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Summer 2014
Conally Owen
Title of Unit:
Non-Fiction Writing
Requirements for Evidence 3 include the UbD Chart (with all three stages); a Daily Lesson Plan for each
day of the unit; and all major assignment sheets, assessment rubrics, and other materials as specified by
the Subject Area Methods instructor. While the evidence of some of the performance indicators is easy
for your evaluators to find, some of the indicators are more elusive, or may not have been included at all.
This chart will let your evaluators know where you think you have included certain required aspects of
the unit. If you have consciously NOT addressed an area, this is the means by which you can account for
your decision not to include the element.
Performance
Indicator
Literacy Instruction
Interconnectedness of
Content Areas/Disciplines
Note links within or across
grades and subjects
Global Awareness
MAT 703/Owen
Summer 2014
determining tone and attitude of the writer. This will help them
to understand other nations and cultures and will allow them to
look at an article that is originally in a language other than
English.
Learning and Innovation Skills: Students will use creativity and
innovation with many of their writing assignments in this unit.
For example, they will use brainstorming and pre-writing in
both the Memory Piece assignment as well as the A Day in
the Life at Riverside High School project (Daily Lesson Plans
8-9, 11-15.) This will allow them to generate their own creative
ideas to guide their writing. They will also work creatively with
others during the peer revision phases of these two performance
tasks. They will practice clear communication during the
presentations of their A Day in the Life at Riverside High
School projects.
Information, Media, and Technology Skills: Students will
analyze many facets of the media (using DIDLS and other
methods), including newspapers, magazines, photography,
Internet Blogs, and others. They will create their own media
products, particularly in Daily Lesson Plan 5, when they
publish their meal reviews in a Blog format. They will also
create and present a Blog for their A Day in the Life at
Riverside High School project (Daily Lesson Plan 15.) In
Daily Lesson Plan 5, they will use technology as a tool to
research information (as they conduct research to find answers
to questions such as what is the towns best burger?)
Life and Career Skills: Students will have to manage their goals
and time on their larger projects, such as assembling their
portfolio (Daily Lesson Plans 13-15) and carrying out their A
Day in the Life at Riverside High School investigation (Daily
Lesson Plans 11-15.) They will also have to manage their time
outside of class, with mini writing projects such as the
newspaper, meal review, and interview pieces having certain
deadlines. These writings will require independent work.
Social and Cross-Cultural Skills: Students will interact with
each other during group collaboration in class. Specifically,
they will work with other peers during the chocolate writing
activity (Daily Lesson Plan 3), A Pictures Worth a Thousand
Words Activity (Daily Lesson Plan 7) as well as during peer
revision times (Daily Lesson Plans 9 and 14.)
Students will be making judgments and decisions often within
this unit. For instance, they will have to effectively analyze
different points of viewin Daily Lesson Plans 2 (with
newspaper articles), 4 (with magazine articles), 6 (with the
reputable non-fiction article), 7 (with photographs), 8 (with
memoirs), and 10 (with interviews). They will solve problems
MAT 703/Owen
Summer 2014
Non-Fiction Writing
Stage 1Desired Results
Established Goals (Common Core State Standards):
Understandings:
Students will understand that . . .
Essential Questions:
photographs
Participate in a writing workshop in which
they draft a memory piece of their own;
practice focused peer revision of a memory
piece
Conduct an interview in order to find out
information; synthesize information from
an interview into a written informative
piece
Recognize and analyze investigative
journalism
Develop and investigate a reporters
question on their own
Prepare an investigative piece for
publication and presentation
Other Evidence:
Standard Honors AP
Day/Date: 1
LESSON ACTIVITIES
Opening (Hook, Warm-Up, Anticipatory Set, Review, etc.)
5 - Where do we see non-fiction writing?- have students briefly brainstorm examples of nonfiction writing
Procedure: Include all sections that apply to this lesson; combine as necessary.
Section
Time What the Teacher will do:
What the Students will
do:
Input,
10
-Write on the board: What is non-fiction
-Students brainstorm
Modeling,
writing
ideas regarding what they
5
-Provide a definitive, broad definition of
believe non-fiction to be
non-fiction for students to conceptualize
-Students will record
definition in their
notebooks
Statement of
10
-Discuss goals for the unit
-Students listen and take
Objective &
15
-Hand out document with layout and
notes, if necessary
Purpose
Differentiation Strategies
How will you adjust aspects of the lesson to accommodate student READINESS?
