I had several strengths and weaknesses in Assignment two. I presented my topic in a strong and well developed tone.

I highlighted the key aspects of my opening paragraph and the overarching idea behind my investigated question. I provided detailed opinions and information from various reputable sources via articles located using the University of North Carolina at Charlottes online library resources. I even included personal observations from assignment one to strengthen my paper and to provide it with credible and first hand information. To further strengthen my paper I would need to eliminate or bring about change to the choice of words that I use throughout my papers and often repeat. It would benefit my paper to use stronger language and larger and more scholarly words. I stated, It is the most popular place for breakfast, lunch, and dinner. Crown
Commons is located on the second floor of the ever so popular student union. The previous quote gives specific information that is not a thesis or a hypothesis. It is not an opinion or a guess, but it is factual information based on real time observations and notes. In assignment two I was

given various comments that I found useful and that benefited in the final version of my paper. I found that comments given to me about improving my paper were far more useful than comments about what my group members felt I did well. One group member stated; Add comma after dirty to make sentence clear. The previous listed comment showed
me that I needed to reread my paper to fix various grammatical errors. The previous comment may seem like common sense, but it is easy to overlook even the simplest mistakes. It showed me that I make silly mistakes that I would not normally. This comment led me to reread my paper which I then found several other very similar mistakes. Another group member stated;Revise so it is more clear what point is attempting to be made in this sentence. When I read the paper to myself everything made sense because I was reading it in my head and I was reading it how I wanted to read it. When my group member pointed out that one of my

sentences was hard to follow I investigated it further. I read it out loud and found that it did not make sense at all. The sentence was of course easy to fix as it just needed to have words switched around so they would make sense. I would like you to pay specific attention to the comparison and contrast of Fretwell Caf and Crown Commons. The idea of my article is to shed light on the hurdles and challenges that exist within the restaurant and food based industry. Although many restaurants are different many restaurants share the same ideas and problems. My comparison of the two establishments is based on observations from assignment one and are credible to my papers argument. It is important to take into account the challenges faced by restaurants when they prepare your food. With a better understanding of the everyday restaurant you will have a better and more fulfilling experience with the restaurants around.