CSI Special Edition :

Timun Mas
Written By
Samuel Palungan Rantetoding
Genres:
Action, Crime

18samuel.p@sphsc-students.net

Fade In:
EXT. FORREST, MORNING
Panning around the forrest, then zoom in to the party.(XLS)
There was a birthday party in that Forrest. ANNE, the
birthday kid,play with her friends to find an
object.Suddenly, She found skeleton in the ground.(MS)
ANNE
(crying)
Aaaaaa!!! Mom, I found skeleton
CUT TO:
EXT. FORREST, DAYLIGHT
Tilt from up to down to the dead body's location.(MCU)
The CSI team come to the crime scene. They take the skeleton
body to their office.
TAYLOR
DANNY! ordered the forensic to
bring the skeleton to the office.
and tell DON and Agent BONASERA to
to take a picture of any clues in
this forrest.
DANNY
OK, BOSS! Hey, you bring this
skeleton to the office and give it
to SID! DON, STELLA take picture
of any clues that you find!
INT. CSI OFFICE, DR. ADI ROOM, NIGHT
TAYLOR go to Dr. ADI. (MLS) Tracking Agent BUDI TAYLOR.
TAYLOR
ADI, what happen to that skeleton.
ADI
From my opinion, it's a giant body
that already die a long time ago.
Maybe you need to find more clues
at the crime scene.
TAYLOR
OK then! I will tell DANNY and DON
to find more prove tomorrow.

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INT. CSI OFFICE, NIGHT
TAYLOR
(Call DANNY)
Hey, sorry to bother you this
night! Can you go with DON to the
crime scene tomorrow?
DANNY
OK, boss!
EXT. FORREST, MORNING
DANNY AND DON search for the prove in the crime scene.(MS)
Panning from DANNY to DON.
DANNY
DON! I will search in this place
and you ask people around this
place!
DON
Why you didn't ask people around
and I will search more clues in
this place? Why you always give
order to me? You're not my boss.
DANNY
Fine! I will ask people around and
you have to find important clues
in this forrest. If not, we will
have to stay in this forrest for a
whole day.
CONTINUE TO PAGE 3
CUT TO:
INT. CSI OFFICE, MORNING
TAYLOR through STELLA's office.(LS)
TAYLOR
Agent BONASERA, How the progress
from the clues that you find?
STELLA
(pointing the clues in the
monitor)
As you can see that there is no
scarf or blood in his body. Maybe
the murderer killed by buried him
in the ground.

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TAYLOR
Is there any possibility that the
murderer didn't do it on purpose?
STELLA
Of course, maybe the murderer make
a trap to tricked him, but the
trick become a fatal mistake.
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EXT. FORREST, DAYLIGHT
Track the camera to DANNY from side. (MLS) DANNY walk to
local people.
DANNY
Hello! My name is DANNY. What's
your name?
TINA
Hello, I'm TINA.
DANNY
Can you answer some of my question
if it's not bothering you?
TINA
Sure.
DANNY
Are you work nearby or not?
TINA
I work near this forrest and I
live outside this forrest, so I
often go to this forrest.
DANNY
Did you know that there's dead
giant body here?
TINA
Oh yeah, I've heard from my
friend.
DANNY
Do you know the dead body's name?
TINA
I'm not sure, but I've heard story
about Timun Mas from my friend.
Maybe that dead body is the
monster that Timun Mas killed.

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DANNY
Do you know how long that monster
is dead?
TINA
Since 1993.
DANNY
Thank you, TINA. You're really
helping the CSI team.
TINA
You're welcome. I'm really happy
that I can help the CSI.
DANNY run to DON shoot from front.(LS)
DANNY
Bro, I found the suspect.
DON
Who?
DANNY
(Exhausted)
Local people said that the
murderer is TIMUN MAS.
DON
Did she tell you why TIMUN MAS
kiled that giant.
DANNY
No, that's why we need to find HER
ASAP! Call boss, DON!
DON
(Call TAYLOR)
BOSS we found the murderer.
TAYLOR
Great job. back to the office
ASAP.
CUT TO:
INT. CSI OFFICE, EVENING
Tilt down from top of the CSI building to the bottom. Then
Zoom in to the CSI office door.(LS to CU)
TAYLOR
Hey, DANNY what did you know?

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DANNY
the lady that I interview said
that maybe the murderer is TIMUN
MAS.
TAYLOR
Who's she?
DANNY
She said that TIMUN MAS is a
legend story that happen in real
life.
TAYLOR
So you said that this bone was
from that legend story
DANNY
Exactly.
DON
Why we don't ask people around
there and ask if they know TIMUN
MAS current location?
TAYLOR
Tomorrow you go to that forrest
with agent Bonasera.
DON
Yes, boss!
Agent Taylor see agent Bonasera in front of his office.
(From TAYLOR's perspective) the camera panning from right to
left.
TAYLOR
Agent Bonasera!
STELLA
Yes, BUDI.
TAYLOR
Can you go with DANNY and DON to
the crime scene tomorrow.
STELLA
Why?
TAYLOR
They need to find the murderer
location.

