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E.X.

T TERRACED HOUSE: MID AFTERNOON: 02:00 PM


I.N.T TERRACED HOUSE: LIVING ROOM: MID AFTERNOON: 02:01 PM
A male teenager DAVE LANDON kneels down to put a box on the
floor, along with several others scattered around.
DAVE looks down at the box and stares at something O.S.
Inside the box is a photo of DAVE and his dad JOHN LANDON.
DAVE slowly picks it up.
DAVE stares at the picture with a tear in his eye.
I.N.T TERRACED HOUSE: KITCHEN: MID AFTERNOON: 02:03 PM
DAVE calls his mum via phone.
DAVE speaks into the phone.
DAVE
"Funeral was last week, hed have
wanted you there at least."
DAVES MUM V.O
"I know, but when it got worse."
(slow sigh)
DAVE
"I know."
(closes eyes)
DAVES MUM V.O
"Congratulations on UNI by the
way."
DAVE
"Thanks."
"But I want you keeping an eye on
things, while Im gone."
(narrows eyes slightly and
points finger straight in mid
air)
E.X.T VILLAGE COMMUNITY: GRAVE YARD: MID AFTERNOON: 2:20 PM
DAVE walks through a grave yard, holding a bunch of flowers.
DAVE stops by one grave stone and lays the flowers down in
front of the grave stone.
DAVES phone buzzes.
(CONTINUED)

CONTINUED:

2.

DAVE sees a friends request from a guy named ERIC (Johns


friend).
DAVE accepts the request.
DAVE walks away from the grave stone, but is being watched
by a HOODED FIGURE from a distance.
TITLE ROLLS (?)
I.N.T: TERRACED HOUSE: KITCHEN: MID AFTERNOON: 02:50 PM
DAVE is sat at the kitchen table.
DAVES phone buzzes.
A message from ERIC appears saying "Hey, really sorry about
John."
DAVE replies "Thanks"
ERIC replies "Heart attack. What a way to go."
DAVE REPLIES "So howd you know my dad?"
ERIC replies "Knew him from the start."
ERIC messages "So what you up to these days?"
DAVE replies "Of to do Art Foundation at U.N.I"
ERIC messages "Still a failure then."
DAVE replies "Sorry?"
ERIC replies "Nothing, see ya."
DAVE raises his eye brow and puts the phone down.
DAVE grabs a microwavable package of food.
DAVE puts it in the microwave.
DAVE slams the microwave door shut.
Screen turns black suddenly.

3.
I.N.T TERRACED HOUSE: BEDROOM: MORNING: 10:00 AM
DAVES phone rings, which is then picked by by DAVE.
DAVE slowly sits upright on his bed, with the phone next to
his ear.
"Hey."

DAVE

FRIEND (V.O)
"Party starts at eight."
DAVE
"Oh god"
(looks at watch)
"Be right there."
(turns of phone)
I.N.T TERRACED HOUSE: JOHNS BEDROOM: MORNING: 10:20 AM
DAVE enters JOHNS room.
DAVE
"Dad just going"
(pauses and stops in tracks)
DAVE stops to looks at the empty bed.
DAVES phone beeps with a message from ERIC, saying "Hurts
doesnt it."
DAVE messages "Hey Eric, whatd you mean?"
ERIC messages "Knowing you could have done more."
DAVE "I did, but..."
ERIC messages "Sons a failure as always. Never even cared
much for dad much."
DAVE messages "It hurt me so much!"
ERIC messages "What about the touch of a knife scraping
against your wrist?."
DAVE messages "Sorry what?"
ERIC messages "Dont worry, the guilt goes after a few
drinks."
DAVE messages "how did you know I was.."
ERIC signs of.

4.

DAVE looks over at the bedroom window, breathing quite


rapidly.
E.X.T VILLAGE COMMUNITY: GRAVE YARD: MORNING: 11:00 AM
DAVE walks through the grave yard.
DAVE stops, seeing something O.S
A HOODED FIGURE knelt down in front of JOHNS grave stone.
The HOODED FIGURE is fondeling the grave stone with his
hands.
"Hey!"

