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Dictator: Joseph Stalin

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Stalin became dictator of the Soviet Union because of the Russian Revolution, by
recruitment of loyal followers, and stirring up problems within the Communist Party.

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What was the state of Russia


prior to Joseph Stalin coming to
power?

The state of Russia before Joseph Stalins rise to power was incredibly weak.

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The 1905 Russian Revolution...


was sparked off by a peaceful
protest held on January 22nd. This
protest may well have been the
turning point in the relationship the
tsar, Nicholas II, enjoyed with his
people. Led by a Russian Orthodox
priest,... Father Gaponrg , 150,000
people took to the cold and snow
covered streets of St Petersbuto
protest about their lifestyle. They
were not intent on making any form
of political protest in the sense of
calling for the overthrow of the
government or royal family... The
petition they carried... clearly shows
that they wanted Nicholas to help
them. The petition they carried
stated: "Oh Sire, we working men
and inhabitants of St. Petersburg,...
our wives, our children and our
parents, helpless and aged women
and men, have come to You our
ruler, in search of justice and
protection... We are beggars, we
are oppressed and overburdened
with work, we are insulted, we are
not looked on as human beings but
as slaves. The moment has come
for us when death would be better
than the prolongation of our
intolerable sufferings.We are
seeking here our last salvation. Do

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Nicholas 2nd lost site of caring


for his people allowing a Revolution
against him
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Nicholas 2nd allowed a revolution to begin


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in Russia. As a result, a petition created with
all the needs and demands* to be made for
the people to support and recreate the lives
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better and elaborating on their feelings than
following Nicholas 2nd significantly pulled the
attention

with work, we are


insulted, we are
[were not] not
looked on as human
beings but as slaves.

not refuse to help Your people.


Destroy the wall between Yourself
and Your people."

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Nicholas the 2nd allowed a revolution to begin because of his lack of attention for the people in Russia.
As a result, a petition created by the serfs with all the needs and demands of the people who [were
not]... looked on as human beings but as slaves(Truman) was there way of asking for their rulers help. By
stating in their petition that death was far more better than listening to him and elaborating on their
desires, they significantly pulled the attention of their ruler, Nicholas the 2nd.
approved

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Similarly, other problems related to Nicholass rule over Russia arose before Stalin came into power.
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In the eyes of the Bolsheviks, the


success of the revolution was not
dependent on cultural issues; on
the contrary, the revolution itself--...
shattering historical continuity--

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The Bolsheviks thought the


revolution wasnt based on cultural
differences
Revolution would allow
transformation within the stereotypical lower
class to transform to equality of everyone

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would create the material


conditions necessary to pulverize
backwardness and change peoples
mentalities.Educating the people
day and day and slowly weaning
them away from traditional ways of
life and archaic knowledge of an
agrarian and pagan world would not
suffice to bring them out of the
darkness of superstition and into
the light of reason. Only the
revolution could transform the
Russian peasant, facilitate the
spread of an industrial mentality,
and /bring about the triumph of
modernity... Since April 1917, the
Bolsheviks had repeatedly declared
that the Revolution, the end of
hostilities followed by a democratic
peace, and proletarian revolution in
all of Europe, were inseparable
aspects of a sole process. It is no
coincidence that the first decision of
the new government of soldiers,
workers, and peasants in the area
of foreign affairs was to declare
peace on October 26, 1917.

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(Salomoni, Antonella), 42-43

else
distracking the people wouldnt turn
them away from their old ways of going
about and ways of thinking only the
revolution could
Consistent declare of turning against
the capitol allowed peace to prevail over
everything else
Because of the constant talk of a
revolution , the new government declared
peace
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Cultural differences wasnt the problem in the


Bolshevik revolution but the social class system
was. The revolution began because of the unfair
treatment of the lower class which was the majority
of people who made up the Soviet Union. The
people wanted change* into the a person who
wasnt look upon as a slave but instead a human
being. The Bolshevik revolution would allow the
stereotypical thoughts of the lower class to convert
to the equality of everyone else. In order to achieve
that goal the people kept threatening to start a
revolution, so to stop it when the new government
came into power they declared peace and gave the
people what they wanted.

