Example of a body paragraph for a DBQ:
Topic sentence:
Evidence:
P.O.
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Pov.
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Conclusion:
Another intellectual characteristic of the Renaissance
was the increased interest by Europeans in the things of this
world. 15! century Europeans continue to be quite religious
but were increasing interested in secular concerns.
Castiglione, in his advice to young members of the court
implies a myriad of interests such as music, tennis, dancing,
soldiering, poetry and other things in his book.
Since Castiglione was himself a member of the nobility, his
comments can be accepted as accurately reflecting secular
interest of Europeans.
Doc. Band C by DaVinci reveal ofhelvorldly interests of
Renaissance men. In Doc B, DaVinci advises artists
to study human anatomy and animals not to focus on
religious revelations to be a better artist, In Doc C, DaVinci's
secular interests involved military equipment and
‘engineering, In accepting DaVinci’s ideas we need to
remember that he was offering his services to the Duke of
Milan and may have overemphasized his abilities just to
make a sale. Final evidence of the secular interest of the
Renaissance comes from Polish astronomer Copernicus who
studied the idea of a heliocentric universe. The document's
tone is more tentative than that of DaVinci or Castiglione,
but Copernicus is challenging both the Catholic Church's
and the classicat past’s understanding of the universe.
‘A better understanding of the secular interest of the
Europeans in worldly affairs would be helped with
documents from women or non elites. These two groups
might not share the same interests of the educated males in
the documents presented. In conclusion,
examination of all the documents reveals little concern for
religious affairs that dominated the Medieval era, but a
wide variety of interests in their contemporary world.