TO:

__________________________

FROM:

__________________________

DATE:

__________________

SUBJECT:

Comments on the Stud Loaning Project Contract

Please see comments and proposed revisions on the contract. I have no background of what
the buck loaning project is so all these comments are just based on the contract.

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PROVISION

ORIGINAL

COMMENTS

RECOMMENDATIONS

Whereas
clause

Sa araw na ito ay
ako
ay
pinagkalooban ako
ng
isang
thoroughbred
na
kabayo

Par. 5

Dalawang anak na
babae ang kapalit
ng nautang kong
kabayo na may
edad
na
hindi
bababa sa 6 na
buwan

Par. 7

Hindi ko ililipat
kaninuman
o
ipapasa
ang
nautang
kong
kambing
kapag
walang pahintulot
ng Pamahalaang
Lungsod
ng
________, Opisina
ng Departamento
ng Agriculture

Par. 9

Kung anuman ang

mangyari sa aking
mga
kambing,
responsibilidad
kong bayaran ito
sa
presyong
nararapat ayon sa
kanyang laki (hindi
bababa
ng
P_____)

Provision is not clear.

All
the
horses
(offspring) or just the
stud
horse
(thats
imported)?
Is
the
amount of money per
horse?

For clarification. Is the

purpose of this provision to
put a monetary value on the
kabayo or stud just in case
something happens to him?
Or is this for all the offspring
that will be produced? When
is this applicable? Before the
stud is able to impregnate
the female horse and there is
no offspring? Or anytime the
horse/s die? Based on the
earlier provisions, once 2
female horses are paid, the
person becomes the owner
of the stud.

Par. 10

Sa
aking
mga
kabaranggay
na
may alagang mga
babaeng kabayo,
di ko ipagkakait sa
kanilang
makipaglahi
ang
studg paalaga sa
akin

Provision is not clear.

This
person
is
responsible for and is
buying the stud and
based on Par. 9 seems
to
be
financially
responsible if anything
happens to the stud but
s/he is obliged to allow

For clarification.

REVISE: Sa araw na ito ay

ako ay pinagkalooban ako ng
isang Anglubian na stud
(imported bloodline)

Is this a one time

payment or will every 2
females be paid for
each successful stud?

ADD: xxx na hindi bababa sa

6 na buwan at nasa
magandang kalagayan
walang sakit, o kahit anong
depekto

REVISE: Hindi ko ililipat

kaninuman o ipapasa ang
nautang
kong
kambing
kapag walang nakasulat na
pahintulot
(written
permission)
na
manggagaling
sa
Pamahalaang Lungsod ng
_____________, Opisina ng
_______________.

Is the carer obliged to

lend the horse to
others for breeding
even
after
s/he
becomes the owner
(after paying with 2
female offpsring)?
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Respectfully submitted.

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