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IELTSWritingTask2ModelEssay

Artisconsideredanimportantpartofasocietyaswellasanexpressionofits
culture.Doyouthinkitisimportantforchildrentobetaughtart?Doyouthink
childrenshouldbeencouragedtofocusonartratherthanothersubjects?

ModelAnswer
Itiscommonlybelievedthatartplaysafundamentalroleinsocietyasartistsareableto
expresstheirthoughtsandtheircultureintheirwork.Inmyopinion,childrenshould
definitelylearnartbecausetheycandevelopcreativityandlearntoexpressthemselvesin
theirartworkbutitshouldnotbetaughttothedetrimentofothersubjects.
Firstly,artisanessentialsubjectwhichchildren,especiallyyoungchildren,shouldlearnin
ordertohelppromotetheircreativityandimagination.Withoutthedevelopmentof
imaginationandcreativethinking,childrenwillstruggletogrowintodynamic,individual
thinkerswhentheyreachadulthood.Furthermore,somechildrenareparticularlygiftedin
theircreativeabilitiesandstudyingartcanhelpthemnurturetheirtalents.
Anotherimportantadvantageforchildrenwhenpracticingartisthatitprovidesamedium
throughwhichtheycanexpresstheiremotionsandfeelings.Inotherwords,youngchildren
donothavethelinguisticcapabilitiestoputtheirideasintolanguageandthuscommunicate
directly.Therefore,byusingart,theyareabletoconveymeaningthroughpicturesand
symbols.Forthisreason,manychildpsychologistsoftenstudytheartworkofchildrento
gainaninsightintowhattheythinkandfeel.
Finally,however,regardlessofhowusefulthestudyofartisforchildren,thisshouldnot
resultinmorefocusbeingplacedonartratherthanothersubjects.Childrenneedtohavea
balanceofallsubjectssoastofacilitateahealthydevelopmentbothmentallyandphysically.
Thus,ensuringthatthereisahealthybalanceofart,sciences,languagesandphysical
educationintheschoolsyllabusisessential.
Inconclusion,whileartcertainlyhelpsachilddevelopcreativityaswellasexpresstheir
thoughts,itshouldbetaughtequallyalongsideallothersubjects.Aschoolcurriculum
shouldofferabalanceofsubjects.

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