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TeacherOverviewObjectives:

WritingwithOutsideInformation

Whatisoutsideinformation?Whyisitimportant?
Objective:Writebodyparagraphssupportedwithoutsideinformation.
IneveryRegentsDBQessayprompt,thereisarequirementthatyouhavetolookcloselytosee.Most
studentsthinkthattheDBQiseasybecausetheycanusethedocumentstohelpthemwritetheessay,
butlittledotheyknow,theyhavetoincludeknowledgefromoutsideofthedocumentstogetagood
score.Wecallthisrequirement,outsideinformation.

Whatarethebestwaystoincludeoutsideinformation?

CONTEXT,EFFECTSandDETAILS
ThedocumentsinaDBQprovideinformationaboutahistoricalevent.Itisyourjobtogivethereadercontext
forthateventbywritingaboutwhathappenedbeforetheeventthatledtoit,andwhathappenedafterwards
asaresult.

ExamplesofUsingOutsideInformation
Forexample,readthetaskanddocumentbelow,thenexaminethebodyparagraphexcerpt.Noticehowthe
authorhasaddedcontextfromoutsideofthedocument.

HistoricalContext:
Turningpointsareeventsthatresultinregionalandworldwidechange.Threeturningpointsthattransformed
societiesandregionsweretheoutbreakofthebubonicplague,thesigningoftheNanjingTreaty,a
ndthe
assassinationofArchdukeFerdinand.

Task:Usingtheinformationfromthedocumentsandyourknowledgeofglobalhistory,answerthequestionsthatfollow
eachdocumentinPartA.YouranswerstothequestionswillhelpyouwritethePartBessayinwhichyouwillbeaskedto
Selecttwoturningpointsmentionedinthehistoricalcontextandforeach
Describethehistoricalcircumstancessurroundingthisturningpoint
Discusschangesthatoccurredwithinasocietyand/orregionasaresultofthis
turningpoint.

Bodyparagraphexcerpt:


Anotherexamplefromthesameessay:

Bodyparagraphexcerpt:

PracticeUsingOutsideInformation
Directions:ThepromptanddocumentbelowarefromtheJune2013GlobalRegentsexam.Youve
beengivenatopicsentenceandasentenceusingtextualevidencefromthedocument.Itisyourjob
towriteaparagraphthatincludesoutsideinformationfromyourstudyofglobalhistoryusingthe
topicsentenceandtextualevidencesentenceprovided.

TopicSentence:

TherailwaysystemputinplacebytheBritishhadagreatimpactonIndia.

SentencewithTextualEvidence:

AsnotedbyRobertLee,imperialcountriesusedrailroadstofeedburgeoningindustriesoftheWest,
makeroomforwesternpopulations,dispossessthepreviousinhabitants,andmaketheconquered
landssafeforinvestmentsandexploitation.
Writeyourbodyparagraphwithoutsideinformationbelow.Insertthesentencewithtextualevidence
whereappropriate.
TherailwaysystemputinplacebytheBritishhadagreatimpactonIndia.

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