifice when he refers to the

suffering of Man; he states in the final lines of his poem “The Holdfast”:

“What Adam had, and forfeited for all, Christ keepth now, who cannot fail

or fall”. In this way, Herbert writes the continuation of Man’s sacrifice and

more specifically the suffering of a true intellectual Christian.

Paradoxically, the religious constraints make the torments but at the

same time, the Sacred is the source of happiness. Herbert’s speakers

seem to be convinced that their torments end at the very moment of

guarantying grace. The merciful God offers forgiveness to the faithful

Christian then the speaker announces the easiness of the relation despite

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its complexity. The harmonious relation is reinforced when all the poems

end in rest. We can refer here to the final stanza of “Trinitie Sunday”

“Enrich my heart, mouth, hands in me,

With faith, with hope, with charitie;

That I may runne, rise, rest with.”

At this point lies Herbert‘s willingness to satisfy his spiritual desire and

then to fulfil his theological covenant. He insists that his obedience to God

is as natural as his religious faith. Artistically, he shows that his personal

experience with God is for all humanity. As a minister, he establishes a

balanced world between the human worlds of sin and the spiritual world

that embraces Man with grace and mercy. Moreover, this

interconnectedness between the two worlds makes the covenant as a

natural and a voluntary system.

The theological covenant is hard to fulfil despite its simplicity since

the problem does not concern the covenant itself; it is rather about the

difficulty to fulfil this covenant. Yet, this internal dilemma is instrumental

for accomplishing the covenant for Herbert reinforces the idea that his

faith is the true way to achieve rest. The human being is the sinner and

God is the forgiver and at the heart of this difference lies the internal logic

of the verse. Without sins, Man cannot experience this sense of

forgiveness so that he knows God’s power. Herbert writes in “A Parodie”

“Ah Lord! Do not withdraw,

Lest want of aw

Make sinne appeare;

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And when thou dost but shine lesse cleare,

Say, that thou art not here.

Then, he concludes the poem:


“I half beleeve,

That Sinne says true: but while I grieve,

Thou com’st and dost relieve.

Strikingly, the sin has an ameliorative sense for it is part of man’s

nature and then it is a way to achieve God’s grace when it is followed by

regret. The speaker in “The World” affirms that he recognizes God’s grace

only when sin entered his house; without the sins, Man cannot be a

complete creature. Consequently, there is a relation of dependence

between God, the source of grace, and Man the sinner; the grace replaces

sin and so the sin ends with grace, each one completes the other as if Man

lives with God and so God exists by his mercy and grace; this makes the

discourse between the two parts. We can refer here to the conclusive

stanza of “The World”

“Then Sinne combin’d with Death in a firm band

To raze the building to the very floore:

Which they effected, none could them withstand.

But Love and Grace took Glorie by the hand,

And built a braver Palace then before.”

Herbert urges for the construction of a world that unifies Man’s soul

with God then the verse becomes a way to end the feeling of alienation

with the human world and to reach God’s realm. The recognition of the

sins leads to confession and then to the request of grace. This spiritual

journey foreshadows the importance of discovery of the true will. In a

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critical context, Stanley Fish describes the speaker’s experience as

“catechizing the reader” and bringing “him to the self-discovery that is the

goal of the parson’s catechizing.” The transmission of the experience

reinforces the instrumental role of the poet to depict the merciful God.

The hopeful end shadows the sweetness of the spiritual experience so that

it would influence the reader for the poet addresses the Man’s soul.

In The Temple, Herbert proves the uneasiness of fulfilling the

covenant theology. The false starts are metamorphosed to end in a perfect

end. Hence, this end is only a beginning of a true life. The spiritual

experience does not only change the speaker’s life yet, it establishes a

converted person able to write about his torments and be closer to God. In

this way, the verse becomes a recovery of the crisis of faith and then it

establishes a new way of worship the graceful God.

In the Utopian world of The Temple, time is a significant element for

the speaker metamorphoses; Herbert often plays on time as part of the

Christian life. Generally, the poems consist of two parts and two persons

included in the same self. Often, the tense of the poem changes from the

simple past in the first part to the simple present or the future tense. So,

to enter the world of faith the individual speaker is aware that the change

is obligatory, actually, the spiritual experience necessities the movement

from the state of despair to the state of complete rest and this is the “real

time”. Here we can consider the poem “The Reprisall”, a poem that

depicts the covenant between God and the speaker who makes a sharp

deal. At the cost of his confession, he hopes to gain redemption. He comes

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to an end that his verse is a defeat against his torments; so in the last

stanza he affirms:

“Yet by confession will I come

Into the conquest. Though I can do nought

Against thee, in thee I will overcome

The man, who once against thee fought.”

At this point, we may assume that Herbert writes the transitory

moment within the speaker’s self. The poet regrets his previous life but he

is paradoxically satisfied about the change. Accordingly, this interplay

between past and present engenders this originality for the present

situation depends strongly upon the past and the past becomes a past

because it has changed. Hence, the speaker plays upon this

metamorphose in order to make the wholeness of The Temple.

