Name: Caprice

Unit: 1.4 Landscape

Task:

Teachers comments:

Ao1:

3 selected photographers (9 photos)

Analysis

John Divola (3 photos)

Your analysis is progressing well and uses key photographic

terms. Continue working at this level and try and use the
formal elements knowledge that you have gained when
analysing future photographs. You should consider adding
other relevant photographers that you have researched, and
adding them under a new subheading. This will demonstrate
exceptional critical awareness to the examiner.
All of the tasks have been complete using the techniques
successfully. You have demonstrated excellent progression
from first to second response.

T+

David Hockney (3 photos)

Ao2:

School environment

Progression
from fist to
second
response

Framing the environment

Techniques

The Formal Elements

Definitions
WWW, EBI

Panographies / Photo joiners

My London

Ao3:

Application of technique

Quality of the
photographs

Composition
Other success criteria

Your My London photos are your best, showing your creativity

and interests. This is the first major and best development that
I have seen in your work, showing a clear subject matter.
Continue to explore different compositions and parts of the
city.

As mentioned above, both technique and compositions are

progressing well. Are you experimenting with a tripod? This
could help to shoot a series of shots from the same position
whilst focusing on zooming in and out to produce a series of
image.

T+

You have started to use the sub heading Refining my

techniques, continue to do this for all tasks in the next unit.
Ao4:
Final Piece

Grade: A

Present 6 photographs

I am impressed by the range of photos that you have taken in

the landscape unit. Continue to consider different viewpoints
and being experimental in your compositions. You could
consider editing some of your images in Photoshop and
explaining this using EBI WWW.

T+

Target: B

Final Comment: Excellent presentation on Weebly. You are working very well, continue to refine your work and discuss
ideas with me that develop your interests outside the set tasks. These will be what will get you the highest marks. Well
done for your My London section, one of the best in the group.

Ao1

Develop their ideas through investigations informed by

contextual and other sources, demonstrating
analytical and cultural understanding

Ao2

Refine their ideas through experimenting and

selecting appropriate resources, media, materials, techniques and
processes

Ao3

Record ideas, observations and insights relevant to

their intentions in visual and/or other forms

Ao4

Present a personal, informed and meaningful response

Demonstrating analytical and critical understanding,
realising intentions and, where appropriate,
making connections between visual, written, oral or
other elements.