Struggling Students:
Gifted/Advanced Students:
English Language
Learners:
How will you adjust aspects of the lesson to accommodate students LEARNING PROFILES?
How will you adjust aspects of the lesson to accommodate students INTERESTS?
3. Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization, and style
are appropriate to task, purpose and audience.
9. Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in a text, including
figurative, connotative, and technical meanings; analyze how an author uses and refines
the meaning of a key term or terms over the course of a text.
Specific Lesson Objectives
LESSON ACTIVITIES
Opening (Hook, Warm-Up, Anticipatory Set, Review, etc.)
10 Display three-five newspaper article TITLES on the white board. Have students look at the
titles and think about what they might mean. Then read the first few lines of the matching
newspaper articles. See if students can guess which article belongs to each title by hearing a few
25
-Powerpoint:
-Students listen,
*discuss style: the writers characteristic manner of
answer questins,
employing language
and take notes
*discuss fact vs. opinion (give examples); how do we
know what is really fact and what is opinion?
*introduce the inverted pyramid style: sources:
https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/735/04/
-Be sure to show a good image of the pyramid
(possibly draw it on the whiteboard and allow kids to
copy down in notes)
*Good graphic organizer format for inverted
pyramid:
http://www.pinterest.com/pin/564146290794314783/
Check for
Understanding,
Guided
Practice
25
Input,
Modeling,
Check for
understanding
20
Closing/
Summary
Homework
-Students write
what is going on
in the scene
using the graphic
organizer
-Students
actively
participate in
discussion
-Students listen
and write down
homework
How will you adjust aspects of the lesson to accommodate students LEARNING PROFILES?
How will you adjust aspects of the lesson to accommodate students INTERESTS?
3. Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization, and style
are appropriate to task, purpose and audience.
7. Write routinely over extended time frames (time for research, reflection, and revision)
and shorter time frames (a single sitting or a day or two) for a range of tasks, purposes,
and audiences.
Specific Lesson Objectives
Review
Critic
Blog
Detail
Description
Materials
Restaurant reviews (possibly in newspaper)
Household items
Mini chocolate bars
Technology Needs
Smart board
LESSON ACTIVITIES
Opening (Hook, Warm-Up, Anticipatory Set, Review, etc.)
15- I will write a descriptive paragraph for a few different household items (or find them on the
internet.) I will have students write down what they think the items are and then we will play a
little competition to see who can get the most. If need be, I can show a picture of the item or
10
Guided Practice
20
Independent
Practice
20
Group Work
10
Closing/Summary
Homework
10
How will you adjust aspects of the lesson to accommodate students LEARNING PROFILES?
How will you adjust aspects of the lesson to accommodate students INTERESTS?
8. Determine two or more central ideas of a text and analyze their development over the
course of the text, including how they interact and build on one another to provide a
complex analysis; provide an objective summary of a text.
9. Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in a text, including
figurative, connotative, and technical meanings; analyze how an author uses and refines
the meaning of a key term or terms over the course of a text.
10. Integrate and evaluate multiple sources of information presented in different media
or formats as well as in words in order to address a question or solve a problem.
Specific Lesson Objectives
Magazine
Scholarly Journal
Research question
Research components (abstract, methods, literature review, data, results, discussion,
bibliography)
Materials
Newspapers
Scissors
Previously annotated newspaper article
Magazine examples
Scholarly journal examples
Thesis
Technology Needs
Smart board
LESSON ACTIVITIES
Opening (Hook, Warm-Up, Anticipatory Set, Review, etc.)
5- Show trailer of Into the Wild- ask students what they think this film has to do with non-fiction
35
Input,
modeling, and
checking for
understanding
15
Input,
modeling, and
checking for
understanding
Group Work
20
Closing/
Summary
Homework
-Students listen
-Students get into groups and
write down what they are
finding for their particular letter
of DIDLS
-Afterwards, groups share their
findings with the class
How will you adjust aspects of the lesson to accommodate students LEARNING PROFILES?