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[and]... only the


revolution could
transform the
Russian peasant...
facilitat[ing] the
spread of an
industrial mentality,
and / [while]
...bring[ing] about the
triumph of modernity

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Cultural differences wasnt the problem in the Bolshevik revolution but the social class system was. The
revolution began because of the unfair treatment of the lower class which was the majority of people who made
up the Soviet Union. The people wanted change [and]... only the revolution could transform the Russian
peasant(Salomoni, 42-43 & 47) into the a person who wasnt look upon as a slave but instead a human being.
The Bolshevik revolution would allow the stereotypical thoughts of the lower class to convert to the equality of
everyone else. In order to achieve that goal the people kept threatening to start a revolution, so to stop it when
the new government came into power they declared peace and gave the people what they wanted.

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Stalin moved up through the ranks of the communist party by taking on a


position as General Secretary, giving him the power to control many different

How did Stalin move up through the


ranks of the communist party?

positions.

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In April 1922 Stalin ascended to


the position of General Secretary of
the ruling Communist Party, a post
that gave him control over all party
appointments, promotions, and
demotions. This enabled him to fill
the ranks of the Party with his allies
and thereby solidify an enormous
power base. He appointed only
loyal communists to leadership
posts in local trade unions,
cooperatives, and army units; all
appointees reported directly to
Stalin, who kept detailed files not
only on them, but also on all party
members and industrial managers.

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Stalin moved up in the ranks of


communism by becoming general
secretary
while being secretary he was
able to put his own loyal friends in the
party and build his own powerful base

he only appointed those that he


could semi trust to lead different
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post that gave him


control over all party
appointments

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ranks by becoming general secretary.* During
that position he put his own loyal allies in the
party in leader positions to develop his own
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own loyal allies in leader positions to develop his own powerful base. By doing so the people looked up
to him and valued the things he did for them even though they didnt know it was for his own selfish
desires. To show their gratitude they listened and did as their new leader said.
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Likewise, Stalin not only realized he needed the party to overturn, but having a group of loyal followers was just
important.

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Stalin understands that "cadres are


everything": if you control the
personnel, you control the
organization. He shrewdly uses his
new position to consolidate power in
exactly this way--by controlling all
appointments, setting agendas, and
moving around Party staff in such a
way that eventually everyone who
counts for anything owes their
position to him.

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like they owed them their alliance or
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Joseph Stalin

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feel like they owed them their alliance or trust
and even loyalty because of what he did for
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Stalin knew that having a staff was very important because it could help gain support and power so one
by one he gathered those who didnt have anything or a position. By giving these people a place in the
party He shrewdly use[d] his new position to consolidate power.(Joseph Stalin) He knew that people would
feel like they owed him their alliance or trust and even loyalty because of what he did for them.

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How did Stalin solidify power and


ultimately become dictator?

Stalin solidified power and became dictator by creating problems throughout the
party and keeping himself behind the scenes.

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Throughout the years after Lenins


death, Stalin used his influence
inside the party to put each of his
rivals in bad light. He played each
against the others, and remained
behind the scenes while they
criticized each other. As he did so,
Stalin created the impression that
only he could carry on Lenins
work-- and the party came to

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Stalins used his influential ways


to put the heat on his competition by
stirring up drama between the others
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from the party he had enough power
and support to become the ultimate
and [he]... remained
leader

believe him. In 1926, Trotsky was


voted off the central committee.
Kamenev was expelled from the
party. A year later, in November
1927, Trotsky and Zinoviev were
also expelled from the party... Stalin
then turned on Bukharin and Rykov.
In speeches and Pravda editorials,
he accused them of impractical
idealism and failure to support the
concept of socialism in one country.
By late 1928, he had built enough
support to oust these rivals from
important party positions. When he
did this, he eliminated all of his
opposition. The poor son of a
shoemaker, who had been ridiculed
by his opponents for his lack of
intelligence, now controlled the
Communist Party and the Soviet
Union.
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behind the scenes


while they criticized
each other.

Stalin used his influential ways to put the heat


on his competition by stirring up drama
between the other competitors while *.
Because he did not get involved, the people
around him began to think as him as a leader
following in Lenins footsteps. After all the
people were expelled from the party he had
enough power and support to become the
ultimate leader.

