Sei sulla pagina 1di 14

YR 12 Media

AFL Activity

Print

AFL
Evaluating Peer
Work

AS Print

Level Descriptors

Level awarded

YR 12 Media

AFL Activity

Print

Name: Ellie Emmett

AS Print

Level Descriptors

Level awarded

YR 12 Media

AFL Activity

Print

Activity 1
Use the mark scheme below and work in pairs to grade the 4 exemplar pieces of
work. You must try and place the work into the correct level. Wherever possible you
should use a best fit model, this means that you take an overall view rather than
harshly penalising for one fault. Use the space provided to give specific examples
and write a summary comment at the bottom of the page. You are examining the
ENTIRE MAGAZINE
NON STOP POP

framing a shot,
including and
excluding
elements as
appropriate

Minimal Level
1
10 23 marks
Framing not
done well,
model not
making eye
contact with
camera.

using a variety of
shot distances as
appropriate

AS Print

Proficiency
Level 3
3647 marks

Excellence
Level 4
4860 marks

Used few
different shot
distances,
lighting in
pictures is not
good. Pictures
have been
taken at home
and dont look
professional.
Pictures of
model look a
bit like a
popstar.
The use of the
pink makes it
look like a pop
magazine.

shooting material
appropriate to the
task set
selecting mise-enscne including
colour, figure,
lighting, objects
and setting
manipulating
photographs as
appropriate to the
context for
presentation,
including cropping
and resizing
accurately using
language and
register
appropriately
integrating
illustration and
text
showing
understanding of
conventions of

Basic Level 2
2435 marks

Front cover
photo too big
and text is too
large. Photo is
also blurry and
been positioned
at a bad angle.
Appropriate
interview for a
pop magazine
Pictures laid out
in bad order.
Text is fairly ok.
Page numbers
been used,
most of text is

Level Descriptors

Level awarded

YR 12 Media
layout and page
design
showing
awareness of the
need for variety in
fonts and text size
using ICT
appropriately for
the task set

AFL Activity

Print

in line.
Text on front
cover to big
and take up
most of page
Used skills from
Photoshop.

Summary Comment: This magazine is in band 2.

AS Print

Level Descriptors

Level awarded

YR 12 Media

AFL Activity

Print

FLAWD
Minimal Level
1
10 23 marks
framing a shot,
including and
excluding
elements as
appropriate

using a variety of
shot distances as
appropriate
shooting material
appropriate to the
task set
selecting mise-enscne including
colour, figure,
lighting, objects
and setting
manipulating
photographs as
appropriate to the
context for
presentation,
including cropping
and resizing
accurately using
language and
register
appropriately
integrating
illustration and
text
showing
understanding of
conventions of
layout and page
design
showing
awareness of the
need for variety in
fonts and text size
using ICT
appropriately for
the task set

Basic Level 2
2435 marks

Proficiency
Level 3
3647 marks

Excellence
Level 4
4860 marks

Front cover
frame is good,
model making
eye contact, no
need for other
model in the
frame though.
Mid shot for
shot, distance
is good.
Props used,
guitar works
with genre.
Background
picture on
contents fits
the mise en
scene, basic
colour scheme.
Cover photo
cropped and
double page
model
background cut
out.
Content fits
genre
Text bold and
readable

Space on page,
laid out ok.

Fonts quite
large, lot
amount of text
Photoshop skills
used to crop
photos.

Summary Comment: This magazine is high band two/low band three.

AS Print

Level Descriptors

Level awarded

YR 12 Media

AFL Activity

Print

STACK
Minimal Level
1
10 23 marks
framing a shot,
including and
excluding
elements as
appropriate
using a variety of
shot distances as
appropriate
shooting material
appropriate to the
task set
selecting mise-enscne including
colour, figure,
lighting, objects
and setting
manipulating
photographs as
appropriate to the
context for
presentation,
including cropping
and resizing
accurately using
language and
register
appropriately
integrating
illustration and
text
showing
understanding of
conventions of
layout and page
design
showing
awareness of the
need for variety in
fonts and text size
using ICT
appropriately for
the task set

Basic Level 2
2435 marks

Proficiency
Level 3
3647 marks
Front cover
framed well,
photo of band
member at
concert.
Shots in many
different places

Excellence
Level 4
4860 marks

Images used to
describe genre.
Lighting in
shots quite
dark, colour
scheme quite
plain.
Pictures on
double page
been cut out
and placed over
each other,
showing
different skills.
Lots of
information
within genre.
Text is good
size, readable.

Laid out well


design
innovative.

Text placed
where there is
enough space
for images.
Photoshop used
well.

Summary Comment: This magazine is in band three.

AS Print

Level Descriptors

Level awarded

YR 12 Media

AFL Activity

Print

DUBZONE

framing a shot,
including and
excluding
elements as
appropriate
using a variety of
shot distances as
appropriate
shooting material
appropriate to the
task set

selecting mise-enscne including


colour, figure,
lighting, objects
and setting
manipulating
photographs as
appropriate to the
context for
presentation,
including cropping
and resizing
accurately using
language and
register
appropriately
integrating
illustration and
text
showing
understanding of
conventions of
layout and page
design
showing
awareness of the
need for variety in
fonts and text size
using ICT
appropriately for
the task set

Minimal Level
1
10 23 marks
Shot framed
badly, angle
wrong, texts
hides model

Basic Level 2
2435 marks

Proficiency
Level 3
3647 marks

Excellence
Level 4
4860 marks

No variety,
shots look
similar.
Shots used not
close to genre
at all, model
needs to be
wearing
different
clothing.
Lighting and
setting of shots
is bad, props
used dont
connect with
genre.
Photos in bad
placing.
Photos not
been cropped,
looks
unfinished.
Interview looks
short.
Text hard to
read on yellow
background on
contents page.
Text not in
columns, looks
untidy.

