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Yifan Wei
Ms. Park
ENGL106I
February 2ed
Reflection
Dear reader,
Hi, I am Yifan Wei, the writer of my writing autobiography. My paper is about
my writing autobiography and my audiences are Ms. Park and other students in
ENGL class. My aim to writing the autobiography is to let others know my writing
life and what I feel about and the feeling changes in the long period writing life. My
article in informative and I use some simile and metaphor in it. Writing this
autobiography, I hear the emotion fluctuation from the bottom of my heart. From my
perspective, I think my paper can have more details. And I also have problems in
adding details to the paragraphs I think are perfect. When writing the paragraph, I felt
that it was hard for me to write things happening in my early age in my paper because
they are nave. But at the end, I encourage me to write my experience in my early age
because I think it is not integrated if I dont write them. Ms. Park gave me pretty
suggestion such as using different words and explaining more clearly in editing my
paper. My peer, Sid, also gave me his comments. I think some of his idea is right such
as adding more details. But I do not want to change my arrangements because my
arrangements are following with time and the feeling of writing explodes in the 4 th
paragraph. Thats one of the writing strategy I used in China. I think the different
backgrounds make different understandings and what I need to do is keep learning the
way the American write article. I will try to use more multiple vocabularies if there is
more time to edit my paper. I learn that we should think objectively when we are
writing because others cannot know yours subjective mind but logics are interlinked.
The question I want ask is that can you feel the psychological changes during my

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Sincerely
Yifan Wei