How will you adjust aspects of the lesson to accommodate students INTERESTS?
3. Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization, and style
are appropriate to task, purpose and audience.
5. Use technology, including the Internet, to produce and publish writing and to interact
and collaborate with others.
6. Conduct short as well as more sustained research projects based on focused questions,
demonstrating understanding of the subject under investigation.
Specific Lesson Objectives
Internet
Google
Blog
Materials
Technology Needs
LESSON ACTIVITIES
Opening (Hook, Warm-Up, Anticipatory Set, Review, etc.)
5- Do Now: Name the steps involved in the research process.
Procedure: Include all sections that apply to this lesson; combine as necessary.
Section
Time What the Teacher will do:
What the Students will do:
Statement of
5
-Explain that today we will try and do -Students listen
Objective &
Purpose
Input,
Modeling, &
Check for
Understanding
10
25
Differentiation Strategies
How will you adjust aspects of the lesson to accommodate students LEARNING PROFILES?
How will you adjust aspects of the lesson to accommodate students INTERESTS?
8. Determine two or more central ideas of a text and analyze their development over the
course of the text, including how they interact and build on one another to provide a
complex analysis; provide an objective summary of a text.
9. Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in a text, including
figurative, connotative, and technical meanings; analyze how an author uses and refines
the meaning of a key term or terms over the course of a text.
10. Integrate and evaluate multiple sources of information presented in different media
or formats as well as in words in order to address a question or solve a problem.
Specific Lesson Objectives
LESSON ACTIVITIES
Opening (Hook, Warm-Up, Anticipatory Set, Review, etc.)
5 - I will display an article that is not reputableone that is clearly incomplete or sloppy
(possibly one that I create or that I find on the internet somewhere) and one that contains an
authoritative article (possibly from the New York Times) and will ask students to talk to me
about both sources. What are the problems with the article that is not reputable? Does it matter
where we get our sources from?
Modeling and
checking for
understanding
20
30
15
Closing/
Summary
Homework
10
-Students listen
How will you adjust aspects of the lesson to accommodate students LEARNING PROFILES?
How will you adjust aspects of the lesson to accommodate students INTERESTS?
3. Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization, and style
are appropriate to task, purpose and audience.
7. Write routinely over extended time frames (time for research, reflection, and revision)
and shorter time frames (a single sitting or a day or two) for a range of tasks, purposes,
and audiences.
10. Integrate and evaluate multiple sources of information presented in different media
or formats as well as in words in order to address a question or solve a problem.
Specific Lesson Objectives
Students will understand:
There are basic connections between photographs, writing, and human understanding
Students will know:
Details of historical events in time through the lens of photography
Students will be able to:
Create stories and draw conclusions from photographs
Photographs
Analysis
Detail/description
Photos
Camera
Materials
Technology Needs
Smart board
Method to get photographs to project onto screen
LESSON ACTIVITIES
Opening (Hook, Warm-Up, Anticipatory Set, Review, etc.)
10 Activity: If I had one minute to capture a story of today in our classroom, what should I
capture? I will have my camera out and will immediately take pictures of what the students tell
me to take pictures of for our classroom story. I will then display them on the smart board. I will
then say, now, I want you to tell me what the story is. Students will volunteer to create a story
that involves each one of the pictures that I took
Procedure: Include all sections that apply to this lesson; combine as necessary.
Section
Time What the Teacher will do:
What the Students will do:
Statement of
5
-Explain that we are going to work on -Students listen
Objective &
Purpose
Input,
Modeling, &
Check for
Understanding
10
Modeling,
Guided
Practice
40
Independent
Writing
Group work
20
Closing/
Summary
Homework
Differentiation Strategies
How will you adjust aspects of the lesson to accommodate student READINESS?
Struggling Students:
Gifted/Advanced Students:
English Language Learners:
How will you adjust aspects of the lesson to accommodate students LEARNING PROFILES?
How will you adjust aspects of the lesson to accommodate students INTERESTS?
3. Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization, and style
are appropriate to task, purpose and audience.
7. Write routinely over extended time frames (time for research, reflection, and revision)
and shorter time frames (a single sitting or a day or two) for a range of tasks, purposes,
and audiences.
9. Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in a text, including
figurative, connotative, and technical meanings; analyze how an author uses and refines
the meaning of a key term or terms over the course of a text.
Specific Lesson Objectives
Memory piece
Memoir
Pre-writing
Draft
Materials
Technology Needs
Smart board
LESSON ACTIVITIES
Opening (Hook, Warm-Up, Anticipatory Set, Review, etc.)
15 - Share the memory piece Reunion by John Cheever aloud. Ask students to debate about the
meaning and, also, whether or not it is a true story. Is the narrator the same as the author? Why is
it important to think about this Explain that although it is a fiction short story, it would make a
15
10
Guided
Practice
20
20
Closing/
Summary
Homework
-Students listen
-Exit ticket: Question- Draw me a visual to represent the memory that you are writing about, in
any way you choose
Differentiation Strategies
How will you adjust aspects of the lesson to accommodate student READINESS?
Struggling Students:
Gifted/Advanced Students:
English Language Learners:
How will you adjust aspects of the lesson to accommodate students LEARNING PROFILES?
How will you adjust aspects of the lesson to accommodate students INTERESTS?
3. Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization, and style
are appropriate to task, purpose and audience.
7. Write routinely over extended time frames (time for research, reflection, and revision)
and shorter time frames (a single sitting or a day or two) for a range of tasks, purposes,
and audiences.
Specific Lesson Objectives
Memory piece
Memoir
Draft
Peer revising
Feedback
Materials
Technology Needs
Smart board
LESSON ACTIVITIES
Opening (Hook, Warm-Up, Anticipatory Set, Review, etc.)
5- Read short memory piece to get their minds thinking about their own writing
Procedure: Include all sections that apply to this lesson; combine as necessary.
Time
5
-Students listen
40
Differentiation Strategies
How will you adjust aspects of the lesson to accommodate student READINESS?
Struggling Students:
Gifted/Advanced Students:
English Language Learners:
How will you adjust aspects of the lesson to accommodate students LEARNING PROFILES?
How will you adjust aspects of the lesson to accommodate students INTERESTS?
3. Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization, and style
are appropriate to task, purpose and audience.
6. Conduct short as well as more sustained research projects based on focused questions,
demonstrating understanding of the subject under investigation.
7. Write routinely over extended time frames (time for research, reflection, and revision)
and shorter time frames (a single sitting or a day or two) for a range of tasks, purposes,
and audiences.
Specific Lesson Objectives
Interview
Active Listening
Materials
Sample interview synthesis and interview questions
T.E.T as resource
Scenario slips of paper
Technology Needs
Smart board
LESSON ACTIVITIES
Opening (Hook, Warm-Up, Anticipatory Set, Review, etc.)
20- Students will watch an interview conducted by Katie Couric (possibly- Courics interview
with Beyonce... https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G6T9SB6yESM
-Students will be told to pay particular attention to what Katie Couric does as an interviewer and
will make notes about things they liked and things they dont
15
Model &
Guided
Practice
20
10
Independent
Practice/
Homework
10
Closing/
Summary
Homework
10
-Students
participate in
activity, writing
interview questions
and conducting
mock interviews
-Students create
interview questions
Differentiation Strategies
How will you adjust aspects of the lesson to accommodate student READINESS?
Struggling Students:
Gifted/Advanced Students:
English Language
Learners:
How will you adjust aspects of the lesson to accommodate students LEARNING PROFILES?
How will you adjust aspects of the lesson to accommodate students INTERESTS?
6. Conduct short as well as more sustained research projects based on focused questions,
demonstrating understanding of the subject under investigation.
10. Integrate and evaluate multiple sources of information presented in different media
or formats as well as in words in order to address a question or solve a problem.
Specific Lesson Objectives
Investigative journalism
Reporters question
Undercover journalism
Materials
LESSON ACTIVITIES
Opening (Hook, Warm-Up, Anticipatory Set, Review, etc.)
10- introduce book: Gang Leader for a Day by Sudhir Venkatesh: give synopsis; show book and
show video clip of Venkatesh talking about his investigative work
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yRq1AhFAN-4
-Ask for thoughts about the idea/book
Procedure: Include all sections that apply to this lesson; combine as necessary.
