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DEEP-ROOTED
By
Melinda S. Wrocklage
University of Louisville
1701 I laid before the Speaker the State of what had ben
receiv’d and paid towards the building of Greenwich Hospital
(Evenlyn, Diary)
1859 Performing the initial duties to her dead with the awe
and exactitude that belong to religious rites (Geo. Eliot,
A. Bede)
This paraphrase is simply how I might have told this particular story if it
had happened to me; perhaps not my spoken English, but at least my
written English.
In both my paraphrase and my poem, I did not use the word “reputably”
because, as I stated earlier, I suspect that the importance on reputation
may have diminished since Franklin’s time, which was an age of
collective spirit where a person’s reputation was cherished, determined
not just by actions but also by choices in acquaintances, occupation, or
even clothing.
I will admit that this was a rather long sentence for me to express in a
poem; however I believe that I was able to successfully convey Franklin’s
thought.
The Puritan church heavily influenced the ethic system of the colonies;
although during Franklin’s lifetime it had lost its stronghold on society.
While he disagreed with aspects of the Puritan religion, he followed
Puritan tradition in placing much importance on maintaining a decent
and honorable lifestyle, as is shown in his list of thirteen virtues. He
also placed great significance on hard work and personal responsibility,
but strayed from Puritan ideas by stressing equality, free-will, individual
accountability, and the importance of self-development through
education and the perpetuation of a worthy and moral lifestyle; these
beliefs would later be considered the foundation of the American value-
system.
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Thoughtful and informed. But, I would have liked you to do more with
two words you see as sufficiently different in an interesting way:
“regularity” and “exactitude”.