A deep focus on the structure of The Temple may lead to the

assumption that Herbert’s verse depends strongly on the spatial and

temporal dimensions. The Temple as a space opens with the church’s

elements such as: “The Church-porch”, “The Altar”, “and The Windows”;

this opening part is called by Louis Martz “a sacramental introduction”.

The middle of the collection is a reflection upon the deep relation with the

church as a place of religious contemplation. As examples, we can state

“Sacrifice”, “Grace”, “Praise” and “Affliction”. Notably the collected poems

end with “Love” which can be considered as a logical and natural end for

love comes from God and continues in the human soul hence to sign that

his poems do not end, as love is an immortal feeling. Yet, it is not that

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easy end; it comes through several long poems depicting the uneasiness

way to reach God’s love. These moments are clear in poems such as “The

Collar”, “The Reprisall”, “A Parodie” and “Artillerie”.

The poet’s willingness to rest makes his verse the space where he

finds the comfortable existence within God consequently he settles in his

sacred relation the Divine. Life out the temple seems to be impossible and

then the divine discourse is characterized by the spacious and the

temporal intercourse. In her article “Temples in The Temple: George

Herbert’s Study of the Church” Sara William Hanley insists that Herbert

synthesizes his poems around the basic metaphor of the temple. She

assumes that the speakers in The Temple, at the end of the poems move

“from activity to passivity” and then “this movement will run through the

pages of The Temple, paralleling the basic movement of the speaker as he

“enters” the complex and multi-level temple, to rest in it –in God- at the

close”. Furthermore, she maintains at the end of her article

“Herbert has made his central temple metaphor structurally as well as


thematically essential. That he does this is hardly surprising not alone
because of Herbert’s artistic genius but also because of the richness and
stability of the doctrine from which he draws his major image. Because he
does not “create” his temple-image but uses material already at hand,
Herbert assured himself of continuity, complexity, and firm structure,
mirroring all these in his study of the Church.”

As far as time is considered, the journey within the self that starts

with revolution and ends in rest does not really a movement in time. The

notion of past and present stems from the spiritual struggle with the

human nature; the Anglican speaker seems to have a previous life

characterized by stability and sameness, yet when he makes an existential

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revolution, he unfolds his torments to the Sacred. Now, this reconciliation

is conditioned by the reciprocal love between God and Man so the

experience has a continual sense.

In most of the poems, the narrative line can be divided into three

phases: the speaker begins with his life of stability then it comes the

moment of anxiety, which takes the most part of the poem. The restless

status ends with reconciliation; yet, this is not the end for the rest

continues in the future and it is guaranteed even after death. Accordingly,

the end of the poem becomes inherently the beginning of the “true life”.

Herbert makes the speaker conscious about the dependence of his

existence upon time, he is haunted by the idea of the mortality so he

declares the shortness of life and then the change is pivotal for eternity.

The poet examines his past life in relation to the future. Again, and for a

didactic purpose, Herbert makes a warning for the reader about time and

its reference to death. His poem “Death” is case in point, the speaker

addresses death as if he has experienced it. Astonishingly, the speaker

does not fear death despite the fact it is: “Nothing but bones,” and “After

the losse of life sense,/ Flesh being turn’t to dust, and bones to sticks.”

This is the first part of the poem where the diction of death “sadder

grones”, “dust”, and “bones” makes a tragic tone to the poem. Yet the

speaker changes the situation to be a joyful world. He subverted death to

be that transitional moment between the worldly life and the meeting with

God. He encounters death with these lines:

“Therefore we can go die as sleep, and trust

Half that we have

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Unto an honest faithful grave;

Making our pillows either down, or dust”.

In this way, the divine verse makes death sweet. The sacrifice of the

Saviours protects the experience of death easy and willing. Paradoxically,

death is alive and makes the human being exist. Moreover, the speaker

hints implicitly, that God’s grace is what makes death, as a “sleep” and

Man will settle “Unto an honest faithful grave”. Accordingly, life ends with

death but out of death emerges another life.

Eventually, the speaker seems to control everything; even death

which is ironically a godly action. Moreover, we can assume that the poet

is conducting perfectly the religious experience from its beginning until

the end. He knows what may come after the end of his life for he is a true

Christian and he is faithful to the Sacred God. The poet is the governor of

the constructed Utopian world; he succeeds to defeat the weakness inside

his self and its sinfulness. At the very moment of confessing his sins, the

speaker guarantees grace so out of his feeble self emerges the change.

Thus, the verse immortalizes the fact of grace, we may refer here to

“Denial” when the poet writes at the end of the poem:

“O cheer and tune my heartless breast,

defer no time;

that so thy favours granting my request,

they and my mind may chime

and mend my rhyme.”

In this way, Herbert makes a verse which resists time; the insurance

of God’s mercy is not delayed the speaker is able to see his will. The

request is fulfilled in the verse (“rhyme”) with God’s blessing so that God

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may find a true Christian in this versed prayer. This verse is a fetish

against the human sins. Furthermore, because of its spirituality the divine

verse resists Man’s existence in time. Although, the human life is mortal,

Herbert makes it alive for his writing eternalizes his Christian beliefs.