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STELLA
They already find the murderer's
name?
TAYLOR
Yes, but we still not sure that
she is the murderer.
EXT. FORREST, MORNING
The CSI team arrive with car.(MS) Camera stay in position
shoot from front of the car.
STELLA
DANNY, DON ask people around and
come back here before 1 pm.
DON
OK, agent.
After they asked many people, DANNY find a woman that
already old and He thinks that she know TIMUN MAS location.
DANNY
Excuse me, ma'am! Can I ask you
some question.
LISA
Sure.
DANNY
Do you know a girl named TIMUN
MAS?
LISA
Of course,She is my friend's
friend.
DANNY
Do you know where she is?
LISA
I'm not sure, but Maybe you can
ask my friend?
DANNY
OK thank you ma'am, can I ask your
friend address?
LISA
Yeah, She live outside of this
forrest. You can see her house
from here

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(Pointing at house)
EXT. FORREST, MORNING
DANNY go to that house and ask the owner of the house.(MLS)
shoot from DANNY's perspectives.
DANNY
Excuse me! My name is DANNY and
I'm from CSI Team. Can I ask you
some question?
MARIA
Sure, come in.
DANNY
Thank you.
DANNY sit on the sofa(LS). and The owner named MARIA give
him a cup of tea.
DANNY (CONT'D)
I want to ask you do you know
TIMUN MAS?
MARIA
Yes, I know. She is my old friend.
DANNY
Did she lives near here?
MARIA
A long time ago, she lives beside
my house, but because her mother
dies and their family can't pay
their debt, some of debt collector
crush her house, so she lives in
apartment near here.
DANNY
Do you know the name of the
apartment?
MARIA
No, but she said that it just 5 km
from here.
DANNY
Ok, thank you ma'am.
Danny run to DON and STELLA. (LS) shoot from DON and
STELLA's perspectives.

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DON
Why do you run so fast?
DANNY
Call agent Taylor, that we already
know the place.
STELLA
Where?
DANNY
A woman there said that she moved
to an apartment 5 km from here.
STELLA
(Call TAYLOR)
BUDI, we already find her place.
TAYLOR
Where?
STELLA
She lived in apartment. 5 km from
here. Can you find the apartment's
name?
TAYLOR
Sure. Give me a minute.
After a minute, TAYLOR find the apartment.
TAYLOR (CONT'D)
Gotcha. There is apartment with no
name in Sudirman street that
already closed. Maybe she will be
right there. I will be right there
and wait for me.
EXT. SUDIRMAN STREET, EVENING
They got instruction from BUDI TAYLOR to wait until TIMUN
MAS comes out from her apartmnet.(shoot TIMUN MAS'
APARTMENT)They pointing their gun to the door. Suddenly
TIMUN MAS comes out from the door and.....
TAYLOR
TIMUN MAS!Hand's up. You're under
arrest.
TIMUN MAS
Why?

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TAYLOR
You under arrest because you were
killed someone.DANNY, DON arrest
hehr.
DANNY, DON take their handcuffs and bring TIMUN MAS to CSI
Office.
CUT TO:
INT. CSI OFFICE,INTEROGATION ROOM, NIGHT
TIMUN MAS sit in the interogation room (MS) zoom in then
panning to door. Agent TAYLOR comes in(LS) shoot from the
table in interogation room.
TAYLOR
OK, let's talk to the point. Do
you know this guy?
(give her a picture)
TIMUN MAS
Yeah, He is the giant.
TAYLOR
SO YOU KNOW THIS GUY. it means
that maybe you're killed this guy.
TIMUN MAS
No, I didn't kill him. He chased
me and HE fell to the ground and
die.
TAYLOR
Why did he fell on the groung and
die?
TIMUN MAS
Because my mom can't have a child.
Then, the giant help my mom to
have a child by plant a cucumber
seed.
TAYLOR
Then why did he chased you?
TIMUN MAS
Because The giant said that if I
already grown up, He will took me
and ate me, so my mom went to the
mountain and ask for help. A man
give her something to help me. So
I used it to stopped the giant,
but I didn't know that the
equipment that I have can killed
the giant.

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TAYLOR
Ok, So you commit that you killed
the giant?
TIMUN MAS
Yes, but it's coincidence.
TAYLOR
Ok, because you tell the truth,
you will have a remission.But you
still have pay for your penalty.
TIMUN MAS
Ok, sir! I'm sorry for my fault.
TAYLOR
(Call Police in front of the
door)
Sir, please bring her to jail.
The police bring her to jail panning from left to right.(LS)
CUT TO:
INT. POLICE DEPARTMENT, ROOM VISITS,, MORNING
After a week, Agent BUDI TAYLOR go to visit TIMUN MAS.
TAYLOR
How you're doing?
TIMUN MAS
Actually, I didn't like the
situation here, but I need to pay
for my fault.
TAYLOR
Yeah, I will make sure that the
officer here protect you from
other prisoners.
TIMUN MAS
Thank you, sir!
TAYLOR
You're welcome.
CUT TO:
INT. CSI OFFICE, MORNING
BUDI commands the other agent to gather in his office.

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TAYLOR
(Use Speaker in his office
Hey, guys! Can you all come to my
office NOW!
Shoot from BUDI's perspectives to door.(LS)
TAYLOR (CONT'D)
Congrats, guys! once again we have
solve the crime.
DANNY
Thank you, Boss! Why we didn't
celebrate this night with eating
some pizza in the restaurant near
here for our success.
DON
Yeah, boss. Let's do it.
STELLA
Come on BUDI. let's go.
TAYLOR
Ok, fine, I will treat for tonight
meals okay.
DANNY
Thanks, Boss!
INT. PIZZA RESTAURANT, NIGHT
They're eating pizza and Agent BUDI TAYLOR stands up and
said a few word.(MLS when they're eating pizza and MS when
TAYLOR speech)
TAYLOR
Cheers, guys for our success and
let this not be our last mission
and we can always be together!
(Lift wine glass)
ALL
Cheers!
(Lift wine glass)
Dolly out the restaurant to the outside(MLS to XLS).
Dissolve the CSI Logo at the end.
THE END