DAVE

The HOODED FIGURE immediately runs of.


DAVE runs ahead.
E.X.T TERRACED HOUSE: FRONT GARDEN EVENING TIME: 06:30 PM
DAVE rather drunkly attempts to open his front door.
I.N.T TERRACED HOUSE: PORCH: EVENING TIME: 06:31 PM
DAVE attempts to switch on the lights, but finds they dont
turn on.
DAVE
"Huh, damn electric."
I.N.T TERRACED HOUSE: KITCHEN: EVENING TIME: 06:32 PM
DAVE picks out his electric key from the kitchen table.
DAVE walks away from the table.
Camera defocuses to show HOODED FIGURE staring out through
the kitchen window.
E.X.T: VILLAGE COMMUNITY: CAR PARK: EVENING TIME: 06:40 PM
DAVE walks past a small car park.
I.N.T TERRACED HOUSE: FRONT PORCH: EVENING TIME: 06:41 PM
The door handle slowly opens.

5.

I.N.T TERRACED HOUSE: KITCHEN: EVENING TIME: 06:41 PM


The HOODED figure slowly enters the kitchen.
E.X.T: VILLAGE COMMUNITY: SITING CHAIR: EVENING TIME: 06:42
PM
DAVE places the electric key metre in his pocket.
DAVE places his hand over his forehead, while sitting on the
chair.
E.X.T: TERRACED HOUSE: LIVING ROOM: EVENING TIME: 06:41 PM
The HOODED FIGURE slowly walks through the living room.
I.N.T VILLAGE COMMUNITY: SITING CHAIR: EVENING TIME: 06:42
PM
DAVE reaches his hands into his other pockets.
DAVE
"My keys."
(squints eyes)
DAVE quickly stands up.
I.N.T TERRACED HOUSE: JOHNS BEDROOM: EVENING TIME: 06:42 PM
The HOODED FIGURE stands before JOHNS bed.
HOODED FIGURE kneels down beside the bed, smothering his
face into the bed sheet.
HOODED FIGURE
"Im sorry. For everything."
(crys)
"But dont worry."
"Im gonna make it right."
(draws out knife from pocket)
E.X.T VILAGE COMMUNITY: BACK TRACK: 06:50 PM
DAVE receives a message from ERIC, saying "Wanna know true
pain. Run back home and Ill show you."
DAVE quickly runs, with his eyes widened and mouth gasped.

6.
I.N.T: TERRACED HOUSE: JOHNS ROOM: EVENING: 06:51 PM
HOODED FIGURE lies upright on the bed post, with the knife
aimed forward.
HOODED FIGURE takes a slow and deep breathe.
E.X.T TERRACED HOUSE: FRONT GARDEN GATE EVENING: 02:00 PM
DAVE quickly opens the gate.
DAVE runs through the patio.
I.N.T TERRACED HOUSE: KITCHEN: EVENING: 02:01 PM
DAVE slowly enters the kitchen, cautiously looking around.
DAVE grabs a pan and exits the kitchen.
I.N.T TERRACED HOUSE: LIVING ROOM: EVENING: 02:02 PM
DAVE cautsiouely walks with the pan aimed upward.
ERIC messages "JOHNs son is gonna pay for his neglect."
I.N.T TERRACED HOUSE: JOHNS BEDROOM: EVENING: 02:03 PM
ERIC messages "Cause of one thing, he decides to completely
abandon him, always making sure mummys all right."
ERIC messages "But now amends can finally be made."
ERIC messages "Should be quick and painless."
DAVE quickly turns on the lights.
DAVE finds HOODED FIGURE to be lying on the bed.
HOODED FIGURES wrist is cut.
ERIC messages "No more than I deserve."
ERIC messages "Me and mum were torn, after he had you with
that marriage theif. Disowned him. self harm and drinking
were my only friends.
ERIC messages "Thought the heart thing would pass."
ERIC messages "I only hope dad can forgive me."
DAVE kneels down beside ERICS body.
ERIC messages "One favour brother. Bury me next to him
please."
(CONTINUED)

CONTINUED:

DAVE places his head over ERICS body, crying.


Slowly fades to black
Credits roll.

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