The religious experience is paradoxical yet logical at the same time. When

the poet is aware about the mortality of his life and so, he immortalizes his

actions in this futile life. The spiritual harmony with God makes lifetime

valuable; Man must live in a sacrificial way in order to make his life true.

This ironical existence is foreshadowed in the paradoxical image of life in

“Flower”;

“These are thy wonders, Lord of Love:


To make us see we are but flowers that glide,

Which when we once can find and prove

Thou hast a garden for us where to bide,

Who would be more,

swelling through store,

Forfeit their Paradise by their pride.”

The speaker recognizes the presence of Man in time and urges for

profiting from it instead of despair so he depicts an image of an individual

Christian full of power that is stimulated from God. Furthermore, the sins

are related with the physical part of the human being so it will end with his

death however, the soul remains immortal and so the body is part of the

human world that is why it is despised. After announcing that “All things

are in decay”, Herbert describes Man in “Man” as following:

“For man is every thing

And more. He is a tree, yet bears mo’ fruit;

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A beast, yet is or should be more.

Reason and speech we only bring.

Parrots may thank us if they are not mute:

They go upon the score.”

Man is a reasonable creature and he speaks out of his spirituality. The

voice of his spirit is everlasting and the when the poet addresses the

Almighty, there is a dialogue between the spirits and this, what makes the

reconciliation. Eventually, in “Man”, the speaker establishes a balance

between Man and God; he declares:

“Since then, my God, thou hast

So brave a place built, O dwell in it

That it may dwell with thee at last!

Till then, afford us so much wit

That, as the world serves us, we may serve thee

And, both, thy servants be.”

Agreeably, the decay of the human being towards death is elevated

to be the movement towards heaven. “Death” and “Life” shadow forth the

interplay of man with time. In “Death”, there is a call for life in grave, and

unsurprisingly, in “Life” there is a dismantling of death. This is evinced in

the last stanza of the poem:

“ Farewell deare flowers, sweetly your time ye spent,

Fit, while ye liv’d, for smell or ornament,

And after death for cures.

I follow straight without complaints or grief,

Since if my sent be good, I care not if

It be as short as yours”.

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Eventually, in comparison with secular poetry in which time is an

enemy, Herbert associates time with the journey of the religious

experience and so it is no longer a barrier between man and his existence.

The sacred verse makes a real reconciliation with the world as well as with

the Creator; it also constructs a different world where the speaker and God

share the roles for their existence depends upon each other. Life becomes

worthy when man is faithful to God and so the sacred verse is a true way

to show this faithfulness, it is an eternal verse since he defeats time. At

this point, it is very urgent to heed the poem “Time” where the speaker is

deeply conscious about the danger of man’s existence in time. He

addresses time that despite being a “slack thing” it “ev’n eternity

excludes”, but man exists with the blessing of the Lord. Paradoxically,

time, which, was considered long in the beginning of the poem, becomes

at the end short. Purposely, to convey that man wants more time to

worship God and to purify his life; so the speaker ends the poem with this

paradoxical image of time:

“Of what strange length must that needs be,

Which ev’n eternitie excludes!

Thus farre Time heard me patiently:

Then chafing said, This man deludes:

What do I here before his doore?

He doth not crave lesse time, but more.”

Consequently, man is able to manipulate time in order to gain God’s

grace, Herbert calls for profiting from lifetime and to be close to God. He

declares in the same poem “Time” “And this is that makes life so long/

while it detains us from God.” Life is paradoxical for the short lifetime

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makes the eternity of man; the poet imitates this paradox by writing a

verse that narrates man’s existence within the limits of time. In this way,

the sacred verse becomes the action of man to eternalize his perfect relation with

God.

2/ The “aporetic” spaces in the Utopian world:


Herbert’s advocating of the covenant theology in The Temple entails a critical

implication; it is the sense of voluntarism in the acceptance of the deed. The “imposed”

religious covenant is paradoxically depicted as unconstrained. Furthermore, the more the

covenant seems to be natural and willing, the more accepted it will be. In the same way,

fulfilling the covenant is a complex phenomenon for the enigmatic issue does not concern the

covenant rather than the nature of the human being. Thus, this divine verse shows the deep

struggle of making faith truthful. Herbert edifies the protestant thoughts; Man is faithful to his

doctrine and then he abides to God’s power. Yet, being faithful to the divine raises the

question of being faithful to oneself and more particularly to his writing.

Clearly, the individual speakers in The Temple encounter a serious perplexity. When

poetry obliterates the feeling of alienation between the Self and the world, it raises existential

question: Herbert stirs the conflict between art and its inadequacy to fulfill religious

satisfaction. It is precisely to such view that Herbert alludes in his poems about poetry itself:

“Denial”, “Quiddity”, “Jordan I”, “Jordan II” and the well known “The forerunners”. These

poems are plausibly worthwhile in the analysis of the way the theology is shaped into verse

hence the affiliation of poetry and religion. Accordingly, the internal conflict is not only with

God, yet there is a tripartite contention. The poet priest is conscious that his verse is

problematic in the way that it may not satisfy the Sacred. Thus, the poet urges for a response

to his religious obligation and simultaneously to his poetic desires. Eventually, the poet

questions the ability of poetry to fulfill his religious needs as an Anglican poet; hence the

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complex mission of the poet as a Rhetorician who should make from the complexity of the

religious discourse a simple way to preach the Sacred.