(Ingram, 61-62)

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Stalin used his sly clever ways to put the heat on his competition by stirring up drama between the other
competitors while [he]... remained behind the scenes [as] they criticized each other.(Ingram, 61-62) Because
he did not get involved, the people around him began to think as him as a leader following in Lenins
footsteps. The people had started to look down on the others and in turn expelled them. After getting
expelled from the party with no one in his way, he had enough power and support to become the
ultimate leader.
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In all Stalins initiative plan was to stir up problems throughout the party to push himself smoothly up to the top.

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After Lenin's death in 1924, Stalin


promoted himself as his political
heir and gradually outmanoeuvred
his rivals. By the late 1920s, Stalin
was effectively the dictator of the
Soviet Union.

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Joseph Stalin

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After Lenin died stalin


proclaimed that he was his political
heir
During the process of who
should take his spot he turned his
rivals against one another
One at a time they were getting
expelled pushing Stalin to the front of
the line
By the late !920s he was
dictator
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Stalin was effectively


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Soviet Union.

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After Lenin died Stalin proclaimed that he


was the political heir of Lenin. During the
process of who should take Lenins spot
Stalin turned his rivals against one another.
One by one they were getting expelled
pushing Stalin to the front of the line*

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After Lenin died Stalin proclaimed that he was the political heir of Lenin. During the process of who
should take Lenins spot Stalin turned his rivals against one another. His competitors were creating
more problems instead of solving the ones they already had; As a result, the other people in the party
started to disprove of the people running for Lenins position. One by one they were getting expelled

pushing Stalin to the front of the line where in time Stalin effectively [became] the dictator of the
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However, after Stalin became dictator he remained in power by creating


ways to improve the economy, maintaing rulership, and by allying himself
with Hitler during World War 2.
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How did Stalin improve/take steps to


improve the economy?
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With this in mind, he put into


operation a Five- Year Economic
Plan that, amongst other things,
forced all peasants to join stateowned farmers co-operatives where
they had to pool all their machinery,
livestock and grain after which they
either relied on the government for
their wages or had to survive on
what was left over after the
government had taken its cut.

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Stalin took steps to improve Russia by introducing a Five Year Plan.

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In order to help the Russia


because they were so behind Stalin
installed the Five Year plan
Although it was supposed to
help the people it backfired and a lot
of people didnt agree

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In order to help the Russia because they


were so behind Stalin installed the Five Year
plan Although it was supposed to help the
people it backfired and a lot of people didnt
agree

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force[ing] all peasants


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farmers co-operatives

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In order to help Russia catch up, because they were so behind, Stalin installed the Five Year plan
force[ing] all peasants to join state- owned farmers co-operatives.(Klein, 46) Although it was supposed to
help the people to get ahead it backfired and the majority of the people in Russia did not agree.

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Even though, Stalin was trying to fix Russia and transform it, he only caused more damage.

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Starting in the late 1920s, Joseph


Stalin launched a series of five-year
plans intended to transform the
Soviet Union from a peasant
society into an industrial
superpower. His development plan
was centered on government
control of the economy and
included the forced collectivization
of Soviet agriculture, in which the
government took control of farms.
Millions of farmers refused to
cooperate with Stalins orders and
were shot or exiled as punishment.
The forced collectivization also led
to widespread famine across the
Soviet Union that killed millions.
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Joseph Stalin Later Years

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Stalin launched the Five year plan


Meant to transform Russia
Based on the government
Most people refused to listen and
follow Stalin so they were executed or
banished
led to famine killing many

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In his defense to help the Soviet Union to


prosper, Stalin created the Five Year plan. It
would help transform Russia to become the
ultimate country. By focusing on the government
and farmers he was determined to fix Russia;
However, that did not go as planned. Many
people did not agree with Stalins plan and
refused to listen and follow him. As a result, they
were executed or banished from Russia. His
harsh punishment and *

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The forced
collectivization also led
to widespread famine
across the Soviet
Union that killed
millions.
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collectivization also led
to widespread famine
across the Soviet
Union [and] killed
millions.