Section
Time What the Teacher will do:
What the Students will do:
Students listen
Input &
Guided
Practice
40
-Students listen
Independent
Practice
25
Closing/
Summary
Homework
10
How will you adjust aspects of the lesson to accommodate students LEARNING PROFILES?
How will you adjust aspects of the lesson to accommodate students INTERESTS?
3. Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization, and style
are appropriate to task, purpose and audience.
6. Conduct short as well as more sustained research projects based on focused questions,
demonstrating understanding of the subject under investigation.
7. Write routinely over extended time frames (time for research, reflection, and revision)
and shorter time frames (a single sitting or a day or two) for a range of tasks, purposes,
and audiences.
10. Integrate and evaluate multiple sources of information presented in different media
or formats as well as in words in order to address a question or solve a problem.
Investigative journalism
Reporters question
Undercover journalism
Materials
School resourcesmay need to talk to other teachers/faculty to see how students can
Smart board
LESSON ACTIVITIES
Opening (Hook, Warm-Up, Anticipatory Set, Review, etc.)
20- Share excerpt from Barbara Ehrenreichs Nickel and Dimed. Talk about it as a group.
Meanings? Implications?
Procedure: Include all sections that apply to this lesson; combine as necessary.
Section
Time What the Teacher will do:
What the Students will do:
Statement of
5
-Explain that we are going to
-Students listen
Objective &
continue exploring the notion of
Purpose
investigative journalism
Independent
30
-Depending on how students decide
-Students carry out their
Practice
to structure their investigative
research
approach, will have students carry out
their research for about 30 minutes
Guided
10
-Have students convene as a group
-Students discuss their
Practice
and briefly discuss what they found in experience
their research
Model &
20
-First, model a piece that might be
-Students write up their findings
Guided
found in the day in the life Blog
Practice
-Then, have students write up their
findings
-Walk around and conference as they
are constructing their work
-Summarize what we have done for
-Students listen
the day
-No homework- I want them to draft
in class only
-Exit ticket
Assessment of Student Learning
-Exit ticket: Question- What is your favorite writing assignment that you have completed in this
unit? What has been the most meaningful to you? Why?
Summary &
Homework
Differentiation Strategies
How will you adjust aspects of the lesson to accommodate student READINESS?
Struggling Students:
Gifted/Advanced Students:
English Language Learners:
How will you adjust aspects of the lesson to accommodate students LEARNING PROFILES?
3. Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization, and style
are appropriate to task, purpose and audience.
6. Conduct short as well as more sustained research projects based on focused questions,
demonstrating understanding of the subject under investigation.
7. Write routinely over extended time frames (time for research, reflection, and revision)
and shorter time frames (a single sitting or a day or two) for a range of tasks, purposes,
and audiences.
10. Integrate and evaluate multiple sources of information presented in different media
or formats as well as in words in order to address a question or solve a problem.
Specific Lesson Objectives
Investigative journalism
Reporters question
Drafting
Writers portfolio
Materials
School resourcesmay need to talk to other teachers/faculty/principals to see how students
can investigate during each period
Folders for portfolios
Technology Needs
Smart board
LESSON ACTIVITIES
Opening (Hook, Warm-Up, Anticipatory Set, Review, etc.)
10- Introduce Riverside High Schools school newspaper- The Pirate Hook. Have a student
editor come in and briefly talk to the class about his/her job at the newspaper. This student can
highlight the steps that he/she takes in collecting information and distributing it in newspaper
form. Students may ask questions.
Procedure: Include all sections that apply to this lesson; combine as necessary.
Section
Time What the Teacher will do:
What the Students will do:
Statement of
5
-Explain that we are going to
-Students listen
Objective &
continue exploring the notion of
Purpose
investigative journalism
-Explain that we will be re-visiting
the writing process and all of its steps
in getting the stories ready for
publishing
Independent
Practice
30
Modeling &
Guided
Practice,
Independent
pratice
40
Closing/
Summary
Homework
Differentiation Strategies
How will you adjust aspects of the lesson to accommodate student READINESS?
Struggling Students:
Gifted/Advanced Students:
English Language Learners:
How will you adjust aspects of the lesson to accommodate students LEARNING PROFILES?