Ironically speaking, the Sacred is the cause of the dilemma but He is also the solver of

the conflict. At another level, the verse moves its center from the sacred to poetry itself; as a

result, Herbert’s verse points to itself as self-critical. His poem “Grief” witnesses the rejection

of the verse at the expense of praising the sublime God; he assumes “Verses, ye are too fine a

thing, too wise/ For my rough sorrows: cease, be dumb and mute.” Herbert artfully directs the

poem to be self-denying because at the end he describes his “rhyme” as “For mine excludes

both measure, tune, and time.” Consequently, he feels grief for the loss of rhyme; it is a poem

about the failure to write a full rhyme verse for the final line breaks the rhyme “Alas my

God”. Strikingly, “Grief” is well measured, its tune is clearly depicted and time is axcluded

because it is an enemy to the human existence so the poem is well written contrastingly to

what the speaker affirms at the end.

This last line, which is separately injected, foreshadows the disturbance of measure

and then calls for a multiplicity of meanings. Moreover, it conveys the loss of rhyme in order

to show the deep dilemma of the speaker, he insists that his poem never ends. Eventually, this

last line summarizes the whole poem; it is a deep cry of sadness. The speaker vindicates his

self and makes God his final resort. As far as the circularity of the poem is considered, the

final line can be read as the first line because the opening rhetorical question “O who will give

me tears” is answered by this last line “Alas my God”. Therefore, the speaker maintains that

the poem in internally manipulated by God.

“Grief” is a self-consuming poem in the sense that it subverts itself in order to assume

the inability of language to convey the poet’s grief; it is a real grief that poetry does not

maintain its meaning. Richard Strier includes “Grief” in the flow literature of tears and

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describes its end as following: “In this final cry, the speaker of ‘Grief’ turns away his own

compunction and tears to hunger and hunger and thirst after the divine mercy.”

The strong wit to write a verse in order to praise God is in itself a sign of grace

according to the poet. This is clearly assumed in “The Thanksgiving” “If you shall give me

wit, it shall appear;/ If thou hast giv’n it me, ‘tis here.” Yet, as in “Grief”, he ends the poem

with “Alas my God, I know not what.” Despite all what he has written he does not know what

to write to show his passion for God; this ambiguous claim is a powerful rhetorical strategy to

demonstrate the uneasiness to write about religious matters. The “What” at the end is

provocative; the speaker thanks God for the powerful wit. Furthermore, the rhetorical

questions beginning with “Shall I…” and the conditional sentences prove the speaker’s

inability to thank God yet, the poem can be a true way to praise Him for at the end he comes

to an absolute truth “That all together may accord in thee,/ And prove one God, one harmony”

Notably, this poem does not only address God as it represents a message to the reader.

At the end, the speaker cries “O my dear Saviour, Victory!” he succeeds to make his verse as

natural as God’s love. As far as the process of writing is concerned, the poet makes a

parallelism when he considers that as Man is gifted by Christ’s passion, the individual poet is

gifted by wit so that he is missioner to preach God; what makes the harmony between the

Christian poet and the Sacred.

Though he is conscious about the emptiness of language as a system of signification,

Herbert employs poetry to vindicate the uneasiness to depict the sacred wholeness. Thus, the

complexity of the religious matters is echoed in the ambivalence of the poetic language. For

instance, the emblematic poems could be understood within the divine image it delineates,

they prove the far-fetched meanings of the semiotic verse.

The reconciliation between the poet and God exists already before it even starts. He

inspires his religious reflections from God; yet the enigmatic issue of representation hampers

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the flow of the poetic delineation. Thus, The Temple evokes the issue of the representation of

the deferred Utopian world from a religious perspective so that a poetic theory from the

harmony between religion and Art. At this point, one may consider “Misery” which starts

with referring to the Renaissance view of Man “Lord, let the Angels praise thy name./ Man is

a foolish thing, a foolish thing,” so that Man cannot praise the sacred Lord because “My God,

Man cannot praise thy name:/ thou art all brightness, perfect purity.” Man is not so pure to

write a sacred verse; this claim engenders that if the poet is able to write such a praising verse

he is not an angel, yet, he reaches grace. The fact of grace is already coexisted with the very

act of writing. This interplay between poetry religion is unique to Herbert’s divine verse.

The search in The Temple is not an enquiry for new truths; it is rather a search for ways to

represent these truths. He claims in “The Thanksgiving” “’Tis but to tell the tale is told”;

therefore his mission is to rewrite the religious experience; in this way the invention lies in the

aesthetic dimension of his verse.

Significantly, the subtitle of The Temple is “Sacred Poems And Private Ejaculations”

which shows the interaction of poetry with the religious discourse and then the audiences of

the verse consist only in his Self and his God. To address God the poet needs to purify his

poetic language so that his verse is self-critical to the extent that he comments on poetry as the

inappropriate way to depict the sublimity of the Divine. He asks his self in “Dullness”:

“Where are my lines then? My approaches? Views?

