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What was the state of Russia prior to Joseph power
when the Bolsheviks hated Tzar Nicholas II so much that
they revolted?

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state of Russia prior to Joseph power when the
Bolsheviks hated Tzar Nicholas II so much that they
revolted?

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Stalins rise to power, Russia was ruled by Vladimir Lenin, and the
government was subscribed to socialism and communism.

state of Russia was advancing prior to Stalin's rise of power. The


Bolsheviks ( soon to be know as the Communist Party and then later, the USSR)
revolted against the last Tzar that the state would ever have. Russia was then ruled
by Vladimir Lenin, and his party had only just subscribed to socialism and
communism.

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born may 18th


throne from father
executed
elected legislature

Nicholas II was born on May 18,


1868, in Pushkin, Russia. He
inherited the throne when his father,
Alexander III, died in 1894.
Although he believed in autocracy,
he was eventually forced to create
an elected legislature. Nicholas IIs
handling of Bloody Sunday and
World War I incensed his subjects
and led to his abdication.
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Bolsheviks executed him on July
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CITATION: Nicholas II Biography

Czar Nicholas was born on May 18th and inherited the


throne from his late father. When his father died,
Nicholas II created an elected legislature. He was
executed in Russia in 1918.

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elected: voted in

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Sunday and World
War I incensed his
subjects and led to
his abdication.
Nicholas II Biography
Nicholas IIs
handling of Bloody
Sunday and [WWI]. . .
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Czar Nicholas was born on May 18th and inherited the throne from his father. After his fathers death, Nicholas II
created a voted in legislature. His handling of Bloody Sunday and [WWI]. . . led to his abdication. (Nicholas II
Biography), he was executed in Russia in 1918 by Bolsheviks.

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The new provisional government


was opposed by the Bolsheviks, a
political movement led by Vladimir
Lenin. Lenin inspired an armed
revolution against this temporary
government. All power to the
Soviets! was his call to arms. With
this revolution, the Bolsheviks
successfully seized power and

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lenin and bolsheviks rebelled


against the new gov.

lenin became dictator

communist party

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dictator: leader

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Lenin became the Soviet Unions


virtual dictator. Lenins dictatorial
policies would pave the way for
Stalins rise more than a decade
later. In 1918 Lenin renamed the
Bolsheviks the Communist Party. At
this time Lenin and his new party
officially subscribed to the twin
ideologies of socialism and
communism.

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Lenin lead the Bolsheviks in rebelling against the


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Bolsheviks and renamed them to be the
Communist Party.

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[The Communist
Party] . . . subscribed
to. . . ideologies of
socialism and
communism. Fridell
69-71

Fridell 69-71

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Vladimir Lenin lead the Bolsheviks in rebellion against the new government created by Tzar Nicholas II. They
viewed the new government as hopeless and ineffective. After a successful revolution, Lenin became the leader
of the Bolsheviks and renamed them the Communist Party. In 1918, he and his new party then subscribed to. . .
ideologies of socialism and communism. Fridell 69-71
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Stalin joined the Bolshevik party in


1904 and rose through its ranks.
Lenin needed a man who was a
good bureaucratic organizer, self-

stalin rose through ranks of the party


meet lenins needs
powerful position

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powerful
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Stalin worked hard


and steadily and

reliant, and decisive, and Stalin met


these needs. . . Stalin worked hard
and steadily and remained in the
background until 1922, when he
became general secretary of the
partys Central Committee, a
powerful position.

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Stalin quickly rose through the ranks of the


Bolshevik party by meeting all of Lenins standards.
General secretary of the Central Committee was an
influential position.

remained in the
background until
1922, when he
became general
secretary. . . Fridell,
72

CITATION:: Fridell, 72

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Stalin quickly rose through the ranks of the Bolshevik party by meeting all of Lenins standards [He] worked hard
and steadily and remained in the background until 1922, when he became general secretary. . . (Fridell, 72), an
influential position of the Central Committee.
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perhaps: imaginably

stalin was a threat to lenin


lenin was sick

In 1922, perhaps realizing that


Stalin was a force to be reckoned
with and believing it better to keep
your enemies close, Lenin
appointed him General Secretary of
the Party. It was a fatal mistake, but
before Lenin could right the situation
he suffered a series of strokes. This
gave Stalin the opportunity he had
always craved and with Lenin
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CITATION:: Klein, 46

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Perhaps Lenin viewed Stalin as a threat and made


him General Secretary of the party. Before Lenin
could realize the mistake he made, he had many
strokes.

