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Enrique Flores

English 113B
Professor Batty
05 May 2015
Reflection Space
In project space essay, the prompt was to find a place that cause anxiety and explain why
it because the fear by using the same place as movies and scary stories. First of all I think my
thesis statement was weak at first but now I have explained how and why the place I choose was
anxiety provoking.
I was missing one source and the conclusion in the essay. I also did not have enough
pages and I did not have enough information to make the paper great.
I also had a lot of spelling errors and run one sentences, which I had to go back a fix.