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In his defense to help the Soviet Union to prosper, Stalin created the Five Year plan. It would help transform
Russia to become the ultimate country. By focusing on the government and farmers he was determined to fix
Russia; However, that did not go as planned. Many people did not agree with Stalins plan and refused to listen
and follow him. As a result, they were executed or banished from Russia. His harsh punishment and Forc[ing]...
[of] collectivization also led to widespread famine across the Soviet Union [and] killed millions.

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How did Stalin maintain control


over the people?

Stalin maintained control over his people by using propaganda and


by expanding the powers of the secret police urging them to spy on
one another to stop any wrong-doing.

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An analysis of popular opinion in


this period must take into account
the role of propaganda and
coercion in Soviet society. This
was a period of unprecedentedly
intense and uniform propaganda,
and of censorship taken to absurd
degrees. The propaganda
pervaded every sphere of public
communication, including the
media, the arts, and education. Its
main messages, intoned with
monotonous regularity, proclaimed
that life in the Soviet Union was
unequivocally rosy in contrast to
the pitiful existence of workers
living under capitalism, that in the
USSR the whole people allegedly
enjoyed satisfying jobs and high
living standards, endorsed the
policies of the party and Stalin to
whom they were devoted, and
believed in socialism with a
Stalinist face The heavily
censored media were forbidden to
publish real feelings at the
grassroot As well as propaganda
and censorship, the regime also
relied on repression to block
alternative ideas. People were
charged with the crime of antiSoviet agitation (the notorious
article 58.10) for expressing
opinions which seemed to the
authorities to be aimed at the
overthrow, subversion, or

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propaganda prevented people from


saying bad things about Stalin
It made it known that The SU was
better than it was before
The media was not allowed to say
anything bad about what was going on
people were also tried for starting
revolutions
Bc Stalins suspicion was getting
worse, if people even said that they wish
he was dead or someone should overtake
him, they were charged as if they had
carried out the act as a terrorist
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To ensure that the people in the Soviet Union


listened to him, Stalin used deceitful propaganda
to get the people the peoples attention. He fed
thoughts in their head for example saying the
Soviet Union was ahead while he was ruler and
was only going to get better. Which in reality,
Russia was slowly degrading. The media was not
allowed to state how they felt if it wasnt
supportive. Stalin not only used *so the other
people would not turn against their ruler. And at
moments where distress and great terror seemed
near Stalin suspicion grew intensely. He had
made it that even if his people said something as
far as Stalin wasnt a good ruler or they wish he
were dead, people were charged as if they really
carried out the crime.

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As well as
propaganda and
censorship, [but]... the
regime also relied on
repression to block
alternative ideas

weakening of Soviet power In


lenient periods, the numbers were
relatively small, but during
collectivisation and the terror of
1936-8 many thousand of people
were sentenced At the peak of
terror, thought crime became
institutionalised when a statement
such as I wish Stalin was dead
was deemed to be equivalent to
actually committing a terrorist act,
and was supposed to be
prosecuted accordingly.

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To ensure that the people in the Soviet Union listened to him, Stalin used deceitful propaganda to get the people
the peoples attention. He fed thoughts in their head for example saying the Soviet Union was ahead while he
was ruler and was only going to get better. Which in reality, Russia was slowly degrading. The media was not
allowed to state how they felt if it wasnt supportive. Stalin not only used propaganda and censorship, [but]... the
regime also relied on repression to block alternative ideas(Davies, 4-5) so the other people would not turn
against their ruler. And at moments where distress and great terror seemed near Stalin suspicion grew intensely.
He had made it that even if his people said something as far as Stalin wasnt a good ruler or they wish he were
dead, people were charged as if they really carried out the crime.

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As Stalins paranoia got worse, so did his trust levels; He, therefore, had the secret police tentatively watching
everyones moves.
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He expanded the powers of the


secret police, encouraged citizens
to spy on one another and had
millions of people killed or sent to
the Gulag system of forced labor
camps.... During the second half
of the 1930s, Stalin instituted the
Great Purge, a series of
campaigns designed to rid the
Communist Party, the military and
other parts of Soviet society from
those he considered a threat.