Where are my window-songs?

Lovers are still pretending, and ev’n wrongs

Sharpen their Muse:”

These rhetorical questions emphasize the poetic plight; it is an ironical view upon the secular

verse so that the sacred verse is full of views and approaches because it is inspired from God.

In the same poem he comes to conclude in the final lines:

Lord, cleare thy gift, that with a constant wit

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I may but look towards thee:

Look onely; for to love thee, who can be,

What angel fit?

As a metaphysical poet, Herbert responds to the religious discourse artistically to make

his metaphysical views meet with his poetic aspirations. Accordingly, there is a presence of

two focuses; to satisfy his ambitions as a poet and to be faithful to his divine duty thus he

intentionally urges for conciliation between his private poetic experience and his serious

divine experience. Herbert is aware that Man exists in language and cannot depart from it and

then his poetry enables him to annihilate the blurring line of alienation between his aspirations

and his verse, for he sees poetry as the true way to attain a harmonious position. At this point,

one may heed the well-structured poem “The Forerunners” which is a poem about the

resistance of the poetry to the emptiness of language.

In poems of reconciliation, the speaker succeeds to find rest. Yet, the “Forerunners” is

a poem about writing; it resists closure for it is self-referential and foreshadows the unending

aspects of poetry. At the beginning, the speakers jot down several rhetorical questions, which

could be understood only when the reader finishes the entire poem. He shows that he is

different from those who come before him; he has a peculiar experience of writing for he

addresses language: “Farwell sweet phrases, lovely metaphors/ But will ye me thus?” then he

constructs a significant affinity between his harmonious relation with the Sacred and his

original poetic vigour. God is present in language and sacredly the speaker delineates a

convention that guarantees the truthfulness of his relation.

Moreover, the phrase “Thou art still my God” has an emphatic effect especially when

it is repeated thrice in a trinity image. Notably, when he deals about language he does not

repeat this phrase and one may interpret it as to separate God from the impurity of language

and then resorts to His name to purify his language thus, God is the source of the poetic

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power. Yet, ironically, when he subverts language he keeps using it, “the sweet phrases” and

“the lovely metaphors” are at the heart of his divine verse.

In this poem “The Forerunners”, the poet gives his theory concerning poetry itself.

The series of rhetorical questions emphasize the enigma of using “enchanting language” and

then the speaker proclaims that language must dwell in the church, meaning that language

should be used for divine purposes in order to become “Lovely enchanting, sugar cane/ Honey

of roses, whither wilt thou fly?” yet, it loses its value when it “leave[s] the Church”, it even

becomes dangerous because it “ hurt thy self, and him that songs the note”. In this way, the

true lover is the one who employs pure and divine language; otherwise, he is a “foolish lover”

and so he should “speak in her native language” i.e. the language of his lover. In a

parallel way, the poet loves God so that he speaks His language.

Accordingly, we may allude that the title of the poem “The Forerunners”

foreshows that the speaker makes himself one of the forerunners as he

employs the divine language to speak about God.

He continues his theory when he answers the enigmatic raised

question in “Jordan I” “Is there in truth no beauty” when he writes

“True beauty dwells on high: ours is a flame

But borrow’d thence to light us thither.

Beauty and beauteous words should go together.”

Accordingly, the poet assumes that beautiful words that praise God make

the beauty itself. Moreover, there is a sense of truthfulness when showing

the sweetness of the divine love with an esthetic way. “thou art still my

God” becomes a beautiful emblematic expression of love because God

exists within it and so it is truthful.

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The speaker ends his poem by a new enigmatic proclamation; his

verse makes the truth more beautiful than it is when he writes, “So all

within be livelier than before”. This line may express that the speaker’s

“beauteous” words never end for there are always beautiful truths to

estimate. To this view, we can consider Helen Vendler discussion of this

poem; she declares that the several explanations “which a more anxious

poet would be at pains to reconcile with each other. Herbert simply lets

them stand… there is no resolution to these successful metaphors of loss

no comprehensive view is taken at the end”.

Hence, the speaker makes himself one of the forerunners because

he discovers the originality of the divine verse. He seems to challenge

language and controlling it, it is not because of his arrogance as a poet yet

for his dwelling within the divine language, he is equipped with the divine

beauty.

Eventually, “The Forerunners” is a poem about the defeat of

language; in previous poems, the poet succeeds to challenge the limits of

time and space. Now, he becomes able to resist the impurity of human

language. The divine verse allows for a sense of beauty; it is not out of the

sweet phrases and the lovely metaphors but it is the sanctification of the

subject (God) Who makes the poetic truth more truthful. So the existed

line between representation and truth is blurred.

The interplay of poetry and religion is like the relation between body

and soul, and so as a way to imitate God’s power the poet writes a

powerful verse that resists closure. Poetry is a true way to praise God

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because it reconciles paradoxes images and allows for constructing strong

metaphors thus it reflects the complex sense of the divine. As a self-

referential poem, “The Quidditiy” is a remarkable stance when God

represents the audience “My God, a verse is not a crown”. The speaker

seeks to make a definition to verse but he recognizes within the poem that

it is not an easy task to define poetry and the with the series of negative

constructions he dismisses the relation of his verse to the mundane life;

within this denying the poem proclaims the uneasiness of poetic

existence.

