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WritingwithOutsideInformation
Whatisoutsideinformation?Whyisitimportant?
Objective:Writebodyparagraphssupportedwithoutsideinformation.
IneveryRegentsDBQessayprompt,thereisarequirementthatyouhavetolookcloselytosee.Most
studentsthinkthattheDBQiseasybecausetheycanusethedocumentstohelpthemwritetheessay,
butlittledotheyknow,theyhavetoincludeknowledgefromoutsideofthedocumentstogetagood
score.Wecallthisrequirement,outsideinformation.
Whatarethebestwaystoincludeoutsideinformation?
CONTEXT,EFFECTSandDETAILS
ThedocumentsinaDBQprovideinformationaboutahistoricalevent.Itisyourjobtogivethereadercontext
forthateventbywritingaboutwhathappenedbeforetheeventthatledtoit,andwhathappenedafterwards
asaresult.
ExamplesofUsingOutsideInformation
Forexample,readthetaskanddocumentbelow,thenexaminethebodyparagraphexcerpt.Noticehowthe
authorhasaddedcontextfromoutsideofthedocument.
HistoricalContext:
Turningpointsareeventsthatresultinregionalandworldwidechange.Threeturningpointsthattransformed
societiesandregionsweretheoutbreakofthebubonicplague,thesigningoftheNanjingTreaty,a
ndthe
assassinationofArchdukeFerdinand.
Task:Usingtheinformationfromthedocumentsandyourknowledgeofglobalhistory,answerthequestionsthatfollow
eachdocumentinPartA.YouranswerstothequestionswillhelpyouwritethePartBessayinwhichyouwillbeaskedto
Selecttwoturningpointsmentionedinthehistoricalcontextandforeach
Describethehistoricalcircumstancessurroundingthisturningpoint
Discusschangesthatoccurredwithinasocietyand/orregionasaresultofthis
turningpoint.
Bodyparagraphexcerpt:
Anotherexamplefromthesameessay:
Bodyparagraphexcerpt:
PracticeUsingOutsideInformation
Directions:ThepromptanddocumentbelowarefromtheJune2013GlobalRegentsexam.Youve
beengivenatopicsentenceandasentenceusingtextualevidencefromthedocument.Itisyourjob
towriteaparagraphthatincludesoutsideinformationfromyourstudyofglobalhistoryusingthe
topicsentenceandtextualevidencesentenceprovided.
TopicSentence:
TherailwaysystemputinplacebytheBritishhadagreatimpactonIndia.
SentencewithTextualEvidence:
AsnotedbyRobertLee,imperialcountriesusedrailroadstofeedburgeoningindustriesoftheWest,
makeroomforwesternpopulations,dispossessthepreviousinhabitants,andmaketheconquered
landssafeforinvestmentsandexploitation.
Writeyourbodyparagraphwithoutsideinformationbelow.Insertthesentencewithtextualevidence
whereappropriate.
TherailwaysystemputinplacebytheBritishhadagreatimpactonIndia.