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This gave Stalin the


opportunity he had
always craved and
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incapacitated he
swiftly took charge of
the party. Klein, 46

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Imaginably, Lenin viewed Stalin as a threat and made him General Secretary of the party. Keeping your enemies
close did not apply to Lenins situation. Before Lenin could realize the mistake he made- upgrading Stalin's
position, he had many strokes which gave Stalin the opportunity he had always craved and. . . he swiftly took
charge of the party. Klein, 46.

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basically master once lenin died


no one could challenge him
continued to eliminate people he
believed to be against him

By the time Lenin died, Stalin was


the undisputed master of the Soviet
Union. Stalin consolidated his
power by murdering or secretly
discrediting his rivals so that there
was no one who could challenge his
authority. Stalin proceeded to to
dismantle the NEP and eliminate his
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Stalin was master of the SU once Lenin passed


away. He made sure no one could his authority by
murdering his rivals. Stalin continued to eliminate
anyone who opposed

CITATION:: Lansford, 31

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master: commander,
leader
challenge: protest,
object
eliminate: erase,
dispose of
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Stalin consolidated
his power by
murdering or secretly
discrediting his
rivals. Lansford, 31

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Stalin was leader of the SU once Lenin passed away. To make sure no one could protest his authority, [he]
consolidated his power by murdering or secretly discrediting his rivals. (Lansford, 31)
The communist leader continued to dispose of anyone who objected his power.
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After Lenins death in 1927, Stalin


went to work consolidating his
power. He plotted to make his party
colleagues suspicious of each other
and watched quietly as they
eliminated one another. Meanwhile,
Stalin was busy inserting his own
followers in position to support him.

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planned to make members of the


party suspicious of one another and
watched them eliminate
after lenin died he started building
his power

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suspicious:

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After Lenins death, Stalin begin to develop his


own power. Stalin planned to make members of
the party skeptical of one another, causing them
to eliminate each other.

Stalin was busy


inserting his own
followers in position to
support him. Fridell,
72

CITATION:: Fridell, 72

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After Lenins death, Stalin begin to develop his own power. Stalin planned to make members of the party
skeptical of one another, causing them to eliminate each other. As this was in play, Stalin was busy inserting his
own followers in position to support him. Fridell, 72.

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Stalin quickly decreed that the


Soviet Union would be industrialized
and modernized. A poor nation of
peasant farmers would be
transformed into an industrial giant
to rival the capitalist nations of the
West.

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poor nation
changed to an industrial giant
rival capitalist nations

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poor: impoverished
nation: union

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CITATION:: Fridell, 75

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Stalin planned for the poor Soviet Union to


change into a huge industrial country. This would
help rival capitalist nations.

Stalin quickly decreed


that the Soviet Union
would be industrialized
and modernized.
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Stalin planned for the impoverished Soviet Union to change into a huge industrial country.Stalin quickly decreed
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There were relatively few Soviet


factories and little money available
to build more. That money would
have to come from the
peasants,Stalin decreed. . . Stalin
moved his revolution along in the
form of five-year national economic
plans. Each plan set goals for the
amount of crops or industrial goods
that the nations workers must
produce. Under these plans, Stalin
predicted, both agricultural and
industrial production would rise
dramatically.

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few factories
little money
plan set goals
production should rise

production:
manufacturing

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CITATION:: Fridell, 75

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The Soviet union had limited factories and


limited money to go along with the poor
economy. These plans set goals for certain
things that needed to be produced. Stalin
predicted that these plans would raise
agricultural and industrial manufacturing.

Stalin moved his


revolution along in the
form of five-year
national economic
plans. Fridell, 75
Stalin moved his
revolution along [by
initiating] five-year
economic plans.
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The Soviet union had limited factories and limited money to go along with the poor economy. Consequently,
Stalin moved his revolution along [by initiating] five-year national economic plans Fridell, 75, these plans set
goals for certain things, such as crops and goods, that needed to be produced. Stalin predicted that these plans
would raise agricultural and industrial manufacturing.

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He uses propaganda to develop


what political scientist refer to as a
cult of personality. His goal is to
elevate himself to such a godlike
status that no one would even
think of disobeying him. To create
this cult he commissions artists
and writers to produce works that
glorify him.

CITATION:: Fridell, 77

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uses propaganda to make cult


uses artist and writers
glorify stalin

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propaganda:
misleading publicity

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Stalin takes advantage of artists and writers by


using them to help in creating his so called cult of
personality. The artists and writers helped Joseph
Stalin reach his goals of power through
misleading publicity.

His goal is to elevate


himself to such a
godlike status that no
one would even think
of disobeying him.
Fridell, 77
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. . [so] that no one
would . . . [disobey]
him. Fridell, 77

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Stalin takes advantage of artists and writers by using them to help in creating his so called cult of personality.
The artists and writers helped Joseph Stalin reach his goals of power through misleading publicity. His goal was
to To [become powerful] . . . [so] that no one would . . . [disobey] him. Fridell, 77 ,or even think of having an
opinion other than his.