Despite its simple form, “The Quiddity” reflects deep complex

meanings at three levels: first, the verse cannot be a crown, an honor, or a

sword; therefore, it has not a political dimension because God is the king

of all. Moreover, it deals with serious matters and so it resists space “it

was never in France or Spain” as he writes; yet it stands firm time for he

employs “day” to refer to its shortness; he insists upon the lifelong of his

verse. Eventually, he concludes that poetic language can never be

institutionalized “It is no office, art, or news, / Nor the Exchange, or busy

Hall;” Art is not related to the human, it comes rather from God, it is an art

which makes God’s love more real than it is. This image is detailed in

“Thanksgiving” in which there is a fusion of divine love within the process

of writing.

Remarkably, when he finishes the series of denying images, there is

a hidden question: what is a poem? Unsurprisingly, the speaker makes

the divine experience his real inspiration to writing; he is able to find God

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within the poem and then he can himself exist in his lines. Yet, God’s

presence does not lie in His existence as a subject; He is present within

and even participates in the writing of the poem. This image reflects the

deep belief in the complex paradox that God Is manifested in humanity.

We can also find this idea in “The Quip” its refrain is “But you shall

answer, Lord for me” yet at the final stanza we find that “Speak not at

large, say, I am thine:/ And then they have their answer home.”

Therefore, one can deduce that God is not an external power; He

dwells within the poet’s self. The Lord is present as part of the audience

when the speaker addresses Him directly “And, to be short make an

oration.” Then he demands “Speak not at large” so he feels at ease when

he speaks directly to the divine and more the conversation is very truthful

even though it is fictitious. In this way, the speaker eradicates the

complexity of the religious experience and then shows the transfiguration

of his dilemma from intricacy to easiness. This metamorphose comes from

within because God is not external, so it is a whole journey to make a

sweet relationship of love from the paradoxes of the human being life.

Eventually, God love makes the circularity of the poem; it is the starting

point, the motivation and the conclusion.

“A true Hymne” foreshadows a different image concerning “Love”

for God is involved in the process of writing. The speaker is aware that

human words lack sincerity when he makes a contrast with the divine

discourse:

“Yet slight not these few words:

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If truly said, they may take part

Among the best in art.

The finensse which a hymne or psalme affords,

Is, when the soul unto the lines accords.

The affiliation between feelings and words is extremely instrumental in

the divine verse; yet at this level, “God doth supply the want” and this

makes the harmony between the speaker and God, the divine represents

the feelings, which become written by the poet. Accordingly, we can draw

a parallelism; God is the Maker of love and the poet is the maker of verse

and so the process of writing is the outcome of this harmonious relation.

The poet insists on the fact that the poetic discourse is emotional,

spiritual and made only by God. The speaker ends the poem with

reference to God’s words so he writes, “As when th’heart sayes (sighing to

be approved)/ O, could I love! And stops: God writeth, Loved.” In fact,

there is a fusion of God’s words within the poem. This “already-always

love” is guaranteed in the divine dialogue between God and the speaker;

there is a sense of call-response deeply rooted in this conversation. It is

worthy to consider the circularity of the poem since the title “A true

Hymne” is reference to God’s words that reflect a sense of truthfulness to

the verse. The divine poem does not show the limits of the poetic text; yet,

it makes the strength of the poem when God contributes to the writing.

Eventually, the poem owes its sublimity to the present-absent God.

The text praises itself since it gives direct truth. In this way, Herbert’s

verse diverges from praising God to praising itself; it produces a new

theory: God is praised from within. The divine verse is self-reflexive in an

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original way that it praises itself at the very moment of praising God for

the language comes originally from Him.

In fact, there is interplay of “absence-presence” movement between

God and the poet. The divine verse is based upon the “already- always”

presence of God; He reminds the sinful speaker of his absence spiritually

so when the poet shows his love to God, he reinforces that he is present

with God and then he eradicates his sinful human self. In this way, he

proves that his existence within a Utopian world, this presence is truthful

since it is a manifestation of God’s presence in it. As a testimony, we can

refer to “Praise III” in which the speaker shows the power of God as related

to the performance of this verse:

“Lord, I will mean and speak thy praise,

Thy praise alone ,

My busie heart shall spin it all my dayes :

And when it stops for want of store,

Then will I wring it with a sigh or grone ,

That thou mayst yet have more.

A creative power, the poet makes his presence secondary, besides

to its redeeming effect; Herbert’s verse emphasizes the human ability to

create the sense of self-expression. When the speaker highlights God’s

presence as the spiritual source of his poetic creation, he does not deny

his creative self. The divine verse is written with God’s providence

therefore, the poet guarantees the existence, the performance and then

the continuation of the verse. In this way, he proves that his creative

because it is divine par excellence, the imperfectness of the human

language is supplied by the presence of God.