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Stalin gave more power to the


secret police
He persuaded the citizens to spy
on each other to see if any wrong doing
was going go
Had people killed or sent to labor
camps
Had the great purged installed to
get rid of the Communist Party, military
and other people who could be a potential
threat

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CITATION:

Joseph Stalin

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Stalin instituted the


Great Purge, a series
of campaigns (Joseph
Stalin)

Stalin lived in more fear than anything. He gave


the secret police more power to keep the citizens
in place and even persuaded them to spy on each
other to prevent wrong doing. He had millions
killed or sent to labor camps. To continue his
rulership safely and to fight off his competition*
that affected the Communist party, military, and
the citizens in the Soviet Union. By doing this it
increased and ensured his safety while getting rid
of the ones who could become a potential threat.
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Stalin lived in more fear than anything. He gave the secret police more power to keep the citizens in place and
even persuaded them to spy on each other to prevent wrong doing. He had millions killed or sent to labor camps.
To continue his rulership safely and to fight off his competition Stalin instituted the Great Purge, a series of
campaigns(Joseph Stalin) that affected the Communist party, military, and the citizens in the Soviet Union. By
doing this it increased and ensured his safety while getting rid of the ones who could pose as potential threat.

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Who did Stalin ally himself with


at the beginning of WWII? Why?

Stalin allied himself with Hitler and the Nazis because they were rapidly
growing stronger and stronger; Therefore, pushing Stalin to remember his
real goal of transforming Russia into the most powerful country. .

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As war clouds rose over Europe


in 1939, Stalin made a seemingly
brilliant move, signing a
nonaggression pact with Adolph
Hitler and Nazi Germany. Stalin
was convinced of Hitler's integrity

Although, Stalin had major trust issues he protected his rule by becoming
allies with Germany and Hitler, but also taking back the initiative of the war
and gaining the Soviet Unions praise by acquiring victory against their
enemies.

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Stalin knew that the only way to


become the dominant country was to Ally
himself with another country that had power
He signed a nonaggression pact
with Germany
He was sure that hitler was honest
with him

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sign[ed] a
nonaggression pact
with Adolph Hitler and
Nazi Germany .
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Stalin knew as Europe was becoming more


powerful and dominant that it would be smart to
have Hitler as an ally. When the heat was getting
turned up and the Nazis drew closer to Russia he
voulnteerably *

CITATION::

Joseph Stalin: Dictatorship

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Stalin knew as Europe was becoming more powerful and dominant that it would be smart to have Hitler as an
ally. When the heat was getting turned up and the Nazis drew closer to Russia he voluntarily sign[ed] a
nonaggression pact with Adolf Hitler and Nazi Germany (Joseph Stalin: Dictatorship) to guarantee peace
between the two countries.

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Stalins plan to unite with Hitler and remain peace between each other was smart; However, he should have been
more careful and alert to his surroundings.
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In 1939, on the eve of World


War II, Joseph Stalin and
German
dictator
Adolf
Hitler(1889-1945)
signed
a
nonaggression pact. Stalin then
proceeded to annex parts of
Poland and Romania, as well as
the Baltic states of Estonia,
Latvia and Lithuania. He also
launched
an
invasion
of
Finland. Then, in June 1941,
Germany broke the Nazi-Soviet
pact and invaded the USSR,
making significant early inroads.
(Stalin had ignored warnings
from the Americans and the
British, as well as his own
intelligence agents, about a
potential invasion, and the
Soviets were not prepared for
war.)
As
German
troops
approached the Soviet capital of
Moscow, Stalin remained there
and directed a scorched earth
defensive policy, destroying any
supplies or infrastructure that
might benefit the enemy. The
tide turned for the Soviets with
the Battle of Stalingrad, from
August 1942 to February 1943,
during which the Red Army
defeated the Germans and
eventually drove them from
Russia.
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Joseph Stalin Later Years

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Stalin signed the pact with Hitler


Germany broke that pact and invaded
the Soviet Union
It was Stalins own fault that they had
invaded the SU because he ignored warning
signs from the Americans and British people
as well as his own people in his own party
As german troops proceeded to make
their way into Russia, Stalin destroyed any
supplies that could help the Nazis
The turning point only occurred when
the Soviets beat the germans at Battle of
Stalingrad and pushed Hitler away

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Stalin thought he was playing Hitler and being


sneaky when he willingly signed their non aggression
pact; Whereas, in reality Hitler overstepped him and
was in turn playing him. Germany broke the pact with
the Soviet Union and invaded Russia. Stalin
stubbornly * As the german troops proceeded to
make their way into Russia, Stalin destroyed any
supplies that could aid the Nazis. The turning point
only occurred when the Soviets beat the Germans at
the Battle of Stalingrad and pushed Hitler and the
Nazis away.