How will you adjust aspects of the lesson to accommodate students INTERESTS?
3. Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization, and style
are appropriate to task, purpose and audience.
6. Conduct short as well as more sustained research projects based on focused questions,
demonstrating understanding of the subject under investigation.
7. Write routinely over extended time frames (time for research, reflection, and revision)
and shorter time frames (a single sitting or a day or two) for a range of tasks, purposes,
and audiences.
10. Integrate and evaluate multiple sources of information presented in different media
or formats as well as in words in order to address a question or solve a problem.
Specific Lesson Objectives
Investigative journalism
Reporters question
Revising
Publication
Portfolios
Laptops
Technology Needs
Smart board
Laptops
LESSON ACTIVITIES
Opening (Hook, Warm-Up, Anticipatory Set, Review, etc.)
5- Will look at one or two of the articles from The Pirate Hook together. Students will volunteer
to answer questions and make observations about how these articles were published.
Procedure: Include all sections that apply to this lesson; combine as necessary.
Section
Time What the Teacher will do:
What the Students will do:
Statement of
5
-Explain that we are going to
-Students listen
Objective &
continue our A Day in the Life...
Purpose
projects by revising, typing, and
uploading, and practicing
Input,
Modeling, &
Check for
Understanding
Guided
Practice
30
Independent
Practice/
Homework
35
Closing/
Summary
10
Differentiation Strategies
How will you adjust aspects of the lesson to accommodate student READINESS?
Struggling Students:
Gifted/Advanced Students:
English Language Learners:
How will you adjust aspects of the lesson to accommodate students LEARNING PROFILES?
How will you adjust aspects of the lesson to accommodate students INTERESTS?
5. Use technology, including the Internet, to produce and publish writing and to interact
and collaborate with others.
6. Conduct short as well as more sustained research projects based on focused questions,
demonstrating understanding of the subject under investigation.
11. Present information, findings, and supporting evidence, conveying a clear and
distinct perspective, such that listeners can follow the line of reasoning, alternative or
opposing perspectives are addressed, and the organization, development, substance, and
style are appropriate to purpose, audience, and a range of formal and informal tasks.
Formal presentation
Publication
Portfolio
Reflection
Feedback cards
Portfolios
Reflection materials
Materials
Technology Needs
Smart board
LESSON ACTIVITIES
Opening (Hook, Warm-Up, Anticipatory Set, Review, etc.)
55-65
Closing/
Summary
10-15
-Presentations and Day in the Life at Riverside High School projects will be assessed
-Portfolios will be assessed as well
Differentiation Strategies
How will you adjust aspects of the lesson to accommodate student READINESS?
Struggling Students:
Gifted/Advanced Students:
English Language Learners:
How will you adjust aspects of the lesson to accommodate students LEARNING PROFILES?
How will you adjust aspects of the lesson to accommodate students INTERESTS?
Your task:
Using the graphic organizer that you received in class today as well as the inverted pyramid
guide above, your homework is to produce a piece of writing that informs readers of a specific
event (shown in the scene.) Use research to figure out exactly what was going on in the scene.
(Sample event below)
7) Now remove one half from its wrapper and notice the inside of the candy bar. What do
you see?
8) Feel the candy bar itself. Describe the texture. How does it feel, as compared to when it
had the wrapper on?
9) Hold the candy bar below your nose and rub it between your fingers. How does it smell?
10) Now place the candy on your tongue. Let it sit for a few seconds. Finally, chew. What did
you experience as you chewed and swallowed the candy bar?
**After you complete your paragraph, you may eat the rest of your candy bar
Candy Bar Name: ___________________________________
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Memory Piece
Memoirs
Memoirs are a genre of nonfiction in which writers collect memories of certain moments
or events. Think of them as the writing of a memory from someones life. As we saw in
Thoreaus Walden, memoirs often contain memory pieces written in the first person.
Assignment
In the next week, you will practice the writing process through the creation of a memory
piece. The writing process, as described by Daniel Sheridan, contains five different stages:
1. Prewriting: writers take time to think and write about different topics before ultimately
deciding on one
2. Drafting: writers write out initial drafts
3. Revising: writers rewrite or return to the invention stage, thinking through things again
4. Editing: writers clean up their writings, fixing things like grammar, usage, spelling, and
punctuation
5. Publishing: writings are extended beyond the classroom.
You will be participating in each of these stages, along with my guidance and support, in order to
make your memory piece the best it can be.