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As far as we consider that God is the central audience of the verse,

we may analyze the “call –response” aspect of the two poems

“Submission” and “Praise II”; in fact, they are interrelated with the aspect

of praising in writing. In the fourth stanza of “Submission” he writes:

“How know I, if thou shouldst me raise,

That I should then raise thee?

Perhaps great places and thy praise

Do not so well agree.” (Emphasis added).

Then he replies in “Praise II”

“Sev’n whole dayes, not one in seven,

I will praise thee.

In my heart, though not in heaven,

I can raise thee.”

According to the poet the praise and the raise are interconnected as the

divine verse is concerned with rising the speaker position as an individual

Christian therefore, the poet becomes closer to God within the verse;

when he speaks about himself as a talented poet he makes his verse too

divine. God’s presence in the poem is unreachable not only for the

ambiguous relation between “praise” and “raise” but also for the

sacredness of God so he urges for a divine presence in his heart. It a

reference to the deep relation between the speaker and The Divine so that

this harmonious affinity may transcend even the artistic writing.

Eventually, the divine verse foreshadows the greatness of the divine

power; despite its artistry, this sacred verse declares its inability to reach

the wholeness of The Divine. What makes the peculiarity of the verse is

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the “unsaid” about the Sacred, the complete sense of the divine power is

left ambiguous because it is unreachable.

The Divine (God/ Christ) is more sublime than the divine poetic

language; preaching God transcends the verse itself so the valorization of

the Divine is achieved when the poet assumes the inability of language to

research the wholeness of the Divine.

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CONCLUSION:

This research paper unfolds three major aspects of George Herbert

literary divine experience. The revolutionary characteristic of the verse as

far as it is different from the whole trend of the metaphysical poetry; the

form of the poem reflects its deep meaning which is a modernist mark.

Poems such as “Easter Wings” and “The Altar” foreshadow the religious

implications and reinforce the interdependence relation between form and

meaning what constitutes a major part of Herbert artistry. He makes his

distinctive literary identity as a protestant priest and a rhetorician at the

same time and then he urges for an affiliation between poetry and

religion. Yet this harmonious relation is the outcome of several contests,

the Herbertian verse is paradoxically a verse of conflict and rest at the

same and this peculiarity entails a sense of sweetness of the art as it is

between Man existence and his conflict with the world. Notably, we may

assume that there is not a single conflict in the verse, there is different

levels of contest.

The existing struggle between the Sacred and the speakers is

extended to be an internal conflict within the Self, which is a turning point

in the divine experience. God is not seen as an external power so that the

speaker in “Dulnesse”, for instance describes his state as:

“But I am lost in flesh, whose surged lies

Still mock me, and grow bold:

Sure you didst put a mind there, if I could

Find where it lies.

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This situation of wavering between lost and relief is not a constant

movement. The settlement is achieved when the speaker makes

reconciliation within his self; he declares that his love for the Divine is a

certain fact therefore at the peak of conflict comes the rest within the

speaker’s heart; the divine love emerges from God and is extended within

the soul of the Human Being.

The journey within the Self to find a kind of ease is more significant

than the resolution. The poet discovers that the peculiarity of the divine

experience lies in the assumption that once you reach a harmonious state

with God you are able to find yourself.

The fragmentation of the Self leads to the unfinished ways of

exploring the divine experience. The tormented self is present when God is

absent yet, when the speaker reminds himself of God’s presence within his

Self, the experience changes and his peaceful Self is present. Actually, the

poet searches for a united Self since he is lost, tormented and struggling.

The religious discourse leads to a peaceful settlement; accordingly, in the

same poem we find a revolutionary voice, which rests after a divine

journey.

Herbert’s verse is not limited: the modernist aspect allows for a

multiplicity of voices. In fact, there is a two-leveled discourse; on the one

hand, there is the human discourse that is impure and revolutionary; on

the other hand, there is the counter discourse; the divine that is sacred

and pure. Then, these two different voices are expressed in the same

poem in order to foreshadow the fragmentation of the human Self so the

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unity is owing to the Divine presence. In this way, the divine verse

delineates the Sacred power in terms of re-writing the relationship

between the Human and the Divine; the verse is a discourse by which

illuminates truth and power.

Showing the uneasiness of this relation can be considered as a way

to demonstrate the divine journey within the Self. To redeem his sins, the

poet discovers that the divine Art cures his physical sufferings as well as

his moral torments; when the speaker confesses his sins, he becomes able

to ask for forgiveness therefore the more he writes, the less sins he has. At

the very moment of preaching God, the speaker discovers that his

existence as a true Christian is paralleled within his creative power.

God gives him the power of writing so that he can redeem his sins

and then immortalizes his love for the Divine. The suffering is deeply

manifested in the very act of writing, Herbert writes spiritually as far as he

is in a tormented situation therefore he speaks for his souls and blames

his physical being as it brings only suffering for him. He makes himself

irresponsible for his sins; his sinful human side is cured because Christ

suffered for all humanity. When the poet preaches Christ, he manifests His

sacrifice and then shows that the human divine experience is deeply

linked to Christ.

