Kaylin Gibson

March 13, 2015

The Discipline of Criminology:
Abusive Relationships and Criminal Laws

It is time to take notice on one of the largest problems in the United States,
domestic violence. It is a problem that is known by many, but not taken very seriously.
(You will need to make it clear what you mean by this statement) Domestic violence has
broken up families, and dispirited its victims for many years. While researching this
topic, I have found how domestic violence victims are protected, and how they are not.
Domestic violence is an epidemic that needs to be taken seriously, and solved.
First, let us take time to understand what domestic violence really is. According to
a website (Why should we accept the authority of this website?) on domestic violence,
domestic violence is defined as being behaviors used by one person in a relationship to
control the other (Defining Domestic Violence). Examples of domestic violence
include physical assault, and stalking. It can also be emotional abuse. Violence takes
many (stalking doesnt fit the dictionary definition of violence. So why should we
accept your new definition here? This quotation doesnt support your claim that
emotional abuse is violence. And even if it did, why should we think it authoritative?)
forms and can happen all the time of once in a while. (Proofreading) Anyone can be a
victim! (Who are the Victims). Domestic violence is something that needs to start
being taken very seriously in this country. (You still have offered no evidence that it is not
now taken seriously.)
The question I am most concerned with is that of how criminal law protects
domestic violence victims from further abuse. What laws are in place to protect these

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victims, and how does the justice system go about protecting these victims? Lets first
take a look at who the victims are, who the abusers are, and what happens within the
violence wheel and the cycle of violence.
Usually, in most cases, women are the victims, and men are the abusers. In other
cases, people of color, people with different sexual orientations, mentally challenged
people, and people of different religions can also be the victims of domestic violence.
(domestic means within a home setting. So violence that happens within a home
setting is domestic violence, regardless of ones ethnicity or religion. I see no reason to
bring religion and race into a paper answering the questions you set out to answer.) The
abusers, however, are not as easy to pick out in certain circumstances. Abusers may
appear friendly and loving to the public eye, but behind closed doors, they are completely
different people. Abusers have learned abuse, so they can get what they want when they
want it (Who are the Abusers). (This information isnt getting us any closer to
answers of your questions)
Violence can be divided into parts, physical and sexual, but both are centered on
power and control. Abusers tend to use coercion and threats, intimidation, emotional
abuse, isolation, children, male privilege, and economic abuse (Violence Wheel) to
get what they want. Abuse happens due to a cycle in which is never ending. (Proofing) It
all starts with the incident, which then leads to tension building. Tension building consists
of the abuser getting angry, there is a breakdown of communication, the victim will feel
like he/she needs to keep the abuser calm, which in turn makes the abuse begin (Cycle
of Violence). After tension has built, the making up process begins, and then there is

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the calm right before another storm. It is a never-ending cycle. But what do the victims
do about the abuse they receive?
According to law enforcement, not all incidents of domestic violence are reported
to them. Only 27 percent of women and 13.5 percent of men who were physically
abused or assaulted by an intimate partner reported their assault to law enforcement
(Practical Implications of Current Domestic Violence Research). It is scary
to think that these men and women are so unwilling to report their assaults to law
enforcement. It is said that victims do not usually report their initial assaults until they
suffer an excessive amount.
Research indicates that actions of law enforcement, such as follow-up home
visits after incidents, can encourage victim reports of domestic violence (Practical
Implications for Domestic Violence Research). On the other hand, if victims do not
receive follow-up visits, they are less likely to call law enforcement to report the assaults.
Some people wonder if arrests are the best way for law enforcement to handle the
situations.
Arrests prevent reabuse from happening, believe it or not. (too informal a style
for a formal inquiry paper) Even when an abuser is not arrested, law enforcement coming
into handle the situation always leads to a deterrent effect towards the abuser. (What
authority do you have to make this claim?) Misdemeanor and felony also play a role in
the thought of an arrest taking place. Along with the abuser getting arrested, the victim is
also helped tremendously. Pamphlets are given to the victims, along with secure
protective orders.

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Protective orders are the main way that victims stay safe. Protective orders, or
PPOs, are greatly known for deterring repeat abuser on the victims from the abuser.
Protective orders state that the abuser has to stay a certain distance away from the victim,
as well as, what will happen if they violate the terms listed by a judge on the protective
order. Violation of a protective order can lead to arrests and jail time, longer probation, or
even prison time.
I have a situation where all of these things I have mentioned took place. My
mother is a huge victim of domestic violence. She has been in more than violent
relationships than anyone should have to go through. She has reported violence to the
police, and they have protected her as much as they could. She has many protective
orders against men, and will always have the orders against them until the day that she
dies. Law enforcement agencies and judges have helped my mom in more ways than
possible. They have kept her safe since her last attack in 2012.
Tina is another victim of abuse. She suffered abuse from her husband, and knew
that if she had to die to be free, that was something she was willing to sacrifice. The last
time he abused her, she tried to fight back, and when this happened, he called the police
on her and reported that she was the one abusing him, and something needed to be done
about. In Tinas defense, luckily, the police did not believe him when they arrived and
saw the bruises and cuts on Tina. The police helped her get away from her husband by
helping her file a restraining order, and by taking her to her parents house where she lived
three years after she left him(Tinas Story).
With this being said, do you believe victims of domestic violence are protected
well enough? I believe that the criminal justice systems does all they can to protect these

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victims, but it is also up to the victim to help themselves. Not all victims want help, and
do not necessarily like the abuse, but will not get help because they enjoy the attention
and are terrified of being alone.

"Introduction - Domestic Violence." Introduction Domestic Violence.

Creative Communications Group, 1 Jan. 2009. Web. 10 Mar. 2015.
<http://www.domesticviolence.org/>.
"Practical Implications of Current Domestic Violence Research: For Law
Enforcement, Prosecutors and Judges." National Institute of
Justice. National Institution of Justice, 1 June 2009. Web. 10 Mar.
2015. <http://www.nij.gov/topics/crime/intimate-partnerviolence/practical-implicationsresearch/ch2/Pages/welcome.aspx>.
"Tina's Story." Tina's Story. Web. 2 Apr. 2015.
<http://www.dvrcv.org.au/stories/true-stories/storieswomen/tinas-story>.

Kaylin,
Either this is the draft you turned in on March 13 or so little has changed that I
cant tell the difference. It fails to meet the requirements of our assignment. You do
not answer the questions and I dont see a single scholarly source. If you are to
receive credit for completing this assignment, you will need to submit a draft that
does meet basic requirements-and you must do so to pass the course, regardless of
what your other grades are.
I will explain further in class tomorrow if you have questions.
Grade
F

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