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ignored warnings
from the Americans
and the British, as
well as his own
intelligence agents,
about a potential
invasion,
ignored warnings
from the
Americans...British,
as well as his own
intelligence agents,
about a potential
invasion,

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Stalin thought he was playing Hitler and being sneaky when he willingly signed their non aggression pact;
Whereas, in reality Hitler overstepped him and was in turn playing him. Germany broke the pact with the Soviet
Union and invaded Russia. Stalin stubbornly ignored warnings from the Americans, British, as well as his own
intelligence agents, about a potential invasion.(Joseph Stalin later years) As the german troops proceeded to
make their way into Russia, Stalin destroyed any supplies that could aid the Nazis. The turning point only
occurred when the Soviets beat the Germans at the Battle of Stalingrad and pushed Hitler and the Nazis away.

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How did the nations involvement


in WWII Joseph Stalin affect the
country as a whole?
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The Soviet Unions involvement with the war affected the country as a whole
by losing many who were apart of the population during the fight to achieve
victory.

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After the Soviets defeated the Nazis


and regained the majority of their territory
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The soviets were able to reclaim


much of their own territory and turn
the tide against the nazis.With
the nazis defeated, stalin was in
the eastern europe toward
germany.position he had hoped to
be in for several years
earlier.Despite the incredible loss
of life,he sent his army across
eastern europe toward germany.All
the the territory that the soviet
army crossed was now part of the
rapidly expanding soviet union.
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After the Soviets defeated the Nazis and regained


the majority of their territory Stalin was able to carry
out his ultimate plan to take over Asia. In spite of all
the loss of lives that fought in the army for the
Soviet Union all the land *

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the soviet army


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of the rapidly
expanding soviet
union

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After the Soviets defeated the Nazis and regained the majority of their territory Stalin was able to carry out his
ultimate plan to take over Asia. In spite of all the loss of lives that fought in the army for the Soviet Union all the
land the soviet army crossed was now part of the rapidly expanding soviet union (Ingram, 88)

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The Germans reached the


outskirts of Moscow in December,
but were stopped by an early
winter and a Soviet counteroffensive. At the battle of
Stalingrad in 1942-43, after
sacrificing an estimated 1 million
men, the Red Army was able to
regain the initiative of the war.
With military eqipment aid of their
allies the Soviet forces were able
to regain their lost territory and
push their over-stretched enemy
back to Germany itself.From the
end of 1944 large sections of
eastern Germany came under
Stalin's Soviet Union occupation
and on May 2, 1945, the capital
city Berlin was taken.By some
estimates, one quarter of the
Russian population was wiped out
in the war. There was, then, a
huge shortage of men of the
fighting-age generation in Russia.
As a result, to this day, World War
II is remembered very vividly in
Russia, and May 9, Victory Day, is
one of its biggest national
holidays.
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After the Soviet Union was able to


regain the initiative of the war and win, they
regained lost land and pushed Hitler and
the Nazis all the way back to Germany
Even parts of germany became part
of the Soviet Union
Many died fighting to win the war,
left a decrease in men old enough to fight in
the war
Because of that World war 2 is a big
holiday to Russia

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remembered very
vividly in Russia, and
May 9, Victory Day,
is one of its biggest
national holidays.

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After the Soviet Union was able to regain the


initiative of the war and win, they regained lost land
and pushed Hitler and the Nazis all the way back to
Germany. Even parts of germany became part of
the Soviet Union. Although many people did die
fighting to win the war, World War 2 is favorably *

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After the Soviet Union was able to regain the initiative of the war and win, they regained lost land and pushed
Hitler and the Nazis all the way back to Germany. Even parts of Germany became part of the Soviet Union.
However, many people did die fighting to win the war; Therefore, World War 2 is favorably remembered very
vividly in Russia, and May 9, Victory Day, is one of its biggest national holidays.(Bard)

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