The objective of the divine journey is already always known, yet to

achieve spiritual rest is not such an easy way. The internal conficlict paves

the way to show that the Divine exists within the human self so Man

cannot escape his existence with a religious experience. In this way, the

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divine experience is more significant than the aim itself. Moreover, this

shows that the true Christian is the person who questions the validity of

the religious experience and then proves the truthfulness of the divine

discourse.

Constructing a harmonious world between Man and God makes the

true existence of the poet. The religious constraints are dismantled to be

the true way to happiness therefore; Herbert constructs a utopian world

where Man is the manipulator of his experience. The poet plays upon the

transformation of the divine experience from a hard experience to a restful

one. The suffering is transfigured into a light to cure his sins and then his

spiritual torments only exist to display the greatness of the Divine.

Politically speaking, God is not the dictatorial king in the constructed

utopian world. The religious aspect is a primordial in the Christian Man life,

so that the individual is not separable from the divine and then this

interdependence constitutes the major dilemma. Along the spiritual

journey the poet discovers that he cannot exist outside the divine; Herbert

writes in “The Cross”:

“Then when after much delay

Much wrestling, many a combate, this dear end,

So much desir’d, is giv’n, to take away

My power to serve thee; to unbend

All my abilities, my designes confound,

And lay my threatnings bleeding on the ground.

Accordingly, the power of God dismantles all the internal conflicts. The

love of God offers stability and easiness instead of torments and

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dilemmas; what makes a business aspect in the relationship between the

speaker and the Divine power. Herbert employs business imagery when he

highlights Christ’s sacrifice for all humanity; in this way, Man gains

redemption and forgiveness not only when he unfolds his sins but also if

he shows his loyalty to the Divine.

From critical perspective, the poet plays upon making a perfect

world when he deals with his relationship with the Sacred. When the

individual Christian transcends his torments he shows his powerful side,

freedom is deconstructed since it leads to lost therefore Herbert makes

the spiritual sense of his verse a logical manifestation of the religious. Man

can exists only when he follows the divine will; otherwise, he will suffer

from his self. In this way, God creates Man to continue the sacrifice of

Christ; conscious about this fact, the poet manifests his divine love

artistically when he unfolds his sins and preaches the Divine.

Herbert’s divine verse is distinctive from the other metaphysical

poets for it is self-reflexive in terms of form and content. Apart from the

mimetic poems that foreshadow the dwelling of the Christian poet in the

church, some poems reflect from their titles the manifestation of the

Divine Liturgy. In “Sin I”, for instance he declares that he makes journey

within “schoolmasters” and their “rules” and then “the rules of reason” of

“the holy messengers” yet, as a true Christian, he recognizes “within his

conscience” that God is graceful therefore he puts an end to his sins as he

lives as a Christian. At this level lies a sense of loyalty to his belief: the sin

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does not exist for he devotes a whole poem to show logically that “One

cunning bosome-sinne blows quite away”.

From another perspective, the divine verse is self-critical; the use

of language to preach God is considered by the poet himself as an

inadequate way for the inability of language to achieve the wholeness of

God. Herbert reinforces that the religious has no limits as far as his great

love for the Divine is concerned yet, poetry allows for foregrounding the

sense of creation; at the beginning of The Temple Herbert declares that

God is the true writer of the poems, this declaration might be interpreted

as an insistence upon the greatness of the human as a divine creation.

Accordingly, Man is a creator for he is able to write such artistic verse yet,

he gains this sense of creation from God as well as he is embodied by a

great love for the divine.

God existence within the poet’s self erases any sense of

fragmentation, as a human being the speaker establishes his wholeness at

the end of the poem when he reaches rest. He is able to exist in the

church for it is the unique peaceful space; at this point, one my heed the

peculiarity of the established utopian world. The Temple is not only a

poetic space, yet it foreshadows the settlement of the spirit. Hence, this

spirituality is the source of rest what calls for all humanity to share these

deep peaceful moments.

Accordingly, Herbert does not only address the Divine but he also

speaks to all humanity to dwell in the temple as a peaceful space. Notably,

this sense of peace dismantles all the hard torments he encounters within

his self; within the church he finds his united self not only in the liturgical

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practices but also when he addresses his humanity. Writing unfolds the

creativity of in the human self; within his verse one may notice the

biographical sense of Herbert poetry since he writes about his afflictions,

his sins and his torments. Yet, as a Christian rhetorician he calls for

preaching God artistically so that art is viewed as a means of redemption.

Art is not considered as a sin because it is a way to establish a truthful

ralationship with the Sacred; at this level, we disclose Herbert’s view of

poetry: art is God creation and so it written to preach Him. Secular verse is

disapproved since it deals with the forbidden love; this love should only be

adressed to God.

The Temple is a book of scrutining the perfect relationship

between Man and God. The sense of perfectness dominates the sacred

verse; though man is a sinful creature he has a spiritual part in his self

where God is present on him. The sinful self is present only when God is

absent however it is redeemed at the very moment of speaking; Herbert’s

verse foreshadows his eagerness to eternalize his self and to establish his

identity as a Christian poet. His powerful relationship with the Sacred

proves his substantial creativity; accordingly, as his love for God is great,

his verse is also forceful.

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