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Stalin also imposed a reign of


terror in Russia. Books and films
were heavily censored, and only
those praising Stalin and the
Communist Party were allowed.
Any opposition to the regime was
regarded as a state crime,
punishment being imprisonment or
death. Purge followed purge,
ostensibly in search of counterrevolutionaries and spies- but in
fact the fear and suspicion
generated was Stalins way of
increasing his hold on power.

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Torchinsky, 36-37

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stalin created terror in russia


censored and not allowed unless
they praised stalin and his party
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series of purges

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Like Lenin, Stalin also inflicted Terror upon the


poor country of Russia. He did this by censoring
all books and movies, allowing those that glorified
himself and the Communist Party. Anyone that
opposed to this was punished with prison or
death. There was an outbreak of purges and the
residents of Russia started to become afraid of
other Russians. No one knew where to turn except
to their leader, Joseph Stalin.

but in fact the fear and


suspicion generated
was Stalins way of
increasing his hold on
power. Torchinsky, 3637
Fear and suspicion. . .
was Stalins way of
increasing his. .
.power. Torchinsky, 3637.

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Like Lenin, Stalin also inflicted Terror upon the poor country of Russia. He did this by censoring all books and
movies, allowing those that glorified himself and the Communist Party. Anyone that opposed to this was punished
with prison or death. There was an outbreak of purges and the residents of Russia started to become afraid of
other Russians. This fear and suspicion. . . was Stalins way of increasing his. . .power. Torchinsky, 36-37. No
one knew where to turn except to their leader, Joseph Stalin.

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box, place the citation directly after the passage - i.e.
(Ayer, 28)

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thesaurus and write them here

europe about to go to war


building soviet military

With Europe on the brink of


another major war, Soviet leader
Joseph Stalin (1879-1953)
viewed the pact as a way to keep
his nation on peaceful terms with
Germany, while giving him time to
build up the Soviet military.

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viewed the pact as a


way to keep his nation
on peaceful terms with
Germany Milestones:
1937-1945
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CITATION::

Milestones: 1937-1945

D Paraphrasing with quotation incorporation:

way to keep his nation


With the knowledge that Europe was soon to enter on peaceful terms with
yet another battle, Stalin agreed to sign a
Germany Milestones:
nonaggression pact with Hitler. He saw the
1937-1945
agreement as a.. This, he thought, would also give
him the time he needed to build his own military.
Hitler, on the other hand, used the pact to ensure
that Germany could invade Poland without much
opposition. Stalin proved to be wrong about the
pact, because less than two years later, Nazi forces
invaded the S.U.

Combine Both A and B2 together with the synonyms of C. You should have 3 + sentences here. Make sure that your quotation is incorporated into your own

sentence.

With the knowledge that Europe was soon to enter yet another battle, Stalin agreed to sign a nonaggression pact
with Hitler. He saw the agreement as a way to keep his nation on peaceful terms with Germany Milestones:
1937-1945 This, he thought, would also give him the time he needed to build his own military. Hitler, on the other
hand, used the pact to ensure that Germany could invade Poland without much opposition. Stalin proved to be
wrong about the pact, because less than two years later, Nazi forces invaded the S.U.

PG 13
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(Ayer, 28)

Although relations between the


Soviet Union and the United
States had been strained before
World War 2 the U.S.-Soviet
alliance of 1941-1945 was
marked by a great deal of
cooperation and was essential to
securing the defeat of Nazi
Germany. Without the remarkable
efforts of the Soviet Union on the
Eastern Front, the United States
and Great Britain would have
been hard pressed to score a
decisive military victory over Nazi
Germany.

CITATION::

Milestones: 1937-1945

B1

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strained relations
defeat of Nazi G.
U.S. and G.B. would not have had
victory
A

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Prior to the second world war, the countries of the


S.U and the U.S. had pretty farfetched associations.
That being said, because it was necessary for the
destruction of Nazi Germany. If this alliance of 19411945 had never been, Great Britain and the United
States wouldn't have had such a good chance at
defeating Germany.

the U.S.-Soviet
alliance of 1941-1945
was marked by a
great deal of
cooperation
Milestones: 19371945
the U.S.-Soviet
alliance. . .was
marked by a [ton]. . .
of cooperation
Milestones: 19371945

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sentence. Prior to the second world war, the countries of the S.U and the U.S. had pretty farfetched associations. That
being said,the U.S.-Soviet alliance. . .was marked by a [ton]. . . of cooperation (Milestones: 1937-1945) because
it was necessary for the destruction of Nazi Germany. If this alliance of 1941-1945 had never been, Great Britain
and the United States wouldn't have had such a good chance at defeating Germany.

