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April 8, 2016
Presented by: Laura Fisher,
EL TOSA
Who Am I?
Have worked in this district for 15 years
Teacher, 5 years
English Learner TOSA, 10 years
Individual school site
Multiple school sites
District level (6 years)
As a TOSA, I
Work with teachers on how to best meet the needs of
their English learners
Work with principals to help deliver professional
development to support English learners
Outcomes
Guiding Question: Who are English Learners?
I can explain some English Learners acronyms.
I can tell the levels of the CELDT and describe a
student at that level.
I can describe what ELD looks like in elementary
and middle school.
Guiding Question: How can I help my English
learners during the Writers Workshop process?
I can explain & use techniques (teacher moves)
and strategies (student moves) to help English
learners during the Writers Workshop process.
ENGLISH
LEARNERS
Guiding Question: Who are English learners?
Alphabet Soup
You will be given a list of acronyms.
With a small group (2-3 people), try to
make a prediction of what the acronym
stands for.
Ex: CDE California Department of Education
CELDT
California English Language Development
Test
Initial vs. Annual
Listening, Speaking, Reading, Writing
5 Levels
Beginning (1)
Early Intermediate (2)
Intermediate (3)
Early Advanced (4)
Advanced (5)
Middle School
1 period a day
Materials Inside by
National Geographic
Writers Workshop
Prewriting/Brainstorming
What: gathering of ideas and
information that can be used for
upcoming writings
Ways teachers can support:
Mentor texts
Develop vocabulary list
Discussions
Prewriting/Brainstorming Activity
Read the article about recycling.
After you read, go back and choose 1-2
pros, and 1-2 cons
Write each one out on a post-it note
Writers Workshop
Drafting
What: developing a rough draft from the
students brainstorming/prewriting
Ways teachers can support:
Modeling
Writing templates
Share aloud what they intend to write
Drafting Activity
Using your prewriting graphic organizer,
begin drafting your opinion essay using
the template provided (green paper).
Transfer your draft onto lined writing
paper.
REMEMBER to SKIP LINES
Writers Workshop
Conferring/Reviewing
What: reading & reviewing the draft with
others (peers & teachers), and providing
helpful constructive feedback on drafts
Ways teachers can support:
Conferring regularly
Peer Review Process
Reviewing Activity
Peer Review Protocol
Form A/B Partnerships; trade papers
Read your partners paper & fill out the
Feedback Checklist (blue)
Give & receive feedback on the writing using
the Conversations About Writing (purple)
handout *write on post-it note first
A gives feedback; B responds
B gives feedback; A responds
Writers Workshop
Revising
What: students make changes to their
draft, usually based on feedback from
peers and/or teacher
NOTE: this is NOT the step to edit
Ways teachers can support:
Google Doc (slide, sheet, document)
Cut It Out
Add to the writing
Revising Activity
Using the strips of paper provided &
feedback from your peer(s), revise one
area of your opinion writing:
Introduction
Reasons
Conclusion
Writers Workshop
Editing
What: work on correcting small errors
such as punctuation, capitalization, and
spelling mistakes
Ways teachers can support:
Color Editing
Find Whats Right Editing
Editing Activity
Color Editing
Red
Orange
Yellow
Green
Blue
Purple
Writers Workshop
Publishing
What: writing is presented in a final form
and displayed
Ways teachers can support:
Student choice
Have a model
Writers Workshop
Sharing
What: each student has the opportunity to
share the work they have created
Ways teachers can support:
Authors Chair
Provide an audience
Give positive feedback
Remember
You adjust the resources based on the students in
front of you
Based on what has been explicitly taught
Outcomes Self-Reflection
Guiding Question: Who are English Learners?
I can explain some English Learners acronyms.
I can tell the levels of the CELDT and describe a
student at that level.
I can describe what ELD looks like in elementary
and middle school.
Guiding Question: How can I help my English
learners during the Writers Workshop process?
I can explain & use tools and strategies to help
English learners during the Writers Workshop
process.
Reflection/Evaluation
Progressive Inquiry Survey
Resources Weebly website
www.______.com
Laura Fisher
Lafisher@nlmusd.org
Ext. 2091