Spacing on
pages used
badly, texts too
big.
Photoshop used
badly.

Summary Comment: this magazine is in band 1.

AS Print

Level Descriptors

Level awarded

YR 12 Media

AFL Activity

Print

Task 2
Now using the skills youve acquired in task 1, evaluate your own work and then
two pieces of work from classmates. Use the space provided to give specific
examples and write a summary comment at the bottom of the page.
Magazine title: Tru Sound Jack Horne Magazine

framing a shot,
including and
excluding
elements as
appropriate
using a variety of
shot distances as
appropriate
shooting material
appropriate to the
task set
selecting mise-enscne including
colour, figure,
lighting, objects
and setting
manipulating
photographs as
appropriate to the
context for
presentation,
including cropping
and resizing
accurately using
language and
register
appropriately
integrating
illustration and
text
showing
understanding of
conventions of
layout and page
design
showing
awareness of the
need for variety in
fonts and text size
using ICT
appropriately for
the task set

AS Print

Minimal Level
1
10 23 marks
Framed well,
both models
making eye
contact.

Basic Level 2
2435 marks

Proficiency
Level 3
3647 marks

Excellence
Level 4
4860 marks

Only used three


shots
Models dont
look indie,
wearing wrong
sort of clothing.
No mise en
scene, no
props, cover
photo quite
dark.
No cropping,
little editing,
quite basic use
of skill.

Little
information,
interview short.
Text on double
page spread is
too bright blue
colour so is
hard to read.
Layout is basic,
needs more
editing.

Text to big, not


enough of it,
little on
contents page.
Used but not
correctly needs
more skill.

Level Descriptors

Level awarded

YR 12 Media

AFL Activity

Print

Summary Comment: this magazine is in band level 1.

AS Print

Level Descriptors

Level awarded

YR 12 Media

AFL Activity

Print

Magazine title: Interval Edie Murray magazine.


Minimal Level
1
10 23 marks
framing a shot,
including and
excluding
elements as
appropriate
using a variety of
shot distances as
appropriate
shooting material
appropriate to the
task set

selecting mise-enscne including


colour, figure,
lighting, objects
and setting

manipulating
photographs as
appropriate to the
context for
presentation,
including cropping
and resizing
accurately using
language and
register
appropriately
integrating
illustration and
text
showing
understanding of
conventions of
layout and page
design
showing
awareness of the
need for variety in
fonts and text size
using ICT
appropriately for
the task set

Basic Level 2
2435 marks

Proficiency
Level 3
3647 marks

Excellence
Level 4
4860 marks

Yes,
appropriate
model looking
at the camera.
Yes, used a
variety of 5
different
images.
Models in
normal clothes,
front cover
more
appropriate.
Model on front
cover looks
indie fitting in
with genre,
colour scheme
red, white and
black contrasts
well.
Image on
double page,
cropped, been
sized well.

Yes, language
good, lots
written
Yes, used some
texts over
images.
Pages laid out
well, texts in
line and page
furniture used
correctly.
Lots of different
fonts, some a
little large.
Yes, bee used
with skill on
photoshop.

Summary Comment

AS Print

Level Descriptors

Level awarded

YR 12 Media

AS Print

AFL Activity

Level Descriptors

Print

Level awarded

YR 12 Media

AFL Activity

Print

Magazine title:
Minimal Level
1
10 23 marks

Basic Level 2
2435 marks

Proficiency
Level 3
3647 marks

Excellence
Level 4
4860 marks

framing a shot,
including and
excluding
elements as
appropriate
using a variety of
shot distances as
appropriate
shooting material
appropriate to the
task set
selecting mise-enscne including
colour, figure,
lighting, objects
and setting
manipulating
photographs as
appropriate to the
context for
presentation,
including cropping
and resizing
accurately using
language and
register
appropriately
integrating
illustration and
text
showing
understanding of
conventions of
layout and page
design
showing
awareness of the
need for variety in
fonts and text size
using ICT
appropriately for
the task set
Summary Comment

AS Print

Level Descriptors

Level awarded

YR 12 Media

AFL Activity

Print

Task 3 Target setting


Use the feedback from your classmates to set targets to improve your work.
Use the grid below to focus your areas for improvement. Try to be as specific
as possible and where possible create one target for each area of the mark
scheme. Remember to be realistic, that means making sure your targets are
achievable and realistic for your ability.
Magazine title:
Minimal Level
1
10 23 marks

Basic Level 2
2435 marks

Proficiency
Level 3
3647 marks

Excellence
Level 4
4860 marks

framing a shot,
including and
excluding
elements as
appropriate
using a variety of
shot distances as
appropriate
shooting material
appropriate to the
task set
selecting mise-enscne including
colour, figure,
lighting, objects
and setting
manipulating
photographs as
appropriate to the
context for
presentation,
including cropping
and resizing
accurately using
language and
register
appropriately
integrating
illustration and
text
showing
understanding of
conventions of
layout and page
design
showing
awareness of the
need for variety in
fonts and text size
using ICT

AS Print

Level Descriptors

Level awarded

YR 12 Media

AFL Activity

Print

appropriately for
the task set

AS Print

Level Descriptors

Level awarded