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Who

Chucktowncommunity

What

atornadocausinginjuries,extensivepropertydamages,andevenfatalities.

Where

AquartermilesouthofUniversityAve.andEighthSt.inChucktown,ME

When

10:59a.m.thismorning

How

Atornadoandstormtorethroughcommunity

Why

Storm

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linebetweenparagraphs.Donotindenteachparagraph.
Tearingthrougheachbuildinganddestroyingeverythinginitspath,atornadostruckChucktown
thismorningaround11:00a.m.leavingmanyinjuredandevensomedead.

TheF3tornadobarreledthroughthesouthsideoftown,tearingaparttheAdamsElementary
Schoolandmanyhomesthatleft28injuriesreported,12incriticalcondition,andthreedeaths.

OurpreliminaryreportindicatesthetornadowasanF3,ShirleySnowfromtheNationalWeather
Servicestated.

Thewindspeedreachedupto180milesperhourleaving3,000homesand100businesses
withoutpower.AnF3tornadoisclassifiedasaseveretornadomeaningwallsandroofsaretornoff
andtreesareuprooted.

Allthedisheswerescatteredaroundthekitchen,thefoodhadcomeoutoftherefrigerator,and
brokenbeerbottles.Justamazingwhatatornadocandotoaplace,saidcollegestudentWilliam
Hoxxy.

Itdidntonlystrikehomesandbusinesses.AdamsElementarySchoolwasatargetofthethe
tornado,aswell,cavingintheroofandcausingseveredamage.Luckily,studentsandmoststaff
hadthedayoffduetoaconferenceinaseparatebuilding.

Normallywehaveabout300kindergartenersthroughfifthgradershereplusabout25facultyand
staff.Idontevenwanttothinkaboutwhatmightvehappenediftheyhadallbeenhere,said
principalJerriePotter.

Manyranforsafetyhidingunderdesks,chairs,sprintingtotheirbasementstoprotectthemselves
andtheirfamiliesfromthetornado.

OnesurvivorKathrynKoffeesaidOnonesideofthestreetyoustillhavehouses.Ontheotherside
itlookslikeawarzone,itsflattened,theresnothingtherebut,Igotmykids!

#1

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Tearingthrougheachbuildinganddestroyingeverythinginitspath,atornadostruck
Chucktownthismorningaround11:00a.m.leavingmanyinjuredandevensomedead.

#2

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TheF3tornadobarreledthroughthesouthsideoftown,tearingaparttheAdams
ElementarySchoolandmanyhomesthatleft28injuriesreported,12incriticalcondition,
andthreedeaths.

#3

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OurpreliminaryreportindicatesthetornadowasanF3,ShirleySnowfromtheNational
WeatherServicestated.

#4

Transitioneithertoaddinformation,explainorhelpwithstoryflow.
Thewindspeedreachedupto180milesperhourleaving3,000homesand100
businesseswithoutpower.AnF3tornadoisclassifiedasaseveretornadomeaningwalls
androofsaretornoffandtreesareuprooted.

#5

Quote(direct)Onesentence1sentence:sourcesaid.2sentencessaidsource.
Allthedisheswerescatteredaroundthekitchen,thefoodhadcomeoutoftherefrigerator,
andbrokenbeerbottles.Justamazingwhatatornadocandotoaplace,saidcollege
studentWilliamHoxxy.

#6

Transitioneithertoaddinformation,explainorhelpwithstoryflow.
Itdidntonlystrikehomesandbusinesses.AdamsElementarySchoolwasatargetofthe
thetornado,aswell,cavingintheroofandcausingseveredamage.Luckily,studentsand

moststaffhadthedayoffduetoaconferenceinaseparatebuilding.

#7

Quote(direct)Onesentence1sentence:sourcesaid.2sentencessaidsource.
Normallywehaveabout300kindergartenersthroughfifthgradershereplusabout25
facultyandstaff.Idontevenwanttothinkaboutwhatmightvehappenediftheyhadall
beenhere,saidprincipalJerriePotter.

#8

Transitioneithertoaddinformation,explainorhelpwithstoryflow.
Manyranforsafetyhidingunderdesks,chairs,sprintingtotheirbasementstoprotect
themselvesandtheirfamiliesfromthetornado.

#9

Quote(direct)Onesentence1sentence:sourcesaid.2sentencessaidsource.
Ononesideofthestreetyoustillhavehouses.Ontheothersideitlookslikeawarzone,
itsflattened,theresnothingtherebut,Igotmykids!saidsurvivorKathrynKoffee.

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