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TheThesis

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1.Isitacompletesentence
2.Doesitexpressadebatableopinion?
3.Cantheoppositebeargued?
4.Canitbearguedrationally?
5.Itissubstantialenoughforanessay?

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1.Isitacompletesentence
2.Doesitexpressadebatableopinion?
3.Cantheoppositebeargued?
4.Canitbearguedrationally?
5.Itissubstantialenoughforanessay?

ThefactthatmanypeopleusecellphonesinpublicaffectsPOSTIVELY/NEGATIVELYthe
atmosphereinpublicplaces.

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Peoplenowarejustobsessbytherecellphone,theycantnotstoptexting,sending
email,checktherefacebookpage.Itsokaytochattingortextingatworksorschool.

1.Isitacompletesentence
2.Doesitexpressadebatableopinion?
3.Cantheoppositebeargued?
4.Canitbearguedrationally?
5.Itissubstantialenoughforanessay?

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Studentshouldhavebadresult,lackofsleeping,dontfinishtherehomeworkorproject.

1.Isitacompletesentence
2.Doesitexpressadebatableopinion?
3.Cantheoppositebeargued?
4.Canitbearguedrationally?
5.Itissubstantialenoughforanessay?

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Addictionfortheelectronicdevicesharmstothesociallifeofyoungpeople

1.Isitacompletesentence
2.Doesitexpressadebatableopinion?
3.Cantheoppositebeargued?
4.Canitbearguedrationally?
5.Itissubstantialenoughforanessay?

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1.Isitacompletesentence
2.Doesitexpressadebatableopinion?
3.Cantheoppositebeargued?
4.Canitbearguedrationally?
5.Itissubstantialenoughforanessay?

Thetechnologyisthepresentandthefutureoftheworld,soImnotagreewiththefacttobannedthecellphonesatpublicplaces.

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Multitaskingshouldnotbeapossiblewayforthefuture

Itsunfavorabletobemultitasking.
1.Isitacompletesentence
2.Doesitexpressadebatableopinion?
3.Cantheoppositebeargued?
4.Canitbearguedrationally?
5.Itissubstantialenoughforanessay?

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Youngpeoplearetoodependentonelectronicdevices
1.Isitacompletesentence
2.Doesitexpressadebatableopinion?
3.Cantheoppositebeargued?
4.Canitbearguedrationally?

Youngpeoplearetoodependentonelectronicdevices
theyputtheircellphonesandvideogamesbeforeanythingelse.

5.Itissubstantialenoughforanessay?

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Todaythetechnologyhasabigplaceinworld.Weuseiteverydayeverywhere.Areyoungpeopletoodependentonelectronicdevices?Teenagersare
reallydependenttootheelectronicdevice.

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Today,thetechnologyhasusedforalotofpeopleontheplanet.

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Cellphoneshouldnotbebanned.

Cellphonesshouldbebannedineveryschools.

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These:Ithinktheyoungpeoplearenottoodependentonelectronicdevices.

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Thesis:Cellphonesmakepeopleindependentandsolitary.

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Thetechnologiesaresoimportantinthelifeoftheyoungpeople,sowecantbancellphone.

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Cellphonesshouldnotbebannedfrompublicplacesforthepeoplewhoareinanemergencysituation.

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These:Electronicdevisesaretooimportantinthelifeofteens

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Manyyearsago,intheantiquity,weusedtotransmitmessagesthemessenger.After,wecreatedthepostandweusedmaildeliverer.Today,weused
smartphonetosendmessagesortalktosomebody.Thepopulationshouldnotusetheircellphoneinpublicplacelikeschool,theatersandmovies.
Itseasytosaythatitwillincreasetherelationshipwehavewithourexteriorworld,butitsalsowillprotectpeopleofmultitasking.

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Thesis:Usecellphonesinpublicplacescanbeproblematicfortheatmosphere.

Thepopulationshouldnotusetheircellphoneinpublicplacelikeschool,theatersandmovies.

Theyoungpeoplearewaytoodependentwhenitcomestoelectronicdevices.
Weliveinasocietywherethetechnologyisverypresent,itcontrolthemajorityofusandittookawaymanypeopletoliveinthevirtual.Buthere,
wehavetounderstandsomething,theproblemisnotthetechnology,theproblemisus.Yet,youngpeopledependtoomuchonelectronicdevices,
theyarealmostallborninthisgenerationandtheyadoptitatthepointtodevelopmanysocialand/orpsychologicalproblems,especially,around
them.WhatImeantosayistheaddictioncreatewiththisphenomenonandthemultitaskingconsequences.

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Youngpeoplearetoodependentontheirelectronicthings.

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Electronicdevicetaketoomuchplaceintenslife.

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Thesis:TheactionofMultitaskingisnotthewayofthefuture.

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Youngpeopleneedthingstolivebetter,butitcouldbedependenceatthis.

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Thesis:Electronicsdevicestakeoutteensoftherealsociallife.

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usecellphonesinpublicisnotagoodthings

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Thesis:Mostofyoungpeoplehavedifficultytospeakfacetofacetosomebodyandputtheirelectronicdevicesawayforafewhours.

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Thesis:Electronicsdevicesbroketherelationfacetofaceofteens.

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Thesis:Youngpeopledependtoomuchonelectronicdevices,theyarealmostallborninthisgenerationandtheyadoptitatthepointtodevelop
manysocialand/orpsychologicalproblems,especially,aroundthem.

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Multitaskingwillnotbethewayofthefuture.

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Thesis:Devicestaketoomuchplaceinthelifeofyoungpeople.

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Thesis:Devicesarenotessentialintheteenslife.

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SincetheInternet,almosteveryoneusesanobjectrelatedtoit.Somepeopleuseittowork,toplaygames,tochatorwhatever.Asyoumayhave
noticed,youngpeoplegrowwiththenewtechnologyanditaffectsthem.Withoutnoticedit,theyallstartedtodevelopacertainaddictionwithany
kindofelectronicdeviceandthisisareallybadthing.Itwillaffecttheirsocialdevelopmentandalsotheirperformanceatanykindofworktheyre
doing.

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Inrecentyears,thetechnologyevolvedalot.Wesawalotofnewtechnologicaldevicesonmarket.Wecannowbeincontactwiththerestofthe
worldonInternet.ThereareeverydaymillionsofpeopleconnectedonInternetwiththeircellphone.Thefactthatseveralpeopleusecellphonesin
publicplacescanbeproblematic.Therearemanyproblemslinkedtomultitaskandaddictionbetweenthepeopleandtheircellphone.

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Everywherewego,whateverwedo,technologiesareeverywherearoundus.Peopleareabandoningtheoldmethodslikewritingonasheetofpaper.
Oreventhesimpleactoftalkingfacetoface.Youngpeoplearenotabletodoanythingwithoutelectronicdevicesandthisisunacceptable.
Electronicdevicesarenotgoodtotheeducationofchildrenandtherelationshipbetweentwopeople.

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