ASS 3 Q 2

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B1

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28)

Although the Soviet Union was


victorious in World War II, its
economy had been devastated in
the struggle. Roughly a quarter of
the country's capital resources had
been destroyed, and industrial and
agricultural output in 1945 fell far
short of prewar levels. To help
rebuild the country, the Soviet
government obtained limited
credits from Britain and Sweden
but refused economic assistance
proposed by the United States
under the Marshall Plan. Instead,
the Soviet Union compelled Sovietoccupied Eastern Europe to supply
machinery and raw materials.
Germany and former Nazi
satellites (including Finland) made
reparations to the Soviet Union.
The Soviet people bore much of
the cost of rebuilding because the
reconstruction program
emphasized heavy industry while
neglecting agriculture and
consumer goods. By the time of
Stalin's death in 1953, steel
production was twice its 1940
level, but the production of many
consumer goods and foodstuffs
was lower than it had been in the
late 1920s.
CITATION:: Reconstruction and Cold
War

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economy was struggling


credits from britain and sweden
refused money from US under
marshall plan
eastern europe to supply machines
and raw material
German and Nazi made reparations
construction emphasized heavy
industry, neglected goods
steel production increased
production of consumer goods was
low

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thesaurus and write them here

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Roughly a quarter of
the country's capital
resources had been
destroyed, and
industrial and
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agricultural output in
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1945 fell far short of
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prewar levels
After World War 2, Russias economy struggled
desperately. The government accepted credits from Reconstruction and
Cold War
both Britain and Sweden. The country refused
money from the U.S. under the Marshall Plan- a
Resources [were]
plan created by George C. Marshall to recover
destroyed, and
Europe. The part of Eastern Europe inhabited by
industrial and
Soviets helped supply machines and raw material.
agricultural output. .
Germany and former Nazi satellites made
.fell short
reparations to the Soviet Union. Reconstruction
(Reconstruction and
promoted industry whilst ignoring much needed
Cold War)
goods for consumers and agriculture itself. By
1953, the year in which Stalin passed, the
production of steel had increased by double its
level 10 years before.

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sentence.

After World War 2 resources [were] destroyed, and industrial and agricultural output. . .fell short (Reconstruction
and Cold War), Russias economy struggled desperately.The government accepted credits from both Britain and
Sweden. The country refused money from the U.S. under the Marshall Plan- a plan created by George C.
Marshall to recover Europe. The part of Eastern Europe inhabited by Soviets helped supply machines and raw
material. Germany and former Nazi satellites made reparations to the Soviet Union. Reconstruction promoted
industry whilst ignoring much needed goods for consumers. By 1953, the year in which Stalin passed, the
production of steel had increased by double its level 10 years before.

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During the postwar reconstruction


period, Stalin tightened domestic
controls, justifying the repression by
playing up the threat of war with the
West. Many repatriated Soviet
citizens who had lived abroad
during the war, whether as
prisoners of war, forced laborers, or
defectors, were executed or sent to
prison camps. The limited freedoms
granted in wartime to the church
and to collective farmers were
revoked. The party tightened its
admission standards and purged
many who had become party
members during the war.

B1

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tightened domestic controls


used threat of war as an excuse
ppl that lived abroad during the war
were executed or sent to prison camps
partys admission standards were
tightned
killed lots of ppl that became
members during war

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CITATION::

War

Reconstruction and Cold

Stalin tightened domestic controls by executing or


sending people that lived abroad during the war to
prison camps. It didn't matter if the people were
betrayers or just ordinary and loyal men and
women, they lived abroad while war was
happening; therefore, they had to pay. The
standards for anyone wishing to join the party were
made more rigid. Some members already in the
party that joined during the war were killed. Stalin
used the possible start of another war as an excuse
for all of these new restrictions and actions.

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doesnt exceed 10 words. When you
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The limited
freedoms granted in
wartime to the
church and to
collective farmers
were revoked.
The limited
freedoms granted in
wartime. . .were
revoked.
(Reconstruction and
Cold War)

D Paraphrasing with quotation incorporation:

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sentence.

Stalin tightened domestic controls by executing or sending people that lived abroad during the war to prison
camps. It didn't matter if the people were betrayers or just ordinary and loyal men and women, they lived abroad
while war was happening; therefore, they had to pay. The standards for anyone wishing to join the party were
made more rigid. Some members already in the party that joined during the war were killed. The previous limited
freedoms granted in wartime. . .were revoked. (Reconstruction and Cold War) and Stalin used the possible start
of another war as an excuse for all of these new restrictions and actions.

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