Essentially, your goal in writing this paper is to write about a vivid memory that you have. I
want more than just the surface level facts. You must use techniques that we have learned about
in class, such as:
Details: facts revealed by the author or speaker that support the attitude or tone in a piece
Imagery: words or phrases a writer uses to represent persons, objects, actions, feelings,
and ideas descriptively
Figures of speech (such as personification, metaphors, and similes)
Tone: writers attitude toward a subject, character, or audience (conveyed through choice
of words and details)... tone may be humorous, sarcastic, indignant, objective, etc.
Using all these techniques, BRING THE READER IN to the world of your memory.
Tailor your emotion in your words. By the end of your piece, the reader should feel like they
have experienced some element of you.
As a class, brainstorm possible reporters questions. Use your imagination with these
ideasbut remember, they must be practical and researchable, within school regulations.
*As your editor-in-chief, I will ultimately have the last say in whether or not your topic is
school appropriate/timely feasible
As your editor-in-chief, I will then use a special assigning technique (with a deck of
cards) to have you each sign up for your question/topic of choice.
Once your question is assigned, you will spend time free writing. In your free writing, I
would like you to write about 1) How you can carry out your investigation during the
next period 2) Is there anyone that you need to contact (i.e. Principal, Assistant
Principals, etc.) in order for you to carry out your research next period? 3) Do you have
any expectations for what kind of information you might discover along the way? 4) Do
you have any concerns for barriers that might get in the way of your discoveries?
Depending on how you decide to structure your investigative approach, carry out your
research. If you chose to investigate what the custodian does while kids are in class; for
instance, you would need to shadow the custodian during part of these periods.
*Remember, no matter where we are or what were doing in the school... we are models
of good character. Always be on your best behavior and be respectful to all those around
you.
Come back ready to share your initial findings in a round-table, informal discussion. I
want to know what you found, where you are in your progress, and what surprised you in
your investigation!
DRAFTING TIME: After you have reflected on your findings, its time to get the drafting
process underway. You will spend time writing out your stories/findings by hand.
Remember... its a draftso it doesnt need to be perfect! As I walk around, I want to
see you stretching yourselves and getting messy with your words.
With a partner (assigned by your editor in chief), sit side-by-side. You will read your
paper aloud to your partner as they listen thoughtfully, taking notes. Once you have
finished reading, they will give you feedback regarding how they perceived your paper as
a reader. After they have completed giving you verbal feedback, they will hand you the
peer review worksheet and you will subsequently use their peer review worksheet to
mimic the process they just completed for you. Thus, at the end of your revision, you will
have verbal feedback (and a printed worksheet) in order to guide your next draft.
Taking your partners feedback into account, you will be given a laptop and will type up
your writing. Remember, your article is not fixed or permanent at this time. Use the
guidance of your reader to make adjustments. Ask questions if you are unsure about
something. Take your time in preparing this writing. I will be walking around throughout
this process, attending to your questions and looking at your writing with you.
Save your writing in folder labeled [Period #] under [Name]DayintheLifeWriting. This is
crucial so that I can gather the writings for [Day 15]s publication.
Print a copy of your writing so that you may prepare for your presentation on [Day 15].
Present your findings in a logical, brief way (about 3 minutes), using your Blog entry as a
guide
After you have selected your piece, complete one final revision phase. This should be a
self-revision phase, in which I would like for you to read aloud your paper and reflect upon all
parts of it. Are they any holes? Are there parts that are too confusing for a reader?
Finally, I want you to edit your papers. This is the ultimate polishing step, where you
want your papers to be ready in terms of grammar and spelling. Think of this step as taking a
fine-toothed comb to your writings.
Only when your writings are completely teacher-ready, you may place them in your
portfolio. On the outside cover, there is a reflection sheet that you need to fill out. Take this time
to think about your growth as a writer and how you have developed in this unit. Your reflection
is essential to your portfoliotake your time with this and remember to be true to yourself.